浙江省台州市区高考英语新题型“概要写作”教学研讨活动课件(共24张)演示教学

高考新题型之概要(gàiyào)写作Summary余味(yúwèi)路桥中学第一页，共24页。whatthesummarywritingisthecriteriaofagoodsummaryhowtowriteagoodsummary1235Afterthisclass,youwillbeabletoknow:第二页，共24页。《普通高等学校招生全国统一(tǒngyī)考试英语科考试说明》概要写作：提供一篇(yīpiān)350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇(yīpiān)60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数少于40的和多余(duōyú)80的，从总分中减去2分第三页，共24页。评分(píngfēn)原则本题(běntí)总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档

(21-25)理解准确,涵盖全部要点。

能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。

有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。

完全使用自己的言语。﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏第四页，共24页。Narration（记叙文）Exposition（说明文）FormsofLiteratureArgumentation(议论文）第五页，共24页。Argumentation(议论文）TopicSupportingideasConclusion第六页，共24页。ThereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirtStep1:Read①topicsentence:②structureInwhatorderdoesthepassagedeveloptoshowthedifferent“attitudes”?第七页，共24页。(Para2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardanger

wasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.So

didthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirt

inafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakena

bath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.

(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighbor

eversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshave

movedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarⅡ.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?

(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,an

Americanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmune

system.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.第八页，共24页。ThereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirtStep1:Read①topicsentence:②structure③supportingideasFindoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraphthink,believe,consider,regard,argue,support,beconvincedthat,inone’sopinion,fromone’spointofview第九页，共24页。

Para2:Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardanger

wasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.So

didthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirt

inafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakena

bath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.

ExamplesofsomeEuropeancountries第十页，共24页。(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighbor

eversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshave

movedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarⅡ.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?

第十一页，共24页。(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,an

Americanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmune

system.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.第十二页，共24页。Step2:Makeanoutline

Topic:Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirtsuppor-tingIdeas(Para2)(Para3)nowadays(Para4)

Inthe16thcenturysince18thcenturyPeoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease…hasnolongerbeenregardedas…cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth…encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmune

system第十三页，共24页。

Step3:Rewritethesentencesinotherways

①Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.different,mixed,various反义转换(zhuǎnhuàn)opinions,views,ideas同义词替换(tìhuàn)▲People’sattitudestodirtvaryindifferenttimes.towards句型(jùxínɡ)转换▲Peopleholddifferentopinionstowardsdirtovertime.

▲Theattitudestodirtisnotalwaysthesame.第十四页，共24页。②Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.Haveatry!第十五页，共24页。①Peopleholdmixedopinions

towardsdirtonourskin.②Inthe16thcentury,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,suchasFrance,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.③Peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtmorethan200yearsago.Theyhavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.④Nowadays,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.However,Nevertheless/But/however③people

AddtwolinkingwordstomakethepassagecoherentStep4:Makethesummarycoherent④nowadays,

第十六页，共24页。Step5:Revise(67words)Peopleholdmixedopinions

towardsdirtonourskin.Inthe16thcentury,peopleofsomeEuropeancountriesbelievedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.However,peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Theyhavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.Butnowadays,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.4“C”:complete,correct,concise,coherent第十七页，共24页。Step6:Clearlycopyyourdrafttothepaper第十八页，共24页。Howtowriteasummary(argumentation)1.Read2.Makeanoutline

3.Rewrite4.Makeitcoherent5.Revise6.neatlycopy-Topic,structure,keysupportingsentences第十九页，共24页。HomeworkFinishthesummarywritingofPassageB第二十页，共24页。PPT模板下载：/moban/行业PPT模板：/hangye/节日PPT模板：/jieri/PPT素材下载：/sucai/PPT背景图片：/beijing/PPT图表下载：/tubiao/优秀(yōuxiù)PPT下载：/xiazai/PPT教程：/powerpoint/Word教程：/word/Excel教程：/excel/资料下载：/ziliao/PPT课件下载：/kejian/范文下载：/fanwen/试卷下载：/shiti/教案下载：/jiaoan/

第二十一页，共24页。②Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.think:believe,hold,consider,insist,argue,areconvinced….同义词替换(tìhuàn)blockoutdisease:prevent/protect/keepaway…fromillness;Onepossibleversion: