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Readingpassage

①Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush．Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry．However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．

②Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry，theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater．Asthesayinggoes，"Hastemakeswaste．"Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly．Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly．

③Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．Forexample，takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane．However，takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends．Besides，itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway．Onthecontrary，beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives．

④Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．Asisknowntoall，takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress．Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry，theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem．Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally．Accordingtosomestudies，peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases，tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense，eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter．

⑤Inshort，workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced．Yet，muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment，friendsandhealth，whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages．Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．Readingpassage①Thesedayso1Stepsofwriting1明确主旨结构2寻找主题句3提取主次信息4独立表达5语篇衔接Stepsofwriting1明确主旨结构2寻找主题句32keywords—fortopic

①Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush．Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry．However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．

②Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry，theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater．Asthesayinggoes，"Hastemakeswaste．"Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly．Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly．

③Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．Forexample，takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane．However，takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends．Besides，itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway．Onthecontrary，beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives．

④Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．Asisknowntoall，takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress．Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry，theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem．Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally．Accordingtosomestudies，peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases，tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense，eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter．

⑤Inshort，workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced．Yet，muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment，friendsandhealth，whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages．Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．liveaslowerlifeargumentationkeywords—fortopic①Theseday3Structure

①Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush．Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry．However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．

②Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry，theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater．Asthesayinggoes，"Hastemakeswaste．"Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly．Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly．

③Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．Forexample，takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane．However，takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends．Besides，itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway．Onthecontrary，beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives．

④Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．Asisknowntoall，takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress．Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry，theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem．Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally．Accordingtosomestudies，peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases，tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense，eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter．

⑤Inshort，workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced．Yet，muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment，friendsandhealth，whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages．Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．

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thesisStructure①Thesedaysoursoc4thesis>argument/evidence>conclusion>Identifythetextualpattern.structureofargumentation

thesis>argument/evidence>concl5Para.1①Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush．②Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry．③However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．SentenceFunctionKeywordsS1S2S3引出要点引出要点提出论点rushgetusedto,inahurrylivetheirlifeataslowerpaceFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.Para.1①Thesedaysoursociety6Para.2①

Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．②Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry，theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater．③Asthesayinggoes，"Hastemakeswaste．"④Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly．⑤Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly．SentenceFunctionKeywords

S1S2S3S4,S5

提出要点举例论证引用论证提出建议reason,possibilty,dowrongsHastmakeswastethinkcarefully,doworklessquicklycan'tmakeasounddecision

Figureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.Para.2①Themainreasonthat7Para.3①Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．②

Forexample，takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane．③However，takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends．④Besides，itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway．⑤Onthecontrary，beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives．SentenceFunctionkeywordsS1S2,S3,S4S5提出要点举例论证补充要点helpenjoylifebetterForexamplehurry,losechances,enjoyingFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.Para.3①Slowingdownthepace8Para.4①Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．

②Asisknowntoall，takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress．③Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry，theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem．④Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally．⑤Accordingtosomestudies，peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases，tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense，eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter．SentenceFunctionkeywordsS1S2,S3,S4S5提出要点指出危害研究论证hurt,physicallyandmentallyfewerdiseases,happier,livelongerFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.betterhealthconditionsPara.4①Finally，slowerlifepa9Para.5①Inshort，workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced．②Yet，muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment，friendsandhealth，whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages．③Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．

SentenceFunctionkeywordsS1S2S3提及好外对比论证提出要点enjoymet,friends,health,importanttakeyourtime,aslowerpaceFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.materialbenefitsPara.5①Inshort，workingquick10DraftoftheversionIt'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．(要点1)

Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．

(要点2)

Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．(要点3)Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．(要点4)Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace．(要点5)点评：该版本完全覆盖了文章全部要点，但是都采用了原文的语句，因此是对文章的缩写，而不是真正意义的概要。仔细观察，我们发现本文多处涉及表达原因的内容，因此我们在后面的表达微技能中聚焦如何表达因果关系。【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)DraftoftheversionIt'sbettedespiteinspiteofwhilealthough/though

SummaryforPara.1However，it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone．

recommendsuggestadvise

liveaslowerlifeDespitebeingaccustomedtothefastpaceinmodernsociety，peoplearerecommendedtoleadaslowerlife．【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)SummaryforPara.1However，it'12SummaryforPara.2Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush．Slowingdownlowersthepossibilityofcommittingerrorsbycomprehensivethinking．slowerdownthelife

makemistakescommiterrors

【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)SummaryforPara.2Themainre13SummaryforPara.3Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter．Moreopportunitiestoenjoylifeareallowedbyaslowerpace．

【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)SummaryforPara.3Slowingdow14SummaryforPara.4Finally，slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus．

Lastly，betterhealthconditionphysicallyandmentallyisalsowhataslowerlifebrings．

physicalandmentalhealth【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)SummaryforPara.4Finally，slo15SummaryforPara.5Therefore，takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeat