中考英语书面表达专题《记叙文》

1、中考英语书面表达专题记叙文一、写人类记叙文【写法指导】【 题型设置与意图 】写人的记叙文， 是以人物为主要叙述对象， 通过对人物年龄、 身份、籍贯、 外貌、性格、 兴趣爱好、特长等方面的描述来达到对所描述的对象进行初步了解的目的。 根据不同的目的， 记人方式可以分为直接记人和间接记人。直接记人主要是对人物进行肖像描写和性格描写， 准确而生动地勾画出人物的相貌特征和性格特点。 间接记人是指通过描述事件、 行为、 对话 或他人叙述等方式描写人物， 有时也叫做侧面描写。 由于初中生英语单词量和写作水平的限 制，中考试题中，主要以直接记人的写作为主，难度较小。题型旨在考查学生对人物描写的 陈述句型的掌

2、握和运用， 同时考查学生对一般现在时态， 特别是主语是第三人称单数时主谓 一致的正确表达。【 写作角度与注意事项 】写作时要从直接写人的角度入笔， 侧重对人物情况的介绍。 最好以开门见山的方式直接 入题，不可拖泥带水， 无病呻吟。 内容要涵盖提示词中的所有要点， 不可缺漏， 可适当发挥， 但不可太多或不着边际。 另外， 这类题目中对外貌、兴趣爱好、特长等方面的提示通常会有 多个要点， 在写作时要注意不要多个要点的表述都用相同的句式， 使得文章呆板， 要注意句 式的变化。如描写外貌时可以将 HeShe is，HeShe has， He She is of ， His Heris等句型交替使用。

3、在对兴趣爱好、 特长等进行描述时， 可用 He She likes， He She is interested in， He She shows great interest in， His Her favorite is， He She is good at， He She does well in ， He She does well 等不同句型进行表 达。根据题目的要求选择第一人称或第三人称进行写作。（自我介绍类的题目用第一人称，介绍他人的题目用第三人称 ） 【 例题解析 2】 在父亲节 （6月16日）来临之际，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇以“My father 为”题的英语作文，介绍

4、其大体情况，并谈谈你对“父亲 " 的评价。要求： 1词数： 80 左右。 2可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。My father【写作思路 】1中心人称：第三人称2主体时态：一般现在时态3要点梳理：年龄、外貌、职业、性格、爱好【语句构建 】引出人物 Do you know I ' d like to introduce介绍人物 He is （tall ， strong， slim ， smart）； His favorite color sport is；He likes 典型事迹 He often ；One day，希望与祝愿 I hope that 【写作模板 】引出人物：

5、I would like to introduce my father to you 我和爸爸的关系： I love my father and he loves me， too We are like good friends【范文展示 】 My fatherMy father is a 40 - year- old math teacher He is tall and fat with short hair and big eyes He always works hard His classes are lively and interesting and deeply loved b

6、y his students My father is an honest and kind man He often helps other children and me with our math My father s hobby is playing ping -pongWe often play ping - pong together on weekendsMy father is not only a good father but also a good friend I have learnt a lot from him I love my father very muc

7、h 【名师点评 】这是一篇介绍他人的短文。 范文融合了提示中的要点， 运用了较多的新颖句式， 既保证了对 父亲年龄、外貌、性格、职业及爱好的介绍，又避免了短文的枯燥、呆板，同时还打破了提 示要点的原有顺序，体现了作者较高的语言功底。实战演练】1964 年毕业于天津音乐学院。在 20（一） 请根据以下提示写一篇 70 词左右的短文。 施光南是一位伟大的作曲家， 1940 年出生于重庆，多年的音乐生涯中，他创作了 100 多部作品，如在希望的田野上 ，周总理，你在哪里 等。无论青年人还是老年人都喜欢他的歌曲，他被称为“时代歌手”和“人民音乐家” 。不 幸的是，施光南先生于 1990 年 5 月 2

8、 日因病逝世。参考词汇： Conservatory of Music 音乐学院； compose 谱曲； In Hope Field 在希望的田 野上； Premier Zhou ，Where Were You周总理，你在哪里The composer ， Shi Guangnan以下是 Nick Vujicic 的基本信息，请根据这些信息和要求，写一篇英语短文，向某英语报社 投稿。项目信息及要求生日1982 年 12 月 4 日出生地澳大利亚主要事迹1.一生下来就没有双臂和双腿，但他学会了游泳、穿衣服、使用电脑等。2. 21岁大学毕业后周游世界做演讲，与年轻人谈人生和梦想，至今有三百 多万人听

9、过他的演讲。3.到过中国 5 次， 2008 年来成都帮助地震中的幸存者 ( survivors) 。你从他的故事中学到了什么？写一点即可。1. 所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；2. 词数： 100 个词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；4. 文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等其它信息，否则，不予评分。Nick Vujicic is a world - famous speaker . His experience inspires a lot of people in the world .请你以 "Great

10、People in History "为题，用英文写一篇短文，介绍美国总统奥巴马。 要点提示：1、奥巴马于 1961年 8月 4日出生，在大学时是优等生；2、他的嗓音是如此振奋人心，被认为是个天生的演说家；3、他曾经害怕当众演讲，但没有放弃，而是不断改进演讲技巧，终获成功；4、2008年， 47岁的奥巴马成功当选为首位非洲裔美国总统；5、他经常鼓励黑人学子( black students) 6、我相信他将 注意事项 :1、短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2、第 5 和第 6 要点须各用 1-2 句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3、词数在 90 个左右，短文的题目和开头已

11、给出，不计入总词数。Great People in HistoryDear classmates, I'm glad to introduce to you a great person in history - Barack Hussein Obama.（四）假设你是周杰伦的粉丝，请根据所给信息写一篇有关他的短文。内容提示如下：1. 我最喜欢的明星是周杰伦（ Jay Chou） , 他三十几岁了，结婚四个月了；2. 15 岁试图写歌曲，梦想成为一名成功的歌星；3. 他认为古典音乐具有永恒价值，也擅长西方乐器，且听说即将加盟“中国好声音” ；4. 成就不局限于音乐界，他还在电影头文字

12、D（Initial D） 中担任主角。5. 我相信 注意：短文必须包括所给要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；1. 第 5 点必须用二至三句话展开合理想象；2. 词数 90 个左右。（五） 在一节写作课上，老师要求你们写一篇名为“心目中的同学” 的短文， 现在请你用英文 来介绍一下你的同学 Mike 。1. Mike 学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；2. 他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大；3. 他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖；4. 现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷；5. 他的梦想我认为注意事项：1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，

13、要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 第 5要点的内容必须用 2至 3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3. 词数 90 个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：有创意的 creative 爱迪生 EdisonMy classmate Mike is （六）请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇短文，介绍你的偶像刘翔。1. 平易近人，被公认是最受欢迎的中国运动员之一；2. 从小对体育感兴趣；3. 训练刻苦， 2004 年荣获雅典奥运会男子 110 米栏金牌，标志他成功事业的开端；4. 赢得中国乃至全世界的高度赞扬；5. 尽管他不再是运动员，但我觉得1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2

14、. 第 5 点省略部分请作 2-3 句合理的想象发挥；3. 词数在 90 个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇 ：事业 career；雅典 Athens；男子 110 米栏 Men's 110-meter hurdles ；运动员 athlete Liu Xiang is my hero. He was born in Shanghai on July 13 ,1983.七）人生如旅，在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你，如：父母、老师、朋友、故事 人物 .最佳你市正举行以 “ The person who has influenced me most 为题”的中学生英

15、语征文 活动， Spud Webb 深深地影响着你，请根据表中的内容要点完成征文。基本情况1. 个头矮小， 梦想进入 NBA2. 一直为梦想而奋斗3. 1985 年成为 NBA 球员成功原因1.2.对我的影响要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数： 100 词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数） ；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。The person who has influenced me mostThe person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.Spud Webb was

16、 born in the USA, in 1963.（八）近日，学校英语俱乐部即将举办名为“ My favourite star ”的英文写作比赛。假设你是中 国女排主教练郎平的粉丝，请根据所给信息，写一篇英语作文。内容提示如下：1. 郎平，你的偶像，五十几岁，从小痴迷于打排球；2. 过去在队里担任主力，参加过很多比赛；3. 因其出色的表现，中国队赢得很多奖；是中国人的骄傲；4. 严肃认真，总致力于高标准，成就不局限于体育界；5. 你认为注意： 1. 短文必须包括所给要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 第 5 点必须用二至三句话 展开合理想象；3. 词数 90 个左右。Lang Ping i

17、s the chief coach of the Chinese National Women' s Volleyball Team.二、叙事类记叙文【写法指导】 【 题型设置与意图 】 叙事类记叙文主要是对事件的发生、 发展过程和结果进行叙述。 主要是说明事件的时间、 背 景、过程及结果， 即我们通常所说的五个 “ W”(what ，who，when ，where ，why) 和一个“H"(how) 。 叙事类记叙文的表达方式主要是 “叙述” 和“描写”，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚， 描写生动形象。 题型设置旨在考查学生叙述事件的能力， 以考查学生对一般过去时态和一般

18、 将来时态陈述句的运用为主要目的。 【 写作角度与注意事项 】 写作时要写清事情发生与发展的过程以及事情发生的前因后果等。 一般是以第一或第三人称 的角度来叙述。 写已发生的真实事情和虚拟的故事常用一般过去时； 写将要发生的事情用一 般将来时。 叙事类记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容， 使读者对文 章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。结构安排通常有三种形式：正叙、倒叙和插叙。 正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构， 即以人物出现、 活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为 记叙的起点， 然后按照人物活动的展开、 事件发展的自然顺序进行叙述。 倒叙则是在文章的 开头就交代人物活动或事件

19、发展的结果。插叙这一结构在英文写作中很少用到。写作演示 【 例题解析 】 根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约 80 词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。参考词汇： blind adj 盲的，瞎的 stick n拐杖【写作思路 】1中心人称：第一人称2主体时态：一般过去时态3要点梳理：玩耍，拍照；发现拄拐杖的盲人，帮助他过马路，得到感谢 【语句构建 】交代时间 I went to the park last weekend yesterday 叙述事件 We saw an old manHe was walking with a stick alone I ran to the man and helpe

20、d him His daughter thanked me and praised me 事后感悟 1 was very happy 【写作模板 】感悟： I was tired but happy It was an educational dayI learnt a lot today 【 范文展示 】Last weekend ， 1 went to the park with my mother and sister It was sunny and there were some people and traffic in it We played very happily When

21、we wanted to take photos ，I saw an old blind man far from us ，and he was walking with a stick alone I thought it was very dangerous for the old man ， so I ran quickly to him and helped him walk on by catching his stick When the blind man' sd aughter found him ， she thanked me and praised meAt th

22、at moment ，the photographer took the precious photo 1 was tired but happy It was an educational day and I learnt a lot 【 名师点评 】范文按照正叙的顺序， 记录了一次外出游玩时发生的事件。 故事情境想象合理， 要素交 代清楚，要点叙述完整，语言富于变化，条理性较强。知识清单实战演练】（一）初中生活马上就要结束了， 三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的记忆。 请你 给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（请不要出现真实的学校名称以及姓名 ）

23、。参考词汇：three years， memories ，one of ， think ， happy sorry（二）初中三年， 你一定结识了许多同窗好友， 他们中有的安静沉稳，有的活泼开朗，有的品学兼优，请你挑选一位你印象最深刻的好朋友，以“The friend who has impressed me most ”为题写一篇英语短文，并涵盖以下三个问题：1. What is he/she like?2. Why has he/she impressed you most? (Give one or two examples)3. What do you want to say to hi

24、m/her before graduating from junior high?1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。The friend who has impressed me mostThe friend who has impressed me most is在生活中， 人们常用有一些快乐需要分享，烦恼需要倾诉，这时就需要一个好的倾听者。请 以 Be a good listener 为题写一篇短文，内容必须包括以下要点：1. 一次倾听的经历 （ 时间、人物、经过）2. 你对倾听的

25、认识 （ 至少两点 ）注意： 1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；2.词数在 80-100 之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。Be a good listenerI strongly believe it is important to be a good listener.（四） 为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下 列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。常识历史悠久，深受喜爱 世界杯 4 年举行一次好处男生女生皆可参加 利于培养团队精神 考生自拟 （至少 1 点）偶像梅西，有足球天赋梦想考生自拟 （至少 1 点）注

26、意： 1. 词数 90 左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I ' m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football -themed schools by 2020.Thank you for your attention.（五）注意事项 :1. 词数: 100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数 ）；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校

27、名等信息；3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。Living a healthy lifeIt ' s important for us （六）请根据以下信息用英毕业季即将来临， 你校正在举办毕业生英语征文比赛。 假如你是唐军， 语写一篇短文，回顾你的学习、生活经历，并谈谈对未来的打算。注意： 1. 内容必须包括图中所有信息，可展开思路，适当发挥；条理清楚、语句连贯；2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；3. 词数： 80 词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。My name is Tangjun. （七）假如你的朋友 Mike 暑假打算去游览上海迪士尼

28、乐园，请你写一封 90 词左右的信，介绍一 下上海迪士尼，并给出你的建议。要点如下：1. 上海迪士尼将于今年夏季开业。它是由Walt Disney Company 建造的世界上第六个主题公园。2. 据报道每天会有成千上万的游客去游览。3. 你可以欣赏到绿草，鲜花和水的美景。在公园的中央有一个中国式的园林。4. 去太空山 （ Space Mountain）乘坐室内过山车很刺激。 和迪士尼人物合影你会非常愉快。5. 请你用 2-3 句话就 交通 和园内 环保 方面提些建议。 Dear Mike,I ' m very glad to know you want to visit Shangh

29、ai Disneyland summer vacation. I' d like to tellyou something about it. （八）亲爱的同学，初中三年的英语学习中， 牛津初中英语教材给我们提供了大量寓教于乐、 生动活泼的阅读素材，伴随我们成长。请以“ English Textbooks are Good Friends 为题”写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。学习英语教材的原因学习英语 开阔视野 丰富生活你从英语教材已经学到的东西异国文化你最喜爱的英语教材中人或地方，喜欢的原因要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

30、3）词数： 100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数） ；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。English Textbooks are Good FriendsEnglish tex tbooks play an important part in our study of English.【参考答案】（一）The composer ， Shi GuangnanHave you heard of Shi Guangnan? He is one of China s greatest composersHe was born in Chongqing 1940 and graduated fr

31、om Tianjin Conservatory of Music in 1964He composed more than 100 works during over 20 years ，such as the songs In Hope Field ，Premier Zhou ，Where Were You and so onNot only the young but also the old like his songs He is called“ the era singer”and“ the people's musicianUnfortunately ，he died of

32、 a terrible illness on May 2nd ， 1990I believe all Chinese people will love and miss him forever（二）Nick Vujicic is a world - famous speaker . His experience inspires a lot of people in the world . He was born on December 4th ,1982 in Australia. Unluckily ,he was born without arms or legs ,but he lea

33、rnt to swim ,get dressed ,used a computer and so on. At 21 ,Nick graduated from university . Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams . He has spoken to more than 3,000,000 people so far . He has ever visited China five times . In 2008 ,he visited Che

34、ngdu to help the survivors of the earthquake.From his story , I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life .Great People in HistoryDear classmates, I'm glad to introduce to you a great person in history -Barack Hussein Obama. Obama was born on August 4, 1961. He

35、was a top student at university. His voice is so exciting that he is considered to be a born speaker. However, he was once afraid to speak in front of many people. He kept improving his speaking skills instead of giving up. Finally he succeeded. In 2008, he successfully became the first African Amer

36、ican president at the age of 47. He often encourages black students to study hard and never to give up. I believe he will lead America to a brighter future.（四）My favourite star is Jay Zhou. He' s in his thirties. He has been married for 4 months. He tried towrite songs at the age of fifteen. He

37、dreamed of becoming a successful singing star. He thinks classical music has a lasting value. He' s also good at western musical instruments. He will takepart in the TV programme Vocie of China . His achievements went beyond the music industry. He also played the lead role in the film Initial D

38、. I believe he will be a world -famous star one day. AndI should learn from him.（五）My classmate Michael is hard -working. He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas. Inhis childhood, he read many books about scientists. The story of Edison influenced him most. He is crazy about inventing

39、things. So far, he has won several awards for inventions. Now he is busy with his study, but he has never given up his hobby. He says it' s great fun for him. His dream is tbe an inventor as great as Edison. I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day.（六）Liu Xian

40、g is my hero. He was born in Shanghai on July 13, 1983. He' s easy to get along /on with.He is considered as/ to be one of the most popular athletes in China. He has been interested insports since he was young. He practised very hard. In 2004, he won the Men-metre hurdles ' s 110at the Athen

41、s Olympic Games. It marked the beginning of his successful career. He won highpraise not only from China but also from all over the world. Although he isn' t an athlete anyI think he is the pride of our country, and he is the person I admire most.（七）The person who has influenced me mostThe perso

42、n who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963. He was very small, but he had a big dream - to play inthe NBA. He was fighting for his dream since his childhood. As a saying goes.“ Where therewill , there is a way.” In 1985, he became an NBA player.What led Spud Web

43、b to success? First, he didn' t lose heart or give up even when he was refused toplay basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he was able to take every chance.Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulty in my my daily life, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me

44、to take on new challenges. I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future.（八）Lang Ping is the chief coach of the Chinese National Womenolleyball Tea'm.s SVhe is my hero.She is in her fifties. As a child, she was crazy about playing volleyball. She used to be/play the lead role in her tea

45、m. She took part in many competitions. Because of her excellent service, the Chinese team has won many awards. She is the pride of Chinese people. She is serious and always works to high standards. Her achievements have gone (far) beyond sports. I think she has devoted herself / all her life to spor

46、ts. I admire her most. We should learn from her and work hard.记叙文答案 2 （一 ）How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years And I will graduate from it in a month I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you I have so many memories in the three years' life One of them impresse

47、d me very much I still remember when I began to learn English ，I found it too difficult No matter how hard I tried ，I still couldn' t do well in it and almostgave it up As soon as my English teacher found my problem ，she had a talk with me about how to learn English well Since then，she has kept

48、helping meLittle by little ，I 've become interested in English and I'm good at it now I think I am so lucky to become one of her students I've learned a lot from her I will try to help others when they are in trouble I think it is a happy thing to help othersOne possible version:The frie

49、nd who has impressed me most is Wang Gang. He is tall and strong. He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me. He is also helpful and helps me a lot. We often have a good time together.One Sunday last year, we went to climb Zijin Mountain together. I was so careless that I fell over

50、 on the way to the mountain. Wang Gang helped me all the way and finally sent me to the hospital. I was very thankful to him.We will graduate from junior high soon. I want to say,“ Wang Gang, you are my best friend, I willremember you forever. I wish your dream will come true soon.”I strongly believ

51、e it is important to be a good listener.I used to feel stressed before the exam.However, I kept it to myself,as a result, I felt worried and couldn 't pay attention to what the teacher said in class. One day, after I bravely told it to my close friend, I felt that relaxed.Being a good listener p

52、lays an important role in communication. Parents should listen to their children, so they will understand them better and trust( 信任 ) each other. Teachers should also listen to their students so that （以便于） they can increase their understanding and improve relationships. Students should listen to the

53、ir classmates, then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other.In a word, good listening can really make us get closer to each other.（四）Dear classmates,I ' m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football -themed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history.

54、 It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What ' sm ore, playing football is good for our health.I ' m a football fan. M

55、essi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.（五）It ' s important for us to live a healthy life.But do you know how to live a healthy life ？ There are four

56、 ways which can help us live a healthy life.The first way is about eating.We should form good eating habits，for example ，we should eat healthy food instead of junk food.The second one is about exercising.We should try to play different sports such as swimming and running.Sports can make us healthy a

57、nd strong.The third one is about reading.Reading is a good way to relax.Reading can show us something new to learn and bring us much fun.The last one is about sleeping.If you want to keep healthy ， you'd better have enough sleep.Everybody wants to live a healthy life.Please remember these ways and use them properly.（六）My