2023版高考英语一轮总复习第3部分写作分类指导专题3写作提升第3讲4角度14法营造亮点课件

1、第三讲4角度14法营造亮点专题三写作提升要想作文得高分，首先要让作文的亮点飞起来。如果作文没有一点萤萤亮点，那作文只能在基础等级徘徊。如何营造些许亮点，本部分将从词汇和句式两大方面给予精心指导。名词属于实词，是表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称。名词同时也分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好，更能出众脱俗，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。一、词汇营造亮点4角度扮亮词汇(一)特别的爱给特别的你名词典题1(一般词)I think its a good idea.Its a chance to make the Chinese culture better known to international stude

2、nts.(高级词) I think its a good idea.Its an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.我认为这是个好主意。这是一个让国际学生更好地了解中国文化的机会。典题2(一般词)There are four basic choices； they are described briefly below.(高级词)There are four basic alternatives； they are described briefly below.有四种基

3、本选择；下面对它们作简要说明。重要的名词、名词短语及其高级写作词汇机会 chanceopportunity选择 choicealternative课程 coursecurriculum影响 effectinfluence/impact后果 resultconsequence缺点 shortcomingdrawback方法wayapproach职业careerprofession建议adviceguidance老人old peoplethe old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens青少年young peopleyoungsters/youths/ adol

4、escents几天前a few days agothe other day一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper waya well-behaved child先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级1我很喜欢中国传统绘画。因此，我可以向参观者详细解释中国著名画家的故事。Im a big fan of traditional Chinese paintings. ，I am capable of offering visitors detailed explanations on the stories of famous Chinese painter

5、s.(result)Im a big fan of traditional Chinese paintings. ，I am capable of offering visitors detailed explanations on the stories of famous Chinese painters.【答案】As a result；As a consequence2作为课程的部分，所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。All the schools have music and dancing classes . (course)All the schools have music and d

6、ancing classes .【答案】as parts of the course；as parts of the curriculum3他们称他们期望这次会议会对国家的未来产生显著影响。They say they expect the meeting to . (effect)They say they expect the meeting to .【答案】have a marked effect on the future of the country; have a marked impact/influence on the future of the country4最重要的是，老

7、人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人，因为他们在中国受到很好的尊重。Most importantly, the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.(old people)Most importantly, the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.【答案】old people are usually the first to taste; the old/the elderly/the aged/senior

8、 citizens are usually the first to taste5因此，我认为这不仅是你展示自己才华的黄金机会，同时也可以为我们提供建议。Therefore, I think _ _.(chance, advice)Therefore, I think _.【答案】not only will it be a golden chance for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us advice; not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to sh

9、ow your great talent, but also you can offer us guidance6在这类职业中，只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。 are held by women.(career)_are held by women.【答案】Only 20 percent of jobs in the careers; Only 20 percent of jobs in the professions7激励这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的恐惧。 not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.(young pe

10、ople) not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.【答案】These young people are motivated; These youngsters/youths/adolescents are motivated 8我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。We will be exploring .(way)We will be exploring .【答案】different ways to gathering information；different approaches to gathering information动

11、词根据其后是否能跟宾语，可分为两类：及物动词(Transitive Verb)和不及物动词(Intransitive Verb)，缩写形式分别为vt.和vi.。典题1(一般词)Knowing that you like classical music, Id like to invite you to join me and welcome you to show your performance.扮亮词汇(二)炫酷亮闪你的眼动词(短语)(高级词)Knowing that you are fond of classical music, Id like to invite you to joi

12、n me and welcome you to show your performance.因为知道你喜欢古典音乐，我想邀请你加入我的行列，欢迎你进行表演。典题2(一般词)As for me, I believe that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.(高级词)As for me, Im firmly convinced that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.就我而言，我坚定地认为游客

13、的数量应得到限制，理由如下。重要的动词、动词短语及其高级写作词汇看见seecatch sight of遇见meetcome across引起causelead to/result in/give rise to拥有havepossess提高develop/improvepromote替代replacesubstitute面对facebe faced with容忍bearput up with处理do withdeal with/cope with决定decidedetermine/make up ones mind考虑considertake into account/consideratio

14、n应该shouldbe supposed to理解understandmake sense of/figure out使用useemploy/make use of/take advantage of道歉apologizemake an apology记住rememberkeep in mind发生happenoccur/come about想起think ofoccur to/come up with感谢thankappreciate帮助某人help sb.do sb.a favour.选用方框中的短语替换下列句中加黑部分put up with，consist of，be devoted t

15、o，make use of，fix ones eyes upon1The little boy looked at the picture on the wall._ 2The small group has six people._ 3She was afraid she couldnt bear the pain._ 4All his life was given to the Partys educational cause._ 5We will use her vast experience._ 【答案】1.fixed his eyes upon2.consists of3put up

16、 with4.was devoted to5.make use of.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1Our team is now busy preparing for the game, from living to daily training._ 2Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials._ 【答案】1.occupied with/engaged in making preparations for2came up with3At the same time, I decided to st

17、udy harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things._4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us._ 5Would you please help me to turn down the radio？_【答案】3.made up my mote5do me a favour6Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of face

18、-to-face communication._ 7When you are bored with the people sometimes, youd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music._ 8So far as I know, every one of them wants to be a model student._ 【答案】6.gives rise to7.fed up with8 .intends to.用所给动词的高级词汇补全句子1几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。I _ the other da

19、y.(buy)【答案】purchased a cellphone at your store2更糟的是，暴力电子游戏可能导致攻击性行为，这比暴力电影更有害。Whats worse, violent video games _，which is more harmful than violent movies.(cause)【答案】can lead to/result in aggressive behaviors3所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。All the visitors _ in the park.(ask)【答案】were requested not to throw lit

20、ter about4或许我们能想到解决这个问题的更好的办法。Maybe we _.(think of)【答案】can come up with a better solution to the problem 5我们将全力以赴赶超发达的工业国家。_ the developed industrial countries.(try ones best)【答案】Well spare no effort to catch up with 6我们应该尝试彻底解决这个问题。We _.(try)【答案】should make an attempt/attempt to thoroughly solve th

21、is problem 形容词是很多语言中均有的一种主要词类。形容词是描述人或事物的特征、性质、属性及状态的一种开放性词类。形容词主要用来修饰名词和代词。扮亮词汇(三)浓妆淡抹总相宜形容词(短语)典题1(一般词)I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Im sure you will have a great time.(高级词) I hope my advice will be beneficial to you.Im sure you will have a great time.我希望我的建议对你有益，我相信你会过得很愉快。典题2(一般词)He is

22、 an excellent scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country.(高级词)He is an outstanding scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country.他是一位杰出的科学家，对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。重要的形容词、形容词短语及其高级写作词汇令人惊奇的surprisingamazing/astonishing/ shocking贫穷的poorneedy/poverty-stricken优秀的excellentoutstanding

23、明显的obviousapparent/evident常见的commonuniversal充足的enoughadequate勤奋的hard-workingdiligent可用的usableavailable困难的difficultchallenging坚强的strongtough重要的importantvital/significant不可能的impossibleout of the question有趣的interestingabsorbing/striking/appealing小心谨慎的carefulcautious幸运的luckyfortunate巨大的largeenormous合适的p

24、roperappropriate丰富的richabundant古老的oldancient唯一的onlyunique.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1As the match is very important, we have to make good preparations in advance._ 2The training schedule, apart from regular training, includes joining in various activities, such as participating in some national competitions._

25、 【答案】1significant/of great importance/significance2a variety of/various3I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems._ 4I should be free any time after school next week._5In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult._ 【答案】3.more than delighted4available5.challenging6I was

26、excited when I heard the good news._ 7She is energetic, clever and lively._ 8To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colourful._ 【答案】6.thrilled7intelligent8.delight; appealing; abundant.用所给形容词的高级词汇补全句子1我的同桌是一个动人的、文雅的女孩。My deskmate is _.(

27、beautiful)【答案】a charming/attractive and elegant girl2我的薪水不够维持我家的生活。My salary _.(enough)【答案】is not adequate to support my family 3改变这种情形需要每个人付出很大的努力。Changing this situation _ on the part of everyone.(large)【答案】requires enormous effort4她是一位辛勤的老师，她工作非常勤奋。She is _ and she _.(hard-working)【答案】a diligent

28、teacher; is diligent in her work 5我的手机非常有用。My mobile phone _.(useful)【答案】is of great benefit/beneficial6由于没休息好，课堂上我总是感到筋疲力尽。Not sleeping well, I always _ in class.(tired)【答案】feel exhausted7学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。Learning English well _.(important)【答案】is significant/vital to your future employment 大众化的词汇、平庸的

29、表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的高级词汇，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉，从而可以提高文章的得分档次。扮亮词汇(四)不想太低调，副词及其他词放大招典题1(一般词) I am very delighted to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school.(高级词) I am more than delighted to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school.我很高兴地告诉你，我们学校将举办音

30、乐节。典题2(一般词)He comes to our room for a chat sometimes.(高级词)He comes to our room for a chat once in a while/occasionally.他偶尔来我们房中闲谈。重要的副词或其他高级写作词汇突然suddenlyall of a sudden立即 immediatelyin a flash有时sometimesoccasionally/once in a while/from time to time另外；况且besidesin addition/whats more/moreover因此sothe

31、refore第一，首先 firstto begin/start with第二，其次 secondin addition/whats more最终 finallyeventually和，也alsoas well as大多数mostthe majority许多 a lot ofa large quantity/amount of/endless完成finishaccomplish事实上in factas a matter of fact/actually也tooas well几天前a few days agothe other day故意 on purposedeliberately/by des

32、ign因为 because ofon account of/due to/owing to/thanks to总之 in a wordto sum up/in conclusion/in summary由构成be made up ofconsist of越来越多more and morean increasing number of.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1But if hes out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins

33、 or loses._ 2In addition, I can explain the Chinese paintings in detail and give help to anyone who is in need._ 【答案】1.are supposed to2.as well as3In fact, I am very fond of Tang poems._ 4A few days ago, I went out and I almost had an accident._ 5Most of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home t

34、o going to the cinema._ 【答案】3.Actually4The other day5.the majority .用所给词的高级词汇补全句子1我们的人口在增长，因此我们需要更多的食物。We have a growing population and _.(so)【答案】therefore we need more food2抓住这个机会，否则你会后悔的。Seize the chance, _.(or)【答案】otherwise/or else youll regret it 3这次比赛不仅职业运动员可以参加，而且业余运动员也可以参加。The tournament is o

35、pen to _.(and)【答案】amateurs as well as professionals4第三，你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。Thirdly, you say that there is a discount _.(if)【答案】suppose/supposing (that) I pay in advance5我喜欢踢足球，也喜欢游泳。I like playing football and _.(too)【答案】I enjoy swimming as well .请用高级词汇升格下面的考生作文假定你是李红，你的一位美国笔友Robert写e-mail问及你高考后暑假的安

36、排。请根据以下要点，写一封e-mail回复他。1学开车；2参加英语培训课程；3游览各地名胜。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Robert, How time flies！_ _I am eagerly looking forward to it.Yours，Li Hong考生习作Dear Robert，How time flies！ My College Entrance Examination is coming soon.Therefore, I want to have a colourful and meaningfu

37、l summer vacation.First, I will learn how to drive to get a driving license.Second, I will take some English courses to improve my spoken English.After that, I will visit some tourist attractions throughout China to widen my horizon.Finally, I will have a good rest and enjoy my hobbies.This is the p

38、lan for my vacation.I am eagerly looking forward to it.Yours，Li Hong我来提升将文中部分词汇升级1coming soon_ 2want_ 3First_ 4Second_ 5visit_ 6Finally_ 【答案】1approaching/around the corner2intend3.To begin with/To start with4In addition/Whats more5.pay a visit to6At last/Eventually在英语写作中，我们见证了太多的“越”。你是否会因岁月的流逝，知识的沉淀

39、而对这些迷人的“越”驾轻就熟了呢？先看以下例句：二、句式营造亮点14法扮亮句式(一)作文若不劣学会“越来越”A growing number of students are faced with a bigger and bigger problem.Namely, with the College Entrance Examination approaching, they grow more and more nervous and anxious.To their despair, however, the more nervous and anxious they are, the l

40、ess progress they make.上面语段可译为：越来越多的学生正面临着一个越来越大的问题。随着高考临近，他们变得越来越紧张、焦躁。然而，让他们绝望的是，他们越紧张、焦躁，他们取得的进步就越小。句中出现了三处“越来越”和一处“越，就越”，充分体现出了那些“越”的精彩妙用，让人读后回味无穷。1说到“越来越”，大家的脑海里很快就会浮现出这样的模式：比较级比较级。若修饰名词或是双音节和多音节的形容词或副词，我们常用more and more/less and lessadj./adv./n.。It comes as no surprise that customers are more

41、and more demanding towards products and service.不可否认，顾客对产品和服务质量的要求越来越高。2若使用growingly/increasingly来替代more and more，用decreasingly来替代less and less，则更显过人之处。同样，“越来越多的”可使用a growing/an increasing number of ，“越来越少的”可使用a declining/decreasing number of 。Recently, I found it increasingly hard to breathe in cle

42、an air.最近，我发现呼吸干净的空气越来越难了。A growing number of people realize the importance of environmental protection.越来越多的人意识到环境保护的重要性。翻译句子1你对中国传统文化了解越多，你就对它越感兴趣。_【答案】The more you know about traditional Chinese culture, the more you are interested in it.2你站得越高就看得越远。_【答案】The higher you stand, the farther you will

43、 see.3目前，越来越少的学生对在英国学习英语不感兴趣。_【答案】Currently, a decreasing number of students show no interest in learning English in Britain.4当然，你越快交稿越好。_【答案】Of course, the sooner you hand in your article, the better it will be.5随着精神状态越来越差，我鼓起勇气向您求助。_【答案】With my mental state getting worse and worse, I gathered all

44、my courage to turn to you for help.6一个人书读得越多就会变得越明智。_【答案】The more a person reads, the wiser he will become.为了避免重复，在英语句子中的某些部分可以省略，从而让文章显得紧凑自然。省略句在写作中的巧妙运用有助于书面表达得高分，应当得到重视。扮亮句式(二)简洁明了，意犹未尽省略结构写作中常见的省略情况：在when, while, once引导的时间状语从句及if, unless引导的条件状语从句和though, although引导的让步状语从句中，如果从句中的主语与主句中的主语一致或从句的主

45、语为it，且从句中含有be动词时，可以省略状语从句中的“主语be动词”部分。In addition, if(you are) interested, you can take part in the process of paper-cutting in person.此外，如果你感兴趣，你可以亲自参加剪纸过程。Firstly, people may feel forced when (they are)asked to do things that they dont want to.首先，人们在被要求做他们不想做的事情时可能会感到是被迫的。If (it is) possible, Im g

46、oing to visit some homes for the old in the city.如果可能的话，我将去探望市里的几家敬老院。用省略结构补全句子1如果迟到了，你最好给主人打个电话解释一下为什么迟到。_，youd better give the host a call explaining why you are late.【答案】1If late 2正如预期的那样，它不仅有意义而且有趣。_，it will be not only meaningful but also interesting.3如果这样的话，请到教学楼二楼的学生会办公室报名。_，please go to sign

47、 up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building.【答案】2.As expected3.If so4按照计划，我们早上7点将在学校大门口乘公共汽车出发。_，we will leave by bus at 7：00 a.m.at the school gate.5如果被录取做这份工作，你很快就会接到通知。_，youll be informed soon.【答案】4.As planned5If accepted for the job6当我沿着马路走时，听到有人喊我的名字。_

48、 the street, I heard my name called.7我们将去野餐，但在什么时候什么地点还没定下来。We will go for a picnic, but_.【答案】6.While walking along7when and where hasnt been decided yet8你完成工作了吗？是的，完成了。Have you finished your work?Yes, _.【答案】8.I have在传递信息时，有一些信息是与众不同的，不要“重要的话说三遍”，那太“LOW”了。在写作中，我们可以通过使用强调句型将句子提高到一个新的档次。扮亮句式(三)话多话少不如来

49、个强调强调结构强调句型可强调除谓语动词和表语外的其他任何成分，如主语、宾语、状语等。强调句型的灵活运用不仅有助于增强表达效果，突出要强调的重点，更能彰显考生对英语表达的把握能力。其基本结构为：It is/was被强调部分that/who句子其他部分。It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us.不仅是你的热情，你的团队合作和良好的精神状态也给我们留下了深刻的印象。1It is/was被强调部分that/who句子其他部分It is because its a good

50、 chance for you to learn the natural knowledge of China and make new friends that we really wish you can join us.正是因为它是你学习中国的自然知识和结交新朋友的好机会，所以我们真的希望你能加入我们。2Is/Was it被强调部分that/who句子其他部分？Was it in that park that the children saw the strange green objects?孩子们是在那个公园里看见了那些奇怪的绿色物体吗？3特殊疑问词is/was it被强调部分tha

51、t/who句子其他部分？When was it that you made up your mind to work as a volunteer teacher?你是什么时候下定决心要当一名志愿者老师的？4It is/was not until that “直到才”It was not until he got home 30 minutes later that he found he had left his bag in the taxi.直到三十分钟后到家时他才发现包落在出租车里了。5强调谓语动词时，用助动词do/does/did，且只能对肯定句的一般现在时和一般过去时进行强调。If

52、 you have any other questions, do let me know.如果你还有其他问题，一定要告诉我。We did hope there would be more meaningful activities in the coming future.我们确实希望今后有更多有意义的活动。.用强调句型补全句子1我们的排球队确实日程紧。Our volleyball team _.【答案】does have a tight schedule2虽然在中国喝茶的传统能追溯到公元前3 000年，但是在17世纪中期英国才出现下午茶的概念。Although the tradition

53、of drinking tea dates back to 3,000 BC in China, _ appeared the concept of “afternoon tea”【答案】it was not until the mid-17th century in the UK that 3正是由于他们的帮助，才避免了一场灾难。_ a disaster was avoided.【答案】It was because of their help that4正是他们的不懈努力使得中国逐渐发生变化。_ caused China to change gradually.【答案】It was thei

54、r continuous efforts that 5你是在哪儿捡到这个钱包的？_ you picked up the wallet? 【答案】Where was it that6是因为被困在交通堵塞中你才来晚的吗？_ you came late?【答案】Was it because you were stuck in the traffic jam that 7正是用真诚和诚信我们创造了一种和谐的气氛。_ we created a harmonious atmosphere.【答案】It was with sincerity and faithfulness that8我的经历告诉我，不是你

55、被给予了什么而是你如何利用它决定着你是谁。My experience tells me that_ determines who you are.【答案】it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that9据我所知，可能赢这次竞赛的人是你。As far as I am concerned，_.【答案】it is you who/that are likely to win the contest10直到进入高中我才意识到英语的重要性。_ I realized the importance of English.【答案】It

56、was not until I entered senior high school that .利用所学的强调句型，结合中文提示补全短文Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson, 1_(我是从中国的家里写信给你们)I returned home safe and sound.When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spent in Birmingham, England, 2._(正是你们两人) I just cant help thinking of. Ive learned so much, not only English but

57、also culture.And 3._(我的确很享受) the fun and laughter we shared with each other.Thank you very much.Ill always remember this trip as well as your kindness.Ill write to you later.4._(一定要保重)! Yours，Li Hua【答案】1.It is from my home in China that Im writing to you 2it is both of you that/who3I did enjoy4.Do t

58、ake care在英语写作中，倒装句型应用比较广泛。我们可以通过倒装让句子更高级，强调我们要传达的信息，给文章增色。涉及的句型主要包括部分倒装和全部倒装。1“only状语”置于句首时，主句要用部分倒装。Only when you come to China can you experience Chinese food cultures.只有来到中国，你才能体验中国的饮食文化。扮亮句式(四)反其道而行之倒装结构2none, neither, nor, not, never, hardly, little, seldom等否定词，以及表示否定意义的介词短语如at no time, by no m

59、eans等置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。Hardly/No sooner had we arrived at the activity center when/than we signed up to participate in the Walking Contest.我们一到达活动中心就报名参加了健步走比赛。3在so/such that 结构中，当so/such连同它所修饰的成分共同位于句首时，主句要用部分倒装。So interested in the competition are some of my classmates and I that we have formed a grou

60、p to take part in it.我和我的一些同学对比赛非常感兴趣，以至于我们组织了一个小组来参加比赛。4在as/though引导的让步状语从句中通常使用倒装语序。Tired and busy as/though we are, we benefit a lot mentally and physically.尽管我们很累很忙，但我们在精神上和身体上都受益匪浅。5在含有had, should, were等的虚拟条件状语从句中，若省略连词if，则可将它们移到主语前构成部分倒装。Should you consider my application, I would be more than