读后续写个人成长类 沉迷网络后改过自新的男孩 课件-2024届高考英语一轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习个人成长——沉迷网络后改过自新的男孩1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文IcouldfeeltheexcitementrisinginmeasIheldthebeautifullywrappedpresentinmyhands.Ifeltthestringofthepackagesoftlyandthen,unabletocontainmycuriosityanylonger,Itoreitopen.Itwasabright,brandnewlaptop.IhadscoredstraightasformyOlevelexaminationandthiswasmyreward.Ihadalwaysenviedmyfriendswhowereexchangingnewsabout‘chatrooms’,‘instantmessaging’and‘e-mailing’,allofwhichIknewnothingabout.NowIwasgoingtofindout.4续写原文Itstartedoutsimplyenough.IwassearchingforsomeinformationonlinewhenIcameacrossasocialnetworkingsite.SoonIbecameattractedtomynew-foundelectronicfriend.IbegantospendmoreandmoretimeonYouTubeandbecameaddictedtoFacebookandTwitter.IhadneverimaginedthatthedaywouldcomewhenIwouldbecontrolledentirelybytheglowingscreenbeforeme.WheneverIwasnotgluedtothesesocialnetworkingsites,Iwouldbegoingthroughgossiporfashionwebsites.Astimepassed,IrealizedthatIwasaddictedtotheInternet.Duringweekends,whenIhadmoretimeonmyhands,Icouldeasilyspendafewhoursonmylaptop.ItcametoapointwhereIchosetolockmyselfinmyroom,refusingtocomeoutandtakepartinfamilydiscussions.IpreferredtostayconnectedtothepeopleImadefriendswithontheInternetalthoughIhadnevermetthem.SoonIwasspendingthewholehoursofthemorningsurfingontheInternet.Sleepwasreducedtosmallnapsandmygradesatschoolalsobegangettingfrombadtoworse.5段首句Para1:Itwasaboutthistimethatmyparentsnoticedmychange.Para2:Thenoneday，myfathertookawaymylaptop.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者因为考试成绩获得全优，父母给他买了一台全新笔记本电脑作为奖励。渐渐地，作者开始沉迷于网络，不再与父母交流，学习成绩也在恶化的故事。9续写思路分析Para1:Itwasaboutthistimethatmyparentsnoticedmychange.由第一段首句内容“就在这个时候，我的父母注意到了我的变化。”可知，第一段可描写父母对作者的要求和作者的表现。10续写思路分析Para2:Thenoneday，myfathertookawaymylaptop.由第二段首句内容“然后有一天，我父亲拿走了我的笔记本电脑。”可知，第二段可描写作者失去电脑的感受和感悟。11续写思路分析续写线索获得电脑——沉迷网络——父母不满——没收电脑——改过自新12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.集中：concentrateon/focuson②.意识到：realize/recognize③.决定：decideto/determineto情绪类①.绝望的：desperate/hopeless/indespair②.顽固的：dogged/stubborn13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].ItbecameobvioustothemthatIwasspendingtoomuchtimeontheInternet.（由连接词that引导的主语从句）[高分句型2].IpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewleaf.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Itwasaboutthistimethatmyparentsnoticedmychange.Theyvoicedtheirdisapproval.ItbecameobvioustothemthatIwasspendingtoomuchtimeontheInternet.IwasaskedtoslowdownmyusageoftheInternet.Yet,howeverhardItried,Iwasunabletopullmyselfaway,unabletoendmychatsessions,andunabletoconcentrateonmylessons.Iwasdesperateforjustanotherclick,justanotherlookatmye-mailormessageboard.16范文呈现Thenoneday,myfathertookawaymylaptop.Icriedandobjectedbutinvain.Dadhadmadeuphismind.Overtime,IrealizedthatDadandMumhadalwayswantedthebestforme.ThatwaswhenIdecidedtotakethebigstep—toconquermyinternetaddiction.QuittingwasharderthanIhadexpected.Butwithdoggeddetermination,IknewthatIwouldbeabletodoit.IpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewleaf.17范文译文大约在这个时候，我父母注意到了我的变化。他们表示反对。对他们来说，我花在互联网上的时间太多了。有人要求我放慢上网速度。然而，无论我多么努力，我都无法摆脱，无法结束聊天，也无法集中精力上课。我迫切希望再点击一次，再看看我的电子邮件或留言板。18范文译文然后有一天，我父亲拿走了我的笔记本电脑。我哭着反对，但徒劳无功。爸爸已经下定决心了。随着时间的推移，我意识到