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Agoodcompositionshouldinclude:1.cleansheet(卷面整洁);goodhandwriting;3or4paras.2.completecontent(内容完整);somegoodpatternsandsentencesinsteadofjustsimpleones.3.emotion感情(“so…that…”;“with”结构;同位语；倒装句;复合句：定从，主从，表从，宾从…)Agoodcompositionshouldinc8Who’sthemostlovelyandourfavoriteteacherinourclass?Lead-inWho’sthemostlovelyandour9Showourloveandrespecttoourfavouriteteacher,MrLi!favouriterespectable可敬的

某英语中学生刊，新辟扉页栏目征文“我最喜欢、最敬重的老师”。

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Howtodescribeaperson?Whataspects（方面）shouldbeincluded?Discussion(2mins)Howtodescribeaper11

Whataspects（方面）shouldbeincluded?人物介绍:1.

概况:character(性格）,evaluation评价主题段-开头段2.拓展段-中间段3.总结段-结尾段middle-agedafriendlyfacesincere,teachingmethods:friendly,humourous,

helpful;Appearance:interesting,Age:

teachingcareer:20years;amodelteacherQualities:…over

livelysomeotheraspects(方面)Whataspects（方面）shouldbeinc12UsefulExpressions

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Bornin1996,heisnowatwenty-year-oldstudent,studyinginauniversity.Heisamiddle-agedman.…UsefulExpressionsP16:AgeBo13UsefulExpressions

P16:AppearanceSheisalovelygirl,witharoundface,bigeyes,whiteteeth…Heisagood-lookingman,withathickmoustache（胡子）.…heisafriendlyperson,withtwobigeyes.UsefulExpressionsP16:Appear14UsefulExpressions

P16:Somebigeventsinone’slifeHedevotedhislifetimeto…Hereceivedaprizein……UsefulExpressionsP16:Someb15UsefulExpressions

P16:EvaluationHeisawardedas(被评为)…

…Heisoneofthemostimportant/outstandingpersons……UsefulExpressionsP16:Evalua16GuidedWritingDescribeapersonGuidedWriting17

某英语中学生刊，新辟扉页栏目征文“我最喜欢、最敬重的老师”。内容要求

1.对该老师的简单介绍；

2.喜欢该老师的理由；

3.从该人物身上得到的启示。内容要求：征文应包含以上内容，可适当拓展；词数100-120(evaluation评价)(15mins)middle-agedafriendlyfacefriendly,sincere,humourous,

helpful;Teachingcareer:over20years;amodelteacherteachingmethods:interesting,

livelysomeotheraspects(方面)某英语中学生刊，新辟扉页栏目征文“我最喜欢、最敬重18

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Agoodcompositionshouldinclude:1.cleansheet(卷面整洁);goodhandwriting;3or4paras.2.completecontent(内容完整);somegoodpatternsandsentencesinsteadofjustsimpleones.3.emotion感情(“so…that…”;“with”结构;同位语；倒装句;复合句：定从，主从，表从，宾从…)Agoodcompositionshouldinc20

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MrLi,myfavouriteteacher,isamiddle-agedmanwithafriendlyface.OneofthemostimportantreasonwhyIlikehimisthatheisverysincereandfriendly.Whenhetalkstoothers,healwayshasasmileonhisface.Hehastaughtmathsformorethantwentyyears,duringwhichhehasbeenawardedthetitleofamodelteacherformanytimes.

IbelieveMrLiisanaturalteacherbecausehehasalotofgoodmethodsonteaching.Solively,interesting,andfunnyarehislessonsthatweneverfeelbored.

巧用“with”结构、同位语结构，使文章简洁、通顺倒装句非限制性定从

用复合句、倒装句，润色文章，使文章充满活力MrLi,myfavouriteteache22Toimproveourgrades,heusuallygivesussomeadviceabouthowtolearnmathswell.Whenweaskhimquestions,hemustsparenoefforttomakeusunderstand,patientlyandcarefully.What’smore,he’salwaysreadytohelpeverystudentwiththeirstudyandlife.I’mluckyenoughtohavesuchagoodteacherpresenttomylife.MrLihasagreatinfluenceonmeandI’mthankfulforwhathehasdoneforusverymuch.

巧用过渡词，增强语义连贯性:表并列：表转折：表因果：表递进：and,or,either...or...,notonly...butalso…but,yet,however…therefore,so,asaresult,because…besides,what’smore,inaddition…

Luckyenough,thankful表达了对Mr.Li的爱慕、敬仰之情(Emotion)Toimproveourgrades,heusua23

MrLi,myfavouriteteacher,isamiddle-agedmanwithafriendlyface.OneofthemostimportantreasonwhyIlikehimisthatheisverysincereandfriendly.Whenhetalkstoothers,healwayshasasmileonhisface.Hehastaughtmathsformorethantwentyyears,duringwhichhehasbeenawardedthetitleofamodelteacherformanytimes.

IbelieveMrLiisanaturalteacherbecausehehasalotofgoodmethodsonteaching.Solively,interesting,andfunnyarehislessonsthatweneverfeelbored.倒装句非限制性定从MrLi,myfavouritet24

Toimproveourgrades,heusuallygivesussomeadviceabouthowtolearnmathswell.Whenweaskhimquestions,hemustsparenoefforttomakeusunderstand,patientlyandcarefully.What’smore,he’salwaysreadytohelpeverystudentwiththeirstudyandlife.I’mluckyenoughtohavesuchagoodteacherpresenttomylife.MrLihasagreatinfluenceonmeandI’mthankfulforwhathehasdoneforusverymuch.Toimproveourgrades,heusu25

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Towriteagoodpassage,weshouldusesomegoodpatternsandsentencesinsteadofsimpleone,suchasAppositive（同位语）,NounClause(名从)andAttributiveClause(定从).Summary（Tips）shou26

Learnthebest,andtobethebestyoucanbe.

学最好的别人做最好的自己。Goodataccumulation.

StorealargenumberofgoodexpressionsinEnglishandyoucanexpressyourideasfreely.

善于积累，让头脑支撑起自己的思想Learnthebest,andtobethe27

Groupwork:Rewritethepassage(4studentsinagroup.Discussandrewritethepassageaccordingtowhatwehavelearntjustnow.)Groupwork:Rewritethepassa28Homework

Groupwork:Rewritethepassage