成长抉择 2023年名校真题读后续写话题分类写作指导与训练

读后续写话题写作成长抉择“人与动物”的读后续写篇目1.2021.6浙江高考改2.2022济南十一校2月联考3.2022年3月燕博园定制4.2022.4青岛一模5.2022.3潍坊尖子生6.2022届高三8月金太阳新高考区联考试卷(8.30)7.2021.3.济南一模8.2022年浙江省普通高中强基联盟改92022.1T8第一次模拟10.2022.2汕头一模

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情节重点成长前

情境描写+消极情绪的累积→高潮成长中

成长的动机+过程中变化的心情。成长后

成长后的收获+积极情绪(喜悦、满

足和骄傲等)1.第一要把握语篇的主要角色，确定成长的主题。2.要确定语篇的主旨及升华指向，遵循正能量原则。3.要精准把握情绪的变化，可以通过不同的手法描绘心情。（2023·安徽黄山·一模）Baskinwasa20-year-oldsophomoreattheUniversityofSouthCarolinawhoseparentsransmallrestaurant.Ashewastheonlycollegestudentinhisfamily,hisfamilytriedtheirbesttosupporthim.Baskinalwaysworkedasawaiterintherestauranttolightenhisparents'burdens.Hewassohardworkingthatmanycustomerspraisedhishospitableservice.Hisparentsalsoappreciatedandtrustedhimalot.Itwasabusynightattherestaurant.Afterafewguestswalkedinandsatdown,theyorderedabottleoftheChateauPichonLonguevilleComtesse2001-avaluablewineworthalmost€6,000.Havingtoserveanothertable,Baskinthenaskedaworkmatetofetchthebottle.However,sincetheemployeewasnew,sheaccidentallytookthewrongbottleofwine.Insteadofthewinethatwasorderedbythecustomers,sheservedtheChateauPichonLonguevillePomerol2001,whichcostabout€5,000.Asthebottlesandnamesweresimilar,noonenoticedthemistake.Baskindidn'trealizethemistakeuntilthecustomerswantedtoorderasecondbottleafterfinishingthefirstone.Hecheckedtheorderquicklyandunderstoodwhatwaswrong.Hecleverlysuggestedtheyorderadifferentone,withoutlettingthemknowwhathadhappened,whichcouldgivehimtimetothinkabouthowtosolvetheproblem.Everythingseemednormal,butBaskinwaslostinthought."WhatshouldIdotosolvethisproblem?"heaskedhimself.Ifhedidn'ttellthecustomersthemistake,hecouldkeeptheextra€1000secretly.Ashewasalsothecashieroftherestaurant,noonewouldknowwhathappened.€1000wasthetuitionfeeforthewholeschoolyearandhisparentsneedn'tworkhardtoearnmoneyforhim.Orhecouldusethemoneytobuyhisfavoritelaptopwhichhisparentscouldn'tafford.Thisextramoneywasreallyahugetemptationtohim.Butinthisway,hewouldlosehishonestyanddignity.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover._____________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenthecustomerscametopaythebill,withfather'sadviceinmind.Baskindecidedtodotherightthing._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·安徽黄山·一模）Baskin是一个为学费在饭店打工的大二学生。一次工作当中的疏忽把6000块的酒误上成了5000块的红酒。由于无人察觉这个失误，他有机会将一千元的红酒差价据为己有，但又无法忍受内心道德的谴责，这时父亲走过来了。

Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover.____________________________________________________Whenthecustomerscametopaythebill,withfather'sadviceinmind.Baskindecidedtodotherightthing._________________________________________________困惑——求助——真相——解释——满意Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenthecustomerscametopaythebill,withfather'sadviceinmind.Baskindecidedtodotherightthing._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________正当他苦苦思索如何选择的时候，他的父亲走了过来。顾客们来结账时，巴斯金心里想着爸爸的建议，决定做正确的事。父亲指导了Baskin如何处理这件事情。Baskin在父亲的指导下如何解决这一问题。Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover.Seeinghismixedexpression,hisfatheraskedhimwhatwashappening.Baskincouldn'thelptellinghimthetruth.Hisfatherlistenedattentivelyandgavehisadvice.HetoldBaskinheshouldtellthetruthandadmithismistake.Baskinthoughtthecustomersprobablywouldn'tnoticethemistakeastheywerenotpayingtoomuchattention.Hisfathersaidthatheshouldalwaysbehonestandthatwayhewouldalwaysbetrusted.Baskinnoddedseriously.Whenthecustomerscametopaythebill,withfather'sadviceinmind.Baskindecidedtodotherightthing.Heexplainedthesituationtothecustomersandapologizedsincerelyfortheerror.Thecustomersweresurprisedatthisandsaidtheyhadn'tnoticedthemistakeatall.Instead,theysaidthatthewinetheywereservedstilltastedverygoodandfinishedbygivinghimalargetip.ToBaskin'srelief,hisfatheralsoforgavehimforhismistake,sayingthatnoharmhadbeendoneandthecustomersweresatisfiedwiththeserviceThinkingback,Baskinwasgratefultohisfatherforsuchgoodadviceandalsolearnedanimportantlifelesson.（2023春·广东·高三惠州一中校联考阶段练习）IwassittingnexttoMissyinmyninth-gradeworldhistoryclasswhenMrs.Bartlettannouncedanewproject.Ingroups,weweretocreateanewspaperaroundtheculturewewerestudying.Onapieceofpaper,wewrotethenamesofthreefriendswewantedinourgroup.Aftercollectingalltherequests,Mrs.B．informedusthatshewouldtakeintoconsiderationthenameswechoseandwouldletusknowtheresultsthenextday.IhadnodoubtIwouldgetthegroupofmychoice.Onlyafewpeoplebehavednormallyintheclass,andMissywasoneofthem.Iknewwehadchoseneachother.Thenextday,Ianxiouslywaitedfortheclass.Afterthebellrang,MissyandIstoppedtalkingasMrs.Bcalledforourattention.Shestartedtocalloutnames.Whenshereachedgroupthree,Missy’snamewascalled.So,I’mingroupthree,Ithought.Thesecond,thirdandfourthmembersofthegroupwerecalled.Mynamewasnotincluded.Therehadtobesomemistake!ThenIheardit.Thelastgroup:“Mauro,Juliette,Rachel,Karina.”Icouldfeelthetearswellinmyeyes.HowcouldIfacebeinginthatgroup—theboywhorarelyspokeEnglish,theonegirlwhowasalwayscoveredbyskirtsthatwentdowntoherankles,andtheothergirlwhoworeweirdclothes.Oh,howbadlyIwantedtobewithmyfriends.IfoughtbacktearsasIwalkeduptoMrs.B．ShelookedatmeandknewwhatIwastherefor.IwasdeterminedtoconvinceherIshouldbeinthe“good”group.“Why...?”Istarted.Shegentlyplacedahandonmyshoulder.“Iknowwhatyouwant,Karina,”shesaid,“butyourgroupneedsyou.Ineedyoutohelpthemgetapassinggradeonthisassignment.Onlyyoucanhelpthem.”Iwasstunned.Iwasconfused.Iwasamazed.ShehadseensomethinginmeIhadn’tseen.“Willyouhelpthem?”sheasked.Istoodstraighter.“Yes,”Ireplied.Icouldn’tbelieveitcameoutofmymouth,butitdid.Ihadcommitted.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Ibravelywalkedtowheretheothersinmygroupsat._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Intheend,Mrs.BgaveusanAonthatassignment._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023春·广东·高三惠州一中校联考阶段练习）在完成小组任务时，老师有意地把我分到一个较差的小组去带领他们完成任务，我一开始并不情愿，但为了不辜负老师的信任，最终带领小组很好地完成了任务。期间，我也对这些自己原来持有偏见的同学有了更深的认识，并由衷地感谢老师的安排。

Ibravelywalkedtowheretheothersinmygroupsat.Intheend,Mrs.BgaveusanAonthatassignment.

了解组员——消除疑惑——共同合作——完成任务——喜悦——感悟

Ibravelywalkedtowheretheothersinmygroupsat.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Intheend,Mrs.BgaveusanAonthatassignment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我勇敢地走向我的组员的位置最后，Mrs.B给我们的作业评了A。和其他成员的共同合作，最终完成了任务。喜悦及感悟

Ibravelywalkedtowheretheothersinmygroupsat.Encouragedbytheirbigsmiles,Isatdownandledtheproject.Accordingtopersonalinterestsandwhattheyweregoodat,Iassignedthemwithdifferentcolumnsofthenewspaper.Halfwaythroughit,Ifeltmyselfenjoyingthecompanyofthesethreepeople.Gradually,IlearnedthatMaurohadfewfriendsbecausehewasstrugglingwiththeEnglishlanguage;Julietteworelongskirtsordresseseverydaybecauseofherreligion;Rachelhadaburningdesiretobeafashiondesignersoshehadawholebarrelofuniqueideas.Finally,withourcooperation,ourassignmentwassuccessfullyfinished.Intheend,Mrs.BgaveusanAonthatassignment.

Sheannouncedtothewholeclassthatthenewspaperdesignedbyourgroupwaselaboratelylaidoutandcarefullyedited,withrichculturalknowledge.Ourjoyandhappinesswerebeyonddescription.Afterthatsemesterended,Ialwaysreceivedafriendlyhellofrommygroup.Manyyearslater,Ididn’trecallanythingaboutthenewspaper,butIdidfeelfortunatetobegiventheopportunitytoseeinmyselfapotentialthatinspiredmyactions.ItisMrsB’sinsight,visionandthoughtfulnessthatbringoutthepotentialinfourofherstudents.SheistheonewhotrulydeservesthegradeA.（2023春·安徽·高三校联考开学考试）Iwasin7thgradewhenmymomwasdiagnosedwithbreastcancer.ItwasverysuddenandunexpectedforourfamilyandobviouslyIwasbeaten.Itriedmybesttobalancemyfirstyearofmiddleschoolandmyhomelife,evenifIknewthiswasimpossible.IhatedcominghomefromschooleverydayforfearofwhatIwouldseewhenIgothome.Ihatedseeingmymomsickallthetime;shewasnotherselfandallIwantedwasforhertostoptreatmentandgetbetter.Luckily,Ihadlotsofsupportfrommyfamily,friends,andteachersduringthishardtimetohelpgetmethroughit.Atthebeginningoftheyear,Iwasdeterminedtostayontrackwithmyhomeworkandstudyingandgetthroughmyfirstyearatmiddleschoolsuccessfully.Slowly,Istartedtobecomemoredistractedwhileathomewithtakingcareofmymom,cleaningthehouseandhelpingmygrandmacookourmeals.WhileIwasatschool,Icouldescapeandputmymom’ssicknessinthebackofmymindwhileIhungoutwithmyfriendsandenjoyedplaying.Inoticedthatmyquizandtestgradeswereincreasinglygettingworse,butIneverbroughtthistotheattentionofmymombecauseIdidnotwanttoworryher.Eventually,allofmygradeswerelowerthanC’s.IknewthatIwasnotdoingwellatschool,andIneededtogetmygradesbackup.Iknewthatalotofmyteacherswerecuttingmesomeunimportantworkbecausetheyknewwhatwashappeningathome.Ms.Zazoski,myEnglishteacherwasthemostsupportiveteacherthatIhaveeverhadandIamsogladthatIwasinherclassthatyear.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Onedaymyteacherhadmestayafterschooltohaveatalkwithher._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThatwasthemotivationthatIneededtoimprovemygrades._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023春·安徽·高三校联考开学考试）我在上七年级的时候，妈妈得了乳腺癌，受到了打击，但是在家人，朋友和老师的帮助下顺利度过难关。然而，就在我决定按时完成作业和学习时，照顾妈妈和帮助奶奶做饭等让我分心，我成绩开始下降，我自知在学校表现不好，幸亏有老师们的帮助，尤其是遇到了最支持自己的英语老师。

Onedaymyteacherhadmestayafterschooltohaveatalkwithher.ThatwasthemotivationthatIneededtoimprovemygrades.走向老师——老师开导——感谢——如释重负——重新振作——找回作业——感悟Onedaymyteacherhadmestayafterschooltohaveatalkwithher.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThatwasthemotivationthatIneededtoimprovemygrades.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一天放学后，老师让我留下来和她谈谈。这就是我提高成绩所需要的动力。英语老师找作者谈话，开导作者，作者很感激。作者找到了提高成绩的动力，如释重负，并且找回所有丢失的作业。

Onedaymyteacherhadmestayafterschooltohaveatalkwithher.AsIsteppeduptoherhugewoodendesk,Icouldfeelmyselfgettingmoreandmorenervous,surelyknowingthatshewouldhaveatalkwithmeaboutgettingmygradesup.Lookingup,smiling,Ms.Zazoskistartedspeakingempathetically.“Thisisn’ttheendoftheworld.Iknowwhatyouaregoingthroughathome,andifyouneedanysupport,Iamhereforyou,always.”shesaid,inthemostkindtone.“Thankyousomuch.”Isaidasshehuggedme,warmthandlovelikemymothermeltinginmywholebody.ThatwasthemotivationthatIneededtoimprovemygrades.

Walkingoutofheroffice,Iwasextremelyrelieved,asthougha1000poundweightwasliftedoffmyshoulders.Itwarmedmyhearttoknowthatevenwithobstaclesinmyway,thereisalwayssupportnearbytohelpyouthrough.Italkedtoallofmyteachersandgotallthemissingwork.Byfar,my7thgradeEnglishteacherwasthesweetestandmostunderstandingwomanthatIhadevermet;andnowIamnolongerafraidtoaskforhelporsupport.（2023秋·广东·高三校联考期末）Mortywascheckingouthislibrarybookswhenitcaughthiseye-aposterforAdventureRocksKidsCamp.“Checkthisout!”MortycalledtoBenandFredashegrabbedthreebrochuresanddashedtocatchupwithhisbestbuddies.Theyallstopped,booksinhands,tostareatthepicturesofkidsflyingabovecanyonssuspendedfromziplines.Theyinstantlybelievedthebrochure’sheadline:Summerwon’tbecompleteuntilyouTakeittotheLimitatAdventureRocksKidsCamp.Benbrokethesilence,“Wehavelessthantwoweeksuntilregistrationopens,anditsaysthecampfillsupfast.”ThenanideapoppedintoMorty’shead.“Whydon’tweselllemonadeandsnacksbythesideoftheroad?Wecanpoolourallowancesavingsforthecamp.”“That’sagreatIdea,”Bensaid.ThesunhadbarelycomeuponSaturdaymorningwhenthekidssetuptheirbusiness.Theychoseaspot,askedpermissionfromthehomeowner,andthenaskedtousehergardenhoseforwatertomakelemonade.TheirbusinesswentsmoothlyuntilBenannouncedthattheyhadacomparativelysmallstockoflemonsshortlyafternoon.Mortydecidedtomaketheirstockgofurther.“Fred,whenthejuggetsdowntoone-fourthfull,justfillittothetopwiththewaterhose.”Mortywasthinkingoutloud,“I’llchangethesignandcharge30morecentsforeachcupoflemonade.”Theirbusinesswentonandthethreeweresecretlyproudofthelittletrickstheyhaddone.JustasMortyfinishedrefillingthejugwithwaterforthethirdtime,avehicleroundedthecomer.Mortysawtheminivanwithhisfatheratthewheelandhisfamilyinside.Theypulleduptothesidewalk,andhisbrothersandsistersjumpedout,eachclutchingacoinortwo.Theywereeagertosupporttheirbrother’sbustlingbusiness.Morty’sfamilyboughtthelastofthebrowniesanddrankthelastdropofwatered-downlemonade.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡得相应位置做答。Morty’sfatherfrownedatthesipofthelemonade._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theydecidedtofixtheirwrongdoingsthenextweek.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023秋·广东·高三校联考期末）Morty，Ben和Fred三个孩子因为想去参加夏令营，在路边摆摊卖柠檬水赚报名费。随着柠檬越来越少，他们打