读后续写微技能指导

读后续写微技能指导4

—融情于景Emotion+Environment细节描写Myeyeswerewideopen.Myfaceturnedpale.Mylegsweretrembling.Myheartwasbeatingwildly.Mytearswerewellingup.Myheart

Myface

Myeyes

Mylegs

eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/body...Mytears

细节描写eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/body...Shewashappy.1.____________shone/glittered/sparkledwithjoy.2

____________litupwithpleasure.3.___________

waspoundingwithexcitement.

Her

eyesHerfaceHerheartShewasexcited.1.Hewassoexcitedthathecouldhardly_______.2

Theman______forjoywhenhewonthefirstprize.3.___________

glitteredwithexcitement.

speak

jumpedHer

eyes生动动词Afeelingoffearslowly__________onme.Afloodofterror__________________me.Asenseoffright_____________________me.

...蔓延表示某种情感侵袭/涌入Iwasscared.overtook/overwhelmedwashedover/floodedovercreptupAwaveofhorror________insideme.welledupShewasangry.

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其他表达）

Angerfloodedhisveins.Hertempersparked.Ragenearlyconsumedher.Thewindwas__________dreadfullyandtherainwas_________fromtheheaven,__________againstthebranchesoflinedtress.Theworldwas______________withaseaofdarkness.emotionhowlingpouringwhippingburdened/loadedspecificTranslation1.他正要反应，突然感觉自己舌头打结，手心出汗。2.她悲伤而疲惫，瘫倒在扶手椅上。3.漆黑的雨夜，风雨交加，电闪雷鸣，我全然被这种力量镇住了。。Hewasabouttorespondwhenhefelthistonguetiedandpalmssweating.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintherpower.Sadandexhausted,hecollapsedintohisarmchair.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtress.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.

Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,

Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtress.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afloodoffearwashingoverme,Iimmediatelyturned1.2.

aroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.

“景”“情”过渡更融洽？Ally'sEmotions“Nothingwillbethesameagain,”Allywhispered....herowntearswerestillfrozeninsideherheart.“Imissyou,Dad,”shesaidsoftly.Allysmiled,remembering...“IfonlyIcouldgetthatgoodfeelingback,”shethought,sighing.sad/missherfather...续写：Asweetsong

Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.___________________________________

trees/flowers/breeze/sun/stream...comfortable/sad...EnvironmentEmotion

Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Wanderinginthewoods,Allyslowedherpacetofindthelittleguyinthemixedair.Thesunlookedatherwithaglowingsmileandtheflowersnoddedmerrilytowardsher.Thebreezepattedherontheface,warmandcomfortable.However,itseemedthatAllycouldn'tcatchsightofthewoodwa