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HOWTOWRITESTEPBYSTEP?HOWTOWRITESTEPBYSTEP?Whywritingissodifficultforyou?Reason1.don’tknowwhattowrite.写什么Reason2.don’tknowhowtowriteit.怎么写Whywritingissodifficultfo书面表达：假设你是李华，你校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：介绍比赛的相关内容；说明你打算参加的原因；询问对方的意向。（注意：词数100左右。）书面表达：Step1发散思维，扩充内容（enrichcontents）1.介绍比赛的相关内容我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。我校，茂名市第17中学，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。Step1发散思维，扩充内容（enrichcont2说明你打算参加的原因原因1.喜欢学习英语2.想提高口语能力3.希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友对西方国家的文化感兴趣。口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。共同学习，共同进步。2说明你打算参加的原因原因1.喜欢学习英语2.想提高口语3.询问对方的意见你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。3.询问对方的意见你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多Step2翻译句子，有所舍弃(translate)很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。表达1同位语IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,myschool,thebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity,planstoholdanEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionnextFriday.同位语表达2定语从句IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,myschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity,planstoholdanEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionnextFriday.

定语从句表达3被动语态IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,anEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionwillbeheldnextFridayinmyschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulschoolinthecity.一般将来时的被动语态Step2翻译句子，有所舍弃(translate)很高兴Reason1：我想参加这个比赛是因为我喜欢英语，对西方文化感兴趣。表达1：直接翻译IwanttotakepartinthecompetitionbecauseIlikeEnglish,Iaminterestedinwesternculture.表达2：定/宾语从句ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIlikeEnglishandaminterestedinwesternculture.表达3：升级词汇ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIamfondofEnglishandcrazyaboutwesternculture.直译定、宾语从句升级词汇Reason1：我想参加这个比赛是因为我喜欢英语，对西方文Reason2：想提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。表达1：直译ThesecondreasonisthatIwanttoimprovemyoral(spoken)English,becauseitplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning.表达2：定语从句Asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIwanttoimprovemyoral(spoken)English.表达3：升级表达，Asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIlongtoimprovemyoral(spoken)Englishbymakinguseofthiscompetition.直译定语从句升级表达Reason2：想提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重Reason3：希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友，共同学习，共同进步。表达1直译Iwishtomakefriendsbasedoncommoninterestandwanttolearntogether,progresstogether.表达2定语从句Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhohascommoninterestwithmeandthenlearntogether,progresstogether.表达3升级表达Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhosehascommoninterestwithmesothatwecanlearntogetherandprogressatthesametime.升级表达定语从句直译Reason3：希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友，共同学习，共询问对方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。表达1.IknowyouarehumorousandgoodattellingstoriessoIwanttoknowwhetheryouareinterestedinthecompetitionornot.Ifyouranswerisyes,Iwillofferyoumoredetailedinformation.Iamlookingforwardforyourreply.表达2.

YourhumorsenseandtalentoftellingstoriesimpressedmesodeeplythatIstronglyrecommendyoutotakepartinthecompetition.Ifyouranswerispositive,moredetailedinformationwillbeoffered.Iamlookingforwardforyourreply.直译升级表达询问对方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你Step3连句成篇IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,anEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionwillbeheldnextFridayinmyschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity.ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIamfondofEnglishandcrazyaboutwesternculture.Asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIlongtoimprovemyoral(spoken)Englishbymakinguseofthiscompetition.Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhosehascommoninterestwithmesothatwecanlearntogetherandprogressatthesametime.YourhumorsenseandtalentoftellingstoriesimpressedmesodeeplythatIstronglyrecommendyoutotakepartinthecompetition.Ifyouranswerispositive,moredetailedinformationwillbeoffered.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Step3连句成篇IamdelightedtoStep4加入连词，使篇章连贯DearLinda,IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,anEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionwillbeheldnextFridayinmyschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity.ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIamfondofEnglishandcrazyaboutwesternculture.What’smore(inaddition/ontheonehand),as

weallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIlongtoimprovemyoral(spoken)Englishbymakinguseofthiscompetition.Lastbutnotleast(ontheotherhand),Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhosehascommoninterestwithmesothatwecanlearntogetherandprogressatthesametime.YourhumorsenseandtalentoftellingstoriesimpressedmesodeeplythatIstronglyrecommendyoutotakepartinthecompetition.Ifyouranswerispositive,moredetailedinformationwillbeoffered.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.SincerelyyoursLiHuaStep4加入连词，使篇章连贯DearLinda,Homework模仿写作：假设你是张磊，你校拟定于下周六举行一次志愿者活动，去敬老院（gerocomium）看望老人。请你给目前在本市就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：介绍活动的相关内容；说明你打算参加的原因；询问对方的意向。（注意：词数100左右。）Homework模仿写作：ThanksforyourattentionThanksforyourattentionHOWTOWRITESTEPBYSTEP?HOWTOWRITESTEPBYSTEP?Whywritingissodifficultforyou?Reason1.don’tknowwhattowrite.写什么Reason2.don’tknowhowtowriteit.怎么写Whywritingissodifficultfo书面表达：假设你是李华，你校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：介绍比赛的相关内容；说明你打算参加的原因；询问对方的意向。（注意：词数100左右。）书面表达：Step1发散思维，扩充内容（enrichcontents）1.介绍比赛的相关内容我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。我校，茂名市第17中学，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。Step1发散思维，扩充内容（enrichcont2说明你打算参加的原因原因1.喜欢学习英语2.想提高口语能力3.希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友对西方国家的文化感兴趣。口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。共同学习，共同进步。2说明你打算参加的原因原因1.喜欢学习英语2.想提高口语3.询问对方的意见你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。3.询问对方的意见你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多Step2翻译句子，有所舍弃(translate)很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。表达1同位语IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,myschool,thebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity,planstoholdanEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionnextFriday.同位语表达2定语从句IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,myschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity,planstoholdanEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionnextFriday.

定语从句表达3被动语态IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,anEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionwillbeheldnextFridayinmyschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulschoolinthecity.一般将来时的被动语态Step2翻译句子，有所舍弃(translate)很高兴Reason1：我想参加这个比赛是因为我喜欢英语，对西方文化感兴趣。表达1：直接翻译IwanttotakepartinthecompetitionbecauseIlikeEnglish,Iaminterestedinwesternculture.表达2：定/宾语从句ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIlikeEnglishandaminterestedinwesternculture.表达3：升级词汇ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIamfondofEnglishandcrazyaboutwesternculture.直译定、宾语从句升级词汇Reason1：我想参加这个比赛是因为我喜欢英语，对西方文Reason2：想提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。表达1：直译ThesecondreasonisthatIwanttoimprovemyoral(spoken)English,becauseitplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning.表达2：定语从句Asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIwanttoimprovemyoral(spoken)English.表达3：升级表达，Asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIlongtoimprovemyoral(spoken)Englishbymakinguseofthiscompetition.直译定语从句升级表达Reason2：想提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重Reason3：希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友，共同学习，共同进步。表达1直译Iwishtomakefriendsbasedoncommoninterestandwanttolearntogether,progresstogether.表达2定语从句Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhohascommoninterestwithmeandthenlearntogether,progresstogether.表达3升级表达Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhosehascommoninterestwithmesothatwecanlearntogetherandprogressatthesametime.升级表达定语从句直译Reason3：希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友，共同学习，共询问对方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。表达1.IknowyouarehumorousandgoodattellingstoriessoIwanttoknowwhetheryouareinterestedinthecompetitionornot.Ifyouranswerisyes,Iwillofferyoumoredetailedinformation.Iamlookingforwardforyourreply.表达2.

YourhumorsenseandtalentoftellingstoriesimpressedmesodeeplythatIstronglyrecommendyoutotakepartinthecompetition.Ifyouranswerispositive,moredetailedinformationwillbeoffered.Iamlookingforwardforyourreply.直译升级表达询问对方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你Step3连句成篇IamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinterestoflearningEnglish,anEnglishhumorousstorycompetitionwillbeheldnextFridayinmyschool,whichisthebestandthemostbeautifulinthecity.ThereasonwhythecompetitionattractsmyattentionisthatIamfondofEnglishandcrazyaboutwesternculture.Asweallknow,oral(spoken)Englishplaysanimportantroleinlanguagelearning,soIlongtoimprovemyoral(spoken)Englishbymakinguseofthiscompetition.Iwishtomakefriendswiththosewhosehascommoninterestwithmesothatwecanlearntogetherandprogressatthesametime.YourhumorsenseandtalentoftellingstoriesimpressedmesodeeplythatIstronglyrecommendyoutotakepartinthecompetition.Ifyouranswerispositive,moredetailedinformationwillbeoffered.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Step3连句成篇IamdelightedtoStep4加入连词，使篇章连贯DearLinda,Iamdelightedtotellyouthatinordertoincreaseourinter