温明秀——八上Unit2同课异构课写作课件.ppt

1、,English writing,by Wen Mingxiu,Duty Report,Nothing is too difficult, if you put your heart into it. (世上无难事，只怕有心人。）,Which group ?,They are playing sports.,Because its good for their health.,Health is wealth. (健康就是财富),They are exercising.,Exercisings good for their health. So we should exercise for o

2、ne hour every day,How To Keep Healthy?,for us to eat a lot of vegetables and fruit.,We should _ to keep healthy.,Suggestion(建议）I：,eat a lot of vegetables and fruit,1、我们应该吃大量的蔬菜和水果来保持健康。,It is important,这对我们来说是很重要的。,healthy food,Suggestion(建议）I：,healthy food,2、我们应该每天吃鸡蛋和喝牛奶。,We should _ every day.,ea

3、t an egg and drink milk,3. Dont eat junk food,hamburger,coffee,Eating too much is bad for your body.,We need _ for one hour every day.,Suggestion(建议）II：,the best way,to exercise,Exercising,I think exercising every day is _ to keep healthy.,1、我们需要每天锻炼一小时。,2、我认为每天锻炼是保持健康的最好方法。,We （不应该）smoke. / _ （别）sm

4、oke. Because_ （吸烟）is bad for our health.,Suggestion(建议）III：,shouldnt,Dont,smoking,3、我们不应该吸烟，因为吸烟对我们的健康有害。,Dont smoke.,a good habit,We should _. We cant/shouldnt_ . because its not_.,Staying up late,Suggestion(建议）IV：,stay up too late,4、我们应该早睡早起。我们不能熬夜太晚，因为它不是一个好习惯。,go to bed early and get up early,(小

5、组合作探究）,So how to keep healthy?,A: I think we should B: In my view, is important. C: is a good way to keep healthy. D: Dont . E: We need to .,Discuss in groups.,Work in groups,Good habits,Keeping healthy,Keeping happy,Others,Healthy diet,Unhealthy habits,Staying up late,Smoking,Eating junk food or sw

6、eets,Drinking coffee,Others,请根据下表内容提示， 以“How can we keep healthy”为题， 用英文写一篇90词左右的短文。,书面表达：,Can you write ?,写作要领,2、写要点,1、审 题,3、连词成句/篇,4、检 查,以“How can we keep healthy”为题 Task 1：审题 1 人称： 2 时态：,一般现在时,we,Task 2：确定要点 要点 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,vegetables and fruit,sleep at least 8 hours,exercise more,keep happy,j

7、unk food,stay up,smoke,sweets,Task 3：连词成句,这些句型可帮助我们: Dont do sth. 2. We should (not) do sth. 3. It is important to do sth. 4. Doing sth is a good way to keep healthy . 5.We need to do sth.,Task 4：检查,有无单词拼写错误？ 语法错误？ 习惯用法错误？ 句子结构错误？等等。,请根据下表内容提示， 以“How can we keep healthy”为题， 用英文写一篇90词左右的短文。,写作要领： 1、审

8、 题（人称、时 态） 2、写要点 3、连词成句/篇 4、检 查 5、誊抄,Groupwork （小组合作探究）,Can you write ?,Task 4：检查 同学习作 我来批改,同学习作,As we know, healthy is important. There have many ways to keep healthy. For example, you must eat vegetables and friut every day. Dont eat too much junk food. Because you should sleep at least eight hour

9、s a night. Eat sweets is bad for your teeth. Dont smoking. Remember to keep happy every day. Dont get angry easily. I hope everyone are in good health.,课堂展示：我来批改,As we know, healthy is important. There have many ways to keep healthy. For example, you must eat vegetables and friut every day. Dont eat

10、 too much junk food. Because you should sleep at least eight hours a night. Eat sweets is bad for your teeth. Dont smoking. Remember to keep happy every day. Dont get angry easily. I hope everyone are in good health.,health,_,词性错误,_,are,句子结构错误,_,fruit,单词拼写错误,_,And,连接词错误,_,Eating,句式错误,_,smoke,习惯用法错误,

11、_,is,主谓一致错误,Who is the winner?,There are many ways to keep healthy. First we_ have a healthy diet. Its _to eat enough fresh vegetables and fruit every day. But dont eat junk food_ sweets. They can be bad for your health. Second, good habits can help_ keep healthy. Doing exercise is a good way to sta

12、y healthy. We can take walks, play ball games or swim to keep fit. _a days work or study, we need to _at least eight hours a night. So dont stay up too late. And remember_ is bad for our health, so _smoke. One more thing, dont get angry_, keeping happy is_ important.,佳作欣赏,The Way To Keep Healthy(选词填

13、空）,should,important,or,us,never,sleep,smoking,After,easily,also,Homework,Check your composition again . Copy it in your exercise -book. Pay attention to your handwriting. (再次修改你的作文，工整地誊抄在作业本上。),Thank you!,（我们小组口号是） To be No. 1 ! We are the best!,S1: Hello, everyone. Ss: Hi, XXX. May I ask you some questions ? S1: What do you think of CCTVnews ? S: I love it. Becaus