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1、Writing based on a cartoon湖南省地质中学钟亚平湖南省地质中学钟亚平Oct 29th, 2015A cartoon (周练周练15)Step I. 观察漫画观察漫画-Observe the pictureHow to write an essay based on a cartoon?Step II. 解析意图解析意图-Extract the themeStep III. 布局谋篇布局谋篇-Design the structureEnvironmental problemsStep I. Observe the picture -Topics of cartoonsSo

2、cial phenomenonAttitudes towards lifeWhat are the common topics of cartoons?Environmental problemsSocial phenomenonAttitudes towards lifeTitle Step II. Extract the theme -To the pointLanguage cluesWhat should we pay special attention to while judging the theme of a cartoon?Example 下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象下面的漫

3、画反映了一种社会现象,请你请你根据对根据对 这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文，这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。发表你的看法。The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.Education?Education Inequality!Comparison!Lets have a competition judging the themes of some cartoons!People

4、 lack communication.Protect animals.No buying, no killing.People cant afford heavy medical fees. One false move may lose the game.Look before you leap.Money cant buy everything.Health is the best wealth.下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告画，这则下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告画，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？广告想要告诉我们什么？If unexpected cant foresee, prote

5、ct ourselves and buy insuranceThe advertisement above shows us that there are always some unexpected “ifs” in our life, but not all of us can foresee them clearly. So buying insurance for life is likely the best way to protect ourselves from a deadly “if”.Step III. 布局谋篇布局谋篇 -Design the structureHow

6、many parts should be included in our writing? And what are they?Part I. Description of the pictureStep III. 布局谋篇布局谋篇-Three partsPart II. Analysis of the issuePart III. Solutions to the problemLets practice!Writing:Writing:目前医疗费不断攀目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府折磨。人们强烈

7、呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。假设你是一名人大体制。假设你是一名人大代表，请根据下面图画，代表，请根据下面图画，以以“Health Care”Health Care”为题写一篇为题写一篇不少于不少于120120词的短文，简要词的短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的建议。来的后果和你的建议。Make an outline of the writing:简要说明图画中简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的建议。和你的建议。体裁体裁

8、(genre): _人称人称(person): _时态时态(tense): _Part I: _Part II: _Part III: _argumentationthird person & first personsimple past &present tensedescription of the cartoonphenomenon & its consequencesyour suggestionsPart I: Combine the key points and form the description paragraph.Key points: an o

9、ld man, heart attack, in hospitalmedical fee bill with $50,000another heart attack, fell on to the floor Part I. Description of the pictureFrom the picture we can see that From the picture we can see that As can be seen in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, As is vividly portrayed in the pi

10、cture, As is vividly portrayed in the picture, Lets look at the picture above first. Its a Lets look at the picture above first. Its a picture about picture about This is a funny and instructive picture, from This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see that which we can see that B

11、riefly and properly As is vividly shown in the picture, As is vividly shown in the picture, we can see that we can see that an old man was an old man was informed of paying his medical fee informed of paying his medical fee for his heart attack. for his heart attack. The momentThe moment he saw the

12、bill he saw the bill with $50,000with $50,000, so , so shocked was he that he nearly fell shocked was he that he nearly fell on to the floor. It was no doubt on to the floor. It was no doubt another heart attack to him.another heart attack to him.My versionBriefly and properlyPhenomenonConsequences-

13、The medical fees are very high.Society: It wont be beneficial to the building of our harmonious society.People: People cant afford the heavy medical fees and have to bear the pain of illness. Part II. Analysis of the issuePart II. Analysis of the issueWhat the cartoon reflects/ illustrates/ shows se

14、t What the cartoon reflects/ illustrates/ shows set me thinking a lot. me thinking a lot. In realityIn reality, its quite common , its quite common thatthatAfter seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon thatThe the phenomenon that

15、The reasons reasons for the for the phenomenon are as follows .First of all, And then phenomenon are as follows .First of all, And then the second reason is that . The last, I think, is the second reason is that . The last, I think, is It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind It seems very ri

16、diculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. And there of story is performed everywhere. And there may/might be some may/might be some consequencesconsequences resulted by this resulted by this phenomenon.phenomenon.Facts/ Reasons/ ConsequencesPart II: Fill in the blanks and for

17、m the paragraph of analysis._. In reality, _. In reality, its common that _its common that _, some may get into deep debt in order to _, some may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care or have to bear the pain of diseases. get proper medical care or have to bear the pain of diseases.

18、 _, some may have to wait helplessly for the _, some may have to wait helplessly for the last day of their life. If _, it last day of their life. If _, it will surely cause the instability of our society and will surely cause the instability of our society and eventually interfere with the developme

19、nt of our country.eventually interfere with the development of our country.many people cant afford heavy medical fees.many people cant afford heavy medical fees.Because of thisBecause of thisWorse stillWorse stillthis situation continuesthis situation continuesWhat the cartoon reflects set me thinki

20、ng a lotWhat the cartoon reflects set me thinking a lotPart III. Solutions to the problemMeasuresHospital : Government: Part III. Solutions to the problemIn my opinion, we should raise peoples In my opinion, we should raise peoples awarenessawareness offirstly. And then it is high time we offirstly.

21、 And then it is high time we took some took some measuresmeasures. On the one hand, On the . On the one hand, On the other hand, other hand, As far as Im concerned, some measures as As far as Im concerned, some measures as follows should be taken to put an end to this issue. follows should be taken

22、to put an end to this issue. First and foremost, First and foremost, the government the government should make should make laws to Meanwhile, laws to Meanwhile, the media the media can appeal for can appeal for Last but not the least, Last but not the least, all people in the community all people in

23、 the community shouldOnly in these ways can weshouldOnly in these ways can we awareness actiongovernment community individual As far as Im concerned, some measures as As far as Im concerned, some measures as follows should be taken to put an end to follows should be taken to put an end to this issue. this issue. On the one hand, On the one hand, the the governmentgovernment should build up a favorable, sh