高考英语复习读后续写练习课件（家庭亲情篇：全家人一起筹划让母亲过一个不一样的母亲节）

高考英语读后续写语篇练习、家庭亲情篇：全家人一起筹划，让母亲过一个不一样的母亲节1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文HowDoWeCelebrateMother’sDayItisspeciallyinabigfamilylikeoursthatsuchanideatakeshold—wedecidedtohaveaspecialcelebrationofMother’sDay.Wethoughtitafineidea.ItmadeusallrealizehowmuchMotherhaddoneforusforyearsandalltheeffortsandsacrificethatshehadmadeforoursake.Wedecidedthatwe’dmakeitagreatday,aholidayforallthefamily,anddoeverythingwecouldtomakeMotherhappy.ItwasourplantomakeitadayjustlikeChristmas,sowedecidedtodecoratethehousewithflowersandribbons.WegotMothertoarrangethedecoration,becauseshealwaysdoesitatChristmas.Well,afterbreakfastwehaditarrangedasasurpriseforMotherthatwewouldhireacarandtakeherforabeautifuldriveawayintothecountry,whichwouldbeagreatenjoymentforher.Wegoteverythingarrangedforthetrip,andwegotMothertocutupsomesandwichesandmakeupasortoflunchincasewegothungry.Motherpackeditallupinabasketforusreadytogointothecar.4续写原文Well,whenthecarcametothedoor,itturnedoutthattherehardlyseemedasmuchroominitaswehadsupposed,becausewehadn’tconsideredFather’sfishingbasketandtherods,anditwasapparentthatwecouldn’tallgetin.Fatherthathecouldjustwaitathome.Butofcourseweallfeltthatitwouldneverdoit,especiallyasweknewhewouldmaketrouble.Thetwogirls,AnneandMary,wouldgladlyhavestayedandhelpedMothergetdinner,onlyitseemedsuchapityto,onalovelydaylikethis,havetheirnewhatshometomissthebeautifulday.WillandIwouldhavedroppedout,butunfortunatelywewouldn’thavebeenanyuseingettingthedinner.SointheenditwasdecidedthatMotherwouldstayhomeandjusthavealovelydayroundthehouse,andgetthedinner.WealldroveawaywiththreecheersforMother,andMotherstoodandwatchedusfromthewindowforaslongasshecouldseeus.FathercaughtsuchbigfishthathefeltsurethatMothercouldn’thavelandedthemanyway,ifshehadbeenfishingforthem,andWillandIfishedtoo,thoughwedidn’tgetsomanyasFather.Weallhadasplendidtime.5段首句Para1：Itwasquitelatewhenwegotback,andMotherhaddinnerjustnicelyreadyforus.Para2：Mothersaiditwasthemostwonderfuldayinherlife,withtearsshininginhereyes.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以事件的发展过程展开，讲述了在母亲节那天，一家人约好回家给母亲过一个不一样的母亲节，最后决定大家租一辆车一起外出，让母亲去享受一下乡下的生活，结果租的车有点小，经过大家的商议，母亲留下独自在家一天，并给大家准备午饭，我们一起在外面开心的玩了一天。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Itwasquitelatewhenwegotback,andMotherhaddinnerjustnicelyreadyforus.由第一段首句内容“我们回来的时候已经很晚了，妈妈刚刚为我们准备好了晚餐。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到家中时母亲是如何做的，大家在这个如同圣诞节一样的母亲节是如何做的。10续写思路分析Para2：Mothersaiditwasthemostwonderfuldayinherlife,withtearsshininginhereyes.由第二段首句内容“母亲说，这是她一生中最美妙的一天，眼睛里闪烁着泪水。”可知，第二段可以分析母亲为什么认为这是她一生最美妙的一天，从而说明母亲节的意义。11续写思路分析续写线索回家很晚——大家一起就餐——餐后收拾家务——结束后与母亲吻别——母亲很感动——分析感动原因——解释母亲节的意义12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.就坐：sitdown/beseated/seatoneself②.收拾：clearsth.up/tidysth.up/putsth.away③.关心：carefor/showregardsto/beinlovewith情绪类①.感谢：begrateful/showinghisappreciation/showhisgratitude②.快乐的：joyful/delightful/pleased/happy13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Whenitwasover,allofushelpclearthethingsupandwashthedishes.（运用了when引导时间状语从句）[高分句型2].Andasfarasmothersareconcerned,whatmattersmosttomothersonMother'sDayisn'ttheamountofmoneyspent.（运用了what引导的主语从句和过去分词作定语）[高分句型3].Familytimeisimportantformostmoms,andshowingthatyoureallycareforherisMother'sDaygifts.（运用了动名词短语作主语和that引导的宾语从句）

14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Itwasquitelatewhenwegotback,andMotherhaddinnerjustnicelyreadyforus.Aftereverythingwasready,andwesatdowntothegrandestkindofdinner-roastturkeyandallsortsofthingslikeonChristmasDay.Thedinnerlastedalongwhile,andwasgreatfun.Weallfeltjoyfulwithourfamilytogether.Whenitwasover,allofushelpclearthethingsupandwashthedishes.Itwasquitelatewhenitwasallover,andweallkissedMotherbeforegoingtobed.16范文呈现Mothersaiditwasthemostwonderfuldayinherlife,withtearsshininginhereyes.Althoughourmotherdidn’tgotogetherwithusandwasstillbusyasusual,ourloveforherwasfeltinsideherheart.Shewassogratefulofeverythingwedidforher.Andasfarasmothersareconcerned,whatmattersmosttomothersonMother'sDayisn'ttheamountofmoneyspent.Familytimeisimportantformostmoms,andshowingyoureallycareforherisMother'sDaygifts.Soweallfeltawfullyrepaidforallwehaddone.17范文译文我们回来的时候已经很晚了，妈妈为我们准备了晚饭。一切准备好后，我们坐下来吃了一顿最丰盛的晚餐，烤火鸡和各种各样的东西，就像圣诞节一样。晚宴持续了很长一段时间，非常有趣。和家人在一起，我们都感到很快乐。比赛结束后，我们所有人都帮忙收拾东西和洗碗。一切结束时已经很晚了，我们都在睡觉前亲吻了母亲。18范文译文母亲说这