高考总复习之对比写作

1、对比写作详解对比写作是高考英语写作中的常见文体，它是一种图表式说明文。对比关系其实就是学会表达转折，根据对比内容的不同我们可以将对比作文分成三大类即正反对比、优缺对比、今昔对比.下面我们分别总结一下这三大类型的各自特点。一、正反对比正反对比即正反观点对比，不同的群体对于一个热点话题持有不同的观点，考生的任务就是表 达出两方观点并可能提出自己的观点。表达正反观点对比作文时需要注意的重点是： 观点表达动词必须用一般现在时,尽管讨论或辩 论发生在过去，但不同观点持有人现在仍然有这样的观点，所以动词须用一般现在时。下面我们看一个考例：情景作文：现在许多中学禁止学生带手机进校，请根据下表所示给China

2、 Daily写的一篇关于我班学生对此的看法并简单提出自己的意见。（100字）赞成反对.安全，可以寻求帮助.方便，和老师家长随时联系.实用，查找一些信息.上课不听讲，使用手机.学习时用手机聊天.考试时用手机作弊下笔之前我们先审题，1.人称： .时态：.布局：不难看出这篇文章的人称为一、三人称，时态为一般现在，段落分为三段。但是这篇文章要达到逻辑清晰需注意使用好赞成和反对两个大方面之间的转折词，还正方 1、 2、3点之间的递进和反方1、2、3点之间的递进，这些递进词可以适用图画说明文中总结的递进 词。要达到词汇丰富需注意表达观点从头到尾只用think 一个词，要注意变化使用表达观点的动词。要达到句

3、式多样需注意不能自始至终都是简单句，而且简单句模式一样。我们看一下这篇作文的例文总结一下好的递进词和好的动词。Nowadays, it is more and more popular for the students to have cellphones. But some schools forbid the students to bring cellphones to school.Recently, our class have made a heated discussion about this. The opinions have been divided into two.

4、Some students think we can bring cellphones to school because it is convenient for us to call for help and it may help us get out from dangerBut |othes say some students bring cellphones to use them at class, which will have a bad effect on our study. The students who are for the idda point out we c

5、an get in touch with our parents and friends through cellphones anywhere we likeOn the contrary, Ithose who are against argue that some may chat with others during studying even at class. The supporters believe that they could look for some information by using cellphones. However, the critics find

6、that some students may use cellphones to cheat in the examination.These are the results of the discussion. In my opinion, we shouldnt bring cellphones to school for our better study.总结 Conclusion:Expressions to connect different opinions: on the other hand; however; but; on the contrary; while; in c

7、ontrast;Expressions to connect similar opinions: beside;Whats more; also; moreover;furthermore; In addition; whats worse , Words or phrases to express opinions:N. : some others; The who are, fhe who are against; supportersritics。比评者）V. : think; say; find; point out; argue; believe主题句：We have had a h

8、eated discussion about whether Opinions are divided on the question whether Im writing to tell you about the discussion about 支持方的主题句：The majority of us are for The majority of us are in favor of 40 percent of the students are for the idea that 40 percent of the students agree that 反对方的主题句：The other

9、s have the opposite opinionThe others are against the idea of doing 结尾局：That is all about our discussion.I hope it will be of great help to your report.二、优缺对比顾名思义，优缺对比即对一个事物优点和缺点的对比陈述。在这个类型的对比作文中考生需要注意的就是如何多样表达优点缺点或好处坏处。表达好处的句子有：Internet is of great use/help to us.Reading is a great help to us.Liste

10、ning every day can do good to us students.Internet is good for the people in modern times.Computers are helpful to our daily life.Listening to English songs has a good eEect on our English study.Going abroad makes it possible for us to know foreign cultures.The context （上下文，语境） can help us to guess

11、the meaning of a new word.Reading a lot helps us with vocabulary.Going abroad can broaden our horizon of the world.总结：Phrases to Express Advantage sN. : be of use/help/good/benefit/advantage_ to; be a help to; do good toAdj. : be good for; be helpfuktoV. : have a good/positive effect/ influence_on;

12、make itimpossible/easy. for sb. to do;help sb. (to) do sth.; help sb. with sth.; enrich our life; enlarge our knowledge; broaden our horizon 再如，表达坏处的句子有：Smoking is of harm to our health.Cheating in exams is a harm to our study.Smoking can do great harm to people around us.Reading under the sunshine

13、is harmful to our eyes.The habit of carelessness is bad for our study.Using cellphones a lot has a bad /negative effect on our bodies.Part-time jobs make it impossible for us to concentrate on our study.Studying for too many hours may weaken our health.总结：Phrases to Express DisavantagesN. : be of ha

14、rm/disadvantage_to; be a harmto; do bad/harmjoAdj. : be harmful to; be bad forV. : have a bad/negative effect/influenceon; make it impossible/difficult. for sb. to do; affect sth badly ,weaken our health下面我们看一个考例：情景作文：上网是中学生最热门的话题之一。对此，有的同学说好，有的同学持反对意见。请你根据下面所提供的信息写一篇短文(100字)优点缺点.对学生帮助大.可查阅有关课程信息，上因

15、特网学习. 了解最新信息，开阔眼界，扩大知识面.大部分同学上网天，玩游戏，甚至耳、良网 站.影响正常的学习.对学生身心都造成伤害这篇文章在审完题以后，下笔之前要先想好文中优缺6个点如何表达，可以先将合适的名词、动词和形容词词组写在题目中各点的旁边，然后在心中有数的前提下再一气呵成完成整篇文章。例文：Nowadays surfing the Internet is becoming more and more popular among young students. But whether it is good for the students remains a heated discuss

16、ion.Some students are for surfing the Internet.They have some reasons to support their opinion. (Topic Sentence) First, the Internefis helpful to the students because the Internet can help the students with their study. They can look up some information related to their courses and also take some on

17、-line classes. Besides, the Internet makes it possible for the students to know the latest information fast and conveniently. In that way, their horizon can be broaddned and knowledge can be enrjched.However,there are also some students against it.Their reasons are as follows. (Topic Sentence) At fi

18、rst, surfing the Internet can |be very harmful td the students, becausesome of them are addicted to chatting and playing games on the internet. Worse still, some surf the 川 websites. In addition, the Internet can | have a bad effect on their study and health if they spend much time surfing the Inter

19、net.In my opinion, due to the busy study now, we d better stay away from the Internet.、今昔对比这个对比作文和前两个类型相今昔对比是把一个人物或事物过去和现在的不同状况进行对比比需要注意的是这样的文章当中有两个时态即 意今昔对比中含有褒贬的倾向性。般过去时和一般现在时或现在完成时。另外，注snacks各种零食考例：某英文报“健康生活”栏目正在讨论有关健康食品、体育锻炼与少年儿童肥胖的问题。 卜面六幅图画时李明过去和现在的变化，请根据李明的情况写一篇短文。注意：1.词数不少于602.短文的开头已给出。提示词语：

20、junk food好吃但不利于健康的食品这是一篇综合测试对比和图画的作文，必须先把图画内容理解准确，而且必须注意图中的月份 只是告诉我们小明的变胖和变瘦是一个循序渐进的过程。A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obes胖）among children. Take Li Ming for example.Two years ago, Li Ming began to be addicted to junk food in the summer vacationBesides he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV and enjoying snacks. With the time going, he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb stairs at the end of that year.However, at the beginning of this year, Li Ming decided to change his unhealthy habit. Now he has