高考英语复习-写作必备-写作基础技能提升-十过渡与衔接写作导练省公开课一等奖百校联赛赛课微课获奖PP

十、过渡与衔接写作导练第1页写作要领名师指导即时演练第2页写作要领书面表示评分标准把衔接和连贯作为主要条件来要求。之所以如此,是因为句与句之间、段与段之间恰当过渡和衔接是组成语篇最基本条件。语句间连接成份是衡量衔接与连贯很主要标准之一。组成语篇连接成份过渡词语,被称为“篇章纽带”,其语篇衔接作用是不言而喻。学生要学会正确、恰当地使用这些表示逻辑关系关联词语,使文章前后连贯、结构紧凑、过渡自然。表示过渡与衔接惯用表示有:1.表示起始关系过渡性词语firstofall,aboveall,accordingto,uptonow,sofar,asfaras,tobeginwith,inmyopinion等。迄今为止,诸事顺利。Everythingisinorderuptonow.Everythingisinordersofar.第3页2.表示时间次序过渡性词语first,later,intheend,finally,atlast,afterthat,sincethen,immediately,suddenly,soon等。起初我以为有点担心。Atfirst,Ifeltalittlenervous.努力学习,最终你会成功。Workhard,andyouwillsucceedintheend.Workhard,andyouwillsucceedatlast.Workhard,andyouwillsucceedfinally.第4页3.表示空间次序过渡性词语ontheright/left,ononesideof,ontheothersideof,atthetop/foot/endof,inthemiddle/centreof,infrontof,atthebackof等。房子中央有一张书桌。Thereisadeskinthemiddleoftheroom.Thereisadeskinthecentreoftheroom.4.表示并列关系过渡性词语and,or,aswellas,neither...nor...,notonly...butalso...,either...or...,not...but...等。他不但给我提议,还给我钱。Hegavememoneyaswellasadvice.Hegavemeadvice,andmoneyaswell.Hegavemenotonlyadvicebutalsomoney.第5页5.表示转折关系过渡性词语but,yet,however,while,onthecontrary等。他原认为自己了解了那道题,不过他错了。Hethoughtheunderstoodtheproblem,buthewasmistaken.Hethoughtheunderstoodtheproblem,however,hewasmistaken.6.表示因果关系过渡性词语because,so,as,since,for,thanksto,thus,therefore,asaresultof,onereasonisthat...,anotherreasonisthat...等。因为天在下雨,你最好乘出租车。Asit’sraining,you’dbettertakeataxi.Becauseit’sraining,you’dbettertakeataxi.It’srainingsoyou’dbettertakeataxi.第6页7.表示条件关系过渡性词语if,unless,as/solongas,onconditionthat等。假如你不努力工作,你就会被辞退。Youwillgetfiredunlessyouworkhard.Ifyoudon’tworkhard,youwillgetfired.8.表示递进关系过渡性词语what’smore,furthermore,moreover,besides,what’sworse,tomakemattersworse,worsestill等。我不喜欢那件连衣裙,而且它太贵了。Idon’tlikethedress;besides,it’stooexpensive.Idon’tlikethedress;moreover,it’stooexpensive.Idon’tlikethedress;what’smore,it’stooexpensive.第7页9.表示让步关系过渡性词语as,though,evenif/though,whoever,whatever,whenever,wherever,nomatterwho(what,when,where)等。不论谁违法都要受到处罚。Nomatterwhobreaksthelaw,hewillbepunished.Whoeverbreaksthelawwillbepunished.10.表示列举事实过渡性词语forexample/instance,suchas,take...forexample,thatistosay,asfollows等。许多伟人从贫困中崛起,比如林肯和爱迪生。Manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty—LincolnandEdison,forexample.Manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty,suchasLincolnandEdison.Manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty,forinstance,LincolnandEdison.第8页11.表示总结过渡性词语inshort,inbrief,inaword,onthewhole,ingeneral,generallyspeaking等。普通而言,语言是用来交际。Ingeneral,languageisforcommunication.Generallyspeaking,languageisforcommunication.第9页名师指导句、段间要做到衔接合理、条理清楚、通顺连贯。而要真正掌握这一写作技能,在平时训练中就要有意识地尝试使用过渡衔接词,最终到达写出衔接自然、语句流畅佳作目标。如江苏卷范文中Inmy

opinion,internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.Firstly,peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon’twantto.Secondly,votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthecompetitors,butratheronhowmanysocial-networkingresourcestheyhave.Thirdly,thevotersoreventhecompetitorsinmanycasesarepossiblytakenadvantageofbytheorganizersforcommercialpurposes.

Inshort,internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifnotimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.Therefore,rulesshouldbeworkedoutandstrictlyobserved.Everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed,butitismoreimportanttobesincereandearnest.第10页即时演练从方框内选择适当词填空aboveall,besides,meanwhile,foronething,foranotherthing,personally,inaword,recently1.

ithasbeenagreatpublicconcernthatthestudentslackself-protectionawareness.

Thereisalackofsocialexperienceamongstudentsandthereforelearninghowtoprotectourselvesisofgreatsignificancetousall.2.

securitycomesfirst.Withoutsecurity,wecanachievenothingandcannotliveuptoparents’expectations.3.

protectingourselvescontributestothehealthydevelopmentofthestudents,whichisassociatedwiththehappinessofeveryfamily.4.

italsohelpstobuildamoreharmonioussociety.

答案:1.Recently2.Foronething3.Foranotherthing4.Meanwhile5.Personally第11页5.

inordertoprotectusstudents,6.

weshouldstrengthenoursecurityawareness.7.

whenaccidentsoccur,weshouldcalmdownandturntoteacher