四六级作文考前指导课件

四六级作文考前指导Lecture1StructureLogicTopicsentences从某种意义上来说四六级考试作文有其固定的写作格式、结构，而对于固定的题型，有固定不变的表达法。因此，大家有理由相信只要训练方法得当，搞好写作是不难的。大家不妨试试多背范文和常用句型，包括各类型作文的开头、结尾句、中间展开、过渡句，以及比较、图表说明等的常用句型和表达法，然后自己多动笔写一写，只要按这样的方法进行练习，相信在一定时间内就可以在写作上取得满意的分数作文的写作时间为30分钟，合理的时间安排为10+15+5，前面的10分钟用来读题审题

，构思并列提纲，接着的15分钟用来按照提纲写作，最后5分钟用来检查及润色。合理的时

间安排是写出优秀

作文的必不可少的第一步。①用

恰当的逻辑词表现文章的逻辑性。②要注意自然段与主题句的运用，即用自然段表现出文章

的逻辑性，并在每段中用主题句说明要点，给人一目了然的感觉。③要注意句型结构，注意

每句的重心和句与句之间的衔接，使句意一环扣一环，避免松散。阅卷老师阅卷一般是从第一段看语言，从第二段看结构。这就要求考生

的作文开头部分以及每一段的第一句一定要写得像英文，不要出现任何的拼写或语法错误。要想让阅卷老师对你的作文试卷有一种赏心悦目的感觉，作文的排版应该不多于2/3，不少于1/3，要留有余地，不要将卷面写得密密麻麻。字体不要过大或过小。字迹要工整。英语四六级写作的复习一、背诵背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝，可分为以下5个层次：(1)精彩词汇，(2)精彩句型，(3)精彩句子，(4)万能框架，(5)经典范文。注意句子和句型不一样，精彩句子应作为单词来记忆。背诵前，确保自己已充分理解所有内容。二、默写背完经典范文后，进行默写。然后对照原文纠错，搞清楚错在什么地方。多数同学在写的时候都会犯小错误，如拼写、单复数、大小写等。这些就是你在写作中的弱点，也是阅卷老师最不能容忍的地方。培根说过：“Writingmakesanexactman.”(写作使人精确。)只有默写下来你才会发现自己常犯哪些错误。三、中译英中译英也是提高写作的好方法。根据范文的中文译文，将其按自己的理解译成英文。译完后，你就会发现自己的翻译和原文有很大差距，这些差距就是取得写作高分的关键。这时，对照范文，看看原作者是怎么写的，思考为什么这么写。同样的一句中文，范文中使用了哪些词汇和句型？你使用了哪些词汇和句型？学习范文使用不同的词汇和句型。通过不断练习，你的写作水平不知不觉就提高了。四、写作模仿范文写作新的文章，套用范文的精彩词汇、句型、句子和框架。最初套用时可能比较生硬，但随着不断的积累，组合起来会越来越顺手。参考书目新东方背诵200句《妙手著文章——漂亮英文句子的写作技巧》H315G650《雅思写作》H315J479各类真题模拟题写作模板写作自查语法：

1、主语同动词单复数是否一致？

2、代词与先行词是否一致？

3、代词指代明确吗？(尤其要注意的是“this”和“that”)

4、修饰词的位置是否靠近被修饰词？

5、有没有悬垂结构或放错位置的修饰语？

6、动词的形式同时态及语态一致吗？

7、有没有逗号重叠的情况？

8、有没有发现不完整的句子？

清晰明了逻辑词tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finallytostartwith,next,inaddition,finallyfirstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast主题句Celebritiesastheproducts’spokesmen明星代言现象很普遍。明星代言广告存在一些问题。我的看法。●审题概述●如今明星代言的现象很普遍，但是明星代言广告也存在一些问题，本文要求考生结合实际阐述自己的观点。第一段，简要描述明星代言现象很普遍；第二段，指出明星代言广告存在些问题；第三段，就这一现象，阐述自己的观点。TopicsentencesProblems:1.howtomakeyourpointclear2.howtomakeyourpointrelated3.howtomakeyoursentencecorrectFirstofall,celebritiesastheproducts’spokesmenmaymisleadtheconsumer.thefunctionorqualityoftheproductmaybeexaggeratedbythecelebrities.Furthermore,celebritiesastheproducts’spokesmenmayincreasethecostoftheproducts.First,theproducerwouldtakeadvantageofthecelebrity’spopularitytocoverthedefectofhisownproduct.Second,thecharmofthespokesmentemptthefanstobuywhattheydon’treallyneedorwant.ConsumerCost,blind,…CelebrityTrustworthy,reputationManufacturerCheat,takeadvantage…sample

CelebritiesastheProducts’SpokesmenInthecontemporarysociety,itisverycommonforcelebrities,ortheso-calledsuperstars,tobespokesmenorrepresentativesforawidevarietyofproducts.Celebrities’advertisementscanbeeasilyfoundontheInternet,televisions,newspapers,magazinesandevenonthewallsofsomebuildings.

Thereare,however,someproblemsforcelebritiesandtheconsumers.Tobeginwith,beforerepresenting,astarmayknownothingabouttheproduct.Thus,consumersmaybemisled.

Evenworse,forthesakeofmoney,somestarsadvertiseforitemswithlowquality,evenforfakecommodities.InthecaseofSanlu,thepublicimageofstarsinvolvedwasspoiled.Lastbutnotleast,thehighincomeofadvertisingdoesnotdeservetheirlabor,whichwidensthegapbetweenthepoorandtherich.

Frommypointofview,itishightimethatmeasuresweretakentoeliminatethedemerits.Firstly,lawsshouldbeworkedouttoregulatecelebrities’advertising.Secondly,starsshouldberequiredtotellthetruthtothepublic.Onlybydoingsocanstarsbetrustedbytheirfansandcanconsumersbenefit.HarmoniousDormitoryLifeinMyMindInthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyourideais.Inthesecondpart,giveoneortwoexamplestosupportyourideaordescribeyouridea.Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.审题KeywordsHarmoniousDormitoryLifeinMyMindOpeningInthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyourideais.Dormitorylifeisanindispensablepartofcollegelife.Asisknowntoall,aharmoniousdormitorylifeisimportanttocollege

studentsandbenefitsallthemembers.Frommypointofview,weshouldachievethisharmonyasfollows.…Cleanandtidyroom,aswellasmutualunderstanding,Ithink,contributesalottoaharmoniousdormitorylife.Inthesecondpart,giveoneortwoexamplestosupportyourideaordescribeyouridea.Thefirstthingweshouldconcernistocreateafriendlyandwarmenvironmentfordailylife.We’dbetterpaymoreattentiontotherelationswithourroommates.Wemustlearntotolerateeachother.…Lecture2DevelopingsentencesCoherenceSubtopic+supportingideasFirstandforemost,themostimportantthingismutualunderstandingbetweenroommates.Takemyownexperiencesasanexample.Iprefertostayuplatewhilemyroommatesdotheopposite.ThusImakeendeavortoadjustmyscheduletotheirssotheycanhaveasoundsleep.第一次模拟考信息回馈15分30分钟四级作文CreditCards1。越来越多大学生使用信用卡，信用卡的优点2。信用卡的弊端3。我的看法Atleast120words审题大学生提纲内容分配/文章结构头轻脚重头大脚大身子小分段语言词性Convenient/convenienceSafe/safety—securitySthCostsb.somemoney主谓一致动词—时态/搭配基础单词拼法/用法背诵逻辑词不使用使用错Sample1CreditcardsMoreandmorepeopleincludingcollegestudentschoosetopaywithcreditcardsnowadays.Acreditcardismuchmoreconvenienttocarryaroundcomparedwithcashandcanallowyoutobuythingsonline.Withcreditcards,payinghasneverbeeneasier.Butit’snotalladvantageswhenitcomestousingcreditcards.Creditcards,withthepurchasingfreedomtheywouldgiveyou,cancompelyoutospendmorethanwhatyourbudgetwouldallow.Thiscanhavedisastrousresults,becauseyoumightenduppayingforyourcreditcardbillstherestofyourlifeifyoudon‘tmanagetokeepthatspendinghabitincheck.Inmyopinion,beforedecidingtouseacreditcard,weshouldweighitsprosandcons.Thecreditcardsareweaponsthatcanbeusedforabountifulexistenceoratragicfate.Italldependsonhowyouwieldthesword.Sample2CreditcardsAnincreasingnumberofstudentshaverealizedhowgreatanalternativeacreditcardiswheniscomestopurchasingitemsorprocuringservices.Theydon’thavetocarrycashallthetime—oneoftheseplasticaccountswouldservethesamepurposeasmoney.Besides,payingatthestoreissignificantlyeasierandtakesnoimmediatebiteoutoftheirpocketbooks.Despitealltheconveniencethatcreditcardsbring,therearestillsomethingsthatneedtobeconsideredbeforeyouchoosetopaywithacreditcard.Creditcardsarepronetosecurityissues,especiallywhenitcomestoonlinetransactions.Anyonewhomanagestointerceptthedatafoundonyourcreditcardcaneasilyuseyourlineofcreditfortheirownpurposes.Inmyview,creditcardsarenotnecessitiesforcollegestudents.Withcreditcards,somestudentstendtopurchasegoodsonimpulseandhotheadedpurchasewillleaveaheavyfinancialburdenonthemanddestroythem.Worsestill,iftheyfailtorepaydebtsontime,theirrecordswillbedefinitelyunfavorabletotheminaworldofcredit.主题句的写作要领：

1．一段一主题。在一个段落里，最好只呈现文章的一个要点并紧紧围绕这一要点进行写作。一定要注意不要在一个段落内塞入二三个甚至更多的要点，这会使读者感到困惑，不知本段要侧重陈述什么内容。2.主题句最好放在段首。虽说主题句可以放在段首、段中、段末，甚至省略，但对于初学者而言，一开始就亮出主题句会帮助自己紧扣主旨，不至于跑题。3．最好使用完整句。那些不能表达完整意思的词组或短语，只能作为句子的一部分，不能担当段落主题句的大任。4．主题句内容要清晰具体。主题句不能模棱两可，令人迷惑。例如：“Theemphasishasnotalwaysbeenthesame.”这句话就不适合作为段落主题句，因为它主题思想不清晰，可以改为“Theemphasisonproducingwealthandmaintainingahighstandardoflivinghasnotalwaysbeenthesame.”段落开展扩展句是对主题句的延伸和发展，对主题句的中心思想进行例证、解释或论证。初学者尤其要注意两点：一、扩展句和主题句要意义相关(unity)；二、扩展句之间要条理清楚，逻辑一致（coherence）。对比法

（1）Goodmannersareimportantinallcountries,butwaysofexpressinggoodmannersaredifferentfromcountrytocountry.（2）Americanseatwithknivesandforks;Japaneseeatwithchopsticks.（3）Americanssay“Hi”whentheymeet;Japanesebow.（4）ManyAmericansopendoorsforwomen;Japanesemendonot.（5）Inallcountries,itisgoodmannerstobehaveconsiderablytowardothersandbadmannersnotto.Itisonlythewayofbehavingpolitelythatdiffersfromcountrytocountry.因果法

（1）Healthisaconditionofwisdom,andasignofcheerfulness.（2）Ifamanisinpoorhealth,hewillhavemanytroublesandsufferagreatdeal.Hehastospendmuchtimeandmoneytogotoahospitalforexaminationsandtreatment.（3）Inaddition,hisrelativesandfriendshavetotakecareofhim.Inthissense,poorhealthbringstroubletoothersaswellastothepatienthimself.（4）Asweknow,happinessandsuccessdependonachievementsandprogress.Goodhealthisoneofthemanyfactorsthatleadtoachievementandsuccess,andthebasisofthemishealth.举例法

⑴Aforeigner’sfirstimpressionoftheU.S.islikelytobethateveryoneisinarush---oftenunderpressure.⑵Citypeoplealwaysappeartobehurryingtogetwheretheyaregoing,restlesslyseekingattentioninastore,orelbowingothersastheytrytocompletetheirshopping.⑶Racingthroughdaytimemealsispartofthepaceoflifeinthiscountry.Workingtimeisconsideredprecious.Othersinpubliceating-placesarewaitingforyoutofinishsothey,too,canbeservedandgetbacktoworkwithinthetimeallowed.⑷Youalsofinddriverswillbeabruptandpeoplewillpushpastyou.Youwillmisssmiles,briefconversations,andsmallexchangeswithstrangers.⑸Don’ttakeitpersonally.Thisisbecausevaluetimehighly,andtheyresentsomeoneelse“wasting”itbeyondacertainappropriatepoint.扩展句的写作要领

1．重复主题句中的关键词。为了保证扩展句和主题句间意义相关，对于初学者而言，比较简单易行的办法是反复点击主题句中的关键词。以例3为例，主题句中关键词是inarush，随后的扩展句中用到了hurry,race,abrupt,push等词呼应rush，使段落主题浑然一体。为了避免重复可使用关键词的同义词或替换词性。2．使用排比结构。使用句型结构相似的排比句推进主题，可以增强条理性，是扩展句之间逻辑一致。以例1为例，三个排比句清晰的对比出两国的礼节的差异。3．使用过渡词。扩展句之间的逻辑性可以通过使用恰当的过渡词来实现。以例2为例，过渡词inaddition自然的将两个扩展句连接起来，意思层层推进，突显主题句。练习HowWillOurLifeGoonwithoutInternet?网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行你对网络依赖症的看法TheInternethasdrawntheworldclosertogether,realizedcountlessincredibledreams,andprovidedmodernpeoplewithagreatmanyconveniencesandabrilliantlife.Today,manypeoplesimplyfeeltheycannotlivewithouttheInternet.Inmyview,thepoweroftheInternetisallpervasive,yetitsmanynegativeeffectsarealreadyvisible.Today,manypeoplesimplyfeeltheycannotlivewithouttheInternet.举例法Governmentspublishtheirlatestpoliciesanddecisionsonlineforworldwiderecognition.Politicalcampaignsareoftendoneonlinetogainwiderpublicsupport.CompaniesandenterprisesresorttotheInternetformorebusinessopportunitiesandpotentialcustomershomeandabroad.UniversitiesandresearchersturntotheInternetifthey’dseekinternationalcooperationorfunding.Commonfolkslikeusalsorelyonthecyberworldinvariousways,forcommunication,entertainment,bankingandshopping.Lecture3Sentences句子写法背诵/模仿/造句写作背诵200句零散短句

---精彩累加，变化是真TheWestLakeisoneofthescenicplacesinChina.Itlooksitsbestinspringtime.Manyforeigntouristsareattractedbyit.TheWestLake，oneofthescenicplacesinChina，looksitsbestinspringtime.Manyforeigntouristsareattractedbyit.请运用介词短语、分词短语、同位语短语做下面联句练习：1.Hedidn’twritetheletterhimself.2.Heaskedhisfriendtodoit.3.Insteadofwritingtheletterhimself,heaskedhisfriendtodoit.1.Fordproducescheapercars2.FordalsosuppliesAmericanswithbetteronesyearafteryear.3.Besidesproducingcheapercars,FordalsosuppliesAmericanswithbetteronesyearafteryear.1.Dogsareableandwillingtolearnawidevarietytasks.2.Theyareintelligentanddevotedtotheirowner.3.Dogsareableandwillingtolearnawidevarietytasksbecauseoftheirintelligenceanddevotiontotheirowners.用并列结构做下面联句练习：1.Themoonwashiddenentirelybehindthedarkclouds.2.Notasinglestarcouldbeseen.3.Themoonwashiddenentirelybehindthedarkcloudsandnotasinglestarcouldbeseen.用从句把下列各组句子联成一个句子：1.WaldenPondisnowthesiteofmanytouristsstands.2.WaldenPondwasoncepraisedbyThoreauforitsnaturalbeauty.3.WaldenPond,whichisnowthesiteofmanytouristsstands,wasoncepraisedbyThoreauforitsnaturalbeauty.WaldenPond,whichwasoncepraisedbyThoreauforitsnaturalbeauty,isnowthesiteofmanytouristsstands.1.Physicsisofferedonlyinthemorning.2.Chemistrycanbetakenatnight.3.Physicsisofferedonlyinthemorningwhilechemistrycanbetakenatnight.1.TheChineseArtEnsemblewastoperformherethatnight.2.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.3.ThenewsthattheChineseArtEnsemblewastoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.写作200句翻译练习善用抽象名词WhentheWhiteHousescandalbroke,manysaidtheyhadrespectforwhatthepresidentsymbolizesbutnotthePresidenthimself.WhentheWhiteHousescandalbroke,manysaidtheyhadrespectforthePresidencybutnotthePresidenthimself.Thegirlsuddenlybecamefrightenedandfledtothecastle,whichmadeherfeelsafe.Thegirlsuddenlybecamefrightenedandfledtothesafetyofthecastle.变换动词Shewasusinghertoweltodryherhairwhenhersonrushedinwithoutevenknockingthedoor.Shewastowelingherhairdrywhenhersonbargedin.Sheaskedmetositdown,tookaseatherself,andwentontolighthercigarette.Shemotionedmetoachair,seatedherself,andwentontolighthercigarette.In1886,thevillageagainhadadisputeovertaxesandlanddistribution.In1886,adisputeovertaxesandlanddistributionflaredupagaininthevillage.题目分类对比选择型1)Advantage/disadvantage（AmajorAdvantage/disadvantageofadvertisingontelevision)2）A/BSavingmoneyorusingtomorrow’smoney3)Yes/noIsitwisetomakefriendsonline?自由发挥型MyideaMyideaofauniversityartfestivalThebestwayThebestwaytostayhealthy给定观点型TheimportanceofkeepingagoodmoodWaysofDealingwithCulturalDifferences自由发挥型HarmoniousDormitoryLifeinMyMind自由发挥型WilltheInternetisolateusformoneanother?对比选择型(3)Yes/noHowcantheUseofPrivateMotorVehiclesbereduced?自由发挥型段落开展对比1.Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.

2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.

3.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat……

4.Itisreasonabletomaintainthat……butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat……

5.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.

6.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.

7.AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.

8.AbearssomeresemblancestoB.

9.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.

10.AandBdifferinseveralways.

11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.

12.Peopleusedtothink……,butthingsaredifferentnow.

13.ThesameistrueofB.

14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.

15.ItistruethatA……,butthechieffaults（obviousdefects）are……

句式--长句型

（1）Thisis,saysLuban,adesk.(简单句中加上插入语)

（2）Toacertainextent,youcanbeagoodteacher.(简单句前面加上程度状语)

（3）Ratherthandecreasing,thepopulationinChinaisincreasing.

(简单句前面加上分词短语)

（4）Withskilledworkers,wecouldaccomplishthetaskwithinthedeadline;withoutproficientworkers,wewouldhavetogiveuphalfway.(排比句型增加句子可读性)

（5）Acaseinpointismyneighbor,wholostbothlegsinatrafficaccident.(举例子方法)

（6）AccordingtoarecentsurveymadebyprofessorWang,headofsocialdepartmentinPekingUniversity,90%ofthepeopleacrossthecountryaresufferingfromtheproblem.

(举例子方法)

（7）WiththerapidadvancesinthestandardoflivingoftheChinesepeopleinrecentyears,airconditionershavejoinedotherhouseholdelectricalappliancesasitems.(举例子方法)

（8）isusuallythefirsttobeconsidered,butitisnotthemostimportant.Themostimportantaspectofthephenomenonhasmuchtodowith.Itisinthisareathat

findthemselveshavingtofacemanyconfusingandconflictingfeelings.(经典原因段)

（9）Basically,whatweseeinthispicture/reallymattersisabirdlamentingthefactthatitshomehasbeendestroyed.(主语从句描述现象)

（10）Thereisnodenyingthatautomobilesareindicationsofcivilization,progressanddevelopment;nevertheless,automobilescausetheseriousproblemofairpollution.(名词性从句引出观点)LearningfromExperienceorfrombooksTherehasbeenmuchtalkrecentlyaboutwhetherweshouldlearnfrombooksorweshouldlearnfromexperience.Somepeoplethinkthatlearningfromexperienceismoreimportantwhileothersholdthedifferentopinions.Personally,Isidewiththeformer,inthebeliefthatexperienceisthebestteacher.Admittedly,learningfrombooks,asadvocatedbymany,hasitsactiveroletoplayinouracademiclife.Itcanputusintouchwiththegreatmindsandarmourheadswithmassiveknowledge.However,therearenumerousmeritsforlearningfromexperience，too.Firstthingsfirst,experienceisthesourceofknowledgeandunderstandingaswellasmeaning.Nowherecantheimportanceoflearningfromexperiencebedescribedsovividlyandaccuratelyasintheoldsaying-“Nothingeverbecomesrealtillitisexperienced”.Takethehumanprogressasanillustration.Datingbacktohundredsofthousandsyearsago,wehumanbeingswereutterlyignorant.Butbyincessantpractices,ourancestorscumulatedmassiveexperience,fromwhichtheyacquiredagreatamountofknowledge,transformingourworldfromaprimitivesocietyintoahighly-developedone.Second,unlikethetheoriesrecordedinbooks,experiencescanapplytopracticaluse.Whenweareatwork,whatweneedistheexperienceofpracticalapplicationinsteadoftheabstracttheoriesinourbooks.Takingalltheseintoaccount,wecandrawaconclusionthatlearningfromexperienceismoreimportantthanlearningfrombooks.AlwaysremembertheoldsayinggivenbyEinstein——“Theonlysourceofknowledgeisexperience.”例文2Isitpossibletotellwhetherthelefthandismoreusefulthanistherightone?Itwouldberidiculoustoarguethatknowledgegainedfromexperienceoutweighsthatgainedfrombooks.Infact,botharevitalinhumanlearning.Learningfrombooksandlearningfromexperiencearejusttwohandsofahumanandtwowingsofabird.Eachplaysarole.

Learningfrombooksisoneofthemostprevailingmeansadoptedinschoolsanduniversitiesworldaroundforspreadingknowledge.Comparedwithlearningfromexperience,learningfrombooksarewiderinrangeanddeeperincontents.Thisisevident.Foritisimpossibleforthecontemporarypeopletoexperiencethosehappenedinthepast,peopleonlycanlearnknowledgeaboutthepastthroughreadingdocuments,books,andotherwrittenmaterials.Historyandarcheologydependsheavilyonlearningfrombooks.

Besidesthelimitationoftime,spacerestrictionsalsomakeitimperativethatpeople