牛津上海版中考英语专题复习作文专题

1、教育资源教育资源授课类型C专题一写作高级句型默写C专题一作文解析T能力一能力提高授课日期及时段教学内容作文评分标准:按内容、语言、组织结构的标准评分。内容：内容切题、充实、不写废话；意思连贯，表达清楚、准确、完整。语言：语言基本正确；用语规范、无或少见语法错误；拼写、大小写和标点正确。结构：词汇和句型句式运用恰当自如；文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达形式。中考作文打分的三个档次和评分标准:A档次的作文一般运用了较多的连接词、短语、并列、倒装、时间状语从句、被动语态，审题合理、时态使用正确；字数符合要求；没有大小写、拼写错误。得分在18以上分B档次的作文一般审题可以，有一定的过程描述，语言较流畅，

2、叙述基本完全；复合句；时态基本正确。得分在16-18分C档次的作文一般能够使用不同的句子，大小写、标点使用正确，会使用些连接词。但语言上可能还需要更加丰富饱满。得分在13-15高级句型默写、the+est+名词+（that）+主词+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read,etc）themost+形容词+名词+（that）+主词+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read,etc）例句：海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。二、Nothingis+erthanto+VNothingis+more+形容词+thanto+

3、V例句：没有比接受教育更重要的事。三、cannotemphasizetheimportanceoftoomuch.（再怎么强调的重要性也不为过。）例句：我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V.（不可否认的.）例句：不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。六、Thereisnodoubtthat+句子（毫无疑问的.）例句：毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。七、Anadvantageofisthat+句子（.的优点是.）例句：使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。八、Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子（.的原因是.）例句：我们必

4、须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。九、The+er+S+V,the+er+S+VThe+more+Adj+S+V,the+more+Adj+S+V（愈.愈.）例句：你愈努力，你愈进步。我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。十、By+Ving,can（借着.，.能够.）例句：借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。H、enable+Object（受词）+to+V（.使.能够.）例句：听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。十二、Thosewho（.的人.）例句：违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。十三、Thereisnoonebut（没有人不.）例句：没有人不渴望上大学。十四、Thatisthereasonwhy（那就是.的原

5、因）例句：夏天很闷热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。十五、Since+S+过去式，S+现在完成式。例句：自从他上高中，他一直很用功。十六、Itpaysto+V（是值得的。）例句：帮助别人是值得的。十七、bebasedon（以.为基础）例句：社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。十八、Sparenoeffortto+V（不遗余力的）例句：我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。十九、不用说Itgoeswithoutsayingthat子句=（Itis）needlesstosay（that）子句=Itisobviousthat子句=Obviously,S.+V.例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。二十、就我的看法；我认为Inm

6、yopinion,=Tomymind,=AsfarasIamconcerned,=Iamoftheopinionthat子句例：就我的看法；打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。二H一、据说Itissaid(that)子句般认为Itisthought(that)子句大家都知道Itisknown(that)子句据报导Itisreported(that)子句一般预料Ttisexpected(that)子句般估计Itisestimated(that)子句般相信Itisbelieved(that)子句例：一般相信阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。二十二、然而，很可惜的是However,itisapityt

7、hat子句例：然而彳艮可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。二十三、enable+Object(受词)+to+V(.使.能够.)例句：听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。二十四、Onnoaccountcanwe+V(我们绝对不能)例句：我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。二十五、Itistime+S+过去式(该是的时候了)例句：该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。二十六随着人口的增加Withtheincrease/growthofthepopulation,随着科技的进步,Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology,在这信息的年代扮演重要的角色。Intheageofinforma

8、tionandcommunication,_plays_an_importantrole.实例分析:HealthyLife(4.5+2.5+2=9)(A)Now,manystudentsarelikeonlyonekindsoffood.Itnotright.Itwillleadtomanykindofproblems,suchasputtingonweight,heartattack.Sobalanceddiefisveryimportantforourhealth.Ihavesomesuggestaboutbalanceddiet.First,weshouldeatfourfoods:gr

9、ainsregetablesmeat、milkproductsandfruit.It'sgoodforourhealth.Second,dontstopeatingjusttoloseweight.Itisharmfulforus.Keepagoodbalanceddietisgoodforyourfuture.(B)Now,manystudentsprefertoeatonlyonecertainkindoffood.Itisnotreasonable.Itwillleadtomanykindsofproblems,suchasputtingonweight,heartattack.

10、Soabalanceddietitsveryimportanttoourhealth.Withoutabalanceddiet,wecannotliveahealthylife.Ihavesomesuggestionsaboutbalanceddiet.First,weshouldeatfivefood:grainwegetablesmeat、milkproductsandfruit.It'sgoodforourhealth.Second,dontstopeatingjusttoloseweight.Itisharmfulforus.Keepingagoodbalanceddietis

11、goodforyourfuture.(C)Manystudentsprefertoeatacertainkindoffoodandtheywilleatnothingelseexceptit.Thisisabadhabit.Anunbalanceddietcancausemanyproblems,suchasbeingoverweightandcausingheartattack.Soit'simportantforyoutohaveabalanceddiet,oritwillbeharmfultoyourhealth.Ononehand,youshouldeatvariousfood

12、sfromthefivefoodgroup:grains,vegetables,fruit,milkproductsandmeat.Ontheotherhand,youhadbettereatlessfastfood.Thoughfastfoodiseasytogetandtasty,itcontainstoomanycalories.Inshort,ifyoufollowtheadviceabove,youcanenjoyfoodthatisnotonlydeliciousbutalsohealthiertoo.分析总结：如何审题立意：认真审题，结构合理：1.写什么（题目，参考问题）2.重点

13、写什么（提示问题）3.时态（参考问题）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Everybodyneedshelp"Usethefollowingpointsasareference.以下问题仅供参考）?Doyouagreethateverybodyneedshelp?时态：般现在时）?Haveyouevergothelpfromothers?（Tellyourexperiences.）重点内容）?Whatdoyoudowhenotherpeopleareintrouble?（Giveexamples.）重点内容）立意训练:请根据如下的作文题目，阐

14、述你的写作结构大概结构和内容:VII.Writing（写作）：（20分）Nowadaysmanystudentsarebusywiththeirstudy.Theyseldomhelptheirparentswithhousework.Whatdoyouthinkofit?Trytoshowyouropinionsandtellyourownexperience.（现在，许多学生忙于学习而很少帮助家长做家务，你是怎么看待这种现象的，请给出自己的观点及自己的经历。）（13年奉贤二模）94.Writeapassageon“Alettertomyheadmaster/headmistressinat

15、least60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（以“给校长的一封信”为题，写一篇不少于60词的文章。）提示：初中学习阶段肯定给你留下许多的回忆。有甜美，有苦涩，这些都是宝贵的人生经历。在即将告别你的初中生活，请你以Susan的名义给你的校长写一封信，分享一件让你最难忘的校园活动以及提出一个你最希望学校改进的方面。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）-14年奉贤二模VII.Writing（作文）：（共20分）94.Writingatleast60wordsonthetopic“Betterhabits,Betterlife”.（请你

16、以“培养良好习惯，打造美好生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）-15年奉贤二模Thefollowingquestionsareforyourreference以下信息仅供参考）：1.Whatbadhabitsdoyouhaveinyourlife?2.Howdotheyaffect（影响）yourlife?3.Howwillyouchangeyourbadhabits?提纲分类篱见中考作文体我和题目要求：一_议论1支I:观点'4：理由，：3议）记叙文（夷敬夷设）|：什名人1：经蛙/患医3：ttKI

17、：观点q：建istiJ精锐投育I:件幺I：Stt3：收获Writeapassageotatleast60wordsonthetopic"Ho叼happiness（以"Howtnfindhappiness”为题写一母不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格.）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。）-Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(短文必须包含以下要点)4Tiat“syourviewonhappiness?Doyouagreewiththesaying.'Moneyishappinesi”?(givetworea

18、sons),Howdoourstudentsfindhappinessin/urstudyondlifu?ri精锐致育Mmm reasonssolutions ,英文提纲工Beginning；itiswidelyacceptedthai.physanimponautpaninourlife，Be虱nnin虱你认为开心是由么"怎样重要）二升心对我们来说很重要Malnbudv说明次点工认同金钱就等于开心吗?happinesscan'tbeboughtwithmoneyapoorpersonwhogetslotsofloveisalwayshappyAlthough1don'

19、;thavemuchmontv1stillhaveahappylifebecauseThaveparentswhoalwaystakecaieofme,friendswhoalwayshelpmeandleacherswh。alwaysencmir里eme.HelpothersWhat'smore.,.It'scheerfultomakeprogressandgetgoodmarks.i|吊Ending:Belieseitoinot,ifyouUytofindhappiness,happinesswillbeSample：Itiswidelyacceptedthathappin

20、essplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.It'severywhereifyoutrytofindthebeautyaroundyou.Thereisasaying"Moneyishappiness"amongmanypeople,butIdon'tthinkso.First,happinesscan'tbeboughtwithmoney.Secondly,apoorpersonwhogetslotsoflovesalwayshappy.Inaddition,althoughIdon'thavemuchmon

21、ey,IstillhaveahappylifebecauseIhaveparentswhoalwaystakecareofme,friendswhoalwayshelpmeandteacherswhoalwaysencourageme.It'sfuntoplaywithfriends.It'scheerfultomakeprogressandgetgoodmarks.It'shappytohelpothers.Believeitornot,ifyoutrytofindhappiness,happinesswillbealwaysaroundyou.对名词的修饰:可以使用

22、形容词、定语从句来修饰思路二对物的修饰;颜色、形状、位置、作用、所属关系等等;I have a friend.1 have a cute dog with bJonde fur.人:职业. 年龄、高矮笄瘦、性格等.My father doctor fat patient middle agedMy father , who is a middle-aged tat man is a doctor门精锐教育1）添加副词Iwanttofinishmyhomework.Iwanttofinishmyhomeworkmoreandmorecarefully./fwanttofinishmyhomewo

23、rkmorecarefullythanbefore.2）运用句型IwanttofinishmyhomeworkearliersothatIcanplay.用定声从句修饰名证P1 likemusicnIcandancetomusic.IlikemusicthatIcandanceto.JaneismysisterMysisterisverybeautifulJaneismysisterwhoisverybeautiful.Heruns.Herunsquickly.Herunsasquicklyasdhorse,作文：假设Jay是你们班上一个很有天赋的学生，他学习很好。根据下面表格所提供的信息，写

24、一写对他的介绍。Jay'sinformationcardAge15yearsoldHobbiesPlayingchess,doingwordpuzzlesFavoritesubjectsMath,chemistry,physicsandEnglishGoodfeaturesCuriousandalwayshasmanynewideasGoodatcollectinginformationHasagoodmemoryFinishesclassworkquicklyLearnsnewinformationquicklyWishTobecomeascientist.Jayis15yearso

25、ld.Jayisa15yearsoldboy.Jayisa15yearshandsomeboy.Jayisa15yearshandsomeboywholikesplayingchessanddoingwordpuzzles.JayisCurious.JayiscurousaboutthingsaroundhimJayiscuriousaboutthingsaroundhimandalwayshasgoodideas.Jayisacuriousboywhoalwayswanttoexplorethingsaroundhim.Hehasgoodideasaswell.课后作业：Writeatlea

26、st60wordsonthetopic"Iwanttoinvent"（以“我想要发明"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意：1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2 .短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）Thefolloingisforreferenceonly.（以下表达仅供参考）1.Itcanbeusedto.2.1 twillbeexciting/necessary/helpful.范文1及点评：IWantToInventAFamilyDoctorRobotIwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot,w

27、hichcanbeusedtocuretheillnesswithoutgoingoutoftheirhome.AsfarasI'mconcerned,itwillbeextremelyhelpfulandusefulbecauseofthefollowingreasons:First,youcanseethedoctorimmediatelyathomewhenyoufeelsickorgethurt.Itcansaveusalotoftime,especiallyinemergencysituations.Furthermore,hospitalstodayarealwaysfil

28、ledwithpatients,noteveryonecanbetakengoodcareof.However,withthehelpofourrobotdoctors,youcantalktoyourpersonaldoctoronetoonewheneveryouwant.Inshort,familydoctorrobotscanmakegreatcontributiontooursociety.精彩亮点分析：亮点一：全文巧用“first,furthermore,inshort”等连接词，把家庭机器人医生的好处写的非常清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。亮点二：全文采用了定语从句、状语从句、并列句等

29、多种长难句，为文采分增色不少。亮点三：文中出现了"extremely,makecontributionto”这些超纲单词及词组，恰到好处地强调了家庭机器人医生的重要性，且为文采再次进行润色。范文2及点评：IwanttoinventatimemachineIfIhavetheabilitytoinventsomethingthatcouldmakelifebetter,thefirstthingthatcomesintomymindisatimemachine.Withitshelp,peoplecouldgobacktothepastconveniently.Weunavoidabl

30、ymakesomemistakesthatweregretsomuch,it'sfantasticifwecouldgetanotherchancetofixit.Besides,itisofgreatimportancetotheagedpeopleiftheyareabletoenjoytheiryouthforasecondtime.Althoughitsoundslikeanimpossibledreamtorealize,Istillbelievewiththerapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,myideawillbecomerea

31、litysomeday.精彩亮点分析：亮点：thefirstthingthatcomesintomind首先映入脑海的是。亮点二：conveniently方便地，便利地。亮点三：beofgreatimportance名词结构更高端。亮点四：使用beableto短语替换掉could,避免重复。亮点五：withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology随着科学和技术的迅速发展。范文3及点评：IwanttoinventakindofmedicineIfyouaskmewhatIwanttoinvent?Iwillsayakindofmedicinewhichcancurecancer.Asweallknow,manypeoplesufferfromcanceranddieataveryyoungagethe