定语从句与写作公开课

1、关于定语从句与写作公开课第1页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Lead-inEnjoy the song-the one you loveI know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you

2、 werent alone, but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you loveI know you need a frie

3、ndSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone, but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who mad

4、e you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you love第2页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三 Someones gonna cry when they learn theyve lost youSomeones gonna thank the stars above第3页，共32

5、页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Practice of the Attributive clause 1.A plane is a machine _can fly . 2.The car _my uncle bought last week was stolen. 3.The man_is walking on the playground is my old friend. 4.The woman _ you saw in the park is our English teacher . which/that(which/that)who/that(who/that)第4页

6、，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三 5. I saw a woman _bag was stolen.6. The reason _he was late was that he got up late. 7. I still remember the day _I first came to Beijing.8. It is an important day _ I will never forget.9. The park _ they paid a visit to is beautiful.whosewhywhenWhich/thatWhich/that第5页，共3

7、2页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三定语从句在写作中的应用第6页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Part1: 高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：2013年全国高考新课标你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。You know, my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.我让叔叔带去你想要的中国画。Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting you have as

8、ked for before.第7页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三2. 2013 年广东高考那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。As we all know, cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.第8页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Part 2: 写作中定语从句的主

9、要作用1. 增加词数可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子， 避免单词的重复和句式单一。补充细节，以丰富文章内容。第9页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Part 3: 如何写出定语从句题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。Solution: 1找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。 2将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）For example:我们班是一个大家庭。这个大家庭包括17个男生和7个女生。 第10页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Our class is a big family.The family c

10、onsists of 17 boys and 7 girls.Our class is a big family, which consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.第11页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Practice: 把下面各题中的句子合并为一个含有定语从句的主从复合句 1a. Seeing these changes, we cannot forget them. b. They gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble. _答案：Seeing these changes, we ca

11、nnot forget those who gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble.第12页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三2a. I feel greatly honored to host the contest. b. The contest is sponsored by the Students Union. _答案：I feel greatly honored to host the contest, which is sponsored by the Students Union.第13页，共32页，20

12、22年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三3a. They sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.b. The elderly always feel lonely. _答案：They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.第14页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三4a. The library is

13、 not far from here. b. The writer often does some reading there._答案：The library where the writer often does some reading is not far from here. 第15页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三5a. Ive always longed for the days. b. I will be able to be independent then._答案：Ive always longed for the days when I will be

14、 able to be independent. 第16页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Practice:1. 我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。2. 我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。3. 他居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。4. 我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。第17页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。My best friend is Li Ming.His nickname is hippo.My best friend is Li Ming, whose nickna

15、me is hippo.第18页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三I dont like his nickname.The reason is that it deeply hurts him.The reason why I dont like his nickname is that it deeply hurts him.我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。第19页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三她居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。He lives in Kai Feng.People can visit lots of sce

16、nic spots here.He lives in Kai Feng, where people can visit lots of scenic spots.(注意此处不再有here)第20页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。We used to attend painting class together.I will never forget the days .I will never forget the days when we used to attend painting class together.第21

17、页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三2. 题干中只有一个孤立的简单句Solution: 找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。For example: 开封是一个历史名城。Kai Feng is a famous historic city.Kai Feng is a famous historic city, which has a long history of more than 2700 years and large numbers of historic spots, such as the Iron Pagoda, Longting Park and

18、so on.有多久的历史？因何出名？第22页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Practice:即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。李明是一个热心肠的人。The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese traditional festival, which is celebrated to honor our national hero, Qu Yuan.(节日的目的)第23页，共32页，2022

19、年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三李明是一个热心肠的人。Li Ming is a warm-hearted man .Li Ming is a warm-hearted man, who always lends a hand to others.(具体化)第24页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三直击高考（2013年高考山东卷）描述你的假期打算 （包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）I would like to do a part- time job,which will help me earn money and accumulate wor

20、king experience.Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich my life and broaden my horizen.I would like to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to the society.Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a

21、 part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,第25页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Translate the following English proverbs into Chinese and then pick out the attributive clauses.God help those who help themselves . 2. He who laughs last laughs best . 3. He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true m

22、an .4. He who is content (满足) is always happy.第26页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三Challenge yourself !第27页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三根据下列句子，完成短文。 众所周知，北京已经成功地举办了2008年奥运会。通过本届奥运会，中国完美地向世界展现了自己。英语作为一种国际语言，在和外国人的交流中起着重要作用。本届奥运会上友好的志愿者们很好地利用了这个语言工具为各国运动员及客人服务，给他们留下了深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名传播中国灿烂文化的志愿者，所以我现在应该努力学好英语。只

23、有这样，才能为国家贡献自己的力量。注意：要使用定语从句.play apart/ role in, seize the opportunity,make contributions to第28页，共32页，2022年，5月20日，22点2分，星期三 As is known to us all, Beijing has successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games. Through the Olympics, China perfectly showed itself to the whole world. English, which is an international languag