英文写作之裸奔法TMSTREEC$

1、英文写作之裸奔法tm streec $主体段分论点提炼方法一裸奔法tm streec $这个三个符号可以帮助我们快速记忆以下九组共18个英文单词。请各位同学先把下面每一 行词汇的第一个单词看一遍，每行的第二个词先不看：tech no logy&efficiencymind&soulsociety&crimetime&spacerights&responsibilitiesenvironment &healthemployment &competitionculture&populationmoney&fun你会发现，每行的

2、第一个单词首字母拼在一起，就是tm streec $这三个符号。把三个符 号多写几遍，同时回忆对应的9个单词，几次下來，每行的第一个词就记住了。再看每行第二个词，它们和每行的第-个词都有严格的逻辑对应关系，这样记忆起来很快。 请看：科技提高效率头脑对应精神社会犯罪严重时间对应空间权利对应义务环境影响健康就业竞争激烈文化人口创造金钱买到乐趣这样我们通过tm streec $这三个符号就记住了这几个词。在考场里再紧张，有了这些提 示也不会忘了。运用第一题：many people are optimistic about the 21th century and see it as an oppor

3、tunity to make positive changes to the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? what change would you like to be made in the new century?分析：这道题就是问我们21世纪利大于弊还是弊大于利。那么，21世纪的利弊各有哪些呢？立即用裸奔法分析。21世纪在technology, efficiency, rights, money, fun等方面明显取得了积极的进展；而21世纪在soul, crime, envir

4、onment, competition, population等方面明显存在令人担忧的状 况。素材确定，分析完毕。如此大的一个话题，立即被“裸奔法”具体化了。第二题：some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken int

5、o account when deciding on the punishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（剑 7 teat2）分析：这是剑7第二套的作文题，难度相当大。那么到底是该对犯罪分子给予固定的量刑还 是应该有灵活度，充分考虑罪犯的处境和犯罪动机来决定量刑呢？这个问题即使在法律界也 存在争议，否则也不会出现西方媒体对海地地震中的难民哄抢食品事件“判还是不判''的争议 to那么在时间和心理都极为紧张的考场条件下应该如何决断呢？固定量刑的好处可以有：efficiency （提高司法效率），cr

6、ime （有效控制犯罪），money （减少司法过程的费用）等。量刑过程中充分考虑罪犯处境和犯罪动机的好处则可以有：soul （更人道），society （有利于社会和谐）,rights （罪犯也是公民,公民有权得到尊重）等。不管正着说还是反着说都很轻松。第三题：as most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. what factors contribute to job satisfac

7、tion? how realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction of all workers?(剑 7 test 3)分析：第一个问题问的是有哪些因素会影响员工的工作满意度呢？第二个问题的本质是问从 现实情况说雇主可以在哪些方面提高员工的满意度？两个问题可以分别在两个主体段里冋 答，而且剑7中的考官范文也确实这样写的。影响员工满意度的因素可以从 efficiency, soul （例如 stress）, rights, environment, health, competition, money等很多方面里选择2-3个來论述。而雇主可以为

8、改善员工满意度所做的事则可以通过money, space, fun, culture （比如企业 文化corporate culture）等方面瞬间搞定。练习1 填空technology&& soul& crimetime&& responsibilitiesenvironment &employment &culture& population& fun分析请用tm streec $法快速思考出下面两题的主体段各自的分论点，并用英文简要表述出來。some people think students should focu

9、s on few subjects while others think they should study a wide range of subjects. discuss:efficiency focusing on certain subjects allows them to better concentrate on the specialized knowledge, which enhances their efficiency in study.mind focusing on specific subjects enables them to grasp these subjects bette匚mind -studying on a wide range of subjects gives students the opportunity to expand their outlook（开 i阔 眼界）.employment understanding a wide range of subjects helps students to fi