续写情感描写指导积极情绪描写讲义高三英语一轮复习

课题续写情感描写指导积极情绪描写（Continuationwriting）教学课时第1课时教学目标Aftertakingthislesson,studentswillbeableto：1.familiarwithcontinuationwritingstepsandtechniques;2.mastersomeusefulexpressionsaboutpositiveemotions.教学重难点Teachingkeyanddifficultpoints:GetstudentstofullyunderstandtheexpressionsGuidestudentstomastertheexpressionsaboutpositiveemotionsandmakeuseincontinuationwriting;教学方法1.municativeteachingmethod2.Activitybased

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method3.Individuallearning4.Cooperativelearning学情分析’sworse,thereisalotplotsincontinuationwritingbiningmixedemotionalexpressionsandstudentsalwaysfailtoexpresstheemotioncorrectly.教学过程二次备课（方法手段、改进建议）TeachingproceduresStep1:LeadinTeacherguidesstudentstofamiliarwithcontinuationwriting.Step2:presentation知识点一开心、高兴的常用词、句词组类：incheerfulspirits心情愉快；becontentwith对...感到满意；bedelightedat对...很高兴；setone'sheartatrest使某人安心；brightensb'sheart使某人心情愉快；bepowerfullyattractedto被强烈地吸引；bejoyfulover/about因...而高兴；dance/jumpforjoy高兴地跳起来；tearsofhappinessflowingdown流下幸福的泪水；asatisfiedlook/anencouragingexpressionappearedonherface满意的表情/一个令人鼓舞的表情出现在她的脸庞上；【精彩典例】1.（湖南师范大学附属中学20232024学年高三摸底考试）MychildrenhappilyacceptedandwarmlytookSteventovisithisnewhomeanddiscussedmakingroomforSteven.我的孩子们高兴地接受了邀请，并热情地带史蒂文去他的新家，讨论为史蒂文腾出空间。2.Herfacelitupwithpleasure.他容光焕发。3.Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。4.Asmileplayedaroundhismouth.他的嘴角挂着一丝笑意。5.Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。6.Theyranaroundaftereachother,theirfacesirradiatedwithjoy.他们互相追逐着，脸上充满了喜悦。7.Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高兴得难以形容。8.Iwasoverjoyedandranthreestepsatonce.我欣喜若狂，三步并作两步就跑了过去。9.Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。10.Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。11.Iwasfloatingonair.我高兴得飘飘然。12.Flowersaresmilingbrightly,birdsarecryingjoyfully.Myheartisassweetashoney.花儿在微笑，鸟儿在快乐地鸣叫，我的心情就像吃了蜜一样的甜。13.WhenIturnedaround,IfoundJohnwasgrinning.我转过身时,发现约翰正咧着嘴笑。知识点二兴奋、激动的常用词、句词组类：feelamixtureofexcitementandhappiness感觉既兴奋又开心；canhardlyconcealhisexcitement几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋的心情；quiteflushedwithexcitement激动的满脸通红；toone’sexcitement/thrill令某人激动的是；conceal/healone’sexcitement难掩激动；containone’sexcitement抑制内心的激动；aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一阵兴奋；ascreamofthrill/excitement激动的尖叫声；cheerup振奋起来；【精彩典例】1.（广东省六校20232024学年高三联考试题）NeverinmywildestdreamdidIimaginethatIwasindeedassignedtheinternjobtoactonaschoollifeshowandmyfirstpublicappearanceonTVwasinfivedays.在我最疯狂的梦中，我从来没有想过我确实被分配了实习工作，在学校生活节目中表演，而我第一次在电视上公开露面是在五天内。2.（2024届浙江省强基联盟适应性考试试题）Hejumpedhighandhuggedeveryteammateexcitedly.Everyonecouldseetearswellinginhiseyes.他高高地跳起来，兴奋地拥抱着每个队友。每个人都能看到他的泪水。3.（2024届江苏省苏州市南京师大实验学校调研）Atthenews,Davehadtoholdbackhistearsofjoyandcouldn'thelpjumpingup.听到这个消息，戴夫不得不忍住喜悦的眼泪，忍不住跳了起来。4.Herfaceisred,excitementintheheart,asadeerjumpingwithjoy.她激动的满脸通红，心里像有只小鹿，在欢乐地蹦跳。5.Therewasasparkleofexcitementinhereyes.她的眼中闪烁着激动的光芒。6.Iwassoexcitedinside,likearoughsea.我内心十分激动，像波涛汹涌的大海一样。知识点三美好事物的描写1.（2024届广东省四校高三第一次联考试题）Withthesunpeekingoverthehorizon,John’sfaceglowedwithgratitude.太阳在地平线上掠过，约翰的脸上洋溢着感激之光。2.Therearemanykindsofflowersbloomingintheeroftheparkeveninautumn.Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!即使在秋日里，公园里都开满了各式各样的鲜花，香气伴着微风四处弥漫。多么香甜啊!3.Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.朵朵白云飘在蓝天中,就像安静的鱼儿在广阔的海洋中畅游。4.Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩飞舞。6.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳下山,温和的光线落在肩头。Step3:practiceTeacherasksstudentstomakesentencebyusingtheexpressionsintheclassandshareingroups.Step4:consolidationTeacherguidesstudentstosummarizethecontentlearnedinthislesson.板书设计Continuationwriting积极情绪描写知识点一开心、高兴的常用词、句dance/jumpforjoy；tearsofhappinessflowingdown；asatisfiedlook/anencouragingexpressionappearedonherfacehappilyacceptedandwarmlytook知识点二兴奋、激动的常用词、句feelamixtureofexcitementandhappinessaripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitementascreamofthrill/excitementcheerup知识点三美好事物的描写Withthesunpeeki