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writingapicturestory第1页第2页1.读图。即分析图画所提供信息，充足发挥自己想象力，正确理解图中内容确实切含义。如图1所示：父母亲和“我”去公园。图2：在公园里划船。图3：“我”抓鱼时不慎掉入水中。图4：母亲跳出水中把“我”救起。2.试写。即根据图中情景及汉语提醒来体现文章内容，充足发挥自己实际水平，避难就易，一法不成，另找它途。图1：MyparentsandIwenttothepark.图2：Wewentboatingonthelake.图3：IwascatchingthefishwhenIfellintothewater.图4：Mymotherjumpedintothewaterandsavedme.

第3页3.扩写。即合适增加情节和过渡性词语，把上述句子连贯起来。这里扩写并不是毫无根据地简单地通过想象把试写内容拉长，而是紧扣图片中心把试写内容进行扩充。使内容更丰富、人物活动更形象、事情过程更详细，因而增强文章感染力。力求做到合抱负象，用词得当，句子构造及语法利用正确，条理清楚。第4页例文：LastSunday，myparentsandIwenttothepark.Wewentboatingonthewater.Thereweresomebeautifulfishinthewater.Icouldn'thelpcatchingthem.Suddenly，Ifellintothewater.IwassofrightenedthatIcriedloudly.Mymotherjumpedintothewateratonceandliftedmeoutofthewater.Iwassaved.Howdangerousthetripwas！第5页假定你是TOM,请根据下面图画内容写一篇日记.第6页1.Style:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:1.GoovertherequirementAdiarypasttenseI第7页TuesdayDecember6,2023FineIhadaverybaddayyesterday.Everythinggowrong.Inthemorning,myalarmclockdidn'tringsoIwokeupanhourlate.IaminsuchahurrythatIburnedmyhandwhenIwascookingbreakfast.

Correctanymistakeswent

was第8页ThenIrunoutofthehousetocatchthe8:30bus,butofcourseImissit.IwasveryunhappybecauseIknowmyteachergotangryifanyonewaslateforclass.SoIranthreemilestotheschool.ButwhenIarrivedthereintheend,IfindthatitwasSundayCorrectanymistakesranknewfoundmissed第9页

根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车经历，用英语写一篇故事。短文要写得连贯、完整。Sample1第10页1.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:1.GoovertherequirementAstory（atrafficaccident)pasttenseTom,he第11页Tom/rideabikeAlongthestreet/roadAfewdaysago/theotherday/oneday2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)第12页Acar/runfastto/runintohimTom/falloffhisbikeSuddenly2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)第13页Thedriver/frightened/runaway2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)第14页Awoman/rememberthenumberofthecarThepoliceThedriver/catch2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)第15页KeywordssentencesAwomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolice.Thedriverwascaught.rideabike/runfasttoseetheaccident/rememberthenumber/callthepolice/becaughtbefrightened/runawayhithim/falloffhisbikeWhenTomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithim.Andhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway.第16页

Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwasfrightened.Heranaway.Awomansawtheaccident.Sherememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman.Thedriverwascaught.Passage13.Writingapassage第17页

Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunately,awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing.passage2

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Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet

when

hesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.

Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwas

so

frightened

that

heranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.

Fortunately,awoman

happenedtoseeit

and

rememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman

andtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,

thedriverwascaught

andpunishedforhiswrongdoing.Passage2

第19页Usingconnectives并列转折3.因果

4.其他and,both…and

but,however,though,while

so,therefore,because

when,suddenly,immediately,assoonas,unfortunately,so…that…,finally,asaresult,Whatwasworse第20页Goovertherequirement（person,tense,style）

Summary:Howtowriteapicturestory?Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Writeapassage（usingconnectivesandaddingdetailsandspecificinformation.)第21页基本篇章构造①点题（时间、地点、人物、事件）②事件起因③事件发展/过程④事件成果⑤扣题第22页2023年辽宁下面4幅图片描述是星期天上午在中山公园里发生一件事。请根据图片所提供信息用英语为你校“英语园地”写一篇短文。注意：①短文须包括所有图片主要内容。短文内容要连贯、完整；②短文单词数：100左右（已给句子中单词不计入总词数）；③参照词汇：货摊stand(n.);抢夺snatch(v.);逮捕arrest(v.)第23页第24页1．点题（时间、地点）星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁2．事件起因年轻妇女包被抢3．事件发展/过程人们追赶抢包者；长排椅上坐着一位老人；抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒4．事件成果两名警察逮捕抢劫者：5．扣题妇女感激老人，人们夸奖老人机智第25页审题描述过去个人经历第三人称4.主题：3.人称：1.体裁：2.时态：记叙文体一般过去时第26页星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊OneSundaymorning,；inZhongshanPark.；Atanice-creamstand年轻妇女包被抢snatchherhandbagaway人们追赶抢包者runafterthesnatcher在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人Therebesb.sittingonthebenchnearby提纲第27页从老人身旁跑过Runpasttheoldman拿起伞；将伞放在他两腿之间；pickuphisumbrella;putitbetweenthetwolegsofthesnatcher;

摔一大跟斗falldownonthegroundheavily第28页两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者Cameinapolicecar;arrestsb.感激老人帮助Thanksb.forhishelp

夸奖老人机智Praisetheoldmanforhiscleverness第29页1、几天前theotherday;severaldaysago2、使人感到意外toone’ssurprise3、就在这时atthatmoment;atthattime常用关联词第30页①副词：suddenly,unfortunately,luckily,immediatelyasaresult……②so/such…that…③twohourslater,④…and…第31页1.Itwas…(天气)2.Whilesb.wasdoing/sb.wasabouttodo…when…3.sb.did…and…4.see/hearsb.Doing5.

withthehelpofsb.某些也许用到句型和词组第32页

OneSundaymorning,

manypeoplewenttoZhongshanPark.

Asitwasveryhot,somepeoplegotthirstyandweretryingtobuysomeice-cream.

Suddenly

awoman

atthestandshoutedbecause

ayoungmanbehindhersnatchedherhandbagaway.第33页

Seeingthis,immediately

afewpeoplebeganto

runafter

him.

However,

thesnatcherran

sofastthat

itwasnoteasytocatchhim.

Luckily

,therewas

anoldman

sitting

onabenchnearby.

第34页As

thesnatcherwas

runningpast

him,theoldmanquickly

pickedup

hisumbrella

and

putitbetweenthesnatcher’