读后续写遇险类-彩虹尽头的女孩讲义 高三英语作文复习专项

读后续写原题：Onesummer

afternoon,whenIwasabouteightyearsofage,Iwaslookingatabeautifulrainbowthat,

bendingfromthesky,seemedtobelosingitselfinathick

wood

aboutaquarterofamiledistant.“Doyouknow,Gracie,”saidmy

brother,whowasjustrecoveringfromasevereillness,

weakandtired,"thatifyoushouldgototheendoftherainbow,youwouldfindthereprecious

treasures?”“Isittrulyso?”Iasked.“Trulyso,”answeredmybrother,witha

smile

butaveryseriousface.Now,Iwasa

simple-hearted

childwhobelievedeverythingthatwastoldtome;so,withoutanotherword,Irushedouttowardthewood.Mybrother

called

aftermeasloudlyashewasableto,butIdidnottakeanynoticeofhim.Icarednothingforthewetgrass,

onandonIran.

IwassosurethatIknewjustwherethatrainbowended.ButwhenIreachedthe

cedars

,

theendoftherainbowwasnotthere!

Abruptly

Isawitshiningdownamongthetreesalittlefartheroff;so

onandonIstruggled,throughthethickbushes,tillIcamewithinthesoundofa

stream.Ireachedthebankofthestream,andIcouldseeitalittlewayoffontheotherside.Icrossedthestreamonafallentree,andstillranon,thoughmy

muscleswereachingandmykneesshaking.SuddenlyImetinmywayalarge

porcupine(大豪猪).

Iranawayfromhim

asfastasmytiredfeetwouldcarryme.Inmy

fright

andhurryIforgottokeepmyeyeontherainbow,andwhen,atlast,Irememberedandlookedforit,itwasnowhereinsight!WhenIsawthatitwasindeedgone,Iburstintotears,forIhadlostallmytreasures,and

hadnothingbut

muddyfeetandawetand

torn

dress.SoIsetoutforhome.Paragraph1:ButIsoonfoundthatmytroubleshadonlybegun.______________Paragraph2:AtlastIheardmyownnamecalled.________________文本分析：故事介绍：一个夏日的午后，8岁的小女孩Gracie抬头仰望天空看着美丽的彩虹出神，此时哥哥告诉她彩虹的源头有着世间最为珍贵的宝藏。单纯的Gracie相信了哥哥的话，她坚定地相信宝藏就在彩虹的尽头，于是便奋不顾身地跑向丛林去寻找彩虹的源头。途中出现的豪猪让她失去了方向，她迷失在丛林中，找不到回家的路……

五要素：Who--GracieandherbrotherWhen--onesummerafternoonWhere--inathickwoodWhat--Graciewaslookingatabeautifulrainbowwhenbrothertoldthatifsheshouldgototheendoftherainbowshewouldfindthereprecioustreasures.Why--Graciewasasimple-heartedchildandshebelievedeverythingthatwastoldtoherHow--tosearchfortheprecioustreasures,Gracieranouttoathickwood......参考答案：Gracie发现自己迷路了，最终被哥哥找到并带回家。这件事成为了她童年的一段美好回忆。Paragraph1:

ButIsoonfoundthat

mytroubleshadonlybegun.

Ilostmyway!Iwas

shivering

withcold,withmyemptystomach

rumbling.

Thenightwind

howledruthlessly,

nameless

creatures

murmured

inthedarkandthemoonlightshoneweaklyontheground.

Filledwithfright,I

dragged

myexhaustedbody,

inchingforward.

Eventually,Isatbesidethestream,myarmsandlegsaching.

Beingremorse

formysimple-mindedbehavior,thinkingaboutthemissingrainbowandtreasures,I

burstintotears

again,feelinghelpless.但我很快发现，我的麻烦才刚刚开始。我迷路了!我冷得发抖，空空的肚子咕咕作响。夜风无情地咆哮着，黑暗中有无名的生物在喃喃低语，月光微弱地照在地上。我惊恐万分，拖着疲惫的身体慢慢向前挪动。最后，我坐在小溪边，四肢酸痛。我为自己单纯的行为感到懊悔，想起失去的彩虹和珍宝，我又哭了,非常无助。

Paragraph2:AtlastIheardmyownnamecalled.

Thevoicecamefromdistance,butIcouldfigureoutitwasmybrother.“Here!Here!”I

shriekedat

thetopofmylung.Myweakbrother

madehisway

tome,

hiseyesfilledwithconcern.Asenseof

palpable

relief

enveloped

me.

I

threw

myself

to

him

and

hugged

him

tightly.

Following

him,

I

arrived

home

safeandsound

finally.Distant

though

itisnow,the

episode

has

wovenintomysweetchildhoodmemories,

lingering

inthedepthofmyheart.最后我听到有人叫我自己的名字。声音从远处传来，但我知道那是我哥哥。在这里!”我扯着嗓子尖叫起来。我虚弱的弟弟向我走来，眼里充满了关切。一种明显的解脱感笼罩着我。我扑向他，紧紧地抱住他。跟着他，我终于平安到家了。虽然现在已经很遥远了，但这件事已经编织在我童年的甜蜜记忆中，萦绕在我的内心深处.下水文1:Gracie发现自己迷路了，最终被家人找到。经过这件事情，她最终感悟到家人的亲情和关爱才是彩虹末端的财宝。Paragraph1:ButIsoonfoundthatmytroubleshadonlybegun.AllatonceIheardvoicesshoutingandhallooing.Iwasfrightened,fearingthatsomeunknownanimalswereuponme!Icouldnotfindmyway:Iwaslostinawood!Icouldnottellwhichwaseastorwest,northorsouth,butwanderedabouthereandthere,cryingandcalling,thoughIknewthatnoonecouldhearme.Iwashungry,cold,scared,--altogetherverymiserableindeed.Paragraph2:AtlastIheardmyownnamecalled.Thencamefamiliarvoicesnearme.Thatwasmyfamily!Instantly,Itriedtorespondloudlyandurgently,“Here!Here!”Withinminutes,myfamilycameintomyeyes.Rushingtowardsthem,Ithrewmyselftotheirwarmhugs.Inaguiltytone,mybrothersaid,"mypoorlittlesister!IthoughtyouwouldknowIwasonlyquizzingyou."Smilingathim,Isaid,“ThereisnotreasureattheendoftherainbowButourfamilyare!”(150words)下水文2：Gracie发现自己迷路了，在痛苦不堪之际，哥哥拖着病体找到她。她体会到了哥哥对她的爱。Paragraph1:ButIsoonfoundthatmytroubleshadonlybegun.Icouldn'tfindthepreviousway!Achillcreptoverme.Withmylipstrembling,Iwasreducedtotears.Hopingtofindsomethingmore,Istillwalkedthroughthewoods.However,itseemedthatthegodwasn'tblessingonme.Ultimately,Isatdownbythetreewithmyarmsaching.Ifeltextremelytiredandmyspiritssank,tearsstreamingdownmycheeksagain.Paragraph2:AtlastIheardmyownnamecalledAwildgaietytookholdofmysinkingheart.Somebodywaslookingforme!Trottingquickly,Isawitwasmybrother,whowasseizedbyaburs