读后续写练习写作-讲义-高三英语一轮复习

读后续写--人鸟互相救赎续写题目Theyear2013markedaturningpointinmylife.InJune,myhusbandwasofferedanewJobinGhana.FeelingthatIhadhitacareerbottleneckasaphotographerandcopywriter(广告文字撰写人),I,withoutanyhesitation,madethedecisiontorelocatewithhim.Whilemyhusbandengagedinwork,myvisadidn'tgrantmethesameprivilege.Butthatwasokay.Ididn'tknowwhattodoanyway.Iwasleftisolated,homesickandlackingpurpose.Ournewhomewasabungalownearariverthatcutacrossexpansivegrasslands.Withfewpeoplearoundourhome,Iturnedtonature,whichhadbeenafondnessofminesincechildhood.Everyday,Iwouldtakemycameraandwanderaround,photographingaimlessly.Itwasn'tlongbeforeSeptemberarrived,bringingthefullflowoftherainyseason.Afteroneparticularlybadthunderstorm,Ifoundafinch(雀)-apoorlittlethingbarelyamontholdwithonewingbroken-ontheground.Evidently,hehadbeenabandonedbyhisflock,hisnestblownfromatree.Thesightwasheartbreaking.Hewasthesizeofmylittlefinger.Hiseyesweretightlyshutandhewasshuddering,tooyoungtosurvivealone.Isomehowfeltaconnectionwithit.ImmediatelyIscoopedhimupandcautiouslyplacedhiminacardboardboxwithtowels,mimickinganest,andstayedupallnightresearchinghowtocareforhim.Thenextday,heseemedtoregainsomeenergy.Hewokewithhismouthopen,thoughstilltooweaktoletoutacall.Ifedhimsomefoodandchirped(叽喳)athim.Tomyamusement,hechirpedbackandevenclimbedintomyhand.Iaffectionatelygazedatthisadorablecreature,whowasnowboldlypecking(啄)myfingersnowandthen.Asurgeofwarmthranthroughme.Tenderlystrokinghisfeathers,Ichirpedalullaby,singinghimtosleep.Gradually,hiseyesdroopedandhedriftedoff.Icouldn'thelpbutchuckleatthescene-asfarashewasconcerned,Iwashismother.Para1.“Iwilltakecareofyou.”Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Para2.Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch'scare,somethingwithinmechanged.范文1“Iwilltakecareofyou,”Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Thefollowingdayswerefilledwithmemeticulouslypreparinghismeals,tendingtohisinjuredwingandensuringhereceivedthewarmthandattentionherequired.Daysturnedintoweeks,andmydedicationtonursingthelittlefinchbacktohealthneverwavered.Iwatchedasheregainedhisstrength,hisonce-shutteredeyesnowbrightwithcuriosityandhiswinghealing.HewouldclingtomeasIwentfromroomtoroomandevennestleonmyhair.Ourdailyinteractionsevolvedfrommerecaretakingtogenuinecompanionship,fromwhichIfoundsolace.Then,onemorning,Iwasawakenedbyahigh-pitchedhungercall.Instinctively,Islippedonmycoatandrushedtohim.Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch’scare,somethingwithinmechanged.WhileIwasputtinghislifebackoncourse,hewasalsoreplottingmine.NolongerdidIfeeladriftorisolatedinaforeignlandandtheroutineofcaringforhimhadgivenmearenewedsenseofpurpose.Mycamera,onceaninstrumentofaimlesswandering,nowhadasubject.EveryshotItookdocumentedthefinch’sgrowthandeveryclickoftheshuttercapturedamomentofoursharedexistence.Thelittlebeinghadbecomemymuse.Iknewthateventually,thedaywouldcomewhenIhadtoreturnhimtohisownkind,andlifeinGhanahadtocontinue,butitwouldholdadifferenthue.IntheembraceoftheAfricanlandscape,Isupposeditwasnotabadideatobecomeawildlifephotographertoadvertisethebeautyofnature.“我会照顾你的，”我低声说，向他保证。接下来的日子里，我一丝不苟地为他准备饭菜，照顾他受伤的翅膀，确保他得到他需要的温暖和关注。日子一天天过去，一周又一周过去了，我照顾小雀恢复健康的决心从未动摇。我看着他恢复了体力，他曾经紧闭的眼睛现在充满了好奇，他的翅膀正在愈合。当我从一个房间走到另一个房间时，它会紧紧地抱住我，甚至依偎在我的头发上。我们的日常交往从单纯的照顾演变为真正的陪伴，我从中找到了慰藉。然后，一天早上，我被一声尖锐的饥饿叫声惊醒。我本能地穿上外套，向他冲去。那一刻，我意识到，当我全身心地照顾这只雀的时候，我内心的某些东西发生了变化。当我让他的生活回到正轨时，他也在重新规划我的生活。在异国他乡，我不再感到漂泊或孤立，照顾他的日常生活给了我一种新的使命感。我的相机，曾经是一个漫无目的漫游的工具，现在有了一个主题。我拍摄的每一张照片都记录了雀的成长，每一次按下快门都捕捉到了我们共同存在的瞬间。这个小家伙成了我的缪斯女神。我知道，总有一天，我必须把他送回他的同类身边，加纳的生活必须继续下去，但会有不同的色彩。在非洲风光的怀抱中，我想成为一名野生动物摄影师来宣传自然之美是个不错的主意。范文2para1：主要情节：照顾鸟tendtotheflinch;鸟痊愈ithealed.1.tendtotheflinch：Overthenextfewdays,Icarefullytendedtothefinch:feedingit,applyingmedicinetoitswings.2.ithealed：Everydaywitnesseditsprogress,fromlifelesseyestoeyessparklingwithcuriosity,fromdroopingwingstotheoccasionaldeterminedflapasifitwasgreetingme,orseekingmyaffection.3.我的变化：Andso,itbecamemydearestcompanion,andIembracedthisrolewithenthusiasm,forgettingallmyworries.4.衔接：Then,oneday,asIcradleditinmypalm,itsuddenlychirpedexcitedlyandhoppedontomyforearm,leavingmeinstunnedsilence."Iwilltakecareofyou,"Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Overthenextfewdays,Icarefullytendedtothefinch:feedingit,applyingmedicinetoitswings.Everydaywitnesseditsprogress,fromlifelesseyestoeyessparklingwithcuriosity,fromdroopingwingstotheoccasionaldeterminedflapasifitwasgreetingme,orseekingmyaffection.Andso,itbecamemydearestcompanion,andIembracedthisrolewithenthusiasm,forgettingallmyworries.Then,oneday,asIcradleditinmypalm,itsuddenlychirpedexcitedlyandhoppedontomyforearm,leavingmeinstunnedsilence.para2：我变成了正能量的人：不孤独——如何证明：每天拍鸟和我戏耍的照片，报社也采纳我发给他们的照片（对应突破职业瓶颈）Inthisforeignland,nolongerdidIfeelalone.Everyday,Icapturedmomentsofitsprogress:eachgentlepeckatmyhand,eachenthusiasticmealitconsumed,andmore.Meanwhile,Isentthesephotostothenewspaper,andtomysurprise,mostofthemwereaccepted.我感谢这只鸟：找到了人生的意义Ifoundasenseofpurposeinlife,anditwasallthankstothislittlecreature,orrather,mymuse.Iknewitwouldleavemeoneday,butIalsoknewthatinfar-offGhana,itmarkedaturningpointinmylife.Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch'scare,somethingwithinmechanged.Inthisforeignland,nolongerdidIfeelalone.Everyday,Icapturedmomentsofitsprogress:eachgentlepeckatmyhand,eachenthusiasticmealitconsumed,andmore.Meanwhile,Isentthesephotostothenewspaper,andtomysurprise,mostofthemwereaccepted.Ifoundasenseofpurposeinlife,anditwasallthankstothislittlecreature,orrather,mymuse.Iknewitwouldleavemeoneday,butIalsoknewthatinfar-offGhana,itmarkedaturningpointinmylife.范文3“Iwilltakecareofyou."Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Histinybodywasvulnerableandhislifeheldinmyhands.Eachday,Inurturedhimwithcare,feedinghim,cleaninghim,talkingtohimandphotographinghimperiodicallytodocumenthisrecovery.Ifoundmyselfobservinghispatterns,adjustingmydaytohisrhythm,andevenadoptinghischirps.Eachsmallinteractionseemedtostrengthenourbond.TheonceexpansiveandoverwhelminglandscapeofGhanaseemedtoshrink,fadingintothebackgroundofoursharedexistence.ThesolitudeIoncefeltwasreplacedbyaharmoniousunionwithnature,orchestratedbythetinylifeIheldinmyhands.Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch'scare,somethingwithinmechanged.Ihadbecomeapartofthenaturalworld,connectedthroughthelifeIwasnurturing.Hissurvivalandgrowthbecameasourceofmyownpersonalgrowthandjoy.Hisresilienceinspiredme,andhisdependenceonmegavemeasenseofimportanceIhadn'tfeltsinceImovedtoGhana.NolongerwasIaloststrangerinanewland;Iwasaparticipant,aguardian,activelyconnectedtothevibrantfabricoflife.Myphotography,onceamereinstrumentforobservation,evolvedintoamediumofexpression,capturingthetenderdaysspentcaringforthefinchandportrayingtheinterconnectionbetweenhumans,creatures,andnature.“我会照顾你的。我低声说，向他保证。他小小的身体很脆弱，他的生命掌握在我的手中。每天，我都悉心照料它，喂它吃东西，给它打扫卫生，和它说话，定期给它拍照，记录它的康复过程。我发现自己在观察他的模式，根据他的节奏调整自己的一天，甚至模仿他的叫声。每一次小小的互动似乎都加强了我们的联系。曾经广袤无垠的加纳大地似乎缩小了，消失在我们共同生存的背景中。我曾经感到的孤独被一种与自然和谐的结合所取代，这是由我手中的小生命精心策划的。那一刻，我意识到，当我全身心地照顾这只雀的时候，我内心的某些东西发生了变化。我已经成为自然世界的一部分，通过我培育的生命与之相连。他的生存和成长成为我个人成长和快乐的源泉。他的坚韧鼓舞了我，他对我的依赖让我感受到一种重要性，这是我搬到加纳以来从未感受到的。我不再是在一片陌生的土地上迷路的陌生人;我是一个参与者，一个守护者，积极地连接到充满活力的生活结构中。我的摄影，曾经仅仅是一种观察的工具，现在演变成了一种表达的媒介，捕捉了照顾雀的温柔日子，描绘了人类、生物和自然之间的联系。范文4“Iwilltakecareofyou,”Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Withthattinycreaturenestledinmyhands,Iembarkedonamissionofnurturing.EverydayIpreparedhismeals,carefullyselectingthelusciousfruitsandthejuicyworms,ensuringhehadthestrengthtoheal.Daybyday,hisdelicatechirpsgrewstronger,resonatingwithnewfoundvitality.Hisoncebrokenwinghealed,andhetransformedintoalivelyballoffeathers,flutteringaroundmynewhouse.Untilhehadfullyrecovered,Iwanderedaroundvastgrasslandsagain.ButthistimewasdifferentbecauseIhadanewsubject.Withhimbouncingupanddowninfront,Iwasbehindwithmycamera.Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasI