优选Fragments不完整句讲解课件

优选Fragments不完整句讲解ppt优选Fragments不完整句讲解ppt

Everysentencemusthaveasubjectandaverbandmustexpressacompletethought.Awordgroupthatlacksasubjectoraverbanddoesnotexpressacompletethoughtisafragment.Followingarethemostcommontypesoffragmentsthatpeoplewrite.FragmentEverysentencemusthavDependent-wordfragments

从属词不完整句-ingandtofragments

现在分词和不定式不完整句Added-detailfragments

附加细节不完整句Missing-subjectfragments

主语缺位不完整句FragmentDependent-wordfragmentsFragmeDependent-wordfragmentsSomewordgroupsthatbeginwithadependentwordarefragments.Followingisalistofcommondependentwords.Dependent-wordfragmentsSomew从属词:after/although/though/as/because/before/eventhough/how/if/evenif/inorderthat/since/that/sothat/unless/until/what/whatever/when/whenever/where/wherever/whether/which/whichever/while/who/whoseDependentWords从属词:DependentWordsDependent-wordfragmentsExamples:AfterIcashedmypaycheck.Itreatedmyselftodinner.AfterIcashedmypaycheck,Itreatedmyselftodinner.Iwon’tleavethehouse.UntilIhearfromyou.Iwon’tleavethehouseuntilIhearfromyou.Dependent-wordfragmentsExamplHowtocorrect?1.Attachingittothesentencethatcomesafteritorthesentencethatcomesbeforeit:

Iwon’tleavethehouseuntilIhearfromyou.(Thisfragmenthasbeenattachedtothesentencethatcomesbeforeit.)2.Simplytoeliminatethedependentwordbyrewritingthesentence:

Icashedmypaycheckandthentreatedmyselftodinner.Iwillwaittohearfromyou.Howtocorrect?1.Attachingit-ingandtofragmentsWhenan–ingwordappearsatornearthestartofawordgroup,afragmentmayresult.Suchfragmentsoftenlackasubjectandpartoftheverb.-ingandtofragmentsWhenan–Examples:1.Ellenwalkedallovertheneighborhoodyesterday.TryingtofindherdogBo.

EllenwalkedallovertheneighborhoodyesterdaytryingtofindherdogBo.2.Wesatbacktowatchthemovie.Notexpectinganythingspecial.

Wesatbacktowatchthemovie.Wedidn’texpectanythingspecial.-ingandtofragmentsExamples:-ingandtofragmentsHowtocorrect–ingfragments?1.Attachthefragmenttothesentencethatcomesbeforeitorthesentencethatcomesafterit,whichevermakessense.2.Addasubjectandchangethe–ingverbparttothecorrectformoftheverb.3.Changebeingtothecorrectformoftheverbbe(am,is,are,was,were)Howtocorrect–ingfragments-ingandtofragments现在分词结构位于主句之后,前面需加逗号的通常有两种情况:1.现在分词及其短语作非限制性定语,表示对先行词的进一步解释与说明Hewasagreatrealist,writingaboutordinarymenandwomenintheirmisfortunes.2.现在分词结构做表示伴随或结果的状语.Hesatinthearmchair，readinganewspaper.Herhusbanddiedtenyearsago，leavingherwiththreechildrentolookafter.注:表目的的现在分词放主句之后时前面不用逗号.-ingandtofragments现在分词结构位于主Howtocorrecttofragments?1.Whentoappearsatornearthestartofawordgroup,afragmentsometimesresults:

e.g.AttheChineserestaurant,Timusedchopsticks.Toimpresshisdate.Hespentonehoureatingasmallbowlofrice.2.Thesecondwordgroupisafragmentandcanbecorrectedbyaddingittotheprecedingsentence:

e.g.AttheChineserestaurant,Timusedchopstickstoimpresshisdate.

Howtocorrecttofragments?1.Added-detailfragmentsAdded-detailfragmentslackasubjectandaverb.Theyoftenbeginwithoneofthefollowingwords:also/especially/except/forexamplelike/including/suchasAdded-detailfragmentsAdded-deAdded-detailfragmentsExamples:1.Beforearace,Ieatstarchyfoods.Suchasbreadandspaghetti.Thecarbohydratesprovidequickenergy.Beforearace,Ieatstarchyfoodssuchasbreadand....2.Bobistakinganightcourseinautomechanics.Also,oneinplumbing.Hewantstosavemoney.…Also,heistakingoneinplumbing….Added-detailfragmentsExamplesHowtocorrect?1.Attachthefragmenttothecompletethoughtthatprecedesit.2.Addasubjectandaverbtothefragmenttomakeitacompletesentence.3.Insertthefragmentwithintheprecedingsentence.Howtocorrect?1.AttachtheMissing-subjectfragmentsExamples:1.Alicialovedgettingweddingpresents.Buthatedwritingthank-younotes.

Alicialovedgettingweddingpresentsbuthatedwritingthank-younotes.2.Mickeyhasorangesodaandpotatochipsforbreakfast.Theneatsmorejunkfood,likerootbeerandcookies,forlunch.

……Thenheeatsmorejunkfood,like….Missing-subjectfragmentsExampHowtocorrect?1.Attachthefragmenttotheprecedingsentence2.Addasubject(whichcanoftenbeapronounstandingforthesubjectintheprecedingsentence)Howtocorrect?1.Attachthe优选Fragments不完整句讲解ppt优选Fragments不完整句讲解ppt

Everysentencemusthaveasubjectandaverbandmustexpressacompletethought.Awordgroupthatlacksasubjectoraverbanddoesnotexpressacompletethoughtisafragment.Followingarethemostcommontypesoffragmentsthatpeoplewrite.FragmentEverysentencemusthavDependent-wordfragments

从属词不完整句-ingandtofragments

现在分词和不定式不完整句Added-detailfragments

附加细节不完整句Missing-subjectfragments

主语缺位不完整句FragmentDependent-wordfragmentsFragmeDependent-wordfragmentsSomewordgroupsthatbeginwithadependentwordarefragments.Followingisalistofcommondependentwords.Dependent-wordfragmentsSomew从属词:after/although/though/as/because/before/eventhough/how/if/evenif/inorderthat/since/that/sothat/unless/until/what/whatever/when/whenever/where/wherever/whether/which/whichever/while/who/whoseDependentWords从属词:DependentWordsDependent-wordfragmentsExamples:AfterIcashedmypaycheck.Itreatedmyselftodinner.AfterIcashedmypaycheck,Itreatedmyselftodinner.Iwon’tleavethehouse.UntilIhearfromyou.Iwon’tleavethehouseuntilIhearfromyou.Dependent-wordfragmentsExamplHowtocorrect?1.Attachingittothesentencethatcomesafteritorthesentencethatcomesbeforeit:

Iwon’tleavethehouseuntilIhearfromyou.(Thisfragmenthasbeenattachedtothesentencethatcomesbeforeit.)2.Simplytoeliminatethedependentwordbyrewritingthesentence:

Icashedmypaycheckandthentreatedmyselftodinner.Iwillwaittohearfromyou.Howtocorrect?1.Attachingit-ingandtofragmentsWhenan–ingwordappearsatornearthestartofawordgroup,afragmentmayresult.Suchfragmentsoftenlackasubjectandpartoftheverb.-ingandtofragmentsWhenan–Examples:1.Ellenwalkedallovertheneighborhoodyesterday.TryingtofindherdogBo.

EllenwalkedallovertheneighborhoodyesterdaytryingtofindherdogBo.2.Wesatbacktowatchthemovie.Notexpectinganythingspecial.

Wesatbacktowatchthemovie.Wedidn’texpectanythingspecial.-ingandtofragmentsExamples:-ingandtofragmentsHowtocorrect–ingfragments?1.Attachthefragmenttothesentencethatcomesbeforeitorthesentencethatcomesafterit,whichevermakessense.2.Addasubjectandchangethe–ingverbparttothecorrectformoftheverb.3.Changebeingtothecorrectformoftheverbbe(am,is,are,was,were)Howtocorrect–ingfragments-ingandtofragments现在分词结构位于主句之后,前面需加逗号的通常有两种情况:1.现在分词及其短语作非限制性定语,表示对先行词的进一步解释与说明Hewasagreatrealist,writingaboutordinarymenandwomenintheirmisfortunes.2.现在分词结构做表示伴随或结果的状语.Hesatinthearmchair，readinganewspaper.Herhusbanddiedtenyearsago，leavingherwiththreechildrentolookafter.注:表目的的现在分词放主句之后时前面不用逗号.-ingandtofragments现在分词结构位于主Howtocorrecttofragments?1.Whentoappearsatornearthestartofawordgroup,afragmentsometimesresults:

e.g.AttheChineserestaurant,Timusedchopsticks.Toimpresshisdate.Hespentonehoureatingasmallbowlofrice.2.Thesecondwordgroupisafragmentandcanbecorrectedbyaddingittotheprecedingsentence:

e.g.AttheChineserestaurant,Timusedchopstickstoimpresshisdate.

Howtocorrecttofragments?1.Added-detailfragmentsAdded-detailfragmentslackasubjectandaverb.Theyoftenbeginwithoneofthefollowingwords:also/especially/except/forexamplelike/including/suchasAdded-detailfragmentsAdded-deAdded-detailfragmentsExamples:1.Beforearace,Ieatstarchyfoods.Suchasbreadandspaghetti.Thecarbohydratesprovidequickenergy.Beforearace,Ieatstarchyfoodssuchasbreadand....2.Bobistakinganightcour