读后续写独唱（浙南名校联盟第一次联考2023.10）讲义高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写：独唱（浙南名校联盟第一次联考2023.10）浙江省浙南名校联盟20232024学年高三上学期第一次联考英语读后续写题目:阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,myfamily

movedtoSeattle,wheremyparentsstartedtheirnewbusinessasmallgrocery

storedownstairsmyhouse.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotake

afreshstarttofitintothesophisticatedcitylife.Onesunnyday,myschoolannouncedan

excitingevent,atalentshowforthelocalfoodbank.Studentswereencouraged

toshowcasetheiruniquetalentsinfrontofthepublicinthecityhallon

NationalDay.

Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebegan

preparingforthebigday.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesire

toparticipate.However,myselfdoubtheldmeback,“Idon'thaveanyspecial

skillstoshare.”Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalent

showdrewcloser.

Icouldn'tshaketheupsettingfeelinguntilonedayEmma,

oneofthemostpopulargirlsinmyclass,cametomewhileIwashelpingin

thegrocerystoreafterclass.“Howaboutsingingtogetherinthetalentshow?”Shegrinned,

“Iheardyousingingatune,alongthewaybackhome.Ican'thelp

followingyouhere.”

Gosh,Icouldn'tbelievemyears.Emma,withpersonality

andpopularity,acknowledgedmylittletalent.SinceEmmahadtheworld's

prettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeingfavouredbyfortune.“Youtwo?Thetalentshowforthefood

bank?”Mymumbenttowardsusandherfacelitup.“Abigoccasion.”Thenalightbulbseemedto

goinherhead.“Whynotpractiserightnowupstairs?Ibetyou'llbeaperfect

match.”Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinkingalike.EmmaandIembarkedonrehearsing

almosteverysingledayafterschool.

Webrainstormed,exchangedideasand

rehearsedthescene.Asthedaysrolledby,Iwasfeelingprettygoodaboutour

act.Butthedaybeforetheperformance,Emmacalledthatshehadanacute

stomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iwaspletelyknockedoutbythenews.

Finallycamethebigmoment.文本分析：故事大意：本文叙述了一位性格内向害羞的女孩随父母迁到西雅图后开始努力适应复杂的城市生活。在一个阳光明媚的日子里，学校宣布了一项激动人心的活动一一为当地食物银行举办的才艺表演。在内心深处，女孩感到一丝好奇和参与的渴望。然而她的自我怀疑让她退缩了。直到有一天，班上最受欢迎的女孩之一艾玛，发现她的才能，鼓励并邀请女孩一起参加唱歌的才艺表演，准备一起表演唱歌，且排练的很好，但表演前，Emma打说她胃痛得厉害。本次学生习作问题阐述：本次写作话题较为常见，但学生要写出上等习作也不容易。一些学生在叙事节奏上的把握不够合理，在两段落衔接上也出现了一些自相矛盾的情节处理。主题意义：通过叙述作者第一次参加才艺表演，在朋友Emma和妈妈的帮助下克服舞台恐惧症，获得自信，实现个人成长的故事。自信和努力能战胜困难的必要条件。Conflict1:Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesiretoparticipate.vsHowever,myselfdoubtheldmeback,“Idon'thaveanyspecialskillstoshare.”Conflict2:werehearsedalmosteverysingledayafterschool.Emmacalledthatshevshadanacutestomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.衔接：Para1:Iwaspletelyknockedoutbythenews.时间:Thedaybeforetheperformance空间:athome主要人物:motherandI关键情节:1.HowdidIfeelafterIgotthenews?(情绪+心理描写)衔接12.WhatdidIdecidetodoquitorcontinue?(情绪+心理措写)过渡13.Whopersuadedmetokeepon?Andhowdidshe/hefortme?衔接2Para2:Finallycamethebigmoment.时间:onthetalentshow空间:onthestage主要人物:Iaudience/mother关键事件衔接31.HowdidIfeelwhenIstoodonthestage?(情绪+心理描写)WhatdidIperformattheverybeginning?(情绪+心理描写)过渡2whatmademeovercamethestagefrightandfinishtheperformancesuccessfully?主题升华4.EndingWhatdidIrealizeaftertheperformanceReadfortheme:HowIovercamestagefright,wentbeyondoneselftoachievepersonalgrowth.通过叙述作者第一次参加才艺表演，在朋友Emma和妈妈的帮助下克服舞台恐惧症，获得自信，实现个人成长的故事。自信和努力是能战胜困难的必要条件。舞台表演语料积累过去分词作状语Seized/Consumed/Overebynervousness,Ifeltmyheartwaspoundingsohardthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.2.OverwhelmedbyasuddensurgeofanxietyIgrabbed/squeezedmycostumetightly.3.Extraordinarily/Extremelyworriedtheaudience,thatIwouldlosefaceinfrontofIcouldfeelmyheartpoundingfast.倒装1.SorestlesswasIthatmybloodrushedtomyface.Istoodstill,notknowingwhattodonext.2.HardlyhadIreviewedmylineswhenaflushofnervousnessdeepenedtheredofmycheeks.优秀范文：Iwaspletelyknockedoutbythenews.AshiverofgloomyfeelingpassedthroughmystomachasIheardthenews.Theideaofbeingleftaloneonstagemademetremble,letalonesinginginfrontofsomanyaudience.WithoutEmma'spany,Imurmuredtomyself，thistalentshowwoulddefinitelybeanimpossibletask.WhenIthoughtalltheeffortstorehearsalwouldbeinvain.sadnesscameinwavesinmyheartSuddenlyoutofnowhereappearedmotherbeforeme.Affectionatelystrokingmyhair,shelookedatmewithasoft,determinedglowinhereyes,asifbymagicgivingmeastrengthwithwhichtoconqueralldifficultiesandfears.Shesaidquietlybutfirmly:“Ibelieveyoucanmakeit”SoInoddedandmadeadecision.Finallycamethebigmoment.Standingbackstage,nervousnesscamefloodingoverme.Themomentmynamewascalled,Icouldfeelbutterfliesinmystomachflyingwildly.Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,palmssweatingandheartracing.Icastmyeyesrandomlytotheaudienceandspottedafamiliarfaceatthecorner.ItwasEmmawhocametowatchmyperformance.Paleassheappeared,shenoddedandexchangedadeterminedglancewithmewhichtimelyputmyheartbackinplace.Withthemusi