读后续写练习写作指导 讲义-2023届高三英语复习写作专项

读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Inhighschool,Iwasastraight-Astudent,amemberofmanyschoolclubs,andareceiverofmanyrewards.However,Ihadbeensubjectedto（受至U折磨）peerpressure.Wantingtobe"cool",Istartedgoingtopartiesanddrinking,drunkbeyondrecognition.Mylifetookaturnfortheworse.However,theexperienceinonesummerprogramtaughtmealesson:neverdosomethingyoubelieveiswrongjusttogainthepprovalofothers.InJune,Iworkedpart-timeatarestaurant.ThedaybeforeIleftfortheprogram,oneco-workerofferedmehisdriver'slicense,tellingmetohavefuninQuebecsincewetwoalmostlookedthesame.I'dseenfriendswalkintoliquor（酒）storeswithfakelicensesandcomeoutcarryingatwelve-packofbeer,smilingproudly.SoItookthelicense,butIpromisedmyselfthatIwouldn'tuseit.However,Ieasilygotcarriedaway.Onthefirstnightoftheprogram,whilewalkingaround,mynewfriendsandIcameacrossaliquorstore.Kaiaskedifanyonehadafakelicense.Aftereveryoneshookhishead,Iclearedmythroatanddeclared,"Ido.〃Witheveryone'sadmirationandKai'stwentydollarsandinstruction,Iboldlyagreedtotakeonthetaskwithoutthinking.Imanagedtobuyacaseofbeer.Theboyscheeredandgavemepatsontheback."YoiTretheman,"someonesaidtome.Thepraiseboostedmyself-confidence.helastnighttherewasaparty.Afewofmyfriendsinsistedthatwedrinkbeforethedance.Theyaskedme,the“IDman,"tobuyalcohol.Toearntheiradmiration,Itookthecashandboughtwhattheywanted.Laterthatnight,IwasenjoyingmyselfwhenKaisaidnervously,“Cristianisn'tokay."Worriedformyfriend,Iwenttoassessthesituation.Clearly,Cristianwasoverlydrunkandalmostunconscious（不省人事的）.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1:Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.Paragraph2:Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.写作解析■上文分析•人物：I:wasastraight-Astudenthadbeensubjectedtopeerpressurewantingtobe"cool”,Istartedgoingtopartiesanddrinking,drunkbeyondrecognitionmylifetookaturnfortheworseco-worker:inarestaurantofmypart-timejobofferedmehisdriver'slicenseKai:oneofmyfriendsinasummerprogramCristian:oneofmyfriendsinasummerprogramdrunkandevenalmostunconscious时间地点：onesummerprogram主题：人与自我，对自我的反思改进•主要情节：在高中期间，我是个全A生。后来因为同伴的压力，为了想表现的“酷〃一点，我开始参加各种party和酗酒，甚至于醉成"烂泥〃，我的生活开始“急转直下〃。然而，一次参加暑假活动的经历让我明白了一个道理：千万别为了得到所谓的别人的“赞同〃而做自己认为是错的违心的事情。具体故事是：打零工的同事给了我他的驾照，告诉我可以用驾照去"找乐子〃，因为我跟他长的很像。我一直提醒自己不会用这本驾照，但是我却是一个很容易被说服的人。后来，我去参加了一个暑期的活动，第一天晚上，在活动过程中，我们发现路边有个卖酒的店，于是Kai出钱，我用餐馆同事的驾照去买了一箱啤酒回去。大家纷纷为我点赞，这让我的“自信心〃膨胀。在活动最后一晚，有个聚会，大家提议，跳舞前先喝点酒。当我们都沉静在快乐之中的时候，Kai忐忑不安地跟我说"Cristian身体不适〃，我过去一看，发现Cristian醉的一塌糊涂，有点不省人0••••••■下文情节安排•两段开头：〉段1:Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground....〉段2:Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector/soffice....•两段情节安排：〉段1：①现场的情况，特别是Cristian的状况②我采取的措施（心理表现+如何安排抢救等）③幸运的是，经医生抢救Cristian并无大碍＞段2：①在director面前承认了事实②接受惩罚，反思自己的行为③吸取教训范文1aragraph1:Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.Myfriendsaskedmewhattodonext.Isensedsomethingworsewashappening.Surely,Cristianranktoomuchbeer,whichbroughthimtothisdangerousstage.Myself-confidenceandresponsibilityforcedmetoassigntaskstopeoplepresent,Kaicallingtheambulance,othersprovidingthefirstaidorsomethingelse.Fortunately,therewasnodangertoCristianbecauseofourimmediateactionandthemedicalmeasuresdoctorstook.Butthehappynightturnedouttobeasadone.(80words)Paragraph2:Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector/soffice.Infrontofthedirector,Iloweredmyhead,admittingthefactthattoearntheadmirationfrommyfriendsintheprogram,Iboughtandsharedwhattheywantedusingthefakedriver'slicense.IknewitwasmyfaultthatmightbringtragedytoCristian.Thepunishmentwascertain,whichletmeknowcleareraboutmyself.Thelessondeservedtoberememberedallmylife:neverdosomethingagainstyourmoraltogainothers1approval,especiallywhenpeerpressurecame.(82words)范文2Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.Seeinghispaleface,Istiffened,totallynotknowingwhattodo.Luckily,someonecalled911andCristianwaspulledintotheambulance,andIsawhisunconsciousfacedroopingoverthewhitesheet.IhadneverseenasituationlikethisbeforeandIwasguilty,notonlyforbuyingthebeerbutalsofortherisksIputhimat.LaterIwastoldCristian'sconditionwasserious,butfortunatelyhedidn'tsufferanypermanentdamage.Thewholenightfoundmetossingandturning,worryingaboutthemessIhadcaused.(93words)Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.HeaskedifIboughtthealcohol.Iknewthattherewasnopointindenyingthetruth.SoIadmittedeverythingthathappened.Likeacaughtcriminal,Iwasovercomewithshame.MypunishmentwasmuchlessthanwhatIdeserved:Iwasmerelyexpelledfromtheprogram.Backhome,Ishre