M7 U4 Self-assessment

1、M7 U4 Public TransportSelf-assessment高考英语读写类作文写作指导 吴江汾湖高级中学 毛红利 Learning objectives:Students are able to 1. learn to make a summary; 2. figure out the requirement of each paraand analyze the main points ;3. master topic sentences to express smoothly;4. express reasonable opinions on some topicsand d

2、evelop critical thinking.What can you seen from the pictures?what happens?why does it happen?What are the pictures about?Are you familiar with it?What are the pictures about?Are you familiar with it?201881. 请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。Su Hua 6 July, Sunny This morning, our family went out, hangin

3、g round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or

4、should I not?【写作内容】1. 用约 30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用 2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny Our family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago, Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the information I got was rich and varied, or even

5、 contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.201681.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly

6、popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”. Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government t

7、o let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future. Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin i

8、n the “ Future Singer competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or n

9、ot to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。201781. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入（box-office income）的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。One Day in 2016.At Home.Son:Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother: Why bother?We can stay at ho

10、me and watch films online. Its convenient with our new and faster networkSon: But it feels good in a cinema.Mother: And the price We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son: Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother: But still we cannot get the moneys worth.Some films are just boring【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要

11、内容；2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法（上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点）；3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。201581.请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。【写作内容】1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2. 结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；根据你的分析，从社会规范(rulesandregulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。1. The other day, a netizen (网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo. It was a

12、bout an old Iady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle Iane. and insisting that it leave the track. The photo drew about 7.000 comments on the social media platform. Despite the thumbs-up(点赞)given to the old lady. some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic. 2. Som

13、e riders of e-bikes and come ana 90 in adirections, ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles. Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic. Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable.3. From 2005 to 2014, the total number of private cars in China rose sharply from 32 million t

14、o 154 million. Currently, China had 15 of the worlds total vehicles.Numberof Private Cars(million) Task 1: Write a summary（审题、确定主题、简要概括） Tips on writing a summary 1. Get the key words of each para. 2. Understand the graph(图表) or pictures. 3. Use your own words.先审题，确定主题Discussion: How to write a summ

15、ary. 201881. 请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。Su Hua 6 July, Sunny This morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot, and said that desp

16、ite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?【写作内容】1. 用约 30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用 2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny Our family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago, Mom ask

17、ed me to find relevant information on the internet. But the information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked i

18、t very much.Summary 1 Whats conveyed above is that many people base their consumptionon the ratings due to a lot of information on the internet. However, people have different responses to the ratings.Summary 2 Whats conveyed above is that the rating is an efficient source of information for shoppin

19、g in our consumption. However, the same ratingmay have different influences on different cousumers.201681.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competiti

20、ons like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”. Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and r

21、eads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future. Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tel

22、ls him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 3个

23、理由或论据支撑你的看法。Summary Whats conveyed above is that nowadays internet voting has enjoyedpopularity. Many people have to be involved in it. Some people find itbeneficial, while others are in a dilemma about whether to vote or not.201781. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入（box-office income）的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章

24、。One Day in 2016.At Home.Son:Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother: Why bother?We can stay at home and watch films online. Its convenient with our new and faster networkSon: But it feels good in a cinema.Mother: And the price We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son: Only 10 yuan more than last

25、year.Mother: But still we cannot get the moneys worth.Some films are just boring【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法（上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点）；3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。Summary As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese filmesincreased dramatically from 2012 to 2015.

26、 However, it was on theslight increase in 2016.201581.请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。【写作内容】1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2. 结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；根据你的分析，从社会规范(rulesandregulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。1. The other day, a netizen (网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo. It was about an old Iady standing in f

27、ront of a car that was on a bicycle Iane. and insisting that it leave the track. The photo drew about 7.000 comments on the social media platform. Despite the thumbs-up(点赞)given to the old lady. some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic. 2. Some riders of e-bikes and come a

28、na 90 in adirections, ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles. Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic. Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable.3. From 2005 to 2014, the total number of private cars in China rose sharply from 32 million to 154 million. Currently, Chin

29、a had 15 of the worlds total vehicles.Numberof Private Cars(million)Summary Whats conveyed above is that China has seen the sharp increase ofcars. Thus, many drivers and e-bike riders have ignored the traffic rules,which contribute to heavy traffic and road accidents. Task 2: Write a topic sentence（

30、审题、确定段落、写每段主题句）201881. 请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。Su Hua 6 July, Sunny This morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot, and said

31、 that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?【写作内容】1. 用约 30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用 2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny Our family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ag

32、o, Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the case and told me s

33、he liked it very much.201681.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”. Li Jiang, a hig

34、h school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is alr

35、eady thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future. Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an over

36、seas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。201781. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入（box-office income）的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写

37、一篇150词左右的文章。One Day in 2016.At Home.Son:Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother: Why bother?We can stay at home and watch films online. Its convenient with our new and faster networkSon: But it feels good in a cinema.Mother: And the price We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son: Only 10 yuan more

38、 than last year.Mother: But still we cannot get the moneys worth.Some films are just boring【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法（上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点）；3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。Topic sentence 1简述你对某个现象的看法，并说明理由1. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名。2. 谈谈你对网络投票的看法。3. 你认为人们该以什么样的态度来对待社交恐惧症。4. 谈谈你对改编名著现象的理解。5.

39、 谈谈你对外卖未来发展的看法。认为它好认为它不好合理的/乐于接受有意义的增长的趋势担忧的产生危害的对现象认可的表达：1._,I consider _.以我来看，我认为消费排名是一种合理的方式。2._. 网络投票应该被接受。3. _.以我来看，我认为快餐服务将更受欢迎。On my personal note the ratings to be a reasonable wayFrom my perspective, internet voting shoule be accepted. On my personal note, I hold the opinion that fast food

40、service will enjoymore popularity.担忧的表达：1._.以我来看，我对这个现象有点担心。2._.以我来看，它将对我们的生活产生消极的影响。On my personal note, Im a little concerned about this phenomenon. I show concern for fast food service. On my personal note, it will have negative effects on our life. 201581.请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。【写作内容】

41、1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2. 结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；根据你的分析，从社会规范(rulesandregulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。1. The other day, a netizen (网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo. It was about an old Iady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle Iane. and insisting that it leave the track. The photo dre

42、w about 7.000 comments on the social media platform. Despite the thumbs-up(点赞)given to the old lady. some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic. 2. Some riders of e-bikes and come ana 90 in adirections, ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles. Such rude riding contributes

43、 to the disorder of traffic. Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable.3. From 2005 to 2014, the total number of private cars in China rose sharply from 32 million to 154 million. Currently, China had 15 of the worlds total vehicles.Numberof Private Cars(million)Topic sentence 2说明理由的主题句1.

44、谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用 2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些。3.分析导致交通问题的主要原因。1._ of box-office income.几个原因可以解释票房收入的变化。2._of fast food. (快餐的流行）3. _ the traffic problem.（几个因素导致了）Several reasons can account for the change Several reasons can account for the popularity Several factors can give rise to Topic sente

45、nce 3提出建议1.谈谈你对外卖的建议。2. 面对即将到来的“智能时代”你建议如何准备。1._ how to promote fast food service.以下是关于如何推动外卖发展的建议。2._ how to make full praparations for AI. 我愿意提出关于如何做好准备的建议。Here are some suggestions on I am willing to put forward some suggestions onTopic sentence 4提出解决措施1.谈谈针对名著改编我们能做什么。2.如何更好地发展共享汽车。3.我们应该怎样培养契约精

46、神。1._to ensure the healthy development of car sharing. 以我来看，我们有必要采取才是来确保共享汽车健康发展。2._ to get rid of this phenomenon. 该是我们采取措施来消除这个现象的时候了。3._ improve the situation.对于我们来说采取措施来缓解这个形势是很紧急的。 On my personal note, it is necessary for us to take measures It is time that we took immediate measures It is urge

47、nt for us to take immediate measures to Topic sentence 51. In my opinion, family education is _in our society.（很重要）2. We should _of taking actions.（意识到重要性）3. Students can_ taking part-time jobs.（从中获益）5. As we all know, taking part in activities_. （有很多优点）6.Promoting cultual art works can m_ our cultu

48、ral development. （对有意义/有影响）7. We cant _ family education too much.of vital significancebe aware of the importanceplays an important role benefit a lot fromhave many advantages.make a great difference torealize the importance 分析某事的好处、重要性、意义等have positive effects on1.谈谈故宫推出文化创作产品的意义。2.关于采取行动的重要性。3.谈谈家庭教育的重要性。emphasize the importance ofTopic sentence 6分析某现象潜在的影响（好的或者坏的）1.父母培孩子写作业带