2020-2021年中考英语书面表达单元检测题(word)

1、2020-2021 年 中考英语书面表达单元检测题（word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1书面表达地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳 ”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电；2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80 词左右提示词： the greenhouse gases lifestyle

2、低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. _If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】 How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases

3、 lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should

4、 be recycled. Thus, less trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【详解】这篇短

5、文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do ， live in ， aroundus， such as， as a middle school student ，and so on， close down the water ， turn off thelights， cut down ， make a contribution to our earth， pollute our environment ， better andbetter 等。而固定结构 But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle? 和 I th

6、ink as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固

7、定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy 发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy 回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。2. 介绍你平时锻

8、炼的情况：（ 1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。（ 2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。（ 3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。4. 至少 80 词。Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive your-maile._Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive your- maile

9、. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. Iit to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day.Sometimes I don t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. Ido well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me

10、keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it canmake me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise everyweek.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua ll tell【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy 回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些 身体。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 数第一，三人称，注意主 一致

11、 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：I ambusy ， because I have，Doing exercise can help， SoIadvise you to等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开 表示很高 收到Billy 的来信，接下来介 我平 的 情况，最后指出 我 来的好 以及我建 Billy要多 。此 be busy doing sth,prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等 些 的运用也

12、 文章增色不少。3 面表达假 你是某英文 “Teenagers ”目的 Betty ，日前收到了Lucy 的来信。她在信中 了她的 ， 你根据Lucy 的来信，用英 写一封90 左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数。Dear Lucy,I m sorry to know that you aren t allowed to read eBooks._All the best!Betty【答案】 Dear Lucy,I m sorry to know that you aren t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electr

13、onic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.However, as every

14、coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but its an useful product. I thinkthat e-

15、books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如in recent years ，as a productof， live in ， more and more ， so that， for example ， do harm to ， be harmful to ，in my opinion ， take the place of ， instead of 等。同 For one

16、 thing, / For another,/ However, 等使短文的叙述很有条理，而 It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are soconvenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body./ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and proper

17、ly instead of reading over.等复 从句 构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多 化，是本文的最大亮点。在学 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，写作 就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有 性，也更富有条理。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ，考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。4 最近一份学生体 健康 果 示，学生近 率仍 持在高位水平，且越来越低 化。 根据下表所提示的内容，用英 写一篇短文，并 表自己的 点

18、。现 状大 70%学生眼睛近 1. 睡眠不足主要原因2. 看 、做作 、用 等1. 做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 防方法2. 养成正确的用眼 你的 点 （.至少一条）参考 ：近 的shortsighted要求：（ 1） 数： 80 100 个。（ 2）开 已 出，不 入 数。（ 3）要点 全，行文 ，可适当 。The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_【答案】 The survey shows that many students have becom

19、e shortsighted at a very young age.At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a l

20、ong time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【 解】 是一篇 表作文。

21、根据 干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般 在 写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近 原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough） 2. 看 、做作 、用 等（for a long time）防止近 的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 （eye exercises） 2.养成正确的用眼 （have the good habit of）个人 点：如：我 ，我 了解保 眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保 我 的眼睛。（I think ?； tryones best to do sth. ）。常用的重点句型和短 有：sb. spend some time doing sth.， in orde

22、r to do sth. ， try to dosth.， the importance of等。5 面表达初三的学 生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有 步、喜悦。 根据表格提示，写一篇 “ Our school life in Grade Nine的短文，介” 九年 的学校生活，并提出希望和建 。老 工作 真 ，充 心在校学生（至少 两点）作 作 多舍弃 好周末其它活 ， 愿望（ 一到两点）要求：1所写内容必 包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当 ：2文章不少于90 ，开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数；3 意通 ，意思 ，条理清楚， 写 范；4文中不得出 真 姓名、校名等信息。Our school li

23、fe in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.【答案】 Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work

24、very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every stude

25、nt is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we cant afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No p

26、ains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如 at school， work hard ， most of ， patient enough ，help sb. with sth. ，all kinds of problems ， in our life ， as a result， as for students ， listen to ， be busy

27、doing ， try to do ， spend a lot of time doing ， not any more ，play basketball 等。而 It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be. 等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它

28、要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。6 假如你是李华 , 你的美国笔友 Bill 给你发了一封电子邮件 , 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件 , 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006 america. comSubject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing

29、fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future? What is your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time

30、.Best wishes,Bill要求 :1. 参考提示语 , 可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺 , 意思连贯 , 书写工整；3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数 : 不少于 70 词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文 Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is

31、 my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the schools environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to ma

32、ke full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bil

33、l 提出问题，结束全文。【点睛】本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter. 然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because， Besides， To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。7书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail 。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze

34、注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze._Yours,Li Ming【答案】 Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and than

35、k you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I dkeli to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by th

36、e haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In ad

37、dition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【 解】 篇作文要求我 以李明的身份 自己的英国笔友写信，告 他关于家 霾的情况。 目中列出了三个要点，我 根据 些要点提示，来 言，充 内容。首先介 去年家 的 霾情况 重；然后介 减少 霾人 采取了一些措施；最后介 一下你自己在日常生活中 怎么做。因此文章 主要分成三段，一个内

38、容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一， 不能 一，根据表达的需要使用正确的 ，注意 的正确形式。写作 ， 注意英 句式表达 和 是不同的，不能逐 翻 ， 从句子的整体考 ，写完整的句子，利用 句的基本句型，使用恰当的 和短 。 提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句； 句之 使用恰当的 接成分，使文意 ，表达流 。【点睛】 是一篇 秀的作文，短文中作者根据 目要求介 了自己家 治理 霾的情况，并 合自身的 情况， 述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了 目中要求的所有信息，没有 漏要点；且文章 构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的 和人

39、称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般 去 、一般将来 和一般将来 ， 形式 化准确， 法 范。短文中 言得体，句式表达符合英 的 。句子 构以 句 主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句， 短句 合，使文章富有 奏。短文中 好的句式有More and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The govern

40、ment suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. 等。8 面表达共享 （ shared bikes）在 州投入使用以来， 人 来了 多便利，受到人 的追捧，改 了人 的出行方式，但同 也遇到了一些挑 ，是国民素 的“”照妖 ， 你根据表格中信息的提示， 21 世 英文 写一篇关于共享 看法的稿件。社会 状

41、自从出 ， 受 誉。1.随 可 ，出行方便 多 2.有益健康，减少 染3. 用不高， 担得起1.未及 存在 2.占道 路你的 点我 （考生自 ，至少2 点）注意事 ： 1.短文 包括表格中所有提示内容，要求 句通 ，意思 。2.表格中 “你的 点 ”一 用 23句 展开合理想象。作适当 。3. 数在 90 个左右，文章的开 部分已 出，不 入 数。Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our

42、 daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shar

43、ed bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people cant return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, its a way of livi

44、ng a green life.【解析】这篇作文要求我们给 21 世纪英文报投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文章句式节奏，使用不同

45、的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如 They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Als

46、o, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it. 这几个长句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如Also, What s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。9书面表达假设你将代表你校2009 届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内容要点

47、如下：回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。注意： 1. 90 词左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduati

48、ng class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】 Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and