2020年中考英语作文专项训练

1、中考英语作文专项训练一、考点分析：在中考中，写作占20 分，分值所占比例大，而写作考察学生的英文综合运用能力，因此非常关键。【 中考英语作文的评分标准】比较为学生所熟悉的就是“8+8+4 ”结构，即：（一）内容：7-8 分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。5-6 分：内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚、但不够完整。2-4 分：内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚、有些离题。0-1 分：文不对题，表达不清。（二）语言：词数：每少5个字扣0.5分，以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。语法：同标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分

2、总和不超过 1分。（三）组织结构：内容充实、上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给3-4 分。内容充实、不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2 分。一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分组织结构分。内容和语言在15 分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1 分组织结构分。通篇句型、句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组织结构分。二、写作中常见问题：内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，表达生硬

3、呆板，甚至中式英语翻译思维。议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，把议论当成的作文的重点，常常跑题。句式单一，都是简单句，缺少复合句。结构散漫，思维跳跃，文章缺乏条理性。连词的使用较少，并且使用单一，句子之间的连接很生硬。文章平淡，无亮点短语和句型，连接词等。三、写作技巧分析：【 高分作文的必备元素】1. 书写 工整， 书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。2. 不出现语法，拼写，标点，大小写等错误。3. 文章字数最好控制在80-100 字 之间，切记过长或者过短，8-10 句即可。4. 要点齐全。为了避免遗漏要点，可以将题目中给出的要点标注出来。5. 开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。6. 连接词

4、使用恰当，不重复，上下文有连贯性，使之自然成一体。7. 应用词汇: 高级词汇的合理使用、同义词的变化使用、短语的恰当使用。8. 多用亮点短语，并且使短语多样性，尽可能使用多种表达方式。比如：同一个意思帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help,”显得词汇贫乏。如果能在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、 give sb. a hand、 do sb. a favor、 be in need of 等以表达“帮助 ”，表达更灵活生动。9. 句式多样性，可适当使用陈述句，疑问句，祈使句及感叹句，强调句，倒装句，定语从句，状语从句，宾语从句等。10. 能够恰当使用谚语、格言、名言等给文章添彩。11. 语法结

5、构多样性,主动被动交叉用，原级比较级灵活用，非谓语动词恰当用。12. 灵活使用万能句型，增添文章亮点。四、中考经典范文解读：VII. Writing （ 作文 ） （共 20 分）94. Write at least 60 words on the topic“ I want to invent ”（以 “我想要发明 ”为题，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ）The following is for reference only. （ 以下表达仅供参考）? It can be u

6、sed to ? It will be exciting/necessary/helpful to范文精选一及点评：I want to invent a flying carIt is not uncommon to meet traffic problems and serious air pollution in big city. It is a must to have a plan to improve the serious condition.I get an idea to design my own flying machine like a car which can dr

7、ive well in the street as well as fly between the high rises to avoid the traffic jam. What smore, when it is moving ,it can transform the motion energy into electricity to drive the engine. Thus, it is possible to save a lot of fuel and reduce the air pollution. It is of great use to solve the prob

8、lems of traffic jam and air pollution ,and even save the natural resource.Bright idea can only be achieved with the determination and courage. I believe my idea will turn a new leaf of future life.精彩亮点分析：亮点一：高分短语亮点二： it is a must 活用高频词亮点三：定语从句描述自己设计的汽车亮点四：高分短语亮点五：be of great use名词结构更高端亮点六：被动语态，丰富句式亮

9、点七： turn a new leaf of future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章 范文精选二及点评：I want to invent a time machineAs a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learn about the history andthe future life of human being from a real experience than learn from a textbook. That s why if I cainv

10、entor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice. The most important usage of my time machine will bevisiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education.Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I can not only try di

11、fferent ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well. Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out. 精彩亮点分析：亮点一：定语从句修饰对学生现在的生活亮点二：用wou

12、ld rather than 表达学生的意愿 亮点三：用if 条件状语从句表达主题亮点四：be famous for因而著名亮点五：not only but as w但 而且亮点六：用动名词词组做主语亮点七：用idiom 突出历史的重要性亮点八：定语从句表达学生的期待 范文精选三及点评：I Want To Invent A Family Doctor RobotI want to invent a family doctor robot, which can be used to cure the illness without going out of their home. As far

13、as I m concerned, it will be extremely helpful and useful because of the following reasons:First, you can see the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations.Furthermore, hospitals today are always filled with patients,

14、not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctor one to one whenever you want.In short, family doctor robots can make great contribution to our society.精彩亮点分析：亮点一 ：全文巧用“ first, furthermore, in short 等连接词，把家庭机器人医生的好处写的非常清晰，让阅卷老

15、”师一目了然。亮点二：全文采用了定语从句、状语从句、并列句等多种长难句，为文采分增色不少。亮点三：文中出现了“ extremely, make contribution to 这些超纲单词及词组，恰到好处地强调了家庭机器人医 ”生的重要性，且为文采再次进行润色。VII. Writing （ 作文）（共20分）94. Write at least 60 words on the topic" I以 m港施好了（”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标题符号不占格）你对明天一定有着美好的憧憬，为此，你已经做好了哪方面的准？请结合你的经历或特长等，选取一个角度具体谈谈你是如何做准备的。（注意

16、：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only.（ 以下内容及供参考）Independentbe good at.Responsibletake part in.Hardworking it helps me to.范文精选一及点评：I'MREADYSummer holiday is coming, all my classmates are preparing to have a wonderful holiday, including me. I am ready to go to Bei Da

17、ihe, the seaside holiday resort, for swimming and having a good time on the seaside. I can not only appreciate the beautiful scenery but also breathe the fresh air. It looks good, isn't it?Before I go to the seaside, I think it's important to take something useful with me such as sunglasses,

18、 bathing suit, suntan oil and my homework and so on. Well, the last I want to carry is some medicine, which can keep me safe.After that I shouldIn conclusion, I do 精彩 亮点一：非 亮点二：同谓语的 亮 点 三 ： not only 亮点四： 亮点五plan where believe I 亮谓语动恰当使用，I stay, play can do it 点 词 including 说明目的地but also 表达度假不仅可以欣贵用反

19、义疑问句运用定语从句，and how to get there. perfectly and enjoy myself.析的巧妙使用一个海滨度假圣地景还可以呼吸新鲜空气。加强语气。修 饰 medicine 。亮点六：巧妙使用“do这个词，加强语言表达力度。范文精选二及点评：I'MREADYAre you a person who always likes to get ready for everything? Do you often make a full preparation for something before doing? I am such a guy due to

20、an unforgettable experience.I still remember it was a final exam, I had been playing all day before it, believing that I am clever enough to get a high score, however, the result was very awful. From then on, I know if you want to succeed, the most importantthingistogetreadyforit.Therefore, during t

21、he last whole year, I devote all my time to reviewing my lessons. The only reason is that I knowthere isn ' taluckydogintheworld,and ontheway tosuccess, hardworking is thekey.精亮点一凫 点 二：彩过: 4去完走成亮 问 进句行时点开的使头用使文分析引发阅读兴章意思表达的更清:趣晰凫 点 三:分词做伴随 状语使 文 章 档 次 提升亮 点 四凫点凫点凫点七:五:be+adj.+enough:条件六：devoteon

22、e' sto状不timedosth.语定(in)to 足 够 做 某从句的使式做表把奉献 给事 用 语亮点八：表语从句的使用五、连接词汇总：1. 表起始：first of all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so far, as far as 等2. 表时间：first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the nex

23、t moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, finally 等3. 表空间：on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of on the other side of ，at the f(middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of 等4. 表因果:for, because of, one reason is that another reason is that,sinc e,asu a s ahereuoreo f),soas a result 等

24、5 .表转折:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, instead of, unlike,although,after all等6 .表歹U举:for example, such as, like, in other words, and so on 等7 .表推进:what ' s morfejrthermore ,on one hand on the otherhand, inaddition to, aswell, still, also, in otherwords, not only but also ，besides,m

25、oreover 8 . 表总结：genera111y speaking,in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all 等9 .表示目的： for this purpose , for this reason , so that, in order that, so as to, in order to10 .表示让步： although , though , even though/if, no matter wh 六、从句在写作中的使用(It is)- =needless to say (that)1 .不用说 It goes witho

26、ut saying that=It is obvious that例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.2 .在各种之中， Among various kinds of , /= Of all the , 例：在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.3 .就我的看法 ；我认为In my opinion, =To my mind,=As far as I am concerned, =I

27、am ofthe opinion that 例： In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。4 .随着人口 的增加 With the increase/growth ofthe population,随着科技的进步 Withthe advance of science and technology, 例： With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lo

28、t of social problems have come to pass. 随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。5 . 是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that 是重要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that 是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that 例： It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.I

29、t is proper that we ( should) keep the public places clean.我们应当保持公共场所清洁。6 .花费 spend on sth. / doing sth.例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in.7 . how 引导的感叹句例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。At least it will prove how honest you are.8 . 状语从句A)如果你不,你就会 Ifyo

30、udon't ，you'll 例：Ifyou don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance.如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。B)如此,以至于 sothat 例： At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。C)每当我听到 我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear Icannotbut feel excited.每当我做我就忍不住感到悲伤。Whenever I do ； I cannot but

31、 feel sad.每当我想到 我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of , I cannot but feel nervous.每当我遭遇 我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with I cannot but feel frightened.每当我看到 我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see I cannot but feel surprised.例： Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.= Every time I think of th

32、e clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。9 . 宾语从句我认为， / 我认为不 I think / I don't think that我想知道是否 I wonder whether 例： He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club.他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。10 . Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。例： Since he went to senior high school, he has worked