高考英语作文模拟专题训练50题含参考答案

高考英语写作模拟专题训练50题含参考答案

学校:姓名：班级:考号：

一、读后续写

1.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

CarloswokeuplatethatSaturday.Itwashisbirthday.Asheopenedhiseyes,hecould

hearthesoundsfromthestreetcomingthroughhisopenwindow.Hecouldhearpeople

talkingloudly.Heheardkidsplayingandyelling（大喊）.Therewasmusiccomingfrom

someonestandingonthecorner.Heheardthecars,busesandmotorbikesrunningpasthis

apartment.Thesewereallthenormalsoundsheheardeveryday,butsomethingwaswrong.

Whenhelistenedforthesoundsthatnormallycamefromhisapartment,everythingwas

silent.Hedidnothearhismothercookinginthekitchen.Shealwaysmadeabigbreakfaston

Saturdays.HedidnothearhissisterMariajumpingupanddownorfightingwiththeir

brotherJose.Whatwaswrong?Thehousewascompletelysilent.Theonlynoisewascoming

fromoutsidehiswindow.

Carloslookedattheclockacrosstheroom.Itsaidteno'clock.Somethingwasvery

wrong!Carlosquicklygotupandgotdressed.Helookedoutofthewindowandsaw

everyonewalkingandtalking.Thatwasallnormal.Whatwasnotnormalwashowquietit

wasinsideofhisapartment.Carloswentslowlytothedoorandlistened,butdidnothear

anything.Heopenedthedoortohisroomalittleandlookedaround.Helookeddownthe

hallway（门厅）towardthelivingroom.Hedidnotseeanything.Hewasnervousandscared,

wondering,44Whatisgoingon?”

Slowlyhewalkedoutofhisroomandintothehallway.Hisstomachwasmakingnoise

sincehewassohungry.Hestartedtowardthekitchen.Hisfeetmovedslowlyashewalked,

notknowingwhattoexpect.uMom?Jose?Maria?Whereareyou?”hecalledout,butnoone

answered."Whereiseveryone?^^hethoughttohimself.Justthen,Carlosthoughthehearda

noisecomingfromthekitchen.Itsoundedlikesomeonewasthere.Hemovedslowlytoward

thekitchendoorway,andthoughttohimself,"What'sgoingon?Whyiseverythingsoquiet?

Whoisinthekitchen?^^

注意：

（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1：

Hegottothekitchendoorandlookedinside.

Paragraph2：

Sittinginthemiddleofthekitchentablewasasmallbox.

【答案】Paragraph1：

Hegottothekitchendoorandlookedinside.Tohissurprise,hesawhisfamilywere

there.Hewasmoresurprisedwhenheheard,"Happybirthdaytoyou.Happybirthdayto

you!”Hisparents,hisbrother,hissister,andhisgrandparentswereinthekitchensinging

“HappyBirthday^^tohim.Carlosjuststoodinthedoorwayofthekitchennotknowingwhat

tosayordo.Hewastotallysurprised.

Paragraph2：

Sittinginthemiddleofthekitchentablewasasmallbox.Carloswalkedovertothetable

andslowlyopenedit.Insidehefoundsomekeys.Hismothertoldhimtolookoutofthe

window.Carlosdidandsawayellowmotorbikebelowthestairs.Carloswasunabletospeak.

Herandownthestairsasfastashecould.Themotorbikewasnotnew,butitwashis!Carlos

rodehisbikeupanddownthestreet.Thesoundofthemotoronhisbikewassweetmusicto

hisears.Hehadalldaytohearit.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Carlos星期六那天起床很晚，那天是他的生日，但是周

围一切都是静悄悄的，家人也不见踪迹，这一切都令Carlos觉得事情非常不对劲和紧张

害怕。来到厨房Carlos惊呆了，一家人都在向他庆祝生日，桌子中间有一个小盒子装着

他的礼物——一辆黄色的摩托车的钥匙。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

试卷第2页，共124页

①.由第一段首句内容“他走到厨房门口往里看。”可知，第一段可描写来到厨房Carlos

惊呆了，一家人都在向他庆祝生日。

②.由第二段首句内容“在厨房的桌子中间有一个小盒子。”可知，第二段可描写Carlos

拆开桌子中间的小盒子，拿到了他的礼物——一辆黄色的摩托车的钥匙。

2.续写线索：来到厨房——Carlos惊呆——家人庆祝——拆开礼物——拿到钥匙

Carlos欢喜

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.走到桌子旁边：walkedovertothetable/wenttothetable/walkeduptothetable

②.不能做某事：beunabletodosth./cannotdosth./failtodosth.

情绪类

①.惊讶：surprised/shocked/amazed

②.动听的：sweet/fair-sounding/nice/wonderful/pleasant/beautiful

【点睛】

［高分句型1］.Hewasmoresurprisedwhenheheard,"Happybirthdaytoyou.Happy

birthdaytoyou!”（运用了由when引导的时间状语从句）

［高分句型1J.Carlosjuststoodinthedoorwayofthekitchennotknowingwhattosayordo.

Hewastotallysurprised.（运用了现在分词作状语，和“what+todo”结构作宾语）

2.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Iwasawriter,butyesterdaythebosstoldmehedecidedtofireme.Thatwaswrong,

becauseIcreatedmanygreatarticlesforourcompany.Ididn'twanttoletthenewsupsetmy

children,soIinvitedmywifetoarestaurantweoftenwentto.

Iwalkedintotherestaurant,surprisedbyhowemptyitwas.Nottoolongafter,Isaw

Carriewalkin."Wherearethekids?”Iasked."AtMother's/1Carriesaid.nSowhatdidyou

wanttotellme?'*sheaskedcuriously.''WellwhenItellyou,youcan'tbreakdown."Isaid.

Shenoddedhesitantly.

“Well,...mybosssaid...hewouldfiremeifIcouldn*tcomeupwithagoodstory，"

"What!You'vebeenworkingtherefor5yearssinceyourbestfriendJackleftthere.Although

laterJacktriedtoinviteyoutoworkwithhim,yourefused.Youcouldbasicallyruntheplace!,,

Sheshouted.MIknow,Iknow.”“HowcanhejustfireyoulikeJack?”Shelookedatmewith

worryinhereyes."Whataboutthekids?Howwillwepayforthehouse?Howwillwe..."I

cutherwordsoffandpromised."Filfindanewjob.Anyjobwilldoaslongasitpays."

Suddenlyamanacrossthedinersaid,nMyfriendislookingforanewwriter...someonethat

canreallytellandshowthestory.”"WherecanIfindhim?”Iasked."He'sgotashopdown

thestreetwithabigyellowsignonthetop."hesays.''Thankyousomuch!"Carriesaid

thankfullyaswelefttherestaurant.

“There!”Carriepointedtoabigyellowsignreading,HTheDailyDispatch".''Fveheard

aboutthisplace!?,IsaidturningtoCarrie,t4Thisistheworstnewspapercompanyhere!^^I

complained,"WellIguessIshouldgoinforaninterview.Abadjobisbetterthannone.**I

sighed.nGeorge,Idon'twantyoutodosomethingyouhate.""WellatleastIcanmakesome

moneyifIhaveajob."said.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

AsIsteppedinthedoor,thestrongsmellofinkhitmerightintheface.

AsIsatdowninashabby（破I日的）chair,Iheardabreakingsound.

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Paragraph1:

AsIsteppedinthedoor,thestrongsmellofinkhitmerightintheface."Hello!What

canIdoforyou?”amaninsideasked."Hello.I'mlookingforajob.^^Isaidasweshook

hands."Waitaminute.Iwillgettheboss.,,Hesaidquickly.AsIlookedaround,Icouldtell

thisplaceneededsomeseriousarranging.Thedeskswerecoveredwithdustwithsomeold

computersonit.Theprinterlookedlikeitwasabouttogiveout,someoldnewspaperpiledin

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thecorners.

Paragraph2:

AsIsatdowninashabby（破I日的）chair,Iheardabreakingsound.BeforeIknewit,I

wasonthefloor.Iquicklystoodupasthebossenteredtheroom.Ilookedupandwewere

bothsurprised.t'Jack!^^<6George!^^Next,Jacktoldmehehadstartedthecompanyhimselfbut

hedidn'tmanageitwellwithoutoutstandingwritersandnowheextremelyneededamanlike

me.Thatevening,Jack,Carrie,mychildrenandIhadagreatmealinthatrestaurant.

Fortunately,Igotajob.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以中心事件为线索展开，讲述了作者失业后又重新找到作家职业的经历。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我一跨进房门，一股浓烈的墨水味迎面扑来。”可知，第一段可描

写作者到面试地点的所见。

②由第二段首句内容“当我坐在破旧的椅子上，我听到一个破碎的声音0”可知，第二段可

描写作者偶遇熟识竟然是急需有才华作家的老板。

2.续写线索：到面试地点——杂乱的办公地——出乎意料——对方急需才华作家——找

到工作——全家饭店庆祝

3.词汇激活

行为类

①得知：leam/tell

②看起来像：seem/looklike

③管理：operate/manage

情绪类

①惊讶：surprised/amazed

【点睛】

［高分句型l］AsIlookedaround,Icouldtellthisplaceneededsomeseriousarranging.（运用

了as引导的时间状语从句）

［高分句型2JNext,Jacktoldmehehadstartedthecompanyhimselfbuthedidn'tmanageit

wellwithoutoutstandingwritersandnowheextremelyneededamanlikeme.（运用了省略

了that引导的宾语从句）

3.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Wehavethatonepersoninourlifewhoconstantlytriestomakeusabetterperson.That

personsacrificeshistimeandenergyforthepursuittoputusintherightpathandnotletus

wanderawayintodangerouswaters.Ihavehadtheexperienceofhavingsuchapersonwho

managedtochangemylifeforbetter.

Ipickedupthehabitofsmokingrightaftermyhighschool.Fromwantingtohave

first-timeexperiencewithholdingacigarette,Istarteddevelopingaminoraddictiontowards

it.Incompanywithfriendswhosmoked,Istartedsmokingregularlyandbecameheavily

addictedtosmoking.Iusedtosecretlysmokeinthehousesothatmyparentswouldn'tfind

out.ThereweredayswhenIusedtosmokeafullpacketofcigarettes,whichchangedmylife.

Iwasproudofmybrother,buthewasalsoachain-smokerandhadstartedsufferinglung

problemsbecauseoftheheavysmoking.Hequitsmokingbecauseoftheregularchestpains

andothercomplicationswhichstarteddeveloping.Sincehefacedalotofhealthproblems,he

startedunderstandingthebadimpactsofsmoking.

HeknewIhadbecomebadlyaddictedtosmoking.Sincehewasveryclosetomeand

lovedme,hestartedaskingmetoquitsmoking.Ineverlistenedtohim.Heusedtohidemy

packetofcigarettesorthrowtheminthebin.

Despitehisregularpainsandproblems,hemadeithisaimtomakemequitsmoking.

However,ononeparticulardayhecomplainedofseverechestpainssowerushedhimtothe

nearbyhospital.Hisconditionworsenedinthehospitalandthenextday,hewasdeclared

dead.Wewereingreatshockandthewholethingseemedunbelievable.Imissedmybrother

alotandwasfrequentlyremindedofhisrepeatedwarningtometoquitsmoking.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Isawhowhelosthislifebecauseofsmoking.

Mybrother,swordsranginmyearseveryday.

试卷第6页，共124页

【答案】Paragraph!:

Isawhowhelosthislifebecauseofsmoking.Hehaddonetoomuchharmtohisbody

beforethethedoctorscoulddoanything.Iwasdeterminedtoquitsmoking.Iremembered

mybrother'srepeatedwarningwheneverIwantedtosmoke.Iturnedawayfromthecompany

withfriendswhousedtosmokeeverydayandinfluencedmetosmokeaswell.Iadmittedthe

truthinfrontofmyparentsandpromisedtoneversmokeagain.Thoughmyparentswere

filledwithpainafterhearingthenews,theywerehappythatIwashonestwiththem.

Paragraph2:

Mybrother'swordsranginmyearseveryday.Hisloveremindedmeeveryday.Just

withintwomonths,Ihadalmostquitsmokingcigarettes.Myparentshelpedmegain

confidencetoo.Thelossofmybrotherchangedmylifecompletely.Itookonanewlookand

quitthebadhabit.Thoughmybrotherisnomorewithme,Istillrememberhimtodayand

feelproudofwhathedidforme.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以戒烟为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后染上了吸烟的习惯而作者的哥哥也是一

位烟瘾很重的人，哥哥由于吸烟过多导致他的肺部开始出现问题，他经常胸疼并开始出

现并发症。作者的哥哥知道作者也染上烟瘾后开始劝作者戒烟，作者刚开始没有听从哥

哥的劝告。有一天作者的哥哥胸疼的厉害被送往医院，由于病情恶化在医院死亡。哥哥

的去世使作者决心戒烟，作者主动向父母承认吸烟并保证再也不抽烟了。作者最后取得

戒烟的成功并为他哥哥为他所做的事感到自豪。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

由第一段首句内容“我看到他是如何因为吸烟而失去生命的。”可知，第一段可描写作者

决心戒烟的经过。

②由第二段首句内容“我哥哥的话每天都在我耳边回响。”可知，第二段可描写作者成功

戒掉了烟。

2.续写线索：决心戒烟——向父母承认并保证——父母感到高兴——获得信心——改掉

坏习惯——感到自豪

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.对…有害：doharmto/beharmfulto/bebadfor

②.决心做某事：bedeterminedtodo/decidetodo

③.放弃做…：quitdoingsth./giveupdoingsth.

④.充满：befilledwith/befullof

连词类

表示让步：though/although/as/while

【点睛】

［高分句型1J.Iturnedawayfromthecompanywithfriendswhousedtosmokeeveryday

andinfluencedmetosmokeaswell.（由关系代词who引导的定语从句）

［高分句型2］.Thoughmyparentswerefilledwithpainafterhearingthenews,theywere

happythatIwashonestwiththem.（由连词Though引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语

从句）

［高分句型3］.Thoughmybrotherisnomorewithme,Istillrememberhimtodayandfeel

proudofwhathedidforme.（由连词Though引导的让步状语从句和what引导的宾语从

句）

4.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

InokidLadiesCollegehasbroughtsuccesstomanygirlsovertheyears.Lastyear,there

weretwoexceptionalstudents.They,werecalledPinkshaandRedsha.Pinkshawaspopular

andadmiredbyeveryone.Herbeautywasclassic.Sheboughtherselfclothesandaccessories

（酉己饰）fromthebestshoppingmalls.However,herinteresthadalwaysbeeninwhatis

skin-deep.Booksandcollegedidnotexistinhermind.

Redsha,onthecontrary,wasabrainygirlfromasmallvillage.Shewasalwayslostin

herownthoughtsaboutworldlymattersbutstillcaredaboutherstudies,havingexcellent

marks.Shehadakindheart,butshehadonlyafewfriends.Shewasalwaysteasedabouther

averagelooksandroundfigurebutsheneverbothered.

Mr.Yellowdish,theirclassteacher,gaveanunexpectedtestduringtheirclasssession.

Redshacalmedreachedforherpencilandansweredallthequestionswithconfidence.Onthat

day,Pinksharushedtotheclass.Shehadwokenuplateagainduetoattendingapartyinthe

previousnight.Shesatthroughthetestwithoutansweringanyquestionsontheexamination

sheets.

Tendayslater,Mr.Yellowdishwalkedintotheclasswithastern（严肃,的）expression.

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Redshawasnervouslythinkingofhermark.Sheprayedhardfbrahighmarkdespiteherhard

work.Pinkshawaslateagain!ThistimeMr.Yellowdishdidnotgoeasyonher.Henotonly

criticizedPinkshainfrontofthewholeclass,butalsoannouncedherfailedfbrthetest.

Twodayslater,Mr.Yellowdishpostedthestudents9marksonthecollege'sbulletinhoard

（布告栏）.Redshawasshockedtoseehermark.Itwasafail.Shewasconfusedandsad.She

couldnotwaituntillunchtimetomeetMr.Yellowdish.Asshewaswalkingsadlybacktothe

class,Pinkshasaid,“Nowyouknowhowitfailsto

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右：

2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

Atlunch,RedshacalmedherselfandmetMr.Yellowdish.

Mr.Yellowdishwasangryatwhathesawonthemonitoringvideo.

［答案］Atlunch,RedshacalmedherselfandmetMr.Yellowdish.Sheexplainedhersituation

andrequestedtorecheckherpaper.Mr.Yellowdishwassympatheticandfounditstrange

sinceheknewthatRedshawasabrainygirl.Heagreedtoherrequest.Mr.Yellowdish

decidedtolookintothematterdeeply.Hescannedthroughthetestpapers,recounted

Redsha5smarkandevencleaneduphismessydesksothathecouldthinkclearly.Whilehe

wascleaning,hehadagreatidea.Hehurriedtothesecurityofficetoseethemonitoring

video.

Mr.Yelowdishwasangryatwhathesawonthemonitoringvideo.ItwasPinkshawho

steppedquietlyintohisofficethedaybefore.Onthevideo,hesawhowsheerasedRedsha's

answersontheexaminationsheet.Mr.Yellowdishwasangry!Theneveryoneintheclass

knewPinksha'sbadbehaviorandwasdisgustedatthewayshespoiledRedsha'sreputation.

Pinkshafeltveryashamedofherselfandlearnedthatakindheartismoreimportantthana

strikingappearance.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Inokid女子学院的两名女生——Pinksha和Redsha。

Pinksha非常漂亮，平时只关注衣服和配饰，不关心学业：Redsha,相貌普通，但是心

地善良，学习努力。一次Yellowdish老师课上进行了一次测试，Redsha认真完成答题，

而Pinksha起晚迟到，没有答题。后来，Pinksha再次迟到，老师直接宣布她成绩不合格。

但是Redsha在公布成绩的公告牌上看到自己的成绩也是不合格，她很困惑和难过。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①.由第一段首句内容“午餐时，Redsha冷静下来，见到了Yellowdish先生。”可知，第

一段可描写Redsha要求Yellowdish先生再检查一下她的试卷，Yellowdish先生调查此

事。

②.由第二段首句内容“Yelowdish先生对监控视频上的内容感到愤怒。”可知，第二段可

描写Yelowdish先生通过监控视频搞清楚事情的原由。

2.续写线索：Redsha要求重查她的论文——Yelowdish深入调查——查看监控——发现

Pinksha擦掉答案——大家都很愤怒——Pinksha羞愧

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.要求：request/demand/require/ask

②.调查：lookinto/inquireinto/investigate/examine

③.擦掉：erase/rubaway/wipe

情绪类

①.愤怒：beangry/annoyed/mad

②.羞愧：feelveryashamed/feelasenseofshame

【点睛】

［高分句型1］.Mr.Yellowdishwassympatheticandfounditstrangesinceheknewthat

Redshawasabrainygirl,（since引导原因状语从句；that引导宾语从句作knew的宾语）

［高分句型21，ItwasPinkshawhosteppedquietlyintohisofficethedaybefore.（运用强调句

型强调主语Pinksha）

试卷第10页，共124页

［高分句型3］.TheneveryoneintheclassknewPinksha'sbadbehaviorandwasdisgustedat

thewayshespoiledRedsha'sreputation.（省略that或inwhich引导的定语从句作theway

的定语）

5.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语，续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。续写的词数应为150左右.

GoingtoaBritishhighschoolforoneyearwasaveryenjoyableandexcitingexperience

forme.IwasveryhappywiththeschoolhoursinBritainbecauseschoolstartsaround9a.m.

andendsabout3.30p.m.ThismeansIcouldgetupanhourlaterthanusual,asschoolsin

Chinabeginbefbrc8a.m.

Onthefirstday,allofthenewstudentsattendedanassemblyintheschoolhall.Isat

nexttoagirlwhosenamewasDiane.Wesoonbecamebestfriends.Duringtheassembly,the

headmastertoldusabouttherulesoftheschool.Healsotoldusthatthebestwaytoearn

respectwastodevoteourselvestostudyandachievehighgrades.Thissoundedlikemy

schoolinChina.

Para.1:

Ihadmanyteachersinthepastyear.

Para.2:

IfoundthehomeworkwasnotasheavyaswhatIusedtogetinmyoldschool.

［答案］Ihadmanyteachersinthepastyear.Amongthem,Mr.Heywood,my

classteacher,wasveryhelpful.MyfavoriteteacherwasMissBurke-Ilovedthelessonsthat

shegaveinEnglishLiterature.Inourclasstherewere28students.Thisisabouttheaverage

sizeforBritishSchool.Wehadtomovetodifferentclassroomsfordifferentclasses.Wealso

haddifferentstudentsinsomeclasses,soitwasastrugglefbrmetorememberallthefaces

andnames.

IfoundthehomeworkwasnotasheavyaswhatIusedtogetinmyoldschool.However,

itwasabitchallengingfbrmeatfirst.BecauseallthehomeworkwasinEnglish.Ifeltlucky,

asallmyteachersgavememuchencouragementandIenjoyedallmysubjects:English,

History,EnglishLiterature,ComputerScience,Maths,Science,PE,Art,CookingandFrench.

MyEnglishimprovedalotasIusedEnglisheveryday.IusuallywenttotheComputerClub

atlunchtime,soIcoulde-mailmyfamilyandfriendsbackhomeforfree.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以中心事件为线索展开，讲述了作者去英国的一所高中就读一年的一次非常愉快和

激动人心的经历。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“过去的一年里我有很多老师。”可知，第一段可描写作者在过去的

一年里的一些老师和上课方式。

②由第二段首句内容“我发现作业不像我以前的学校里布置得那么多。”可知，第二段可

描写作者完成作业的情况和其它方面的学校生活。

2.续写线索：

老师——上课——作业——鼓励——课程——英语进步——上网

3.词汇激活

行为类

①记住：remember/bearinmind

②喜欢：enjoy/like

③变得更好：improve/getbetter

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Ifeltlucky,asallmyteachersgavememuchencouragementandIenjoyedall

mysubjects:English,History,EnglishLiterature,ComputerScience,Maths,Science,PE,Art,

CookingandFrench.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句）

[高分句型2]MyfavoriteteacherwasMissBurke-IlovedthelessonsthatshegaveinEnglish

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Literature.（运用了that引导的定语从句）

6.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Everyafternoonafterschool,thechildrenusedtogoandplayintheGiantsgarden.

Itwasalargelovelygarden,withsoftgreengrass,beautifulflowers,andpeachtrees

whosepinkpearlyblossomscameoutinspring,andthatinautumnborerichfruit.Thebirds

satinthetreesandsangsosweetly.Thechildrenusedtoplaygames,cryingandlaughing.

“Howhappywearehere!”theycriedtoeachother.

OnedaytheselfishGiantcameback.Whenhearrived,hesawthechildrenplayingin

thegarden.

“Whatareyoudoinghere?^^hecriedloudly,andthechildrenranaway.

“Thegardenismyowngarden,“saidtheGiant."Iwillallownobodytoplayinitbut

myself.^^Sohebuiltahighwallallaroundit,andputupanoticeboardreading,t6NoEntry!”

Thepoorchildrenhadnowheretoplay.Theytriedtoplayontheroad,buttheroadwas

verydustyandfullofhardstones,sotheydidnotlikeit.Theyusedtowanderaroundthe

highwallwhentheirlessonswereover,andtalkaboutthebeautifulgardeninside.t4How

happywewerethere!,5theysaidtoeachother.

Thenthespringcame,andailoverthecountrytherewereblossomsandbirds.Onlyin

thegardenoftheselfishGiantwasitstillwinter.Thebirdsdidnotcaretosinginitasthere

werenochildren,andthetreesforgottoblossom.Whentheysawthenoticeboardtheywere

sosorryfbrthechildren.Theonlyoneswhowerepleasedwerethesnowandthefrost.

“Springhasforgottenthisgarden,theycried,usowewilllivehereallyearround.”Thesnow

coveredupthegrass,andthefrostpaintedallthetreessilver.Thentheyinvitedthecoldnorth

windtostaywiththem.

“Whyisthespringsolateincoming?^^saidtheselfishGiant,lookingoutofthewindow

athiscoldwhitegarden.hopetherewillbeachangeintheweather.”

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Onemorningwhenhelookedoutofthewindow,theGiantsawamostwonderfulsight.

Paragraph2:

AndtheGiantwastouchedbywhathesawoutside.

【答案】Paragraph1:

OnemorningwhenhelookedoutofIhewindow,IheGianlsawamostwonderfulsight

Inthecomer,apieceofhighwallgotblowndownbythenorthwindbyaccident.Incame

somechildren,withsmilesontheirfacesandgreenbranchesintheirhands.Whereverthey

wentacrossthegarden,thewinterandfrostweredrivenaway,treesturninggreenand

blossomscomingout.Surprisingly,withmorechildrenpouringintothegarden,birdsflew

back,singing.Itwasobviousthatitwasnottrees,norflowers,norbirdsbutthechildrenwho

broughtagainspringintothisgardenthatwassurroundedbythehighwall.

Paragraph2:

AndtheGiantwastouchedbywhathesawoutside.Notonlydidthegardenhopefor

spring,buthehimselfwasexpectingthegreenworld.Lookingatthechildrenplayinginthe

garden,theGiantdiscoveredthelovelyandlivelychildrenwerethespring.Thenhebecame

guiltyabouthisselfishact.Hethoughttohimself.uFordaysandmonthsIhavecontinuedto

keepthespringoutofmygarden.No,It'sthegardenofall."Withouthesitation,hebrokethe

highwallandallowedthechildrenin.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了每天下午放学后，孩子们总是到巨人的花园里去玩耍,

但是巨人很自私不允许他们来玩，春天来了，全国到处开花，到处鸟鸣。只有自私的巨

人的花园里依然是冬天。后来巨人意识到孩子们可以驱散严冬，于是对自己的自私行为

感到内疚，打破了高墙，让孩子们进来玩耍。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“一天早上，他向窗外望去，巨人看到了一个非常奇妙的景象。'‘可

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知，第一段可描写巨人看到窗外的景象是什么，他看到孩子们把春天重新带进了高墙环

绕的花园里。

②由第二段首句内容“巨人被外面的景象所感动。”可知，第二段可描写被外面的景象感

动后所采取的行动。

2.续写线索：巨人看到奇妙景象——孩子带来了春天——巨人感动——巨人内疚——巨

人打破高墙让孩子们进来

3.词汇激活

行为类

赶走：driveaway/driveoff

涌入：pourinto/swarminto

感动：touch/move

情绪类

极好的：wonderful/great

明显的：obvious/evident

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Itwasobviousthatitwasnottrees,norflowers,norbirdsbutthechildrenwho

broughtagainspringintothisgardenthatwassunoundedbythehighwall.（运用了who弓|导

定语从句）

[高分句型2]Notonlydidthegardenhopeforspring,buthehimselfwasexpectingthegreen

world.（运用了部分倒装）

7.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

InearlyNovember,ItoldthepupilsinmyclassItaughtinDelawareaboutmyplan."Fd

likeallofyoutodoextrajobsaroundthehousetocamsomemoney,"Isaid."Thenwellbuy

foodfbraThanksgivingdinnerforsomeonewhomightnothaveanicedinnerotherwise.^^

Iwantedthemtounderstandthatreligionismorethannobleideas;thatpeoplesomehow

havetomakeitcomealive.Ihopedtheycouldexperienceasenseoftheirownpowerto

makechanges.

EarlyinThanksgivingweek,theboysandgirlsarrivedinclassholdingtheirhard-earned

money.Theyhadsettables,washeddishes,caredforyoungersistersorbrothers.Andnow

theycouldn'twaittogoshopping.

Isupervised（监督）whiletheymovedquicklyupanddownthesupermarket.Atlastwe

headedtowardthecheckout,pushingacart（购物车）filledwithturkeyandotherpiecesof

food.Thensomeonespotteda"necessity“thatsentthemracing.

“Flowers!”Kristinecried.Thegrouprantowardtheholidayplants.

Itwasmoremeaningfultouseanyextramoneytobuystaples（主食）thatcouldbe

stretchedintomeals.Afterall,Ipronounced,"Youcan'teatflowers.”

“ButMrs.Sherlock,wewantflowers."Defeated,1lookedatthecollectionofpurple

chrysanthemums（菊花）.“She'Hlikethisone,“thechildrenagreed,andputthepurpleplant

intothecartgently.

Anagencyhadgivenusthenameandaddressofaneedygrandmotherwhohadlived

aloneformanyyears.

Soonwewerebouncingalongaroadtoherhouse.Theatmosphereinthecarwas

definitelynotspiritual.4<You*resquishing（压扁）me!”onevoiceannounced.thinkI'm

scaredofstrangers,saidanother.Betweengiggling（咯咯地笑）andpunching,andthose

purpleflowers,Iwasn'tsurethatanylessonaboutgivingandreceivingwasgettingthrough.

注意：

1.续写词数应为100左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Wefinallypulledupinfrontofasmallhouse.

【答案】A.原创作文

Wefinallypulledupinfrontofasmallhouse.Withbasketsoffoodinarms,westamped

ontheground,blewonhandstowarmthemupandknockedonthedoor.Asthedooredged

open,aweather-beatenfaceappeared,whichsoonlitupatourarrival.Thenwecarriedthe

giftsintotheroom.Inthatbriefmoment,Kristinebroughttheflowertothewoman,

tentativelyasking,eyesshining.t4Doyouliketheflowers?^^Caressingthebunchof

chrysanthemumsglowingpurpleinfullbloom,sheburiedherfaceintothemandinhaled

theirfragrance,givingKristinearadiant"yes”.AftercelebratingThanksgivingintheold

woman'shome,wewavedgoodbye.Penetratingwindwhistledthroughthestreet,butweall

agreedthatitwasworthwhilespreadingkindnessandwarmthtothepoor,especiallyatthis

chillingThanksgivingDay.

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B.官方范文

Wefinallypulledupinfrontofasmallhouse.Alittlewomanwithawearyfacecameto

welcomeus.Aseachboxoffoodwascarriedin,shesmiledandexpressedherthanks.When

thepurpleflowerswerelaidonthecounter,thewomanseemedsurprised.Perhaps,shewas

wishingitwasabagofflour,“Doyouliketheflowershere?^^onekidasked."Yes,"The

womanrespondedpositively,faceglowingwithexcitement.Itwastimetosaygoodbye.

Whenleaving,wecouldseethroughthekitchenwindowthatsheputherfaceintheflowers

andtherewassmileonherlips.Inthatbriefmoment,thechildrensawforthemselvesthe

powertheypo