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ahighscholarshipavoluntaryactivityachancetostudyabroadawell-paidjobWhatdopeopleusuallydowhentheywanttogetahighscholarship?

awell-paidjob?

agoodposition?

afavoriteactivity?AletterofapplicationAresume/curriculumvitae(CV)enclosedHowtowriteabetterApplicationLetterObjectivesBytheendofthislesson,youwillbeabletomastersomekeyphrasesandsentencepatternsinwritingaletterofapplicationknowthebasicstructureofanapplicationletterfinishanapplicationletterinthetimegiven1.Whataretheposts?2.Whoshouldyouwriteto?3.Whatinformationshouldyoucoverinyourapplication?ReadLiHua’sapplicationletterandanswerthequestions.1.WhatreasonsdoesLiHuagive?2.Whatevidencedoesshegivetoshowthat..①Sheishard-workingandcommitted?②Shegetsonwellwithpeoplefromdifferentbackgrounds?③Shewouldbeagoodreporter?1.WhatreasonsdoesLiHuagive?Sheisinterestedinbeingajournalistandwantstolearnmoreaboutthingsthataregoingoninthecity.2.Whatevidencedoesshegivetoshowthat..①Sheishard-workingandcommitted?Shehasparticipatedforthelastthreeyearsinavolunteerprogramme.2.Whatevidencedoesshegivetoshowthat..②Shegetsonwellwithpeoplefromdifferentbackgrounds?Shehasworkedwithalotofpeopleonmanyprojectsforlocalevents.2.Whatevidencedoesshegivetoshowthat..③Shewouldbeagoodreporter?—goodlanguageskills—goodatwriting—readmanynovelsbydistinguishedauthors—agoodphotographerWhatiseachparagraphabout?Para1:ReasonorpurposeforwritingPara2:Reasonsforinterest;personalqualities;

qualificationsandadvantagesPara3:HopeandappreciationWhatarewegoingtowriteforanapplicationletter?anapplicationletterself-introductionexperienceinterestpersonalqualitiespurposestrength,advantagesgratitudeWritingstructureandideasDear,xxx自我介绍（self-introduction）:______________写作背景（background）:____________写作目的（purpose）:___________主题句（topicsentence）:____________性格（character）:____________特长（strength）:____________业余爱好（hobbies）:____________经验（experience）:____________总结句（conclusionsentence）:____________表决心（determination）:____________表达感激（gratitude）:____________告知联系方式（contact）:____________Para1Para2Para3DearSirorMadam,I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IreadtheannouncementofthesummercampthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromdifferentcountriesandI'dliketotakepartinit.I'vebeenlearningEnglishfor10years,andIspeakfluentEnglish.Whatismore,I’llbeabletotellstudentsfromothercountriesaboutChinaandlearnabouttheircountriesaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.I

wouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemetheopportunity.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

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LiHuaself-introduction/writingpurpose/reasonsforapplyingyourability/qualification/strength/advantageyourpromise/appreciation/hopeCommonlyused…WordsandphrasesSentencesConjunctionsGrammar写作背景（writingbackground）我很高兴在因特网上获悉你们正在招聘…Review:句型：很高兴做某事

短语：从…中获悉beglad/pleased/happy/delightedtodosth.learnfromIampleasedtolearnfromtheInternetthatyouarelookingfor…写作目的（writingpurpose）1.因此我写信来申请这个职位。Review:职位：

因此：

申请：post;position;jobso;therefore;thus;consequentlyapplyforTherefore,Iamwritingtoapplyfortheposition.主题句（topicsentence）我确信我能胜任这项工作。Review:句型：我确信…

短语：胜任Iamsurethat…Iamcertainthat…Iamconfidentthat…Iamconvincedthat…IamconfidentthatIamqualifiedforthejob.beequaltobefitforbecapableofbequalifiedfor首先，我不但勤奋，而且有爱心和热心，愿意接受挑战。Review:连词：首先

句型：不但…而且…

短语：接受挑战first;firstofall;inthefirstplacenotonly…butalso…takeupchallengesFirstofall,notonlyamIhardworkingbutalsoIamcaringandenthusiastic,willingtotakeupchallenges.个人优势（Personaladvantages）此外，我已学习英语六年，这让我有能力和别人用英语流利地交流。Review:短语：此外

让某人有能力做某事

语法：which引导非限制性定于从句

Inaddition;What’smore;Furthermore;Besidesenablesb.todosth.Inaddition,IhavebeenlearningEnglishfor6years,which

enablesmetocommunicatewithothersinEnglishfluently.我精通英语，尤其是口语。Review：精通

尤其是haveagoodcommandof…especiallyIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallyspokenEnglish.在业余时间，我喜欢阅读各种书籍，让我积累了相关的丰富知识。Revision:在某人的业余时间

积累丰富知识

与…相关的inone’ssparetimegain/accumulaterichknowledgeberelatedto;berelevanttoInmysparetime,Ienjoyreadingallkindsofbooks,gainingrichknowledgerelatedtothisfield.最后一点也是很重要的，我做过很多的兼职工作，积累了很多经验。Review:最后一点也是很重要的

兼职工作

积累很多经验lastbutnotleastapart-timejobgathermuchexperienceLastbutnotleast,havingdonemanypart-timejobsbefore,Ihavegatheredmuchexperience.如果被录取，我将珍惜这次宝贵的机会努力做好。Review:珍惜机会

努力做某事cherishtheopportunitytryone’sbesttodosth.makeeveryefforttodosth.dowhatIcantodosth.IfIamaccepted,IwillcherishtheopportunityanddowhatIcantoworkwell.如果您能在方便的时候给我答复，我将不胜感激。Review:写信百搭句型：如果…我将不胜感激

在某人方便的时候Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucould…atone’sconvenienceIwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldgivemeyourreplyatyourconvenience.Thepurposeofaletterofapplicationistohelpyouto“sell”yourself.Itshouldstateclearlythejobyouwant,andshouldtellwhatyourabilitiesareandwhatyouhavedone.Itshouldbesimple,human,personalandbriefwithoutleavingoutanynecessaryfacts.Inwritingaletterofapplication,keepinmindthatthingsapossibleemployerismostlikelytowanttoknowaboutareyourqualification,yourachievementsandyouraims.Theopeningparagraphisalsothemostimportantpart.Don’tforgettowriteagoodstrongclosingremarkforyourletterandalsoapoliteending.问候语和交际意图。“开脸”给人好的第一印象。要点全与不全要看这里。表达是否清楚也看这里。结尾要注意语气委婉客气，句式灵活。可进一步美化文章。猫型作文Practicemakesperfect!假定你是李华。育英中学的一名学生，得知某英文报招聘兼职记着，你有意应聘。请按下列要求给报社写一封申请信。内容要点包括：表明自己感兴趣；说明自己的优势；希望得到回复。注意：1.词数100字左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。1Draft

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OutputTheRuleofwritingDearSirorMadam,I'mastudentfromYuyingMiddleSchool.I'mquiteinterestedinthenewsthatyouwantsomepart-timereporters.

IthinkIamtherightpersonforthejob.Asastudent,I'vereaddifferentbooks.Furthermore,IamgoodatEnglishanddowellinspeaking.Besides,I'measytogetalongwithandlikeworkingtogetherwithothers.Aboveall,Ionceattendedacourseabouttheskillsinbroadcasting.SoI'msureIcandothejobwellifIgettheposition.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplysoon.Yourssincerely,

LiHuaPossibleversionHowtomakeitbetter?words/phrasesbetterwords

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sentencesbettersentencestructuresDearSirorMadam,

I'mastudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.Ishowgreatinterestinthenewsthatyouwantsomepart-timereporters.IthinkIamqualifiedfor

thejob.Asastudent,I'vereadvarietiesofbooks.Furthermore,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishanddo

wellinspeaking.Besides,I'measytogetalongwithandhaveastrongsenseofcooperation.Aboveall,Ionceattendedacourseabouttheskillsinbroadcasting.SoI'msureIcandothejobwellifIgettheposition.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplysoon.

Yourssincerely,

LiHuaRefinebyusinggoodphrasesRefinebyaddinggoodadj./adv.DearSirorMadam,I'mastudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.Ishowgreatinterestinthenewsthatyouwantsomepart-timereporters.IthinkIam________________qualifiedforthejob.Asastudent,I‘vereadvarietiesofbooksandknowalot.Furthermore,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishanddo_______________________wellinspeaking.Besides,I'measytogetalongwithandhaveastrongsenseofcoorperation.Aboveall,Ionceattendedacourseabouttheskillsinbroadcasting.SoI'msureIcandothejobwellifIgettheposition.Iamlookingforwardtoyour___________________

replysoon.Yourssincerely,

LiHuasurely/definitelyparticularly/especiallyfavorable/earliest五种基本句型复合句：定语从句；状语从句；同位语从句等倒装句非谓语强调句it形式主语或形式宾语句型with结构...；so...that...;such...that...Refinebyenrichingsentencestructures1）Asastudent,I’vereadvarietiesofbooks.（用非谓语扩展信息)作为一个学生,我看过各种书籍，这使得我很容易去处理各种意外情况。Asastudent,I'vereadvarietiesofbooks,makingiteasyformetocopewithdifferentunexpectedsituations.2）I'measytogetalongwithandhaveastron