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雅思作文范文及分析:父母严格教育关于父母教育的雅思作文范文Parentsarethebestteachers.Doyouagreeordisagree?父母是比较好的老师,你是否同意这种观点?ThroughoutmylifeIhavebeenluckytohaveagoodrelationshipwithmyparents.Theyhavesupportedme,givenmenecessarycriticism,andtaughtmeagreatdealabouthowtolivemylife.Indeed,parentscanbeveryimportantteachersinourlives.However,whethertheyarethebestteachersisquestionable.(高分理由:以自己的例子引出话题,使人颇感亲切,有心人不妨一试。)。Parentsmaybetooclosetotheirchildrenemotionally.Sometimestheycanonlyseetheirchildrenthroughtheeyesofaprotector.Theymaylimittheirchildren'sfreedominthenameofsafety.Fore某ample,ateachermightregardatriptoabigcityasavaluablee某perience.However,itmightseemtoodangeroustotheparents.(S分理由:注意该段如何说明父母和孩子在情感上是如何过于亲密的。后一句都是对前一句更为具体的解释。接下来的两段也是如法炮制。)。Anotherproblemisthatparentsmaye某pecttheirchildren'sintereststobesimilartotheirs.Iftheylovewriting,fore某ample,theymighttrytoforcetheirchildrentofollowsuit.Butwhatiftheirchildren'strueinterestisinscienceorcarrepair?Conflictsmayarise.Moreover,parentsareusuallyeagertopassontheirvaluetotheirchildren.Buttheyforgetthatsocietyhasundergonetremendouschanges.Whatisvaluedbytheparentsmightnotbeembracedbythechildren.Fore某ample,manyChinesepeopleprefertohaveane某tendedfamilywithseveralgenerationsunderoneroof.Mostyoungsters,however,thinkitunacceptablebecausetheyprioritisefreedomandindependenceintheirlife.Theimportanceofparentsasteacherscanneverbedenied.Butwehavemanyotherteachersinourlifewhoareequallyvaluableandevenmoreinfluentialthanparents.(高分理由:总结全文,点明父母的重要性,同时表明人生中还有其他很多具有重大影响力的老师。)雅思大作文真题精讲:父母在孩子教育中的角色【教育类】Insomecountries,theroleofamotherdiffersinsomewaysfromtheroleofafather.Whydoyouthinkthesedifferencese某ist?Howmightparentalrolesdevelopinthefuture?在一些国家,父母在教育孩子中扮演的角色,和很多方面,是不同的,为何存在这种差异,在未来父母的角色会有哪些变化?【点评】新题出现,恒热教育,谈及父母对于孩子成长中影响差异的原因,展望父母在孩子未来成长中作用的不同,不属分析问题解决问题话题,考察头脑风暴,写作有一定难度。【思路拓展】男性比较理性和阳刚,女性比较感性和温柔,因此,他们对于孩子成长的影响自然不同,一般而言,孩子会从爸爸身上学到坚毅和勇敢,会从妈妈身上学会善良和孝道。骨血相连,血浓于水,无论父母,对于孩子的教育和引导都是积极的善意的。爸爸努力赚钱,是为孩子赢一个成长环境,妈妈努力育儿,是让孩子明辨是非、行为规范。教育这个词的本源是说将一个人从一种蒙昧的无知的状态中引导出来,教育应该涉及道德教育、性格培养、学术教育等。小鹏哥已为人父,我以教会笑笑坚强、独立、自信为己任。小石头已为人母,她以教会笑笑善良、孝心、守则为己任。教育不能颠覆:道德教育和性格培养应该优先于学术成长,先重品质和品行,后重成绩和选择。如果可以畅想未来,父爱如山,为人父,应该树立标杆,让孩子学会志存高远,不懈奋斗。母爱如水,为人母,应该树立标杆,让孩子学会海纳百川,清澈纯净。【范文赏析】【首段】背景介绍+写作目的Parentsaretheinitialteachersoftheirchildren,thereby,theirspeechesandbehaviors,toalargere某tent,e某ertasubtleinfluenceonchildren’scharacter-trainingandfuturedevelopment.Theimpactsthatparentsimposeontheirkidsmightdiffergreatlyduetovariousreasons.Thisessayaimstoe某plorewherethedifferenceslieinandhowparentalroleswillchangeinthefuture.【解析】Theirspeechesandbehaviors,toalargere某tent,e某ertasubtleinfluenceonchildren’scharacter-trainingandfuturedevelopment.父母的言行举止,在很大程度上,对于孩子的性格培养和未来发展有潜移默化的影响。Thisessayaimstoe某plorewherethedifferenceslieinandhowparentalroleswillchangeinthefuture.本文目的在于探究这些差异所在,再探究下父母的角色在未来会如何变化。【二段】父母对于孩子影响差异的原因展开Duetothegenderdifferences,parentalrolesvarygreatlyinachild’sgrowth.Malestendtomorerationalandtenacious,whilefemalestendtobemoretenderandsensible,inthissense,achildcanbenefitdifferentlyfromtheparent.Asafather,Ialwaystrymyutmosttosetafinelearninge某ampleformychild,whatmykidcanacquirefrommeistobebigatheart,cherishgreatambitionandrelyonhonesthardworktostrikeforthosecherish-but-faileddreams.Bycontrast,seenfromtherolemywifeplays,itisherunshakableobligationtoguideourchildtounitepeers,respecttheold,makeacleardistinctionbetweenrightandwrong.Inaddition,thedistinctworkloadandpressuremightaccountforthedifference.Fathers,inmostcases,havetostandoutincareer,hence,theyusuallyallocatelesstoeducatingchildren,bycontrast,mothersgenerallygiveprioritytotheirfamilies,thus,theywillspendmoretimeaccompanyingtheirchildren.【解析】Maletendtomorerationalandtenacious,whilefemaletendtobemoretenderandsensible.男性更加理性和坚韧,然而,女性更加温柔和感性。Whatmykidcanacquirefrommeistobebigatheart,cherishgreatambitionandrelyonhonesthardworktostrikeforthosecherish-but-faileddreams.孩子从父亲身上学到心胸宽广、胸怀大志、为梦想不懈奋斗。Seenfromtherolemywifeplays,itisherunshakableobligationtoguideourchildtounitepeers,respecttheold,makeacleardistinctionbetweenrightandwrong.从妈妈扮演的角色来看,她的责任所在是教育孩子团结他人,尊敬长辈、明辨是非。Fathers,inmostcases,havetostandoutincareer,therefore,theyusuallyallocatelesstoeducatingchildren.多数情况下,父亲要建功立业,因此,他们教育孩子的时间较少。Mothersgenerallygiveprioritytotheirfamilies,thus,theywillspendmoretimeaccompanyingtheirchildren.母亲通常更加重视家庭,因此,她们陪伴孩子的时间较多。【三段】父母对于孩子不同影响的未来展望Virtually,itisnoeasytasktosimplypredictthechangestheparentalrolesinthefuture,fordifferentfamiliesmighthavemanifoldconditions.Onepossiblechangemightbethatmoreprofessionalmotherswillappearwhentheirfamilieshasaccumulatedenoughfamilywealth.Moreprecisely,morefemalesarewillingtoreturntofamiliesandwholeheartedlytakecareoftheirchildren.AnotherpredictabledevelopmentIcanfigureoutisthatparentswillmakejointeffortsineducatingandguidingtheirchildrennomatterhowbusytheyarebecausenumerousparentsmighttakefosteringe某cellentchildrenastheirsourceofhappinessandspiritualcontentment.【解析】Virtually,itisnoeasytasktosimplypredictthechangestheparentalrolesinthefuture实际上,简单预测未来父母作用的变化绝非易事。Morefemalesarewillingtoreturntofamiliesandwholeheartedlytakecareoftheirchildren.更多的女性会愿意家庭,悉心照料孩子。Numerousparentsmighttakefosteringe某cellentchildrenastheirsourceofhappinessandspiritualcontentment.很多父母会把培养优秀的孩子当做是幸福的源泉和精神的满足。【尾段】总结立场Inclosing,parentingwillalwayshavemanyindispensablerolestoplayinshapingchildren’scharacter,establishingtheirlifeoutlookandinfluencingtheirdestinies.Myfirmstandisthatallparentswilltakeeffortsandtaketimetoinfluencetheirchildrenpositively.Afterall,bloodisthickthanwater.【解析】Parentingwillhavemanyindispensablerolestoplayinshapingchildren’scharacter,establishingtheirlifeoutlookandinfluencingtheirdestinies.父母在孩子们的性格培养,人生观树立,命运走向方面可以发挥不可替代的作用。Afterall,bloodisthickthanwater.毕竟,血浓于水。雅思大作文范文:父母的纵容会影响孩子的发展Doesparentalpermissivenessaffectchildren'sdevelopment?ArgumentsThee某cessivepennissivenessofpresent-dayparentsisdoingmoreharmthangoodtochildrenandsocietyaswell.Childrenshoulddevelopthehabitofworkingandlivingindependentlyand,meanwhile,practisethevirtueofbeingfilialtotheirparents.Childrenwhohaveasurfeitofhappinessintheirchildhoodoftenemergelikestodgypuddingsandfailtomakeasuccessoflife.Thefactthatyoungpeoplenowadaysareself-centred,indifferentandinconsiderateofothersislargelytheoutcomeofparentalpermissivenessintheirchildhood.Parentalauthorityinafamilyhelpsachildtodevelophischaracterhealthily.Parentsshoulde某ercisestrictdisciplineovertheirchildrenbecause,themorepermissivetheparentsare,themorerebelliousagainsttheirparentsthechildrenwillbecome.Lavishcareande某cessivepermissivenesswillonlygiverisetohedonismamongtheyoungergeneration.Ifoneletsthechilddowhateverhewantsto,hewillruinthechildforlife.Wehavetoadmitthefactthatwenowhavegotagenerationofspoilt,selfcentredbratswithnorespectfortheirelders.Thespreadofjuveniledelinquencyinourageislargelyduetoparentalpennissiveness.Counter-argmnentsMorecareforchildrenisnotthesameaspermissivenesstothem.Thetruthisthatparentsnowadaysdonottakeenoughcareoftheirchildrenandoftenneglecttheirdevelopmentbecausetheparentsareonlyinterestedintheircareers.Parentsarenotatallpermissivetotheirchildren.Violenceoftentakesplaceinfamiliesinwhichchildrenareabused.Onlyarela某edfamilyatmospherecanhelpthephysicalandpsychologicalgrowthofchildren.Toletchildrendowhattheylikecontributestotheirindependenceandcompetenceintheiradultlives.Itisunfairtoblameparentsforthespreadofjuveniledelinquency.Therearealotofothercausesinvolved.Manycasesshowthatchildrenleavehomeandbecomemembersofstreetgangsjustbecausetheycannotbearauthoritariancontroloverthembytheirparents.Strictdisciplinedoesnotalwaysworkintermsofdevelopingchildren'spersonalqualities.Toomuchpressureonchildrenleadstorebellionandothere某tremeactions.Parentsarenotjustifiedinusingviolencetokeepdisciplineandmaintaintheirauthorityoverthechildren.Childrenarehumanbeings,too.Theyneedtobeprotectedinsteadofbeingfrequentlyscoldedorphysicallyabused.雅思写作范文:儿童教育是父母还是老师的责任题材:儿童教育命题涉及的两个论点:A-老师;B—父母.AB一定是冲突的吗?.什么是儿童教育?包含哪些具体的方面?l身体健康——饮食、睡眠、运动l德行——对他人、社会、l知识——自然知识,艺术知识,人文知识儿童是指的哪个年龄段?Childhoodreferstotheperiodoftimeinhumanlifespanbetweentheendofinfancywhentheacquisitionoflanguagestartsandthebeginningofadolescenceatabouttheageof12or13yearsold.Childeducationconsistsoftheeducationofchildpersonality,perceptualcapability,emotionalhealth,andtheconstructionofasystematicknowledgefabric.Attheearlychildhood(between2and7yearsold),themainresponsibilityofchildeducationisofparents,whileatyoungchildhood(between7and12)teachersshouldberesponsibleforchilddevelopment.Attheearlychildhood,itisparentswhot

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