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周末自主检测（2）作文活动单最近，你是吴明，和笔友李华都很关注“可持续发展”的话题。现在你写一封信给他，谈谈江苏的省情，介绍耕地的使用及保护的情况。词数：150左右。信的开头号和结尾已经给出。必须包含以下要点：1、江苏是我国经济发达的省份之一，位于我国的东部，人口多，耕地少。人口：7000多万；土地面积：10多万平方公里。自然资源贫乏。2、随着经济的发展和人口的增长，越来越多的良田被征用来建造住房和工厂。耕地面积逐年减少。3、人们正认识到保护耕地的重要性，政府积极采取措施禁止非法用地。4、保护土地资源，是每个公民应尽义务，也是造福子孙后代的需要。Activity 1 审题 人称：_ 时态：_ 体裁：_Activity 2 分段解析Part 1 江苏是我国经济发达的省份之一，位于我国的东部，人口多，耕地少。人口：7000多万；土地面积：10多万平方公里。自然资源贫乏。要点一：（1） 经济发达的省份之一 _（2） 位于我国的东部 _连词成句：_要点二：（3） 人口多，7000多万 _（4） 土地面积10多万平方公里 ，耕地少 _ _连词成句：_要点三：（5） 自然资源贫乏 _连词成句：_连句成段： Located / east / one / developed / country / population / 70 million / covering / area / 100,000 , percentage / which / used / farmland / pity / be abundant in / natural resources Part 2 随着经济的发展和人口的增长，越来越多的良田被征用来建造住房和工厂。耕地面积逐年减少。要点一：（1） 随着经济的发展 _（2） 随着人口的增长 _要点二：（3） 越来越多的良田 _（4） 被征用来建造住房和工厂 _连词成句：_要点三：（5） 耕地面积逐年减少 _连句成段：With / development / economy / growth / population / farmland / used / build / result / for which reason / decreasing / year Part 3 人们正认识到保护耕地的重要性，政府积极采取措施禁止非法用地。保护土地资源，是每个公民应尽的义务，也是造福子孙后代的需要。要点一：（1） 认识到 _保护耕地的重要性 _ （2） 积极采取措施 _（3） 禁止非法用地 _连词成句：_要点二：（4） 保护土地资源_（5） 每个公民应尽的义务 _（6） 造福_ 子孙后代 _（7） 是的需要 _连词成句：_连句成段：Luckily ( relief )/ realize / importance / protect / government / measures / ban / duty / farmland / obligation / benefit / generations / comeActivity 3 Retell the whole part with the help of these key words. Located / east / one / developed / country / population / 70 million / covering / area / 100,000 , percentage / which / used / farmland / pity / be abundant in / natural resources With / development / economy / growth / population / farmland / used / build / result / for which reason / decreasing / year Luckily ( relief )/ realize / importance / protect / government / measures / ban / duty / farmland / obligation / benefit / generations / comeActivity 4 Correct the mistakes in the following sentences.1. Read the book you like, it is benefit to develop your interest to read the book.2. The habits to read book should be developed from child.3. As a sayings goes that book is the best friend of our life.4. When we in childhood, we should insist reading out of class.5. There are many people like reading.6. There are some famous sayings in the world, such as, “Books are like medcine, which could cure you.”7. Why we should reading?8. People are always say a good habit must developed from child.9. My advices are as follows.10. We must have read book which must benefit to us.Activity 5 Correct the underlined mistakes in your own composition.Activity 6 Read aloud the sample.Dear editor,Students of today are reading more than ever before. Indeed, the importance of reading can never be too much stressed.First of all, reading, especially out-of-class reading, enriches our mind and broadens our horizon. People say that books are the crystal of human wisdom. Through reading, we learn what cannot be learnt in our classrooms. Besides, reading is also a way of relaxation. It is so refreshing to read a story before going to bed, or after a day of study. Therere many famous sayings about reading, like “Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body”. Then, how can we develop the habit