2020山东高考英语作文及点评

2020山东高考英语作文及点评

今年山东首次采取新高考模式，写作部分的命题方式也有所创新。下面小编为大家

总结整理了2020山东高考英语作文及点评，供大家参考。

2020山东高考英语作文题目

第一节（满分15分）

假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报

道，内容包括：

1.参加人员：

2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下：

3.活动反响。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ACross-CountryRunningRace

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文

。

TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,some

peopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomake

endsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.

Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftime

visitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.When

shehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.

Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.There

wasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,and

theirlittleboy.Thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—hadinterestedherverymuch.

“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heis

suchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon’tseewhat

hecando.”

Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwe

couldhelphimtoearnmoney.”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”

“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”

Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“I

haveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish（完成）.”

Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobe

agoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncle

Johnsentus？Well,wecanmakepopcorn（爆米花）,andputitintopaperbags,and

Bernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.

Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.

作文点评

写作部分启用新题型，突出综合性和创新性。新高考英语写作部分取消了短文改错

题，保留了书面表达题，增加了读后续写题。书面表达题的分值由25分减至15分，

读后续写题满分25分。读后续写题给考生提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，要求考

生根据该材料内容和所