最新高中英语短文改错专题练习及解析

7高中英语短文改错专项练习及解析〔时间：60分钟,总分值：100分〕短文改错〔共10小题；每题10分，总分值100分〕假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号〔∧〕,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处,多者〔从第11处起〕不计分。〔一〕Howtimeflies!AweekhavepassedbeforeInoticedit.Lookingbackonthethingsthathappeninglastweek,Ifoundthelifeherefullwithhappinessandinterests.Icanstillrememberthefirstdayofthesummercamp.Icametomybedroombymyself.WhenIopenedadoor,Isawagirlwithshorthairseatinginachairwithabookinherhand.Shemustbeaquietgirlwholikedreading,Ithoughtmyselfatthetime.Afterwesaidhellotoeachother,othergirlcameinwithabignoise.HernamewasRose.ShewassooutgoingandhumorthatbothCherryandIcouldn’thelplaughingatherwords.Thenwehadstudiedandhadmealstogether,andbecamegoodfriends.Ican’tforgetthedaywhenwespenttogethernomatterwhereweareinthefuture.〔二〕DearLiHua,Iamgladtoreceiveyourletter.Icanunderstandhowsadyouareastheyhavetotransfertootherschool.Buteverythingwillbefinewhenyouadapttoyournewsurrounding.Inyourletter,youaskedmeaboutmyfirstschool.Inmymemory,myfirstschoolwasverylargewitheachclassroombeautifuldecorated.Therewasabigsquareliesinthecenteroftheschoolyard.AndIcouldhavegoodviewofthesquarefrommyclassroomwindows.MyfavoriteteacherwasmyEnglishteacherwhichwaspatientwithme.Besides,IhadmetmybestfriendPeterintheschool,towhomIstillkeepintoucheventhoughweareindifferentschoolsnow.Ihopeyouwillmakenewfriendsbutenjoyyourtimeinthenewschool.〔三〕Inacoupleofweek,wewillsaygoodbyetoourschool.Howthetimeflies!IwillneverforgetthepastthreeyearsthatIhaveenjoyedawonderfullyjourneywithallofmyteachersandclassmates.Tomakethejourneyfruitful,ourteachersdevotedhistimeandenergytous.Thankssomuchtoyourhelpandguidance,mydearteachers!Ireallyappreciatedit.Beforelong,we'llstartanewjourney,andtheremaybealotofdifficultiesindoeverythinginthefuture.Iknowtherearenoendtothethingsthatwecanaccomplish,andtomorrowisthebeginningofthehardestpartofourlife.Mayyouhappyandsuccessfulallthetimeinyournewlife!〔四〕Mygrandparentsliveinthecountryside.TheykeepadogcallingAhBao.Onedaymygrandparentsgotoworkinthefields,takingalongmylittlebrotherandAhBao.MybrotherandAhBaocametoarivernearbyandenjoyedhimself.Mybrotherwastryingtocatchabutterflywhilehefellintoariver.AhBaobarkedandimmediatejumpedintothewater.Hearingabouthimbarking,mygrandparentshurriedthereandsawAhBaoswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmybrother.AhBaodidallhecouldsavemylittlebrother,thatmovedallthepeoplepresent.EveryonepraisedAhBaoforhisbraveandkindness.〔五〕LastFriday,1wasstandingnearasubwayexit,triedtocallataxi.Butnoluck.ThenIthoughtofthetaxi-bookingappmyfriendhasrecommendedandIbookedataxithroughmycell-phone.Soonitcame,andlsteppedin,feelingprettyproudlyofmyhigh-techwayandsatisfiedwiththeconveniencebroughtbytheapp.Solater,1wasupsettofindthatthedriverwasbusylookinghiscell-phonetogetthenextorder.ItwasjustthenwhenIbegantoworryaboutmysafety.What’sbad,thedriver’sinformationsmightbeunreliable.Howcanwepassengers'legalrightsbeprotectingifsomethingbadhappens?Sobecarefulwhenyouusethetaxi-bookingappthenexttime.〔六〕DearMr.Green,I’mveryexcitingtolearnthatyouwillstartamagazinetogether.ThatsoundsgreatandIdefinitelyagreeyouonthat.Someofthecolumnsyoumentionintheletterarereallymycupoftea.“CulturalExpress〞giveusabetterunderstandingoftheworld.Sincepeoplefromdifferentpartoftheworldhavedifferentvalues,it’snecessarytolearnfromeachanother.Besides,itisprettygoodforChinesestudentstolearnEnglishidiomsandimprovingoralEnglish.“Entertainment〞isalsocool!Thepopularsingers,actorsorcelebritiesaresoattractivelythatyouabsolutelycan’tmissthispart.Teenagersaretofondofpopularthings,too.Well,Ireallycan’twaittoreadthismagazine.Yours,LiMing〔七〕Oneofthemostimportantruleoffindinghappinessinlifeistodowhatyoulove.IrememberwhenmymomtakesmetoanEnglishclassinprimaryschool,IsuddenlyfoundthatlearnEnglishwasfunandIreallyenjoyedit.Thevoiceatthebottomofmyheartsaid,“MaybeIcanlearnEnglishwellandbecomeEnglishteacher.〞Itwasnoteasyatfirst.Foralmostoneandahalfyear,Ididn’tdoverywellinallmyEnglishexams.Disappointingandfrustrated,IdoubtedthatwhetherIcouldfollowmydream.ButItoldmenottoacceptthisreality.Gradual,mygradesstartedtoimproveandIhadmuchconfidencethanbefore.〔八〕LastweekendIvisitedmybestfriendinLondon,whichwassupposedtobeexcited.Melina,whomIhavenotseenforthreeyears,offeredtotakemeonasightingtourbycar.Unfortunate,sheendedupdoingeverythingbutthat!First,sheshowedmearoundthebuildingwhereshehadgottenherfirstjob.Thenshedrovemetothecaféwhereshehadmetfirstboyfriend.BeforeIcouldsayeverything,shesmiledatmeandsaidshewantedtotakemetoanotherplacewherewasspecialtoher.Iwasverydisappointedwhenwegotontheplacewhereshehadboughthercar!Besides,shekepttalkaboutherselfalldaylong!Iwasfedupwithit,butIcouldn’tmakehertostop.Whenshefinallydecidestocallitaday,sheturnedaroundandfoundmeasleep!〔九〕Adiscussionabouthikinghadbeenheldinourclass.Somestudentsthinkthathikingduringvacationscanmakepeoplefeelhealthier,fresherormoreharmoniouswiththenature.Theyfindthemselvesdeepattractedbythebeautyofnature.Theycanalsoberelaxingbywalkingindeepmountains.Butnowadayssomehikersevenbegintoexploretheplacespeoplehaveeverbeento,andaccidentshavehappenednowandthenbecausepoorknowledgeofhiking.Somehikersevenlosttheirlife.Theotherstudentsinourclassthinknotsafetoorganizesuchdangerousactivities.Theymakesuggestionswhichlawsshouldbepassedandhikersshouldbetrainedbeforetheyattendtheactivities.〔十〕KeepingadiaryinEnglishistheeffectivewaytoimproveourEnglishwritingability.First,ittakeslittletimetofinishadiarythanotherwritings.BykeepingEnglishdiaries,wecaneasyformthehabitofthinkingaboutinEnglish.Second,wecanpracticeuseEnglishidiomsandusefulstructuresinourdiary-writing.Ifwehavedifficultyfindingsuitablewordsorphrasestoexpressouropinion,wecanturninEnglishdictionariesorteacherforhelp.Thisisalsoakindoflearning.Ifwecankeepondoingthis,wewouldgraduallylearnhowexpressourselvesinEnglishfreely.Inaword,itwasofgreatbenefittokeepdiariesinEnglish.短文改错专题参考答案及解析〔一〕1.have改为has，主语是aweek故用has.2.happening改为happened，时间状语是lastweek，用一般过去时。3.with改为of，或者full改为filled.固定短语：befullof或者befilledwith充满。4.door前的a改为the，当我翻开门时，此处door表示特指，用定冠词。5.seating→seated/sitting考察后置定语.相当于定语从句whowasseated或者whosat。故省略关系词变成seated/sitting。6.thought后加to，thinktooneself自言自语。7.第二个other改为another，此处指另外一个女孩，用another.8.humor改为humorous.outgoingandhumorous并列，做表语，用形容词。9.去掉we后的had句意：然后我们一起学习一起吃饭。根据上下文，这里是一般过去时，故去掉we后的had。10.when→that/which或去掉when此题考查定语从句。句意：如论我们将来在哪，我都忘不了我们一起度过的日子。定语从句wespenttogether需要关系代词that/which做宾语，或者省略，修饰先行词theday，故when→that/which或去掉when。〔二〕1.they→you考查代词。句意：我能理解你多么难过因为你不得不转到另外一所学校。此处根据前后句意可知，是指你，不是他们，故用you。2.other→another考查代词。other后接可数名词的话，要用复数，此处意为转到另外一所学校，another表示“另外一个〞，接单数，符合句子结构。3.surrounding→surroundings考查名词。此处应用名词，因为前面有new这个形容词来修饰，而surrounding是形容词，surroundings是名词，意为“周围的事物〞。4.beautiful→beautifully考查副词。此处为副词，修饰动词decorated，表示“装饰地很漂亮〞。5.lies→lying考查非谓语动词。此处是一个therebe句型，已经有了谓语，故再出现动词只能用非谓语，广场位于校园的中央，为主动关系，故用lying。6.good前面加a考查冠词。此处为固定表达：haveagoodviewof，意为“清楚的看到……〞。7.which→who考查连词。此处为定语从句，先行词是myteacher，是人，故用关系代词who，在从句中作主语。8.删除had考查时态。此处是指之前在学校遇见了好朋友，用过去式，而不用过去完成时。9.to→with考查介词。此处为固定用法：keepintouchwithsb“和某人保持联系〞，故用with。10.but→and考查连词。句意：我希望你交到新朋友并在新学校过得快乐。此处根据句意可知，前后句之间是承接关系而非转折，故用and。〔三〕1.week改成weeks.名词错误.句中有several修饰，要用复数.2.the去掉.冠词错误.句中time表示抽象的时间，不是特指，不用冠词.3.that改成when.连词错误.句中Ihaveenjoyedawonderfullyjourneywithallofmyteachersandclassmates是修饰years的一个定语从句，从句结构完整，且先行词是时间，要用when来引导.4.wonderfully改成wonderful.形容词错误.句中是修饰名词journey，要用形容词来修饰.5.his改成their.代词错误.句意指代的是复数名词teachers，要用their来指代.6.to改成for.介词错误.thanksfor为某事表达感谢.7.appreciated改成appreciate.时态错误.句意表达的是客观事实，要用一般现在时态.8.do改成doing.动词错误.句中do位于介词in后，作介词的宾语，要用动名词.9.are改成is.动词错误.句中noend是抽象名词，谓语动词要用单数.10.Mayyou后加be.句型搭配错误.maysb+动词原形，表示祝福某人怎样.短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法根底知识.常考的知识点有：名词〔单复数错误〕，动词〔时态，语态，搭配，转换〕，代词〔指代错误〕，形容词和副词〔转换，比拟等级〕，连词〔and，but，or〕等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等.解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心.看句子要看完整，防止句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一局部.〔四〕1.calling→called根据dog是call的动作承受者，应用过去分词作定语。故calling→called。2.go→went根据上下文语境，应用过去时。故go→went。3.himself→themselves根据该句的主语mybrotherandABao判断反身代词应用themselves。故himself→themselves。4.while→when根据从句的谓语动词fell判断应用when，因为while在……期间，引导的是时间状语从句的谓语动词只能是延续性的动词，fell为非延续性的动词。故while→when。5.immediate→immediately根据动词jump应用副词修饰。故immediate→immediately。6.the→a根据river在前文已经提到，应用定冠词，故have→be。7.hearing后的about去掉根据hearsbdoing听到某人正在做某事。故hearing后的about去掉。8.could后加to根据could后的动词do与主句的谓语动词一样，省。tosave不定式作目的状语。故could后加to。9.that→which根据which代替主句一句话的内容，引导非限制性定语从句。故that→which。10.brave→bravery根据his后应加名词形式，与and后的kindness并列。故brave→bravery。〔五〕1.tried-trying考察主动形式。文意是上周五，我在地铁口，想叫一辆出租车。2.has-had考察时态。我的朋友推荐的app是过去的过去，所以要用udly-proud考察形容词。文意是我为自己的高智商感到骄傲。4.so-but/yet考察连词。文意是不久之后，我有点沮丧。5.looking后加at考察介词。Lookat是固定搭配。6.when-that考察引导词。Itwasthat是固定搭配。7.bad-worse考察形容词比拟级。文意是更糟糕的是。8.informations-information考察名词。information是不可数名词。9.protecting-protected考察被动语态。文意是乘客的合法权益如何得到保护。10.去掉the考察冠词。nexttime表示下次，不需用the。〔六〕1.exciting改为excited考察形容词。我很快乐听说你要开办一个杂志。excited修饰人，而exciting那么用来修饰物。2.on改为with考察介词。Agreewith是固定搭配，表示“同意〞。这个主意听起来不错，并且我完全赞同。3.mention改为mentioned考察动词。文意是你在信中提到的，显然是过去式，所以动词要用过去时态mentioned。4.give改为gives考察动词。文意是“CulturalExpress〞能够让我们更好的了解世界文化。此句讲述了一个事实，用一般现在时态即可。75.part改为parts考察名词。不同的人来自不同的地方有着不同的价值观。世界不同的地方，所以part要用复数形式。6.another改为other考察代词。Eachother是固定搭配，表示“互相〞的意思。相互之间学习时必须的。7.improving改为improve考察名词。对于中国学生来说学习英语习语和练习英语口语来说是相当不错的。And前后是并列的两个句子，动词形式应保持一致。8.or改为and考察连词。流行歌手、演员及名人是很吸引人的。流行歌手、演员及名人是并列关系，所以要用and。9.attractively改为attractive考察形容词。attractive用来修饰名词流行歌手、演员及名人的，而attractively是用来修饰动词的。10.去掉to考察考察不定式。Befoundof是固定搭配，表示“喜爱〞，青少年也很喜欢流行的d东西。〔七〕1.oneof后面接名词复数。故rule改成rules。2.根据意义可知，这里应用一般过去时。故takes改成took。3.found后面是宾语从句，宾语从句用动名词作主语。故learn改成learning。4.泛指“一位老师〞用不定冠词，English是元音音素开头的单词，用an，或者将become改成turn，因为turn后面接名词不需要冠词。故become后面加an或become改成turn。5.oneandahalf后面接名词复数。故year改成years。6.这里作状语说明主语的状态，主语是I用过去分词的形容词。故Disappointing改成Disappointed。7.doubted后面接whether引导的宾语从句，that是多余的。故去掉that。8.我告诉自己不要接受现实。故me改成myself。9.修饰整个句子用副词。故Gradual改成Gradually。10.confidence是不可数名词，根据后面的“thanbefore〞可知，这里应用比拟级，故much改成more。〔八〕1.excited改为exciting，主语是一件事，用doing的形式。2.have改为had，表示过去的过去，用过去完成时。3.Unfortunate改为Unfortun