英汉翻译教程1课件

Unit2英汉翻译教程英汉翻译教程翻译的标准、过程什么是好的译文？

1DifferentCriteriaofTranslation2StepsofTranslation3AdequateExpression4Unit2:

翻译的标准、过程

译文：例

Iamsurethatitwouldchangethesituationifyouarekindenoughtolendsupporttome.我相信如果你非常好心能撑我一把的话，情况就不一样了。我相信如果你有足够的好心支持我的话，它将会改变形势。Unit2:什么是好的译文

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译文：例

Jobsandworkdomuchmorethanmostofusrealizetoprovidehappinessandcontentment.职业和工作对于获得幸福和满足起了很大的作用，我们大多数人对此却认识不足。职业和工作带来很大的幸福和满足，而我们大多数人并不意识到这一点。Unit2:什么是好的译文

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译文：例

Inthewakeofhismother'sdeathsomethirty-sixyearslater,Hemingwayturnedbacktotheadventureandtriedtowriteanovelaboutit.大约36年过后，在他母亲去世后的不久海明威又想起了那次遭遇的险情并试图就此写一部小说。在他母亲去世36年之后，海明威又想起了那次历险奇遇，并试图写一部小说。Unit2:什么是好的译文

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译文：例

Nothingoutofitsplaceisgood,nothinginitsplaceisbad.凡事不当无一是好，凡事得当无一是坏。身外之物无一是善，身内之物无一是恶。Unit2:什么是好的译文

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译文：例

Happinessislikemanna;itistobegatheredandenjoyedeveryday.幸福犹如甘露，要天天采集才能日日享用。幸福似甘露，日日可享用。Unit2:什么是好的译文

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译文：例

Thiswasoneofthesecretsofhisgreatpopularity,butitwasapopularitywhichwasasunsettledasthewaves.Itswelled,andbubbled,andfoamedforawhile,onlytorecede,andbelosttoits

formerpossessor.这是他名噪一时的一个秘密，但这种名声如同波涛一样起伏不定：一时间奔腾高涨，汹涌澎拜，转瞬间又一落千丈，终于在原来享有这种声望的人身上荡然无存。这是他名噪一时的一个秘密，但这种名声如同波涛一样起伏不定：在短暂的时间内如日中天，盛极一时，炙手可热，但转瞬间又烟消云散，终于在原来有些声望的人身上消失了。Unit2:什么是好的译文

？×Directions:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:什么是好的译文

？1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)例

Athiefisathief.例

Therewasnosnow,theleavesweregone,thegrasswasdead.例

Humanaffairsareallsubjecttochangesanddisasters.译文译文译文贼性难改。天未下雪，但叶落草枯。人世间，事不由己，变迁灾祸，难以预料。Check

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Itwasadayasfreshasgrassgrowingupandcloudsgoingoverandbutterfliescomingdowncanmakeit.Itwasadaycompoundedfromsilencesofbeeandflowerandoceanandland,whichwerenotsilencesatall,butmotions,stirs,flutters,risings,fallings,eachinitsowntimeandmatchlessrhythm.绿草萋萋，白云冉冉，彩蝶翩翩，这日子是如此清新；蜜蜂无言，春花不语，海波声歇，大地音寂，这日子是如此安静。然而并非安静，因为万物各以其独特的节奏，或动，或摇，或震，或起，或伏。Unit2:什么是好的译文

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？1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)Hewhoidlesawaythetimeisnothingbutalivingdeath.Nogreatermisfortunebefallsacountrythantobegovernedbyatyrant.

Hehadadisconcertinghabitofexpressingcontradictoryideasinrapidsuccession.译文译文译文虚度年华者，虽生犹死。国之大难莫过于暴君当道。他有一种习惯让人受不了，意见反复不定，一会儿一个变化。CheckDirections:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:什么是好的译文

？1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)TheexpectationofcollisioninformedBritishfrontierpolicyinthisperiod.Everydaynow,thesuppressionoftruthandtheorganizingofpublicignoranceshamejournalism.Iwalkedtotheticketcounter.Whentheticket-sellersawme,herotherwiseattractivefaceturnedsour,violentlyso.译文译文译文英国预计到了将会发生冲突，并据此对这一时期的边境政策作了调整。现在，天天都在隐瞒真相，愚弄公众，这种做法是新闻界的耻辱。我走到售票台。女售票员一看见我，她那原本颇为动人的脸刷地一沉，变得怒气冲冲。CheckStepsofTranslationAccurateComprehensionAdequateExpressionLiteralTranslationTranslationbyIdeas直译与意译相结合

“浅尝”、“细嚼”、“通吃”注意Unit2:AccurateComprehension理解语言现象理解逻辑关系理解所涉及事物上下文词类范畴（词性）搭配习惯感情色彩词形变换词汇现象理解语言现象Unit2:AccurateComprehension词汇现象语法现象

译文：例

JohnisnowwithhisparentsinNewYorkCity;itisalreadythreeyearssincehewasabandmaster.约翰现在同父母住在纽约市；他不担任乐队指挥已三年了。约翰现同父母住在纽约市；他担任乐队指挥以来已有三年了Unit2:AccurateComprehension×Directions:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AccurateComprehension1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)理解逻辑关系例

Itisgoodforhimtodothat.译文1译文2这样做对他有好处他这样做是件好事。CheckDirections:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AccurateComprehension1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)理解所涉及事物例

Johncanbereliedon.Heeatsnofishandplaysthegame.译文背景知识约翰为人可靠，他既忠诚又正直。toeatnofish（不吃鱼）是表示“忠诚”的意思。toplaythegame和toplayfair（规规矩矩地比赛）同义，由此转义为“公平对待”、“举止光明正大”、“为人正直”等。Check

译文：例

Itisawisemanthatnevermakesmistakes.无论怎样聪明的人也难免犯错误。聪明人从不犯错误。Unit2:AdequateExpression×Directions:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AdequateExpression1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)例

Nonewsisgoodnews.例

Astitchintimesavesnine.例

Healthisnotvaluedtillsicknesscomes.译文译文译文没消息就是好消息。小洞不补大洞吃苦/一针不缝九针难补，及时处理事半功倍。有病方知健康贵。CheckDirections:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AdequateExpression1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)例

Donotcutdownthetreethatgivesyoushade.例

Successbelongstothepreserving.例

Stufftodayandstarvetomorrow.译文译文译文靠近大树好乘凉。坚持到底必获胜利。今天大吃大喝，明天忍饥挨饿。CheckDirections:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AdequateExpression1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)例她怕碰一鼻子灰

,话到了嘴边

,她又把它吞了下去。例

Doyouseeanygreeninmyeye?译文译文Shewasafraidofbeingsnubbed.Sosheswallowedthewordsthatcametohertips.你以为我是好欺骗的吗？CheckDirections:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AdequateExpression1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)直译与死译例Insomeautomatedplants,electroniccomputerscontroltheentireproductionline.译文在某些自动化工厂，电子计算机控制整个生产线。Check

译文：例

Manganesehasthesameeffectonthestrengthofsteelassilicon.(manganese锰

silicon硅)锰像硅一样会影响钢的强度。锰有同样的影响在强度的钢上像硅。Unit2:AdequateExpression×knowledgeeconomypeace-keepingoperationsdigitalcameraworldviewmillenniumbugInternetwormDINKS(Doubleincome,nokids.)GNP(GrossNationalProduct)EnglishtranslatedliterallyintoChinese:知识经济维和运动数码相机世界观千年虫网虫丁克族（双收入，无子女）国民生产总值Unit2:AdequateExpression一国两制旅游搭台经贸唱戏关系网走后门龙头企业经济适用房德、智、体、美全面发展发展是硬道理ChinesetranslatedliterallyintoEnglish：onecountry,twosystemswithtourismpavingthewayforeconomicandtradingactivitiesnetworkofpersonalconnectionspracticebackdoorismleadingenterpriseresidencehousesforlow-and-mediumwageearnersBeall-roundinmoral,intellectual,physicalandaestheticaldevelopmentDevelopmentistheabsoluteprinciple.Unit2:AdequateExpressionDirections:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AccurateComprehension1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)意译与乱译例

Tokilltwobirdswithonestone.直译意译一石二鸟一举两得，一箭双雕Check

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AndIdonotmistrustthefuture;Idonotfearwhatisahead.Forourproblemsarelarge,butourheartislarger.Ourchallengesaregreat,butourwillisgreater.Andifourflawsareendless.God’sloveistrulyboundless.我并非不信任未来；我并不害怕我们面临的问题。我们的问题很多，但我们的心胸更宽广。我们面临的挑战很严峻，但我们的决心更大。如果我们的弊病层出不穷的话，那么上帝的爱更是真正的广袤无边。（Freetranslation）而我不是不相信未来；我不害怕即将来临的事情。因为我们的问题是大的，但我们的心更大。我们的挑战是大的，但我们的决心更大。如果我们的缺点是没完没了的，上帝的爱是真正的无穷无尽的。(Literaltranslation)Unit2:AdequateExpression×Directions:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AdequateExpression1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)例

Everylifehasitsrosesandthorns.例

Everydoghashisday.例

Lovelivesincottagesaswellasincourts.译文译文译文每个人生都是欢乐和痛苦相随。凡人皆有得意时!爱情不分贫贱与高贵。CheckDirections:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AdequateExpression1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)直译与意译相结合例Ruthwasupsettingtheotherchildren,soIshowedherthedoor.例

Thiswasthelaststraw.Iwasveryyoung:theprospectofworkingunderawomanconstitutedtheultimateindignity.译文译文鲁斯一直在扰乱别的孩子，我就把他撵了出去。我再也无法忍受了。我当时很年轻，我要在一个女人手下工作，这对我简直是最大的侮辱。CheckDirections:Workinpairsanddiscussthequestions.Unit2:AdequateExpression1.Howdidyoufeelonthefirstdayatcollege?(Cues:excited,lonely,farawayfrom,miss,free,onone’sown)2.Whatdifferencesaretherebetweencollegelifeandhighschoollife?(Cues:structure,remindof,counton,schedule)3.Whatisyourdailyscheduleincollege?(Cues:wakeup,breakfast,lecture,break,practice)Over-representation

andUnder-representation例HewasonhiswaytoChinaagain.例

Hesoldhard-to-getitems.译文译文他又风尘仆仆地踏上了去中国的旅程。他行贿受贿，兜售紧销商品。Check

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Whenwewereinport,mycrewwasresponsibleformoving,installingandmodifyingtheitemstobetestedthenextweek.Tocompoundtheproblems,ourgoodshipWyomingwasdeclaredtobeunsafe.入港后，舰上的官兵们忙着搬运、安装、调试仪器和设备，迎接下星期的试验。就在此时麻烦事来了：上级宣布我们这艘好端端的“怀俄明”号为不安全舰只。进港后，船员们负责搬运、安装、调试仪器和设备，迎接下星期的试验。就在此关键时刻，我们的“怀俄明”号被宣布为不安全。Unit2:AdequateExpression×佳译欣赏1.bodylanguage身势语

2.inone’smiddlethirties

三十五六岁（译为数词）

3.standsquarely

端端正正地站着4.measurewithfingers用手指比划5.tenseandanxious又紧张，又焦虑

6.heavymake-up浓妆艳抹（选词）7.immeasurabelcontrast迥然不同（否定词、意译）1.networkedcomputerstations计算机网站

2.dial-inaccess

拨号上网（意译）

3.campus-wideareanetwork校园网络

4.instructionalmediacenter教学媒体中心5.electronicBulletinBoardavailablearoundtheclock

全天候电子公示牌（选词）1)BusinessHours营业时间

2）OfficeHours办公时间

3）ThisSideUp此面向上

4）BusesOnly只准公共汽车通行

5）NoAdmittance闲人免进

6）NoH