英语人教版九年级全册写作示范课

1、课题中考写作专练主备武艳华集体备课力义年班九学科英语导学时间累计课时导学目标1 .分析中考写作失分的原因以及了解中考评分标准.2 .掌握中考的写作思路与写作技巧.3 .学生能标准写出一篇高质量的作文,同时做到同学间相互欣赏,相互点评.重难点掌握中考失分原因,并且尽量防止；掌握中考写作思路和技巧；能标准写出一 篇局质量作文.自主预习你能把文章中的错误找到改正吗？Alice is my a best friend, she come from Canada. she is very tall, hair is very long . he like sports. but I don 't

2、 know if does she like swim? She likes chinese,and she do well in it,we all very like she. 初中阶段写作常见错误改正1 .We at school from Monday to Friday.缺少成分2 .There are some grass or flowers beside the roa d.主谓 致3 .I think go to school by bus is the best way .动名词做主语4 . They don' t know how to do 缺少宾语5 .The

3、y have been teachers yesterday.时态6 .He teaches our English.人称中考英语作文评分标准一档13-15分包含所有要点,应用了较生宜的谛言结构和词汇,用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,具有较强的谛言运用水平.二档10-12分某本包含所有分点,应用了较生富的谛言结构和词汇,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,但有少量错误.三档7-9分内容包含了发数要点,语言表达过于简里子不够通顺,有局部语言错误,根本上不影响总体理解.四档4-6分只包含了少数要点,语言/、标准,句子无条埋,行文/、连贯,语悯与勾 .言错误严重,影响理解.五档1-3分只写出与

4、要求的内容相关的一些信息词语,语言错误多.六档0分 空白任何写好一篇作义,书面表达七步法审-列-加-连-美-查-誉节约资源,保护环境从我们身边的小事做起.Li Ming是一个注重 低碳生活的中 学生,假设你是他,请以 My Low-carbon Life 为题,写一篇80词左右的短文, 简单描述自己的 低碳生活.要点：(1)每天步行上学；(2)离开教室时,关灯、电视等；(3)不用水时,记得关水龙头,循环使用水；(4)充分使用纸张(5)不使用塑料袋.参考词：on foot, turn off, tap(水龙头),reuse, make full use of, plastic bag写作要求：(

5、1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点,可适当发挥,但不要逐条译；(2)不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息.一审二列三加开头结尾四连选择适宜的连词,使文章不枯燥,有条理五美写好词句,美化文章,如动名词做主语,感慨句,从句,名言谚语等常用的连词短语first, second, then, finally/at last, To begin with,on the one hand, on the other hand, but, however, though, because, because of, as, thanks to, as a result of if, unless, what' s

6、 more,besides, Such as/for example, In order to/in order that,in a word总之,I think, I' m afraid, as you can see, as we all know,To be honest,说实话by the way, Inmy opinion, not only.but also, ,either.or ,neither.nor ,both.and常用谚语You' re ner too old to learn.活至U老,学到老.Where there is a will, there

7、is a way.有志者,事竟成.Never say die.永不气馁/永不言败.No pains, no gains.没有付出就没有收获.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事,只要肯登攀.Rome is not built in a day. 冰冻三尺,非一日之寒.Well begun is half done.好的开始,是成功的一半.Knowledge is power.知识就是力量范文My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I like having a low-c

8、arbon life.I go to school on foot every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and wat

9、er flowers. I never use plastic bags. I think saving paperfor us tois necessary, s I often make full use of paper. It' s importanta low-carbon life to protect the environment.作业请用写作七步法写这篇文章同学们在讨论会上都踊跃发言.请根据以下词汇,以“To be polite student6为题用英语写一篇短文谈谈你的看法.字数80作左右.要点：1.在校对老师有礼貌；2.按时完成作业,不抄别人的；3.积极参加各种课外活动；4.在公共场合对人友好,礼待他人；5.给老人和带小 孩的人让座；6.不乱丢垃圾.提示:at scho