2024届高考英语读后续写科技故事类 视频过程中暖心妹妹发现妹妹的不适并及时送医课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习校园故事——视频过程中，暖心妹妹发现妹妹的不适并及时送医1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Awomanwhohadastroke(中风)whileonaFaceTimevideocallwithhersister,saidthetechnologysavedherlife.EsmeeRussell,headoftheStrokeAssociation,said,“Astrokecanhappentoanyone,atanyage,atanytime.That’swhyit’ssoimportantthatpeopleknowhowtoactfast:itcouldsavealife.”Strokeshappenwhenthebloodsupplytopartofthebrainiscutoffbyaclot(凝块),ordamagedbybleedingthatcausesbraincellsintheaffectedareatodie.OpokuaKwapong,wholivesaloneinNewYork,wasonacallwithhersister,AdumeaSapong,inManchester,whenMrsSapongnoticedthathereldersister“didn’tlookright”.Andshealsonoticedhersister’svoicewasslurred(口齿不清).MsKwapongsaidshehadnotrealisedhowseriousthesituationwas.4续写原文The58-year-oldKwaponghadwokenfromanafternoonsleepwhenMrsSapongcalledheronFaceTime.MsKwapongsaid“Mysisterlookedatmeandsaidshecouldseethatmyfacedidn’tlookright.ShealsosaidthatIwasslurringmywords,butIthoughtshewasmakingafuss(大惊小怪)andIdidn’tbelieveher.”MrsSapongsaidWhenIcalledKwapong,shesaidthatshe'dnotbeenfeelingwellandhadbeenfeelingtiredandwasalsohavingsomedifficultywalking.Isaid,‘Perhapsyouneedtotakesomemedicine.’Shetriedtopickupaglassofwaterandwasn’tableto.ThenInoticedontheFaceTimevideocallthatherfacewasdrooping.Itoldhersheneededtohangupandimmediatelyseeadoctor.ShethoughtIwasmakingafusssoIthencalledoneofmyothersisters,whoisadoctor,andshecouldhearherspeakingandcouldalsotellthatherspeechwasslurred.Webothtoldhertocallforhelpatonce.”5段首句Paragraph1：MsKuaponghungupthecallandthendialedtheemergencyservices.Paragraph2：MsKwapongsaid:“Thereisnodoubtthattheinternetandtechnologysavedmylife.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索，讲述了一对老年姐妹在视频的过程中，妹妹发现姐姐的脸色不太好，说话也变得口齿不清，便建议姐姐立即联系医院。凭借着互联网和科技的优势，老人被及时送到了医院得到救治。9续写思路分析Para1：MsKuaponghungupthecallandthendialedtheemergencyservices.由第一段首句内容“Kuapong女士挂断了电话，然后拨打了急救服务。”可知，第一段可描写Kuapong女士得到了及时的救治。10续写思路分析Para2:MsKwapongsaid:“Thereisnodoubtthattheinternetandtechnologysavedmylife.由第二段首句内容“Kwapong女士说：‘毫无疑问，互联网和科技救了我的命。’”可知，第二段可描写Kuapong女士对互联网和科技的看法。11续写思路分析续写线索联系急救服务——得到救治——感叹网络和科技的帮助12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.照料：lookafter/takecareof②.接受：receive/get③.注意：notice/note情绪类①.幸运的：lucky/fortunate②.负面的：negative/minus13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Herdoctorsaidshewasluckytoreceivetreatmentquicklyorshecouldhavehadmuchtrouble.（运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句）[高分句型2]Notonlydidtechnologysavemylife，itnowalsoallowsmetolivemylife.（运用了notonly位于句首的部分倒装句式）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现MsKwaponghungupthecallandthendialedtheemergencyservices.Theambulancerushedtoherhouseandnursessenthertohospital.Inhospital,MsKwapongwasdiagnosedwithstrokeandshouldstayathospitalforatleastoneweek,HersisterAdumeaSaponglookedafterher.Herdoctorsaidshewasluckytoreceivetreatmentquicklyorshecouldhavehadmuchtrouble.16范文呈现MsKwapongsaid:“ThereisnodoubtthattheInternetandtechnologysavedmylife.Ifmysisterhadnotnoticedthatsomethingwasnotright,thenthingscouldhavebeensodifferent.Notonlydidtechnologysavemylife,itnowalsoallowsmetolivemylife.IrelyalotonFaceTimeasI’mnotabletotravelasmuchasIdidpreviously.YouhearalotofnegativestoriesabouttheInternetandtechnology,butIthinkthisisanexampleofhowtechnologycanhelpusindailylife.”17范文译文Kwapong女士挂断了电话，然后拨打了紧急服务电话。救护车赶到她家，护士把她送到医院。在医院里，Kwapong女士被诊断为中风，应该在医院住至少一周，她的姐姐AdumeaSapong照顾她。她的医生说她很幸运能很快得到治疗，否则她可能会有很多麻烦。18范文译文Kwapong女士说：“毫无疑问，互联网和科技救了我的命。如果我姐姐没有注意到有什么不对劲，事情可能会大不相同。科