高考英语作文指导.ppt

高考作文高分卷的特点 根据高考最新考纲、书面表达的评分标准以 及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分 卷应具备以下特点： 外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清 楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当， 卷面整洁。图片1.png 结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为 3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的 主题。 词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多 少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标 志。likeBe fond of,be addicted to/ helpdo sb a favor 句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可 以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章 因此而生辉 。 衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一 篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文 章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。 对比观点作文 (1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1. 有一些人认为。 2. 另一些人认为。 3. 我的看法。 The topic of -(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of - -(支持A的理由一)What is more, -理由二). Moreover, -(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-(理 由二). Thirdly (finally),-(理由三). From my point of view, I think -(我的观点). The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . 解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1. 问题现状 2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, -(说明A的现状).Second, - -(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, -(解决方法一). For another -(解决方法二). Finally, -(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -(我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -( 带来的好处).a 说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会 单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事 物前景提出预测) 1. 说明事物现状 2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面) 3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First - -(A的优点之一). Besides -(A的优点之二). But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -(A的第 一个缺点).To make matters worse,-(A的第二个缺点). Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to -(我的 看法). From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, -(对前景的预测).) 议论文的框架 (1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 ) There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文题目_. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一_. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, _原因一_.Furthermore, in the second place, _原因二 _. So it goes without saying that _观点一_. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that _观点二_. In their point of view, on the one hand， _原因一_. On the other hand, _ 原因二_. Therefore, there is no doubt that _观点二_. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that _观 点一或二_. It is not only because _, but also because _. The more _, the more _. (2)利弊型的议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)_作文题目_. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in _题目议题_. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, _优点一_. And secondly _优点二_. Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides“, _讨论议题_ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, _缺点一 _. In addition, _缺点二_. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of _讨 论议题_ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the _讨论议题_. 高考英语开放作文指导 Describe a picture Interpret its implied meaning Point out its implications in our life Give your own comment/suggestion/solution Structure 漫画的画面 细节 漫画的夸张 寓意 (与现实的矛盾之处） 细节 夸张 寓意 Dont copy others way of solving the problem. Do everything in the right way. 读图与立意 细节 Describe the picture: As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture In the picture, there are/is (are) doing with the details and for the theme 3. , a glass bottle, with only a little water in it, is trying to attach a label to its body, to announce to the world it is full. Its expression suggests that its very proud and looking down on the others. 1. In the picture we can see a bottle of less water whose label is written full. 2. From the picture we can see that there is a bottle. It has two hands and tries to put an label written “full”on its body. A smile is on the neck of the bottle. Inside the bottle is there a little water. How To Develop Your Arguments Arguments Interpret its implied meaning Point out its implications in our life Give your own comment/ suggestion/solution How To Develop Your Arguments Interpretation and implication By providing purpose and reasons or effects /attitude/judgment By providing examples/proverbs/ explanation By analyzing the practical significance/ reality As a result, it is wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our heads full. (Description) (Interpretation Tips The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The worlds limited natural resources will be used up. In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not least, the worlds limited natural resources, such as water and electricity , will be used up soon. First of all Firstly, To begin with, In addition, Besides, Moreover, Whats more Finally, Whats worse, 在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上, 尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高 级的词汇; 恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章 结构紧凑; Tips As far as I am concerned, I think only when all of us are fully aware of its seriousness can the situation be improved. On the one hand, it is necessary for schools to educate every student not to waste anything in any form and on the other hand every one of us should start with ourselves to fight against waste. It is not until all of us are involved in the activity that we can bring the situation under control. 在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上, 尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较 高级的词汇; 恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章 结构紧凑; 适当地变换句型结构和所用词汇, 尽量避免重复和单调。 Tips 养成良好的写作习惯 一、书写规范，卷面整洁； 二、审清题目，提炼要点； 三、组词造句，组句成篇； 四、仔细检查，认真修改。 书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档（21-25分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 l准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏 l应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 l语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式 所致；具备较强的语言应用能力 l有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（16-20分） 完成了试题规定的任务。 l比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容 l应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 l语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂语言结构或词汇所致 l应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的。 How to get the highest marks in writing? a good passage (skills) 语言第一位 语言高级 (词和句) 内容第二位 要点齐全 结构第三位 文章分段 一高级词汇- 人靠衣 装，文靠词装 高级词 汇四 原则 避免重复原则 地道原则 形容词副词 修饰原则 词组优先原则 语言第一位-语言高级 高级句式-抓住高考英语老 师阅卷的心理秘诀 四不如 1 _不如_好 With your help I have made progress in English. Without your help ,I couldnt have made progress in English 双否肯定 2 _不如_妙 Students should have the habit of smoking by no means. By no means should students have the habit of smoking. 陈述倒装 主动 被动 3 _不如_ 巧 We can borrow five books at most for ten days . Five books can be borrowed for ten days. 4*从句不如分词傲 (难点） 口诀；一去；二看；三改 一去，去连词； 二看，看从句中主语和动词的关系 三改，改分词 When he heard the bad news, he cant help crying Hearing the news, the young man cant help cry