英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)

1、1English? Chinglish? ?1. We become no words dont talk about friends.2. His some behaviour I not agree.3. Mark good or bad dont mean a students good or bad 2The tasks for this lesson:1.复合句中缺少必要的连接词2.逻辑性错误3. be动词用错4.主语用错5. There be 句型用错6.谓语与非谓语混乱3 1. You should do is to adjust yourself. (你所应该做的是调整好自己)

2、2. My dream is I can become a super sport star just like Lin shuhao. (我的梦想是成为林书豪一样的运动明星) 3. You could share the housework, your mother would feel more relaxed. （你应该分担一些家务，这样你母亲就轻松很多）一、典型错误1 What What y you should do is to adjust yourself. My dream is that I can become a super sport star just like Li

3、n shuhao. If If y you could share the housework, your mother would feel more relaxed.在写作中,复合句缺少相应的连接词。4Attentions:在学生习作中，常会用到以下几种复合句:1. what引导的主语从句/表语从句，what 不能省略。2. that引导的主语从句/表语从句，that 虽然没有意思，但不能省略。3. Whichwho 引导的非限制性定语从句。Translations:1. 最让我们感到不安的是很多人并没有意识到它的严重性。What upsets us most is that many p

4、eople are not aware of its importance.2.我们最好要保持放松,这对我们的学习有积极的影响。We had better keep us relaxed, which will have an active effect on our study.5 1. Using Ipods can listen to music and read e-books.(用Ipods可以听音乐和看电子书籍）Using Ipods , we can listen to music and read e-books. 2. Through reading can obtain v

5、arious knowledge. (通过看书能够获得各种各样的知识)we can obtain various knowledge from reading. Reading can help us obtain various knowledge. 在写作中,逻辑思维混乱.二、典型错误2Ipods can be used to listen to music and read e-books. 6Attention:要想写出逻辑性正确的句子，关键要理清主语和谓语Translations: 参加课外活动能结交到更多的朋友。如果能捐赠一些书给这些孩子，他们就能够获得更多的知识。 Taking

6、part in some after-class activities can make more friends. Taking part in some after-class activities can Taking part in some after-class activities can help us help us make more friends. If donating some books to these children,If donating some books to these children, they can get more knowledge.

7、If If we we donate some books to these childrendonate some books to these children, they can get more knowledge. we donatingwe donating some books to these children some books to these children, they can get more knowledge.(独立主格结构）71.We are often blame the teachers for their strict demands. (我们常常会责备

8、老师的严格要求)are1.1.特别提醒特别提醒: :在写作中，谓语务必不能用： be动词+动词原形动词第三人称单数2.Question:2.Question:什么时候谓语应用上be动词?三、典型错误32.However, other students against the idea. (然而, 其他学生都反对这个观点)Be 动词使用不当8Attentions :be动词的正确使用 1. 名词形容词介词短语副词非谓语等不能单独做谓语,应与be动词连用构成谓语.2.be动词还用在被动与进行时中：be+done be+ doingTranslations:我支持他去帮助那些需要的人(in favo

9、ur of) 他代替我们去处理这个问题(instead of )电视的亮度应调到最低。(turn down )I in favour of him to help the needy. I am in favour of him to help the needy.She instead of us to deal with this problem. He will deal with this problem instead of us.The TVs brightness should turn down to the minimum.The TVs brightness should

10、be turned down to the minimum.9主语用错:受汉语影响，学生会直接用动词原形作主语。受汉语影响，在学生习作中常会出现“无主语”的句子。1.play computer games can lead to nearsightedness. (常玩游戏能导致近视.) playing computer games can lead to Nearsightedness.2.To explore a new way to improve the 2.To explore a new way to improve the peoples living conditions.pe

11、oples living conditions. ( 要探索新的途径以改善人民的居住条件。) we should we should explore a new way to improve explore a new way to improve the peoples living conditions.the peoples living conditions.四、典型错误410Translations:1.定期锻炼有助于保持身体健康。2.应该去帮助那些需要帮助的人。 Attentions:1.在写作中，要用动词作主语时，务必应用( )2.在写作中，务必要根据句子的逻辑含义和结构，添加相

12、应的（ ）。主语doingto doTaking some regular exercise is of benefit to our health. We should give a helping hand to the needy. 111.大约有大约有80%的高三学生希望周末不要补习。的高三学生希望周末不要补习。 There are about 80% students in Senior3 There are about 80% students in Senior3 hopehope that they dont have to take lessons that they don

13、t have to take lessons after school.after school. About 80% students in Senior3 hope that About 80% students in Senior3 hope that they dont have to take lessons after they dont have to take lessons after school.school.2.在我们班上有在我们班上有38个学生要参加明年的高考。个学生要参加明年的高考。 There are 38 students in our class take T

14、here are 38 students in our class take the college entrance examination next year. the college entrance examination next year. There are 38 students in our class There are 38 students in our class to to taketake the college entrance examination next the college entrance examination next year. year.

15、五、典型错误5there be 句型问题:受汉语影响，学生常会滥用there be句型。 不会使用“there be +非谓语”的结构。12Attention:There be +doingto dodone Translations:1.只有5%的学生喜欢上英语课。2.我认为有两个因素导致了这个现象。Only 5% students are fond of English lessons.I hold the idea that there are two factors leading to the phenomenon. 131. We should plant more trees a

16、nd flowers in our school , not throw litters around. (我们应该在在学校种更多的花草树木,不要乱扔垃圾)2. While he watching TV, he never turning on the lights. (他看电视的时候, 从来不开电灯) 谓语与非谓语混乱六、典型错误6 We should plant more trees and flowers in our school , not throwing litters around. While watching TV, he never turns on the lights

17、.14Attentions:1.简单句中没有连接词不能出现多个谓语2.doing to do不能用作谓语 Translation:1.我们捐赠一些学习用品(school supplies)school supplies)给那所学校，希望能帮助到那些孩子。2.他骑自行车去上班，没有开车。 We donated some school supplies to the We donated some school supplies to the school,hope we could help the children.school,hope we could help the children. We donated some school supplies to the We donated some school supplies to the school,school,hopinghoping we could help the children.