外研版2023 必修 第一册 Unit 1 A new start 单元满分范文必背 学案含解析

第第页外研版（2023）必修第一册Unit1Anewstart单元满分范文必背学案（含解析）Unit1ANewStart

单元话题满分范文必背

1．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack刚刚升入高一，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信，内容主要包括：

1.表示理解：实际上很多新生都会对高中生活感到不安，因此不必过多担心。

2.提出建议：

(1)报名参加课外活动，结交新朋友；

(2)做好日程安排，关注学习；

(3)

3.表达希望和祝愿。

要求：80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearJack,

____________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

(

【

答案】参考范文

D

ear

Jack

,

I

am

sorry

to

hear

that

you’re

having

trouble

adjusting

to

your

high

school

life.

Actually,

many

freshmen

are

confused

about

high

school

life

,

so

don’t

worry

about

it

too

much.

I’m

writing

to

offer

you

some

useful

advice.

First

,

I

recommend

that

you

sign

up

for

extra-curricular

activities

which

can

help

you

make

more

new

friends

.

In

this

way

you

will

feel

less

lonely

and

your

school

life

will

become

more

colorful

and

interesting.

Second

,

you

should

make

a

good

schedule

and

focus

on

your

studies.

As

a

teenager,

studying

hard

is

our

responsibility

.

Finally

,

it

is

a

good

idea

to

read

some

good

novels,

which

can

make

you

feel

happy.

I

hope

my

suggestions

will

be

helpful

for

you

and

you

will

have

a

good

time

every

day.

Y

ours

,

Li

H

ua

)

(

【导语】本篇书面表达属

于应用文。要求考生写一份信给英国朋友

Jack

，因为他刚刚升入高一，

无法适应

新的校园生活，由此写信对他进行

安慰并提出建议。

【

详解】

1.

词汇积累

伤

心

：

sorry→

sad

提供：

offer

→

provide

建议：

advice→

suggestion/tip

有益处

的

：

helpful→

beneficial

2.

句式拓

展

简

单句变复合句：

原句：

I’m

writing

to

offer

you

some

useful

advice.

拓展句：

I’m

wr

iting

to

offer

you

some

useful

advice

,

which

is

listed

as

follows

.

【点睛】【高分句型

1

】

First

,

I

recommend

that

you

sign

up

for

extra-curricular

activities

which

can

help

you

make

more

new

friends.

(运用了

that

引导宾语从句，同时使用

which

引导的定语从句

)

【

高分句型

2

】

As

a

teenager

,

studying

hard

is

our

responsibility

.

(运用了

动名词作主语的结构)

)

2．如果你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom，想了解你在高中的学习生活，请根据下列要求写一封信告知他。1.对高中学校的第一印象。(老师、同学)

2.你最喜欢的学科及其原因。

3.学习上存在的困难和应对策略。

4.你在高中想取得的目标和期待。

注意：1.按提示写，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

2.字数100字左右。

DearTom,

_________________

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearTom,

I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yousaidinyourletteryouarecuriousaboutmylifeandstudyinseniorhighschool.HereI’mwritingtotellyousomedetails.

Onmyfirstdayinschool,Ifoundmyselfinafriendlyandacademicatmosphere.Theteachersareveryknowledgeableandreadytopouralltheyknowintoourmind,andthestudentsareverykindtoeachother.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishbecauseitmakesmeabletounderstanddifferentcultures.However,Ihavetroubleinrememberingwords.Aftertalkingwithmyteacher,Idecidetolearntomakeupaninterestingstoryusingthenewwords,hopingitwillbehelpful.Asforthefuture,I’maimedatgoingintotop10inmyclass.

Bestwishes.

Yours,LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文写作，要求考生给英国笔友Tom写封信，告诉他你高中的学习和生活情况。

【详解】1.词汇积累

收到……的来信：hearfrom→receivetheletterfrom

对……好奇：becuriousabout→wonder

准备好做……：bereadytodo…→bepreparedtodo…

在……上有困难：havetroublein→havedifficultyin

有帮助的：helpful→ofhelp/beneficial

2.句式拓展

合并句子

原句：I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yousaidinyourletteryouarecuriousaboutmylifeandstudyinseniorhighschool.

拓展句：I’mgladtoreceivetheletterfromyou,inwhichyousaidyouarecuriousaboutmylifeandstudyinseniorhighschool.

【点睛】【高分句型1】MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishbecauseitmakesmeabletounderstanddifferentcultures.(使用了because引导原因状语从句和“make+宾语+宾补”结构)

【高分句型2】Aftertalkingwithmyteacher,Idecidetolearntomakeupaninterestingstoryusingthenewwords,hopingitwillbehelpful.(使用了动名词短语作介词宾语、不定式短语作宾语、现在分词短语分别作方式状语和伴随状语、省略引导词that的宾语从句)

3．假设你是高一新生李华，进入高中阶段，面对全新的校园生活有很多感想。请你给你的英国笔友John

写一封邮件分享你的新生活，内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.介绍高中校园生活：学校环境、学习情况、你的感受……；

3.你的期待和展望。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_________________________________________________

【答案】DearJohn,

HowiseverythinggoingwithyouIjustenteredtheseniorsecondaryschoolandbecameafreshmanlastmonth.ItisthestartofanewchapterinmylifeandmyheartisfilledwithsomanystrongfeelingsthatIcan’twaittotellyou.AndthereforeI’mwritinginordertosharemynewschoollifewithyou.

Mynewschooldiffersinmanywaysfrommypreviousone.Thecampusisbigandbeautifulwithalotoffieldsforustotakeexercise.Ourteachingbuildingsaresurroundedbygreentreessothatwecanrelaxourmindsduringthebreaks.Inmynewschool,althoughstudentsstillsitinrowsaswedidinthepast,wedependmoreoneachotherinsteadofteacherstosolveproblemsandthuslearnmorebyhavinggroupdiscussionsandsharingourideasorcheckingourworktogether,whichmakesmefeelchallengedandyetexcited.

Inthenextthreeyears,IhopeIwilldevelopcompetenceinavarietyofnewskillsandhaveahappier,morefruitfulandsatisfyinglife.WhataboutyouLookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给碧悠John写信，分享自己的高中生活。

【详解】1.词汇积累

开始：start→beginning

充满：befilledwith→befullof

从前的：previous→former

各种各样的：avarietyof→varietiesof/various

(

2.

句型拓

展

合并句

子

原句：

The

campus

is

big

and

beautiful

with

a

lot

of

fields

for

us

to

take

exercise.

Our

teaching

buildings

are

surrounded

by

green

trees

so

that

we

can

relax

our

minds

during

the

breaks.

拓展句

：

Not

only

is

the

compus

big

and

beautiful

with

a

lot

of

fields

for

us

to

take

exercise,

but

also

our

teaching

buildings

are

surrounded

by

green

trees

so

that

we

can

relax

our

minds

during

the

breaks.

【点睛】

[

高分句型

1]Our

teaching

buildings

are

surrounded

by

green

tree

s

so

that

we

can

relax

our

minds

during

the

breaks.

(运用了

so

t

h

at

引导的目的状语从句)

[

高分句型

2]In

my

new

school,

although

students

still

sit

in

r

ows

as

we

did

in

the

past

,

we

depend

more

on

each

other

instead

of

teachers

to

solve

problems

and

thus

learn

more

by

having

group

discussions

and

sharing

our

ideas

or

checking

our

work

together,

whi

ch

makes

me

feel

challenged

and

yet

excited

.

(运用了

although

引导的让步

状

语从句和

which

引导的非限制性定语从句)

)

4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter刚到广州学习，他来信说，很难适应在广州的学习和生活，十分沮丧，请你给他回信表示安慰并提出建议，内容包括：

1．表示安慰；

2．针对问题提出建议；

3．表达希望。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearPeter,

LearningthatyouarefeelingithardtoadapttothestudyandlifeinGuangzhou,I’mwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions.

____________________

Yours,

LiHua

(

【

答

案】

Dear

Peter,

Learning

that

you

are

feeling

it

hard

to

a

dapt

to

the

study

and

life

in

Guangzhou

，

I

’

m

writing

to

offer

you

some

suggestions

.

In

fact

,

it

’

s

normal

for

a

new

comer

to

feel

uncomfortable

in

a

new

environment.

Don’t

worry.

Firstly,

try

to

join

your

classmates

in

various

activities

,

which

can

help

you

further

understand

the

local

culture

and

customs.

Besides

,

listen

to

your

teacher

’

s

lectures

carefully

and

often

discuss

the

relevant

topic

with

your

classmates.

Last

but

not

least

,

smile

to

the

people

around

you

and

they

may

return

you

a

happy

day

.

I

hope

my

advice

will

be

helpful

for

you

.

Y

ours

,

Li

Hu

a

【

导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友

Peter

刚到广州学习，他来信说，很难

适应在广

州

的学习和生活，十分沮丧，请你给他回信表示安慰并提出建议，内容包括：

1.

表示安慰；

2.

针

对

问

题提出建议；

3.

表达希望。

【

详解】

1.

词汇积累

各种各样

的

：

various→a

variety

of

有关的：

relevant→concerne

d

建议

：

advice→suggestion

此外：

Besides=In

addition

2.

句式拓

展

合并简

单句

原句：

In

fact

,

it

’

s

normal

for

a

new

comer

to

feel

uncomfortable

in

a

new

environment

.

Don’t

worry.

拓展句：

Don

’

t

worry

,

because

it

’

s

normal

for

a

new

comer

to

feel

uncomfortable

in

a

new

environment.

【点睛】

[

高分句型

1]

Firstly,

try

to

join

your

classm

ates

in

various

activities

,

which

can

help

you

further

understand

the

local

culture

and

c

ustoms

.(

运用了

which

引导的非限制性定语从句

)

[

高分句型

2]

I

hope

my

advice

will

be

helpful

for

you.(

运用了省略连接词的宾语从句

)

)

5．假设你是新星中学的学生李华。最近，新来的国际交流生David想加入学校的俱乐部，写邮件询问你的意见，请你给他回一封信,内容如下：

1.推荐一个俱乐部；

2.介绍俱乐部的活动；

3.告知报名方式。

注意：1.词数100字左右；

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

DearDavid,

Yours,LiHua

【答案】DearDavid,

Learningthatyouareinterestedinourschool’sclubsandwonderwhichonetochoose,Iammorethanwillingtogiveyousomeadvice.

IrecommendChineseChessClub,themostpopularclubinourschool.Twiceaweek,membersoftheclubgathertohaveclasses,practisingingroupstoimprovetheirskills.Besides,everymonth,mastersinthisfieldareinvitedtogivelecturesonvarioustopicsaboutChinesechess,suchasitshistoryanddevelopment,fromwhichthemembersgettoknowtheculturalvaluebehindthisgame.Ithinkyouwillhaveachancetotrainyourthinking,makemorefriendsandlearnaboutChineseculturethroughtheseactivitiesintheclub.

Ifyouwouldliketojoinit,youmaysignupbyfillingouttheinformationatwww.beforenextSunday.Ihopemysuggestionisofhelptoyou.

Yours,LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。新来的国际交流生David想加入学校的俱乐部，写邮件询问意见，要求考生给他回信并给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

聚集：gather→gettogether/assemble

另外：besides→inaddition/moreover

机会：chance→opportunity

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

(

原句：

I

hope

my

suggestion

is

of

help

to

you.

拓展句：

I

hope

my

suggestion

is

helpful

to

you

.

【点睛】

[

高分句型

1]Besides,

every

month,

masters

in

this

field

are

invited

to

give

lectures

on

various

topics

about

Chinese

chess,

such

as

its

history

and

development,

from

which

the

members

get

to

know

the

cultural

value

behind

this

game.

(

运用了

“

介词

+which”

引导非限制性定语从句

)

[

高分句型

2]

If

you

would

like

to

join

it,

you

may

sign

up

by

filling

out

the

information

at

www.

before

next

Sunday

.

(

运用了

if

引导条件状语从句

)

)

6．假定你是李华，你的英国好友Angela写信告诉你她很不适应高中生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点，用英语给她回一封电子邮件。

1.注意学习方法，培养良好的学习习惯。

2.多交一些朋友，友情会使人忘记孤独。

3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。

注意：1.词数80左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

(

___

_________________________________________

【

答案】

Dear

Angela,

I

’

m

sorry

to

hear

that

you

are

having

trouble

adapting

to

your

high

school

life,

but

this

situation

can

be

easily

changed

if

you

take

my

advice

.

First

,

you

should

try

to

adjust

your

approaches

to

studies

and

form

good

learning

habits.

Secondly,

why

not

make

some

friends

They

can

help

you

to

forget

your

loneliness.

Thirdly,

it

would

be

a

good

idea

if

you

take

an

active

part

in

all

kinds

of

activities,

which

will

help

you

to

make

life

more

interesting.

By

doing

so,

you

will

be

happier

with

your

new

life

soon

.

I

hope

you

will

find

these

ideas

useful

.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友

Angel

a

回一封电子邮件，

帮助她解决不适应高中

生

活

，感到孤独的问题。

【

详解】

1.

词汇积累

得

知：

hear→learn

)

(

困难：

trouble→difficulty

建

议：

advice→tip

希

望

：

hope→wish

2.

句式拓

展

简单句变

复合句

原句：

By

doing

so,

you

will

be

happier

w

ith

your

new

life

soon

.

拓展句：

If

you

do

so,

you

will

be

happier

with

your

new

lif

e

soon

.

【点睛】【高分句型

1

】

Thirdly,

it

would

be

a

go

od

idea

if

you

take

an

active

part

in

all

kinds

of

activities

,

which

will

help

you

to

make

life

mor

e

interesting

.

(

运用了

which

引导的非限制性定语从句

)

【高分句型

2

】

By

doing

so,

you

w

ill

be

happier

with

your

new

life

soon

.

(

运用了非谓语动词动名词作介词宾

语

)

)

7．假如你是李华，你的朋友小东给你写了一封邮件，说他进入高中以来，感觉学习压很大，不适应新的生活和学习环境。请你给他会封邮件，给他提一些建议。

要点：1.向你的老师和同学求助；

2.多做运动，放松大脑，释放压力；

3.保持自信，坚持探索。

要求：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

(

【

答案】

Dear

Xiao

Dong,

Knowing

that

you

have

trouble

with

high

school

life,

I

am

really

concerned.

Therefore,

I

am

writing

to

offer

you

some

advice

.

First

,

why

not

turn

to

your

teachers

and

classmates

If

you

do

this,

I

am

sure

you

will

soon

improve

yourself.

Second

,

taking

more

exercise

can

not

only

rest

your

brain

but

also

help

you

concentrate

on

study.

Last

but

no

least

,

it

is

a

good

way

to

believe

in

yourself

and

keep

exploring.

That

way

you

will

gain

more

confidence.

I

hope

you

find

these

tips

helpful

to

you

.

Y

ous

,

)

(

Li

H

ua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用

文

。要求考生给朋友小东回信，

就如何适应新的生活和学习环境提出建

议

。

【

详解】

1.

词汇积累

担

心的：

concerned→worried

提供某人某物

：

offer

sb.

sth.→provide

sb.

with

sth.

首

先：

first→to

begin

with

帮助：

help→assis

t

2.

句式拓

展

合并句

子

原句：

Last

but

no

least

,

it

is

a

good

way

to

believe

in

yourself

and

keep

exploring.

That

way

you

will

gain

more

confidence

.

拓展句：

Last

but

no

least,

it

is

a

good

way

to

believe

in

yourself

and

keep

exploring,

which

will

help

you

gain

more

confidence

.

【

点睛】

[

高分句型

1]

Knowing

that

you

have

trouble

wit

h

high

school

life

,

I

am

really

concerned

.

(运用了现在分词作状语，

that

引导

宾

语从句)

[

高分句型

2]

If

you

do

this,

I

am

sure

you

will

soon

improve

your

self

.

(运用了

if

引导条件状语从句)

)

8．假如你是李华，你的米国笔友Tom来信告诉你，在新学期他要来中国当交换生，想让你给他一些建议，帮助他尽快适应中国的高中学习和生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括如下：

1.收信的感受；

2.学习方面的建议(课堂、课后)；

3.期待他的到来。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：exchangestudent

DearTom,

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua

【答案】DearTom,

DelightedtolearnthatyouaregoingtoChinatobeanexchangestudentnextterm,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeadviceinordertohelpyouadapttothenewlifehereasfastaspossible.

Tobeginwith,it’simportanttopayfullattentiontowhatteacherssayandtakenotesintime.Besides,youmayfinditdifficulttounderstandChineseasanexchangestudent,butfeelfreetoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpafterclass.What’smore,makefriendswiththem,whichwillmakeyourlifehereeasier.

IhopemysuggestionsworkandIamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon!

Yours,LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给米国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，对于新学期他要来中国当交换生给他一些建议，帮助他尽快适应中国的高中学习和生活。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→glad

为某人提供某物：offersbsth→providesthforsb

此外：besides→additionally

向某人求助：asksbforhelp→turntosbforhelp

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Besides,youmayfinditdifficulttounderstandChineseasanexchangestudent,butfeelfreetoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpafterclass.

拓展句：Besides,youmayfindit’sdifficultforanexchangestudenttounderstandChinese,butfeelfreetoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpafterclass.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Tobeginwith,it’simportanttopayfullattentiontowhatteacherssayandtakenotesintime.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】What’smore,makefriendswiththem,whichwillmakeyourlifehereeasier.(运用了which引

(

导的

非

限制性定语从句)

)

9．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack刚刚升入高中，但是他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你给他回复一封建议信。内容包括：1)你写信给我说对刚成为高中新生而感到焦虑和不安，我理解你的感受。

2)以下是我的一些建议：①我建议你报名参加一些活动，比如...(活动/俱乐部)，这样可以认识更多新朋友。②我认为上课应努力学习，这样可以尽快适应高中的学习。③我建议多与老师和同学交流，分享自己的感受，这样可以更好地体会高中的生活。3)我希望这些建议能够帮助到你，期待你的回信。

要求：

词数应为80字左右；

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

开头已经给出，不计入总字数。

DearJack,

____________________

Yours

LiHua

(

【答案】

Dear

Jac

k

,

I

understand

how

you

feel

when

you

write

to

me

that

you

are

anxious

and

upset

about

being

a

freshman

in

new

high

school

.

I

have

some

suggestions

for

you

.

Firstly,

I

suggest

you

sign

up

for

some

activities,

such

as

basketball

club

where

you

can

make

more

friends.

Secondly,

I

think

you

should

study

hard

in

class,

so

that

you

can

adapt

to

senior

high

school

as

soon

as

possible.

Thirdly,

I

advice

that

you

should

communicate

with

your

teachers

and

classmates

,

share

you

true

feelings

,

so

that

you

can

better

experience

the

life

of

high

school.

Finally

,

I

hope

these

suggestions

will

help

you

and

look

forward

to

hearing

from

you

soon.

)

(

Y

ours

,

Li

H

ua

【导语】

本

篇书面表达是一篇应用文，

要求考生给英国笔友

Jack

写信，

提出一些关于适应新的校园生活的

建

议。

【

详解】

1.

词汇积累

建议

：

suggestion→advice

首先：

firstly

→

to

begin

with

应该：

should→be

supposed

to

帮助：

help→assis

t

2.

句式拓

展

简单句变

复合句

原句：

I

have

some

suggestions

for

y

o

u

.

拓展句：

I

have

some

sugges

tions

for

you

,

which

I

think

will

be

helpful

.

【点睛】

[

高分句型

1]Firstly,

I

suggest

you

sign

up

for

some

activities

,

such

as

basketball

club

where

you

can

mak

e

more

friends

.(

运用了

where

引导定语从句

)

[

高分句型

2]Thirdly,

I

advice

that

you

should

communicate

with

your

teachers

and

classmates

,

share

you

true

feelings

,

so

that

you

can

better

experience

the

life

of

high

school

.(

运用了

that

引导宾语从句

，

so

that

引导状语从

句

)

)

10．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：

1.帮他分析原因；2.给他提建议；3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.开头和结尾已经给出，不算入总字数；

3.请按照如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。

DearLiMing,

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearLiMing,

Understandably,itcanbehardtoadjusttoanewschoolandclass.