Howtoimprovewriting

1、 better your articles (让你的文章靓起来让你的文章靓起来)learning objectives：1.have an understanding of the basic ingredients of a good composition.2.bear it in mind that it is of importance to master the essential writing skills.3.fall in love with the writing.if you do not leave me, we will die together.四级水平：你如果不滚

2、开，我就和你同归于尽。四级水平：你如果不滚开，我就和你同归于尽。六级水平：你若不离不弃，我必生死相依。六级水平：你若不离不弃，我必生死相依。 八级水平：问世间情为何物？直教人生死相许。八级水平：问世间情为何物？直教人生死相许。专家水平：天地合，乃敢与君绝。专家水平：天地合，乃敢与君绝。 活佛水平：你在或不在，爱就在那里，不增活佛水平：你在或不在，爱就在那里，不增 不减。不减。language can make you burst into laughter; you are also enchanted by the beauty of language. language doesnt li

3、e there still, but it presents someones vivid imagination. it is amazing.设疑自探设疑自探learning language is a process of imitation. for writing a good composition, what aspects are you supposed to foucs on?妙计一 外在美the beauty of your writings external appearance 字母大小要匀称，不要忽大忽小；高字母大小要匀称，不要忽大忽小；高度要一致，不要忽高忽低；间

4、隔要相等度要一致，不要忽高忽低；间隔要相等,不不要忽远忽近。要忽远忽近。妙计二妙计二 结构美结构美 一篇好的书面表达要有合理的段落层一篇好的书面表达要有合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清晰。每一段落要有一次，让人感觉条理清晰。每一段落要有一个主题句和几个支撑句。写作时可将文章个主题句和几个支撑句。写作时可将文章分为分为三段三段：主题段主题段提出问题或论点，提出问题或论点，发展发展段段围绕主题讨论、列出论据，围绕主题讨论、列出论据，结尾段结尾段得出得出结论。结论。 the beauty of your writings rational structure妙计三妙计三 词汇美词汇美初级词汇初级词汇

5、高级词汇高级词汇 1. shortcoming -2. rich - 3.obvious - 4.difficult - 5. successful - 6. important - 7. pay attention to - the beauty of your amazing words and expressions drawback; downside wealthy ; well off apparent ; evident challenging, tougha successessential ; vital; crucial attach great importance to

6、 写作时，应多运用一些并列句或复合句，写作时，应多运用一些并列句或复合句，使句式灵活多变；巧变感叹句，增强语言的表使句式灵活多变；巧变感叹句，增强语言的表达力；省略与替代交替使用，避免重复与累赘；达力；省略与替代交替使用，避免重复与累赘；主动与被动交替使用，使句子更具多样性；分主动与被动交替使用，使句子更具多样性；分词（短语）及词（短语）及with复合结构结合使用，使句子复合结构结合使用，使句子结构紧凑，描述形象生动；强调句与虚拟语气结构紧凑，描述形象生动；强调句与虚拟语气的使用，让句子增强感染力；倒装的恰当运用，的使用，让句子增强感染力；倒装的恰当运用，让你的句子与众不同。让你的句子与众不同

7、。妙计四妙计四 句式美句式美the charming beauty of your sentence patternsrewrite the following sentences.1.the man is mr. wang.the _(潇洒的潇洒的) man is mr. wang. the man with a little boy _ (follow) him is mr. wang. the man _ (教我们语文教我们语文) is mr. wang.解疑合探解疑合探handsomefollowingwho teaches us chinese2.when we match our

8、words with actions, we can make a difference in whatever we hopeto accomplish. （only+副词副词/介词短语介词短语/状语从句引导的倒装状语从句引导的倒装）（强调句型）（强调句型）the emphatic patternonly when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish. it is when we match our words with actions that

9、we can make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.3. when we are faced with lots of work, if we do it faster , we will make more mistakes. （省略；省略；the+比较级比较级the+比较级比较级 ） when faced with lots of work, the faster we do it, the more mistakes well make. 妙计五妙计五 衔接美衔接美 过渡语过渡语衔接词衔接词the beauty of yo

10、ur writings transition and coherence 衔接衔接(过渡过渡)性词语的使用是语言连贯性性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡性词语是非常必要的。渡性词语是非常必要的。first of all, first(ly), to begin with, second(ly), then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, sud

11、denly, soon等。等。首先，你应该相信自己。首先，你应该相信自己。1. 时间顺序时间顺序first of all, you should believe in yourself. to begin with, you are supposed to have confidence in yourself. firstly, you should trust yourself. in addition, whats more, furthermore, moreover, besides, on top of this, whats worse, to make matters wors

12、e, worse still, etc.我不喜欢那件衣服，而且它太贵了。我不喜欢那件衣服，而且它太贵了。2. 递进关系递进关系i dont like the dress; besides, its too expensive.i dont like the dress; moreover, its too expensive.i dont like the dress; whats more, its too expensive.but, yet, however, while, on the contrary, etc。他又失败了，然而，他还是决心再试一下。他又失败了，然而，他还是决心再试一

13、下。3. 转折关系转折关系he failed again. however, he still determined to try once more.he failed again. but he still determined to try a third time.as a result, because, as, since, for, thanks to, because of, thus, therefore, as a result of, one reason is that ., another reason is that .etc。由于天气恶劣，运动会推迟了。由于天气恶

14、劣，运动会推迟了。4. 因果关系因果关系the sports meeting was put off as a result of bad weather. the weather was bad. as a result, the sports meeting was put off.the sports meeting was put off because of bad weather.in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion, to conclude, on the whole, in general, generally speakin

15、g等。等。总的来说总的来说, 我们这次旅行很愉快我们这次旅行很愉快 。5. 总结总结in general, we enjoyed the trip.generally speaking, we enjoyed the trip.on the whole, we enjoyed the trip. 质疑再探质疑再探 假定你是李华，你校学生会在全校招募志愿者，为即将在假定你是李华，你校学生会在全校招募志愿者，为即将在你校举行的国际友好学校教育论你校举行的国际友好学校教育论 坛服务。请用英文写一封邮件坛服务。请用英文写一封邮件申请参加。主要内容包括：申请参加。主要内容包括：1.写信目的；写信目的；

16、2.自我介绍；自我介绍； 3.希望获准。希望获准。 注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数；文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数； 3.可适当增加细可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。节，以使行文连贯。dear sir or madam，with all my best regards. yours sincerely, li huawrite a broad outline for an application letter.i. self-introductionii. your purpose of writing the letter.iii. s

17、ome of your advantages iv. hope to be admitted.dear sir or madam, im writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you have advertised for. im li hua, an 18-year-old girl student in grade three. im writing to apply to be a volunteer you are recruiting. im writing to apply for the opportunity t

18、o be a volunteer. i am writing to recommend myself as a volunteer. i am writing to apply to join the activity. in my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help the visitors from all over the world to know better our school. as i see it/the w

19、ay i see it/personally/as far as i am concerned/from my point of view/, what really matters/counts to me is that i can experience different cultures and meet new friends and it is a good chance to introduce my school to the visitors. i am good at english. in addition,in the past three years i have t

20、aken part in many social activities in which i performed well and gained rich experience. furthermore, my interest and skill in communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job. i have a good command of english, which allows me to communicate with others fluently in english. since i am friendly and helpful, i always develop a pleasan