21 发言稿读后续写概要写作-2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练(通用版)

1、2020-2021 学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版） 发言稿读后续写+要写作假设你叫李华，是一名高一学生。为了帮助同学们尽快适应新的校园生活，在英口语课上，老师让同 学们分享交友经验。请你写一篇英语发言稿分享你的交友经验。注意： 词数 100 右； 开和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Im m glad to share with my ideas on how to friends. That Thank you!【答案】Dear Im m glad to share with my ideas on how to friends.The greatest gift of life

2、 is friendship and all us need friends out when run into trouble. How canyou friends? Here are some tips for you. First of be friendly to others so d like to make friends you.Second, it is a join a club it possible for find someone who same but not you should be active in others know about you.If yo

3、u follow my advice, I sure you will make friends soon.That Thank you!Li 【分析】本篇书面表达属于发言稿。为了帮助同学们尽快适应新的校园生活，在英语口语课上，老师让学们分享 交友经验。要求写一篇英语发言稿分享交友经验。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求： 介绍友谊的重要性； 提供几点交友建议。第二步：列提纲（重点词组） make friends; help us out; friendly join a sa

4、me follow advice第三步：连词成句1. m glad share you my ideas to make friends. greatest gift of life and all us to help us out run into First all, friendly to s so d like to make friends with you. Second, it a join a club it possible for find someone who same not you should be active in that others can more

5、about you.6. If you follow advice, I sure will make more friends 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表文章结构顺序First of all, Second, Last but not least连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型 Second, it a join a club it possible for find someone who same运了 it作形式主语，where 和 引导的定语从句)高分句型 not y

6、ou be active in others can more about 运了 so that引导的状语从句高分句型 If you follow advice, m you will make friends 运 if 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。引导的条件状语从句Ali and sister, Zahra, with their parents neighborhood. Their was very father was to find and they had only money with buy As they paid rent for sever

7、al months, the landlord was necks(着他).One day, Ali took Zahras shoes to a shoe repairman fixed, but he lost them on way home. It wasn untilhe got home that realized he shoes. afraid that his parents would be angry and he his sister to secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Alis running sh

8、oes Zahras schoolhours were in the so she wear them first. After give them Ali. He then his which began Although he ran as fast as could, Ali late was by Ali about a long that for boys in the city. he learned prizewas of shoes, he to take part. home win the shoes. his sister he wouldThe arrived. Ali

9、 had a strong but halfway the race tired and legsbegan to ache. Getting and more he thought Zahra his promise of he would win for his sister third. as finish line runner collided(撞) with Ali 注意： 所续写短文的词数应为 左右； 应使用 以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 1:Ali up and other rush

10、ing ahead. _Paragraph 2:Filled with Ali walked _【答案】 1:Ali looked and saw the boys rushing ahead. Refusing up at his ran as fast he dashed across finishing the fourth Thinking he would let Ali couldn sobbing. Just suddenly heard the announcement the broadcast that he won the prize collided with Ali

11、was for rule. Holding the close his the ceremony, Ali felt and he won the shoes for 2:Filled Ali quickly.He could not wait to his sister and arrival, Ali found waiting outside. Nervous and Zahra her broughther she expecting. “Zahra, I have got for ” Ali excitedly, taking the prize of his bagwith han

12、ds. The Zahra the lit So thrilled was she she threw Ali. you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled in their eyes the brother and the sister hugged tightly together.【分析】本文为续写作文。首先要认真读懂给作提供的材料，弄清整篇文章的中心是什么。根据中心，续事情的发展和故事的结局。想象要符合原文的发展，人物和事物要与原文保持连续性和一致性。要有确的中心， 重点突出，有详有略。故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。【详解】前文主要讲述的是阿里家境贫穷，一天阿里给

13、妹妹修鞋的路上，把妹妹的鞋弄丢了，他准备通参加学校的长跑比赛，获得三等奖的奖品一双鞋子，给妹妹作补偿，但在终点的时候发生一点意外在给的第一段开头中Ali up and saw the other boys 阿里抬头一看，看到其他男孩冲在前，可知本段是续写比赛中阿里被撞后是如何做的段是文章的关键段是以 Filled with delight, Ali walkedhome quickly.(Filled with delight, Ali walked 开头句中的 delight 是键词阿里为什么高兴， 是因为他达到目的了，上一段已经指出他获得了三等奖，本段重点讲述他回家后发生的事情。【点睛】高

14、分句型Ali couldnt sobbing because didn to disappoint his sister. 望。运用 because 引的原因状语从句。请阅读下面短文写一篇 60 词右的概要：阿里忍不住哭泣，因为他不想让妹妹失The earthquake that hit Francisco on April 18, 1906 shook down hundreds of thousands of dollars worth of (囱). But the that followed burned up hundreds of millions of dollars worth

15、 of buildings homes. in a city been completely destroyed. San Francisco gone. the and and great houses of rich are gone.On morning at past five earthquake. A moment was fact. of Market Street, in the working-class and in the factories, fires started. Within hour earthquake, of Franciscos fires could

16、 seen 100 miles sun was in the dark was the to the given did best there was organize communicate. railway were useless.And the great pipes water burst. All of ways had made the city safe were gone the thirty earth By afternoon, half of the city gone. At that time, I watched disaster from ship the ba

17、y (海湾) it was calm. No wind came from every directioneast, west, andsouthstrong blew upon the city homes had in its green hills. Wednesdaynight saw e very heart of the city. Man himself had to make ruins of some the s bestbuildings would not danger in streets.Tens of thousands had their left city fo

18、r shelter the were only in blankets and carried the things that rescue from there no fights and pushing shoving. worst of broughtout the best in the Never in all San terrible night. 【答案】A great earthquake shook San on leaving city destroyed. It was am began, later in of city was left without means o

19、fcommunication or transportation. By half of heart city disappeared. When night fell, seeing destruction, homeless city find shelter. Although in disaster, had shown their kindness.【分析】这是一篇概要写作。【详解】写作步骤）细读原文。首先要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章主旨和结构，明确各段的大意。文章要说明了 1906 年 月 18 日旧金山发生大地震，整个城市被彻底摧毁。地震发生在凌 点 15 分，随后市场街部起火，整个城市通讯和交通瘫痪。到了下午，半个市中心消失了。夜幕降临，看到满目疮痍，无家可归人