写作 Writing -描写人物 about a person课件 人教版英语九年级上册

Writing:AboutaPersonLead-inLet’senjoyavideo!AppearancebigeyeslongcurlyblackhairTalkingaroundfaceWhatdoIlooklike?Whoisshe?fat/heavythinAppearanceWhatdotheylooklike?Whatdoeshelooklike?outgoing

shy

PersonalityWhatamIlike?Whatisshelike?Personality:

Todescribeone’spersonalityoutgoingseriousfunnysmartfriendlyshylikereading

HobbiesWhatdo

I

like?Whatdoes

he

like?enjoysinging

Whatdoes

she

like?

love

dancingWhatdoeshe

like?

love

playingbasketball

like(s)doingenjoy(s)/love(s)doingfallinlovewith...becomeinterestedinsthhatedoingsthTotalkaboutone’shobbiesWorkinagrouptotalkaboutoneofyourfriendsfromtheirappearance,personalityandhobbies.GroupworkLeoismybestfriend.

Whoisyourbestfriend?

Whatdoeshe

looklike?Heistallandhehasshortblackhair.Whatishelike?Heisoutgoing.Whatishegoodat?...Helikesplayingbasketballandheplayswell....

Howoldishe?Heis14yearsold.Describeoneofyourclassmateswithouttellinghisname.Otherstrytoguessthename.

(Youcanaskquestions)E.g.Ihaveagoodfriendinmyclass.Heis...Hehas...Helikes...Heisgoodat...Whoishe?GuessinggameNowyouarewritingtoyourpenpalinAmericatotellhimyourbestfriend.WritingskillsHowtogetfullmarks?中考作文的评分标准四档（16-20分）内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言错误；三档（11-15分）内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少；二档(6-10分)有一定内容、但语言表达错误较多。一档(0-5分)只能写出文章的个别单词和句子注意：抄袭卷中阅读材料的，抄袭部分不给分。Inall1)Usethesewordstomakethewholepasagelogical.

Suchas,2)WordspellingandhandwritingTips:But/HoweverBesidesFirstofall20分ThestructureTitle:MybestfriendBeginningBodyEndingIhaveagoodfriendcalled...He/Sheis...yearsold.Thisismybestfriend.Doyouwanttoknowhim/her?He/She

enjoys(doing)...He/Sheis...He/She

has....Cooperatewithyourgroupmembers.WritethepassageMyBestFriendStudentA:beginningandendingStudentB:AppearanceStudentC:PersonalityStudentD:HobbiesThenshareyourpassages.Let’swriteOnepossibleversionMyBestFriend

IhaveagoodfriendnamedLinda.

Sheis14yearsold.Firstofall,sheisatallgirlwithapairofbigeyes.Shehaslongstraighthair.

Sheisverybeautiful.Besidessheisoutgoingandhelpful.SheisgoodatEnglishandsheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.Sheenjoysreadingallkindsofbooksbecausereadinggivesheralotofknowledgeandmakesherveryhappy.

Allinall,thisismybestfriend.Doyouwanttoknowher?thebeginningthebodytheendingWhichoneisthemostimportant,apperance,personalityorhobbiesforaperson.AgoodcharacterismoreimportantthangoodlookingEnrichyourmindandbeabettermanBeginning:

Mybestfriendis...Body:appearance,personality,hobbiesHe/Sheis...He/Shehas...He/Sheloves...Ending: