2020年中考英语 写作指导课件

1、中考写作指导开放式题型,Stephen,话题一：计划，打算,假如你们班将在毕业考试后组织到西山进行一次户外活动，你是活动的策划人，请根据以下提示写一篇关于活动计划的文章。 内容要点：1.出行安排；2.活动内容；3.注意事项 注意：1. 短文必须包含上述要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总 词数； 3. 不得透露学校，姓名等真实信息。,参考答案：,Our class is going to the West Hill for a trip.,We are going to meet at the school gate at 8:00 a.m and then w

2、e will take a bus to the West Hill together.,第一段直接点名主旨要去西山玩。,出行安排得设计：时间，地点和出行方式.注意一般将来时的应用,After arriving there, we plan to climb the hills and enjoy the beauty of the nature.,活动内容一：爬山。,At noon, it will take us one hour to have lunch and have a rest near the river.,活动内容二：午休，吃饭(按时间安排内容)。,In the after

3、noon, we will be allowed to do our favorite outdoor activites freely.,Such as: flying kites, picking up fruit, drawing and so on.,活动内容三：自由活动,罗列几个自由活动的内容，以供学生参考准备.,Please remember that safety comes first.,注意事项：安全第一(最后一段),话题二：情感，关系,有些学生经常在假期和父母发生矛盾，因为他们的一些行为引起父母的批评(criticize)。怎样才能避免矛盾的发生？请根据要求用英文写一篇短文

4、，谈谈你的看法。 要求：1.列举一些引起父母抱怨(complain)的不良表现， 简单分析不当之处； 2. 提出解决的方法； 3.词数不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总 词数； 注意： 不得透露学校，姓名等真实信息。,参考答案：,Some students say that their parents always criticize them during holidays because they behave badly.,Some students spend much time in playing games or watching TV so that they arent

5、able to finish their homework.,因为表现不好。把原因状语从句补完，也引出下文。,具体的不良行为一。,Some of them dont have a regular life. Such as: staying up late and getting up late.,具体的不良行为二。,I think they are harmful to their study and health.,简单说明不良行为的危害。,In my opionion, first of all, the students ought to have a good talk with t

6、heir parents.,Second, they must make a plan of spending their holidays meaningfully. So lets take actions.,第一个方法：学生自己找父母谈。,第二个方法：要制定暑假计划。,话题三：意见，建议,2017年1月6日，国家法制办提出 ”禁止未成年人在每日的0：008:00期间使用网络游戏服务“的建议。请根据以下内容，用英语写一篇文章。 内容提示：沉迷网络游戏的危害； 提出控制网游时间的措施（至少一条）。 参考词汇：spend.on/in., without a break, health prob

7、lems, besides, violence games, control, remind. 要求：词数不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥； 不得透露学校，姓名等真实信息。,参考答案：,Legislative Affairs Office advises that teenagers will not be able to play online games from 0:00 a.m. to 8:00 a.m. every day. I support it.,Some students often spend a lot of time playi

8、ng games online， even from morning to night without a break.,首段已给出,先陈述事实：很多学生经常玩网络游戏。,As a result, it has done harm to their health problems.,再写对健康问题的危害,If we lose ourselves in games, we wont have enough time to study.,自己添加一个危害,Besides, there are many violence games which make us become violent.,The

9、re is no doubt that we should take measures to control the time of playing online games.,第三个危害，暴力游戏使人变得暴力,措施一：控制时间.,We can also ask our parents to remind us.,措施二：叫父母监督,话题四：校园活动,为了帮助贫困地区的小朋友，我们学校将于下周举行献爱心捐赠活动。请你以 “Helping Others Makes Me Happy”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。告诉大家在这次活动中将捐赠什么物品，并谈谈理由和对这次活动的看法。 温馨提示：不

10、得透露学校，姓名等真实信息； 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 参考词汇：donate sth to sb(向某人捐某物),注意：下周的活动啊，用什么时态呢?,参考答案：,Next week, our school is going to make donations to children in poor area.,These days my classmates are thinking about what to donate. So am I.,开头给出直接就可以作为单独一段。,先数说同学们的做法，再引申到自己，从而引出下面具体内容。,First, I plan to give them some pens, books and clothes .,捐物。,Whats more, I will donate some of my lucky money to them.,捐钱。,I think helping others is wonderful.,Helping others not only makes others live better, but also makes us happy.,谈谈理由，先总体阐述帮助别人是好样的。,再具体阐述帮助别人有哪些具体的好处。,I hope the ch