黑龙江省部分名校2020-2021学年上学期高一英语期中试题精选汇编：书面表达专题（部分详解）

黑龙江省部分名校2020-2021学年上学期高一英语期中试题精选汇编书面表达专题黑龙江省大庆铁人中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题第四部分：书面表达(满分25分)56.假定你是李华．你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣，恰好你校今年寒假将为外国学生举办一场汉语冬令营活动（ChineseWinterCamp），请你给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．时间和地点；2．内容：学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等；3．报名方式和截止时间．注意：1．词数：100左右2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．DearTom,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTom,Herecomesapieceofgoodnews.ChineseWinterCamp,whichisintendedforinternationalstudents,isgoingtobeheldinourschoolthiswintervacation.SinceyouareobsessedwithChineseculture,I'dliketoinviteyoutojoinit.TheCampisscheduledtolast11days,fromDecember18toDecember28．Itcoversawidevarietyofculturalactivities,rangingfromstudyingChinesedailyexpressionstoattendingsomelecturesonChinesehistoryandtraditionalculture.Asweallknow,languageiscloselyrelatedtoculture,soI'mconvincedthatyoucandigoutChineseculturalfeaturesfromlanguagestudy.Inaddition,theCampprovidesachanceforyoutovisitsomefamousmuseums,whichisthebestwaytolearnaboutthecountry.Byadmiringthehistoricalrelics,youwilldefinitelygainabetterunderstandingofthecountry.Ifyouwanttobepartofit,pleasesignupforitbeforeDecember2ndatourschoolwebsite.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Tom发一封电子邮件,介绍学校今年寒假将为外国学生举办一场汉语冬令营活动，进一步了解中国文化。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和部分一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.点明主题，介绍活动时间和地点；2.活动内容：1）学习日常汉语2）了解中国历史和传统文化3）参观博物馆等3.报名方式和截止时间。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）ChineseWinterCamp;inourschoolthiswintervacation;inviteyoutojoinit;fromDecember18toDecember28;awidevarietyofculturalactivities;studyChinesedailyexpressions;lecturesonChinesehistoryandtraditionalculture;visitsomefamousmuseums;abetterunderstandingofthecountry;signupforitbeforeDecember2nd;atourschoolwebsite;lookforwardto第三步：连词成句1.Herecomesapieceofgoodnews.2.ChineseWinterCamp,whichisintendedforinternationalstudents,isgoingtobeheldinourschoolthiswintervacation.3.SinceyouareobsessedwithChineseculture,I'dliketoinviteyoutojoinit.4.TheCampisscheduledtolast11days,fromDecember18toDecember28.5.Itcoversawidevarietyofculturalactivities,rangingfromstudyingChinesedailyexpressionstoattendingsomelecturesonChinesehistoryandtraditionalculture.6.Asweallknow,languageiscloselyrelatedtoculture,soI'mconvincedthatyoucandigoutChineseculturalfeaturesfromlanguagestudy.7.Inaddition,theCampprovidesachanceforyoutovisitsomefamousmuseums,whichisthebestwaytolearnaboutthecountry.8.Byadmiringthehistoricalrelics,youwilldefinitelygainabetterunderstandingofthecountry.9.Ifyouwanttobepartofit,pleasesignupforitbeforeDecember2ndatourschoolwebsite.10.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：Inaddition2.表因果关系：Since，so连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]ChineseWinterCamp,whichisintendedforinternationalstudents,isgoingtobeheldinourschoolthiswintervacation.（非限制性定语从句及被动语态）[高分句型2]Itcoversawidevarietyofculturalactivities,rangingfromstudyingChinesedailyexpressionstoattendingsomelecturesonChinesehistoryandtraditionalculture.（非谓语动词的应用）[高分句型3]Inaddition,theCampprovidesachanceforyoutovisitsomefamousmuseums,whichisthebestwaytolearnaboutthecountry.（衔接词文章纽带及非限制性定语从句）黑龙江省鹤岗市第一中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题第四部分：书面表达（共25分）81.假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Mark希望向你了解国画的有关知识，已约定见面时间，现你因故需要推迟。请给Mark写一封邮件，说明情况。要点包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.重约见面讨论的时间。提示词：国画traditionalChinesepaintings要求：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯DearMark,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMark,I’mwritingtoexpressmyregretforbeingunabletokeepmyappointmenttodiscussthetraditionalChinesepaintingswithyou.Ifeelterriblysorryaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.Whatmakesmeconcernedisthatmyfinalexamwillbeheldintwoweeks,soIhavetomakepreparationsforitatthattime.CouldwemakeanotherappointmenttodiscussthetraditionalChinesepaintingstogether?IsuggestweputitofffromthisweekenduntilthefirstSundaynextmonth.Willthatbefineforyou?Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua【解析】【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封道歉信。第1步：审题。确定时态。根据提示：你给Mark现在写一封邮件，说明情况，并重约见面讨论的时间。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。第2步：确定文章框架和内容。信件内容分为三段：首段表示歉意，第二段说明原因以及再约的希望，第三段再次表示歉意以及希望收到回复。第3步：确定关键词（组）。如：expressmyregretfor…（对……感到抱歉），keepmyappointment（按时赴约），whatmakesmeconcerned(让我感到担心的是…)，makeanotherappointment（再约），putitofffrom…until…(从…推迟到…)等。第4步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第5步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。符合英语表达习惯，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文内容完整，段落清晰，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。文章首句动名词（forbeingunableto…）与不定式（myappointmenttodiscuss…）使用地很巧妙，整句话清晰的表达了写信的目的。第二段首句使用了主语从句和表语从句，还使用了并列连词so，将意思表达的清晰完整。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。且全文语句间过渡自然，为文章增色添彩。黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市第八中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题第二节书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，刚上高中一周左右。请你按以下内容写一篇日记，简单记录你的学校、老师和自己的情况：1．有10个班，500多名学生；2．教室配有电脑；3．老师友好热情，教学方法与初中截然不同，上课方式很有趣；4．与同学相处融洽，积极参加各种课外活动。注意：1.词数100左右(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。TuesdayMarch2FineI’vebeenatSeniorHighschoolformorethanaweek.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHuaTuesdayMarch2FineI'vebeenatseniorhighschoolformorethanaweek.Mynewschoolisafamousschoolwithalonghistory,coveringanareaofthreetimesasbigasourJuniorHighschool.Thereare60classesandover3,500studentsinmyschool.It'samazingthateveryroomhasacomputer.Ourteachersareenthusiasticandfriendly.Theirteachingmethodsareinterestingandnothinglikethoseofourpreviousteachers.I'mgettingalongverywellwithmyclassmatesandItakeanactivepartinafter－schoolactivitieslikefootball,basketball,volleyballandsoon.IlikemySeniorHighschoollife.黑龙江省安达市第七中学校2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题六、书面表达9.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Chris对中国的书画作品很感兴趣,你市图书馆将于本周六举办齐白石画展。请你根据所给提示,用英语给

Chris写封电子邮件,邀请他一起参观。要点包括:​1.提出邀请;2.说明展览内容;3.请求对方回复。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearChris,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearChris,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinmeforavisittoadrawingexhibition,for,asfarasIknow,youareextremelyenthusiasticaboutChinesedrawing.TheshowwillbeheldinthecitylibrarythiscomingSaturday.AlloftheworksweremadebyQiBaishi,oneofChina’sgreatestpainters,whofollowedthetraditionalstyleofpainting.Heobservedtheworldofnatureverycarefullyandhispaintingsarespecialbecauseofthis.ImsurethevisitwillimproveyourknowledgeofChinesepaintingsverymuch.Iwouldbeverygladifyoucouldcome.Pleasedropmealinetoletmeknowyourdecision