2020近三年中考英语北京满分作文解析

1、2020近三年中考英语北京满分作文 解析2019 年真题在线文段表达从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。 所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你 的校名和姓名。题目假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全 教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复 一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。提示词语:design , safety rule , careful , protect , picture提示问题:When should you hand

2、in the poster?What would you like toshare with Peter about designing the poster?Dear Peter,I m glad to receive your emailIf there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua题目自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前 行。某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以

3、及这样做给你带来的好 处。提示词语：self-disciplined（ 自律的），plan , goal , habit , improve提示问题:What did you do to be self-disciplined?What benefits have yougot from doing so?Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.考题解析2019年书面表达题目具有以下三个特点：一、注重教育性，突出育人价值注重对学生情感价值观的引导，坚持立德树人、育人为本。题目1要求学生写一封关于“安全月”宣传海报制作的电子邮件，引

4、导学生增强 安全意识。题目2围绕“自律”这一话题，要求学生谈谈为了增强自律意识，做过什么，以 及这样做的意义，鼓励学生从我做起，增强自律意识。任务要求符合学生能力水 平，自然融入了社会主义新时期对学生能力和品格的要求。二、注重选择性，体现开放性2019年中考英语试题书面表达继续采用二选一的考查形式。题目1要求学生写一篇关于安全海报制作的电子邮件，突出“做事”，题目2要求学生就“自律”这一话题写一篇短文投稿，突出“说事”。两道题目话题不 同、形式不同，学生任选一道题目作答，充分尊重学生的个性化学习特点和不同 思维需求，给学生更多的选择空间。同时，题目关注了学生的个体学习特点和生 活体验，设置了开

5、放的情景，鼓励不同语言水平和思维层次的学生结合自身的实 际，展示自己多年的语言积累，呈现出多样化、个性化的语言表达和多角度的思 维方法，为各层次的学生搭建了一个展示自我的平台。三、注重实践性，凸显学以致用2019年中考英语试题书面表达注重测试任务的真实性和实践性，考查学生在真 实情境中运用所学知识解决问题的能力。 题目将语言知识和技能、文化知识以及 学习策略的考查融合在完成邮件和征文投稿的具体社会情境的任务之中。题目1要求学生通过邮件分享设计海报的想法，题目 2要求学生为网站投稿， 谈论自己的做法和想法。任务设置贴近时代、贴近生活、贴近学生，体现了对写 邮件、制作海报、投稿等实践活动的考查，鼓

6、励学生学以致用，以用促学，更好 地促进了学生语言运用能力的发展。满分范文题目Dear Peter,I' m glad to receive your email. As it is required , you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.Being your close friend , I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost , the basic

7、 safety rules are of great importance , which should be included in your poster. In the second place , following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise themto be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means leas

8、t, if Iwere you , I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness , considering that better safe than sorry. In addition , it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me kn

9、ow.Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给 Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全 教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下 内容：首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。 第 二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容， 学生们应联系 自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达 出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安 排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语， 如First

10、, Second, Last but not least 等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中 用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的， 因此不能根据 汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成 分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词 等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给Peter写邮件，告诉他制作主 题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合 题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容

11、：第一段用一句话告诉Peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上， 这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了 First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by nomeans least, In addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：Being your close friend , I am extremely wil

12、ling toshare some ideas about designing the poster with you. 、In the second place following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to becareful both in and out of school 、In addition , it is a good idea for you to dra

13、w a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等等。题目Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am aperson who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and handin the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respect

14、edall my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I wasable to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan inadvance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, Ideveloped the habit of going to bed early and going to bed early. In the society , I s

15、pared no effort to improve myself all the time.In a word, I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Third

16、ly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.【名师点评】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，用英语写一篇短文给某网站投稿，谈谈为了增 强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。根据题目中给出的问题 可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先谈一谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么？然后 谈谈这样做给你带来的好处。第一个内容应主要使用一般过去时； 第二个内容应 主要使用现在完成时

17、。注意谓语动词的正确形式。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的 想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。写作时应注意：首先注意内容的完整、充实，学生们可以结合自己的实际生活， 写一写自己平时的做法。注意叙述应有层次、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问 题，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从 句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注 意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间 使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀

18、的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了自己第自律的认识，结合 自己的实际谈论了自律的好处。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实， 短文主要分两段：第一段中作者介绍了自己在家里、在学校以及在社会上是如何 遵守规则，进行自我约束的。这一段的内容叙述很有条理，从at school, At home, In the society 三个方面进行介绍。第二段中作者主要阐述了自律给自己带来的 好处，使用了 Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly ,从三个方面进行介绍。其次短文中使 用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范，句式结构文章，且使用 了较高级的词汇和复杂句式，提升了作文

19、档次，展现了作者扎实的写作功底。文章中较好的句型有：I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in thetasks appointed on time at school.、I usually made a plan in advance tomake it easier to achieve my goal.、First of all , I have had many goodhabits , which makes my life easier and more regular. 、 Thirdly, being self-discipl

20、ined has prepared me for a better and brighter future.等等。22018 年真题在线文段表达题目假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办一场关于京剧的讲座，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他讲座的时间和地点，以及需要做什么准备。提示词语：lecture （讲座），invite, information, question, online提示问题：When and where will you have the lecture?<What do you advise Peter to prepare for it?

21、Dear Peter,How is it going? There ' ll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school.If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua题目"静以修身，俭以养德M ,勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。无论生活富足与否,我们都应该提倡节约，杜绝浪费。某英文网站正在开展以节约是美德为主题 的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你是怎么做 的，以及这样做的意义。提示词语：thrifty （节约的）,sav

22、e, turn off, food, money, virtue（美德）提示问题：<What do you do in your daily life?<Why do you do so?It' s one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty.考题解析2018年北京卷中考作文与2017年相比，在考试形式上没有什么特殊的变化， 还是二选一，学生选择其中一题完成任务的考试形式。都是围绕着一个主题，根据题目提供的信息，提示词和两个问句进行内容的写作。话题仍贴近学生的实际生活，让学生学以致用。第一个题目主要考查学生的应用能力； 第二个话

23、题相对较难，试题以日常生活中 的小事为切入点，着眼于中华民族优秀传统文化俭以养德m。 引导学生从自身 做起，增强勤俭节约意识，积极践行社会主义核心价值观，传承中华民族传统美 德。题目Dear Peter,How is it going?There ll be a lecture on Peking opera in our school .The Peking opera will start at 10:00 this Friday morning in the school hall. I am writing to invite you to take part in the meani

24、ngful lecture.In the lecture, we can not only get some useful information about the Peking opera ,but also get close to the traditional Chinese culture, which can benefit us a lot.There are some suggestions for you to prepare for it. First of all, remember to be there on time, what ' s more, don

25、 ' t forget to bring a camera with you ,which can record the precious moment, last but not least, it ' s a golden chance for you to come up with some questions that you are willing to learn about.If there is anything that I can do please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】这是一篇提纲作文，因为要邀请交换生Peter参加

26、京剧讲座。所以要根据提纲中 的相关信息向Peter介绍一下京剧讲座的时间和地点以及需要做什么准备。时态 为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。写作时，在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、 关键词语记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。语法要正 确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中 适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】I am writing to invite you to take part in the meaningful lecture

27、.我写信是想邀请你参加这个有意义的演讲。这里invite sb. to do sth. 表示邀请某人做某 事。【高分句型二】If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.如果有什么我能做的，请告诉我。这里let sb. do sth.表示让某人做某事。题目It' s one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty. Being thrifty is a goodvirtue which has been passed down from generation to generati

28、on. It' sa good idea to start on in our daily life.First of all, I constantly check the lights and the taps to make sure that they are off when leaving the house. Besides, never have I wasted any food. What ' s more, I don ' t spend too much money on unnecessary things and save money reg

29、ularly.The reason why I do so is that I want to make a difference to my life. Asthe old saying goes, " Waste not, want not. " I make up my mind to be thrifty as much as possible. I think everyone should take actions to stick to this virtue.【名师点评】本文体裁属于议论文，话题是M节约是美德M ,难度等级属于中上，是常见的中 考作文话题之一

30、。本文需要考生写出生活中是如何提倡节约，杜绝浪费的。具体应从两个方面去写：一、在日常生活中你都做了什么？二、你为什么要这样做？仔细阅读文中所给提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。根据要表 达的内容确定本文应以第一人称去写，描述的是日常生活中如何节约的，时态应为一般现在时。写作时应注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，层次清楚。本文是一篇优秀的作文，围绕主题展开论述且包含所有内容要点；上下文意思连贯，层次清楚，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。首先第一段直奔主题，提出“ 节约是美德M ,运用定语从句阐述了节约是中华民族的传统美德，以此说明节约的重要性，Being thrifty is a go

31、od virtue which has been passed down from generation to generation.接着号召大家在日常生活中要从自身做起。It' s agood idea to start on in our daily life. 接着，在第二段中介绍了平常是如何 做的，采用三个连词First of all, Besides , What ' s more ,清楚地举例介绍了 自己生活中节约的三件小事，检查是否关灯和水龙头，不浪费食物，不乱花"最后一段，说明这样做的原因，用句型The reason why I do so is th

32、atI want to make a difference to my life.“总述原因，观点明确。还能引用谚语 As the old saying goes, " Waste not, want not. " 为文章添彩。32017 年真题在线文段表达题目假如你是李华，正在美国参加一个交换生项目。今天下午你应邀和朋友Jim -家外出，请用英语给接待家庭的妈妈 Mrs. Smith写一个留言条，告诉她你们要 去哪里，去做什么，以及你回家的时间和方式。提示词语： park, movie theater, go boating, watch a movie提示问题： Whe

33、re are you going?What are you going to do?When and how will you get home?Dear Mrs. Smith,My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon.Yours,Li Hua题目宽容是一种美德。人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊。面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解， 生活就会多一缕阳光。某英文网站正在开展以M包容、谅解M为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅对方，

34、以及原谅对方之后的感受。提示词语： hurt, realize, forgive（原谅）,happy提示问题： What happened between you and him/her?Why did you decide to forgive him/her?How did you feel after forgiving him/her?I still remember what happened between考题解析2017年北京中考作文与2016年相比，在考试形式上没有什么特殊的变化，还是二选一，学生选择其中一题完成任务的考试形式。都是围绕着一个主题，根据题目提供的信息，提示词和两

35、个问句进行内容的写作。 话题仍贴近学生的实际生活，让学生有话可说。第一个题目更强调对语言的实际应用能力；第二个话题相对较难，考查学生的思想深度和语言能力，突出社会主义核心价值观。题目Dear Mrs. Smith,My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. I amwriting to tell you that we will meet in the park. Then we will go to themovie theater to watch a movie. Finally, we are goin

36、g to go boating inthe lake. Don 't worry about me. We will be back at 6:00 p.m. Jim 's fatherwill send me home by taxi. I am sure to have a lot of fun. Waiting for my back.Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】这是一篇应用文，写一篇留言条。也是一篇材料作文，给出了一些材料，并给出 了一些提示单词和提示问题。我们要根据提示材料和问题( Where are you going?What are you going

37、to do?When and how will you get home?) 用正确的英语把要点表达出来，用上所给单词，并适当发挥想象。动笔前要认真阅 读材料，不要遗漏要点。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般将来时来写。首先,回答“Where are you going? ”要明确写出外出的地点。然后回答“What are you going to do? ”具体写出我们到达外出地之后所进行的活动。接着回答“When and how will you get home? ”需要写出回家的方式和到家的时间。最后，写希望家里的妈妈不要为我担心。写作中要适当使用连词，注意叙述的顺 序，要符合逻辑关系。

38、【写作亮点】这篇短文语句通顺，表达准确。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词Then , Finally,使表达具有条里性，句式Don't worry about me. .I am sure to等的使用，更增加了文章的色彩，此文表达具有逻辑性，有条理。题目I still remember what happened between me and Tom. Yesterday, I had a fight with my friend Tom. He took away my pen without my agreement. My father bou

39、ght it for me last year, and I like it very much. His behavior hurt me. I was very angry. For his sorry, he wrote a card:" Sorry, pleaseforgive me " . He felt ashamed for what he did. At last I realized that I was too stingy. I choose to forgive him. He was very happy for my forgiveness.I was very happy, too. Through this matter, we became good friends.As the