【课件】新外研版高中英语必修一 Unit 3 Family matter：Writing-道歉信

Unit3Familymatters

Writing——道歉信道歉信是因为自己的过失或者疏忽，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。道歉信应该反映出自己具体的过失或疏忽，道歉的语言应该简练诚恳，并且希望收信人能够原谅自己。通常包括以下三部分内容：1.开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意；2.说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；3.再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。

手把手教写作【佳句荟萃】1.表示歉意(1)I’mverysorryfornotbeingabletoseeourmathteacherwithyouthisweekend.I’mwritingtoapologizetoyouforit.(2)ThereasonswhyIcan’tgowithyouareasfollows.2.解释原因，提出补救办法(1)JustnowIreceivedacallfrommyoldfriend,whowenttoAmericaforfurtherstudylastyear.(2)HetoldmethathewouldbebacktoChinaat9amonSaturday,andhehopedIcouldpickhimupattheairportwithhisfamily.(3)Wehaven’tseeneachotherforayear,soIthinkIamsupposedtomeethim.(4)Imakeanapologytoyouforanyinconveniencecaused,andIhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation.(5)Let’smakeitanothertime.HowaboutMayDay?3.再次致歉，希望得到理解 Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapology.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

经典试题第一步：布局谋篇►审题1.确定体裁：本文是一封道歉信，属于_____________；2.确定时态：主要使用________________和一般过去时；3.确定人称：本文主要人称为__________________。►构思1.表明写信目的，因为丢书表示歉意；2.解释丢书的原因，并提出____________________；3._________________并反省自己的过失，恳求对方原谅。应用文一般现在时第一、三人称解决方案再次道歉第二步：核心词汇1.____________________________宝贵的；珍贵的2.___________________重新获得3.________________conj.一旦4._______________________________代替；取代5.______________________回忆；记忆6.______________________打算做7.________________没能够做成……8._________________________与……有关联valuable/precious/ofgreatvaluerecover/makeupforoncereplace/displace/taketheplaceofmemory/recall/rememberintendtodo/meantodofailtodobeconnectedwith/relateto第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.非常抱歉地告诉你，我把上周你借给我的宝贵的书弄丢了。(宾语从句；定语从句) Iamterriblysorrytotellyouthat__________________________________________.2.一旦丢失，它们就无法取代。 ________________________，theycannever_______________.3.对这个不能挽回的损失，我应该对这负责任。(betoblame) Andforthisirrecoverableloss,______________________.4.如果我更加谨慎，它就不会丢失。(if虚拟条件句) If______________________,it_________________________.IhavelostthevaluablebookyoulentmelastweekOncetheyarelostbereplacedIamtoblameIhadbeenmorecarefulwouldnothavebeenlost第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用状语从句的省略改写句2 _________________,theycanneverbereplaced.2.用倒装句改写句4 ____________________________________________________________________OncelostHadIbeenmorecareful,itwouldnothavebeenlost.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇DearFrank，IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthevaluablebookyouweresokindtolendmelastweek.Ireaditeverydayandintendedtofinishitnextweek.LastnightwhenIcametomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Iwilltrytorecoveritassoonaspossible.IfIfailtofindit,Iwillgetanewbookforyou.ButIamafraiditcannevertaketheplaceoftheoldone.Oldbooksarelikeoldfriends.Oncelost,theycanneverbereplaced.Theyareconnectedwithpreciousmemorieswhichthenewonescanneverhave.Andforthisirrecoverableloss,Iamtoblame—ifI