初中英语书面表达写作

1、初中英语书面表达初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导写作技巧指导 陈芷荧陈芷荧(丹丹丹丹) My name is Wang lei. I like watch film. My favourites is Mai Dou. I usually go to cinema watch the Mai Dou. Mai Dou and him mother live in Hong Kong. Then ,him mother send Mai Dou to Wu Dang mountains studied. Mai Dou studying was very hard in Wu Dang mount

2、ains. In the end, Mai Dou studied to many thing in Wu Dang mountains. Then, Mai Dou left Wu Dang mountains. He was joined a match. At last ,He win the match. I like Mai Dou ,because the film tell me should study hard. My name is Wang lei. I like watching film. My favorites film is Mai Dou. I usually

3、 go to cinema to watch the Mai Dou. Mai Dou and him mother live in Hong Kong. Then ,him mother send Mai Dou to Wu Dang mountains studied. Mai Dou studying was very hard in Wu Dang mountains. In the end, Mai Dou studied to many thing in Wu Dang mountains. Then, Mai Dou left Wu Dang mountains. He was

4、joined a match. At last ,He win the match. I like Mai Dou ,because the film tell me that I should study hard. - his lived - hissent Mount Wudang to study studied harder than his classmate learned many things in Mount WudangMount Wudang - won 认真认真审题审题，找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。 写作第一步 假如你叫王磊，你最喜欢的一部电影叫假如你

5、叫王磊，你最喜欢的一部电影叫麦兜麦兜。 请根据下列提示内容，写一篇请根据下列提示内容，写一篇7070词左右的短文介绍词左右的短文介绍 电影电影麦兜麦兜。 审审 提示：提示：1. 1.麦兜和他的妈妈居住在香港；麦兜和他的妈妈居住在香港； 2.妈妈送麦兜到武当山学艺。妈妈送麦兜到武当山学艺。 3.通过自己的努力，麦兜最后学有所通过自己的努力，麦兜最后学有所 成，并且赢得比赛。成，并且赢得比赛。 用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文章要 点。点。 列列写作第二步 根据以下关键词用简单的句子列出根据以下关键词用简单的句子列出 文章的要点文章的要点 1.麦兜和他的妈妈居住在香港；麦兜和他

6、的妈妈居住在香港； 2.妈妈送麦兜到武当山学艺。妈妈送麦兜到武当山学艺。 3.通过自己的努力，麦兜最后学有所成，通过自己的努力，麦兜最后学有所成， 并且赢得比赛。并且赢得比赛。 1. Mai Dou and his mother live in Hong Kong together. 2. His mother send Mai Dou to Mount Wudang to study Chinese Kung FU. 3.He succeed by studying hard and he won the price in a Kung FU competition. 1.a pig nam

7、ed Mai Dou 2.live in 3.Even though 4. in order to 5.decide to do 6.send sb to do sth.7.its adj to do sth 8.be interested in 9.in the end 10.win the price 11.what a adj N! 列列 连连(连词成句连词成句) 写作第三步： 连词成句连词成句，使之初成文。 I like seeing films. My favorite film is Mai Dou. 1. a pig named Mai Dou. 2. lived in . 3.

8、Even though 4. in order to 5. decided to6.sent him to . 7.Its to This is a story about HeHong Kong with his motherMai Dao studied very hard, he couldnt get a good grade like others. Solet Mai dou learn something useful.His mother Mount Wudanglearn Chinese Kung FU difficult learn Chinese Kung FU. 8.

9、was interested in . 9.In the end , 10. won the first price 11. What a lucky pig! But Mai Dou never gave up.But Mai Dou never gave up.But Mai Dou never gave up.Mai Dou itMai Dou succeeded Mai Dou in a Kung Fu competition. This is a story to tell us never to give up. And you will succeed. 恰当运用关联词句，使得文

10、章层次清 晰，各个部分衔接自然。 写作第四步： 加首尾和段首加首尾和段首，使结构完整。 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 加加( (润色润色) ) 1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比表示对比:

11、 instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand; 7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actua

12、lly, in fact, 10.表示结论表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, 美美 选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情 况下展示自己的语言功底。 写作第五步： Skill One Make your sentences correct Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I

13、hope I can come true my dream. once a week Saving be achieve Skill Two Express in different ways Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study. The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shouldnt eat junk food. We s

14、hould stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar. 书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧 列列连连美美加加 中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准 第一档（第一档（21-25分）分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第

15、二档（第二档（15-20分）分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。达。 第三档（第三档（10-14分）分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（第四档（5-9分）分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（第五档（1-4分）分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。

16、以以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。标点符号不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型以下句型 供参考）供参考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true I have a dream Have you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah,

17、 its my dream to be a professional bike rider. I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think its dangerous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That is! T

18、o make my dream come true, Ill practice more after middle school. Also, Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best. Passage One I have a dream Anybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams. Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I