读后续写：人和自然类 海洋保护 讲义-高三英语二轮复习写作专项

高考续写：保护海洋一、

问题导读1.

文章有哪些可续写点，以便设置衔接？2.文章的矛盾是什么？3.文章的发展线和情感发展线是什么？4.续写思路是什么？二、

续写题目

those

annoying

plastic

bags.

We

tried

to

clean

up

but

it

was

just

impossible.”Understanding

the

pair's

fix

such

abigproblemJust

two

ofuscomplained

Maria

and

Peter

looking

a

lashed

through

their

minds

their

eyes

shining

with

excitementYes,that'sthepoint!Weshouldmakemore

peopleawareoftheproblemandencouragethemtotakeaction!"thepairsaidinchorus注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.________________________________________________________________________________________________________Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、问题解答1.

文章有哪些可续写点，以便设置衔接？见文章紫色批注。2.文章的矛盾是什么？如何清理海海滩垃圾。3.文章的发展线和情感发展线是什么？情节发展线：Maria和Peter喜欢放学到海里游泳→发现沙滩和海面上大量的塑料垃圾影响游泳→带上大袋子去捡垃圾→依然有很多塑料垃圾→父母安慰两个孩子→想到好的注意。情感发展线：到海里游泳的喜悦(pleasure)→发现到处是塑料垃圾的失落(upset)→经过努力后依然有很多垃圾是失望和沮丧(disappointment/defeated/failure/lowspirits)→在父母的鼓励下想到好注意的激动(excitement)4.续写思路是什么？两段首句定一框：根据第一段所给句中的“startedplanning”可知，Maria和Peter做计划想要引起公众的关注→想到了传播力很强的网络媒体，如WeChat→两人到海边拍摄视频并且写文章。根据第二段所给句中的“postedthevideoandarticleonWeChat”可逆推出，第一段应叙述Maria和Peter为了呼吁大家团结起来捡沙滩上的垃圾，在WeChat上发布相关的视频和文章。二框二首正能量：根据第二段所给句可知，Maria和Peter成功上传了视频和文章→等待着公众的反应→越来越多的人加入到捡垃圾的队伍中→沙滩恢复了以前的模样四、参考范文Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.

①MariaandPeterdecidedtotakeadvantage

oftheInternet.②语言描写

“Maybewecanwriteanarticletoarousepeople’sawareness.”Mariaproposed.

③“Goodidea!Wecanalso

makeavideo!”Peteradded.

④无灵表达Thenextfewhourswitnessedtheirheateddiscussionandgrowingconfidenceinacleanand

beautifulcoast.

⑤Thenextday,theywenttothebeachand

filmed拍摄

ashortvideo

showingplasticbagslyingonthebeachand

floatinginthesea.

⑥Peter,whowasgoodatwriting,

wroteanarticle

talkingaboutthepresentsituationofthebeachand

askingpeopletotakepartintheclean-up.Excitedandnervous,theyposted

thevideoandarticle

onWe

Chat.

①Totheiramazement,theirpostwentviralonline

immediately.

②Countlesscommentsfloodedinsayinghowheartbrokentheywerewhenlookingatthepollutedbeachand

ocean.

③WhatamazedMariaandPetermorewasthatnumerouspeopleintheircommunity,encouragedbytheirefforts,offeredtojoinintheirclean-up.

④Moreandmorepeoplecametothebeachtocollectplasticbagsandtheyalsoappealedto

otherstoavoidthrowingorusingplasticb