英语洪焕梅作业2教学设计

1、A Teaching design of English Writing 西安市第十一中学 洪焕梅I. Teaching aims and demands:1. Knowledge and ability objects:(1) Master the methods of enriching your vocabulary.(2) Master the methods of enriching your sentences.2. Processes and methods:Let the students can use these methods to polish their articl

2、es.3.Emotion、attitudes and values:Cultivate students interests in learning English.II. Teaching difficulties and focuses: Train students ability on how to polish their writing.III. Teaching aid: The multimediaIV. Teaching methods: Task-based teaching and learning methodsV. Teaching procedures:Step 1

3、: leading-in1. Show some wrong sentences written by students in their daily writing practice, then ask them to correct.慧眼识“珠”(1).Study hard is very important.(郭凯)(2).I have a big dream that is to be a advanced teacher.(曹拓拓)(3).I want to be a happiness person.(曹拓拓)(4).My dad is a hero, and I love he.

4、(曹拓拓)(5).My aunt has a daughter , who are playing the piano.（曹拓拓）(6).Tom not only study hard, but also play soccer very well.(卿尧)(7).I look forward to get good grades.（吴欣颖）(8).The girl who wear a blue coat is my sister.(刘洋洋)2. Tell students today well have a lesson on how to polish their English wri

5、ting.Step 2: Presentation1. Present the principles of NMET on the screen.高考书面表达评分原则以及给分范围第五档（很好）：完全完成试题规定的任务。(20-25)第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务，漏掉1、 2个次重点。 （16-20分） 第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务。（10-15分）第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务。（6-10分）第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务。只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。（1-5分） 未能传达读者任何信息 ：0分 。2. Show students some articles

6、 from NMET and let them know different levels of the writing will get different marks.Step 3: Methods of English writing 1. How to enrich your vocabulary?(1)I like swimming best （我最喜欢游泳） My favorite sport is swimming(2)Today I received a letter from one of my friends（今天我收到一个朋友的来信） heard from (3). I

7、hope you can write me back soon（希望你尽快给我回信） I am looking forward to hearing from you(4). He decided to study hard last term. has made up his mind, was determined to (5). We all think he is a great man think highly of the man. (6). There are many trees and flowers in our school Our school is covered w

8、ith many trees and flowers.2. How to enrich your sentences ?(1). To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(2). Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句)Weak as I am, Ill make the effort(3). He did not know what

9、 had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.(4). I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气） I couldnt have passed the physics exam without your help. (5). She walked out of the la

10、b and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.(6). They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing 形式)Singing and laughing, they went back to school.(7).I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） No matter what he says, I wont believe it. (8).I

11、f you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）Study hard and youll make rapid progress.(9)He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.小结：一篇好的作文应该具备以下特殊句式句型强调句型倒装句型复合结构独立主格结构省略句型Step 4 PracticeGive stu

12、dents ten minutes to prepare the passage and let them use the methods above.Task One假如你叫Jack, 你的朋友Tom生病多日，主要是因为工作太辛苦，又缺乏锻炼。请你写一封信给他，劝他每天至少要运动一个小时，并告诉他你本周日休息，将去看望他。字数：80左右I suggest you take at least one hours exercise every day. It will do you good. If you keep on taking exercise every day, you will certainly feel better. This Sunday Ill come to see you. With best wishes, Yours, JackStep 5 Summar